Manan SS:key to my heart part 12 (who has kidnapped her?)pg 112 12/6 - Page 24

lovely update dear..please continue soon 😊

Nice update...

Luved d update..n dat sudden kiss... hehehe. Nandu shocked manik rocked... plzz update frequently..

Amazing
Superb
Mindblowing update
Aawww manan frst kiss...finally ho gea hahahaha
Lovd it
Continue soon

Originally posted by: jesse93

I so wanted and expected something like your story in the show on her birthday wala episode while he asked her to clean the tomato from his face without using hands, hayee that is one of my favourite MaNan scene, yaar the way he asked her na to cleeaannn but unfortunately nothing happened at that time.
So thanks for fulfilling that adhura kam, love you dear continue soon.

Originally posted by: zainee

Now i get it...i gett itt...it was my fav drama😊

I am just loving this combination...u have merged this beautifully...awesome updates

I'm really enjoying it especially manik character

Finallyyy they kissed😳...u have beautifully written the kiss scene...

Sach main...i thoroughly enjoyed each and every part of the updates

Thanx 4 the pm

Stay blessed & happy

Finally itna dhoondne k bad kiss mil gai..

Hey.!
I went through this story yours today. ^_^
A very different concept and the way you framed it is commendable.
The way MaNan were tied in a relationship unwilling due to their family reasons. And that too when they were first cousins. Woah, its quite surprising for me.
Their life seems like a roller coaster.
Waiting for Nandini to write her diary more about their journey from love hate relation to their happily married life. <3
It seems so exciting.
And I am loving this mysterious Manik and confused Nandini.
They fight between inwardly between their heart and mind.
Dada Ji is definitely playing the role of cupid for them ;) Hai na ?

Chalo continue with it soon.
Waiting for the next update.
Be quick.

You doing a fab job.!
Keep it up and All the best :)

Originally posted by: Snehasn

Hey Crispiee... Morning Baby...sirf 5hrs hii late huye hai comment karne mein... So today no ghussa OK... Arre waah eid ka chaand iss baad eid se pehle hii apne deedar karwaaye... Kya baat hai... 😉 😉
Okok enough of my leg pulling... Arre itna toh haq bante hai naa 😆 😆
Chalo coming to the update... Its totally mind blowing...pehle his possessiveness and protectiveness apne dear wifey k liye... Than daadu was super duper happy... Manik's pretending to be not effected by her... Phir bhi itna caring... Than that party night...huhh!!... Soha idhar bhi tapak pade.. I thought nandu KO koi chiraayenge party mein and her hubby will come and rescue her in last minute.. Yahaan toh aiSe kuch huye hii nahi... And than Hayeee kiss... Crispiee dil khush kar ditta byee god!! 😳 😳...hehe... His teasing were awesome... Than present track. .owww... Mano KO paapa ki yaad aarahe teh.. Cute baby...paapa ki jaan...hehehe... Manan k saath sone k liye baby KO mann hai... Poor Manan aaj ke raat no romance... Varna baby k saamne galat impression parenge...
Oyee see comment kardiye hai... Ab next time bhi good baby ki tarah jaldi update chaayiye... Zyaada wait matt karwaiyo aap... Chalo I'm signing off... Thanks for the pm...
Take care stay blessed

Originally posted by: dua_arafat

Finally itna dhoondne k bad kiss mil gai..

Seriously yar kia twist dala hai yar...

Lipstick suck karo... And he holded her hands... ufff that was really mindblowing... You penned it beautifully... Bohat zabardest tha...hatts off

Abhi main ne sirf yehi parha... baki ka comment bad main... This was only for the kiss... baki wale k liye wait...

Love you

Take care