MaNan : Short Stories[3 new Stories pg - 53&54] 20/2/16 - Page 3

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Beautiful and a heart wrenching story..
Directly touches my heart..
Seriously feeling very bad for nandini..
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Awesome stories...
Both of them..
Cont soon..

LOVE,
AAROHI...
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Posted: 9 years ago
#23

Originally posted by: riyana7

Oh god am literally crying 😭 what a heart touching story you've written... in 1st story manik's love remained incomplete & in 2nd nandini's ...both r just beyond appreciation... Well done 😃




Thank you so much...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: mini_manan

Beautiful and a heart wrenching story..
Directly touches my heart..
Seriously feeling very bad for nandini..




Thank you so much...
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Posted: 9 years ago
#25


Story 3

MaNan :A True Love
Shona...dnt run!!!come here!!you have to take these medicines come
No manik i will not take!!!you know naa how much i hate these meds
Nandini!!wait
and she at random stood still
coz manik nvr call her nandini after them being in relationship
nandini:NANDINI???
manik:shona you knw naa you are my life... Aur agr mere baby ko cold zyada ho gya toh...
nandini cutely
but baby dsnt want this
manik:acha toh injection chahiye
nandini:acha acha thk hai m yeh le lungi bsh injection nahi
good girl
chlo ab rest kro chl ke
she quickly spread her arms
asking him to carry her in his arms
he without any second wasted picks her in his arms
they both enter into their room
he places her on the bed and lays beside her
manik was stroking her hairs
nandini:manik
manik just hummed
mujhe chocolates khani h aur pizza aur pasta bhi
manik:hain
he frowns
nandini:plss na manik pretty please
manik:shona ahi tum so jao
hum shaam ko lne jaynge
nandini:pakka na
manik:pakka baby
now sleep
manik kept on stroking her hair
soon she drifted into deep slumber
after being in relationship
manik and nandini both were living together
but being together,he nvr crossed his limits without her consent
manik always treat her like his child
who cares for her like a mother
protect her like father
and loves her like passionate lover
and now nandini is suffering from cold flu
and manik for giving her meds soup
has to run behind her like MILKHA SINGH
TUM HO TOH ZINDAGI HAI
DIL KA KOI HISSA NAIDIL HO TUM
HO MERE PAAS TOH SAASE HAI MERI
KBHI ZANA NAA DUR
WARNA DHADKNA BAND KR DEGA YEH DIL
DIL KI DHADKAN SE NIKALTI BS DUAN TERE LIYE
QKI BIN TERE NISHAAN BHI NAA MERE
ITTA PYAR KARTE HUM TUJHSE
ITTA PYAR
manik wrote these lines while watching his sleeping beauty
the one who falls in love gets surrounds by only beautiful things
and when someone gets his/her true soulmate
toh it seems bass life is complete
love is having your loved one in your arms
when you share your first kiss with him/her
when for the first time you drenched in rain with him/her
same was with manik and nandini too
soon manik enters with lots of bags
nandini:manik jldi jldi kro
m damm hungry
manik:shona ek toh 11 bags m akele pakda
itti saari chocolates
leke ayi ho tum
nandini:toh kya hua manik
you love me naa
toh mele liye itta bhi ni kr skte
manik went all aww on her cute antics
manik:shona you always manage to trick me!!hmmm
acha chlo ab eat your dinner
nandini:manik you feed me na plss
manik:accha mere hath se!!chlo
soon he sits on chaire and settles her on his lap
soon they finished their dinner and moves towards their room
chlo shona hv meds and then sleep
nandini knew arguement is of no use
so she obediently gulps all her meds
nandini coz of medicine dose asleep fast
ZINDAGI MEIN YUN JE REHNA SADA AASHIQUI JO HUI TUJHSE
TOH HUM HUYE MEHERBAAN
AAJTOH TU HE H KHUSHI MERI
DIL HAI SRF TERE PAAS
Hum tere bin ab reh nahi sakte
Tere bina kya wajood mera (x2)
Tujhse juda gar ho jaayenge
Toh khud se hi ho jaayenge judaa
Kyunki tum hi ho
Ab tum hi ho
Zindagi ab tum hi ho
Chain bhi, mera dard bhi
Meri aashiqui ab tum hi ho
Tera mera rishta hai kaisa
Ik pal door gawara nahi
Tere liye har roz hai jeete
Tujh ko diya mera waqt sabhi
Koi lamha mera na ho tere bina
Har saans pe naam tera
Kyunki tum hi ho
Ab tum hi ho
Zindagi ab tum hi ho
Chain bhi, mera dard bhi
Meri aashiqui ab tum hi ho
That is the life of our MANAN they both love
each other madly
Edited by Angel_manan - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Lovely os dea. ...
Tnx fr d pm
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Posted: 9 years ago
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awesome update...
loved it so much...
can't wait to see what happens next in the next story of yours...
keep up the good work and continue soon...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Reunion
In
Manan
fan style

U guys moved on so easily!!!you all didnt even bother to knw how are we
where are we
police ne bola and tumne maan liya
n me stupid was thinking about you all over there
manik shouted painfully on everyione
and nandini you...you too moved onn in just 4 months
is that our love so weak
you confessed na you will love me hmsha
then what happened
you betrayed me nandini
and that was it for nandini
shut up manik malhotra
do you have slightest idea
what rubbish you are talking
everytime you talk about trust
kha gya ab woh trust
haan
fab5 your family
bs itta he bharosa tha
in sbpe mujhpe
do you know much we have cried all these 4 months
how much suffocation was their without you in this air
every night manik malhotra in these 4 months
i have just prayed ayiappa toh return you back
and you are saying we moved onn
these people to move on
inhone music almost chor diya tha
manik malhotra
but it was your dream to bring them back
isliye i decided to fulfill your dream
and this performance was their 1st performance in these 4 months
and that too coz O2 will ban them otherwise
it was all nyonika's plan to break fab5
and nobody replaced you and cabir
it was just a collaberation
with maddy
and you are saying
we moved onn
just coz m yh pta kr pau ki uss din blast ke baad kya hua tha
i did all these things
m president bni sirf 2 din ke liye
aryaman helped me
phr uss driver ka pta lga
jb ussne sach btaya
from that day
m just blaming myself
manik malhotra
all that was for me and you suffered
do you knw how i felt
nahi
and you are saying we moved on
nandini took out her laptop
and showed him the lines which she wrote in these 4 months
see this
every night manik malhotra
every night in these 4 months
i wrote about our love about you
and you are saying we moved onn
I started halllucinating you manik everywhere
pagal ho rhi thi m
aur kl bhi mujhe lga
m hallucinating you manik
and you are saying
I moved onn
she was fully in tears now
and manik he was speechless
(sometimes our eyes too betry us and sometimes our ears
we should not believe until and unless we are crystal clear
every coin has two sides like wise every picture too has too sides so we should see both the sides
by seeing only one side we should not make conclusions)
mukti:she is right manik
ek baari we cn be at fault
bt she cnt be on fault
we ppl decided to move onn
she toh didnt evn thought about that
we didnt want to celebrate your bday
it was her who bring us back
manik she never cried in front of us
bt we all know
how much broken she is
sometimes I was harsh on her
for this fab5 together chanting
manik how can you say like that
dhruv:haa buddy nandini ne inn 4 mahino mein hum sbko sambhala hai
despite of mukti and alya's rude behaviour
nandini:manik hear me loud and clear
you are only one whom i have loved
Till the stars shines and fireflies exist
MANAN is forever
manik malhotra
and she ran away from jamm room
manik:m sorry guys
m jo dekha uspe yakeen kia
i should hv confront you guys
but ni I believed on what i saw
but guys keep yourself in place of me
mujhe kuch smj ni aa rha tha
what i saw was enough to boil my blood
and i reacted like this
m sorry
dhruv:buddy tu sorry mt bol
we can understand
its just that
your words were very hurting
mukti:manik we are so happy ki you are back
now pls dnt cry
group hug
they shared a famous fab5 group hug
manik:where is alya
alya:MANIK in shock
you are alive
omg m so happy manik
she hugged him
canteen
dhruv:nandini bahot hurt hai manik
how you will manaofy her
alya:haa manik she was our backbone all these months
you hv to do something
manik:I knw what i hv to do
got to go
kl collage mein milta hoon
murthy residence
nandini since afternoon is crying in her room
anik's words hurt her beyond anything
she was crumbled like a ball and rying at the one end of the bed
manik entered through window
and saw her girl crying
he carefully sat beside her and gathered her in his arms
nandini immediately backed off
tum yha kya kar rhe ho manik
go away
manik:I knw you are angry with me
but m sorry
nandini:i hate you manik
tum esa kse bol skte ho
how i cn move onn
that night
when you made myself yours
after that also you thought i moved onn
manik:place yourself in place of me
I knw m at fault isliye sorry bol rha
wont you hug me
nandini bobbed her head in yes
then come
manik spread his arms and nandini ran towards him
it was a bone crushing hug
indeed they both were carving for each othr touch
after somewhat like 20 minutes they parted
manik:I love you nandini only you
nandini:I love you too manik
sirf tumhe
and they advances for a kiss
feeling each other after months
is a bliss
their was no haste no jaldi
yet it iss a passionate kiss
manik and nandini
both were chewing each others lips
relishing each other lips
both were equally wild
manik was amazed to see sch boldness in nandini
after what seemed like ages
they moved apart
both joined their heads
manik:kya baat h ms.murthy
bold n ol haan
not bad
nandini shys
manik:uff your blush
nandu
i just loved it
nandini:manik ab tum mujhe chor k kbhi ni jaoge naa
manik:nvr ever nandini
you are my soul my heart
i cnt loose you
I love you alot
nandini:I love you too manik
ALVIDA TUJHE KBHI NAA KAHU MEIN
DUR TUJHSE REH NAA SAKU MEIN
BASS TU ROOTHNA NI
Edited by Angel_manan - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Nice this is what even i was imagining when he was shouting at them :P
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Posted: 9 years ago
#30
Nice story.
Thanks for pm.
😊

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