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Posted: 9 years ago



Ishq_ka_siapaa_kbhi_
goli_to_kabhi_aiappaa...
Written by #srishsi & #Suku
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A beautiful girl wearing red colour sari talking on her phn...in her car nd going somewhere
Girl -yes dad mai bs phuch rhi hu...mai jaise hi phuchugi I will call you...ya ya dad ye project hme hi milne wala h tension mt lihiye...ok bye...nd hang up nd said to herself by taking out a pic of aaiappa:-aiappaa plz ye deal mujhe hi mil jaye plzz...this deal is so important...

A handsome boy driving his car nd liten full sound rock music...he too was going somewhere (hope u all knw ki they r non other than manik nd nandini)
They both r going to attend meeting of saxena's industry which is out of town...
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Nd finally they reached to the destination nd meeting start nd both manik nd nandini looking at each other both lost in each other
Nandini pov:-
Kitna handsome h ye lrka upr se ye mujhe gi dekhe jaa rha h ...oh god aiappaa ye kyu aise mujhe ghr rha h...aiyooo...
End of pov-------
Aiappaa said after seeing her condition:- he is the one for you...yes...beta...only he is nd smile seeing her...
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Manik pov:-
Ufff this girl kitni beautiful h upr se mere favourite colour ki red saari me to or bhi beautiful...
End of pov
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After meeting finish ...
They all move
Manik nd nandini to move they both want to talk to each other but kya kre itne srmate jo h...
Nandini pov:-
Chahti hu ki usse jaa kr baat kyu bt kya kru agr usne kuch or soch liya to...aiappaa plz kuch kro..
Aiappaa smile again nd said everything happen bt it's take time
Nandini raise her head up nd said aap itna smile kr rhe ho huh.
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Nd then she saw manik
Manik pov:-
Mai usse baat krna chahta hu bt...kya kru how cute she is kitne cute pouts bna rhi h...
End of pov...
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Bt jaise taise wo wha se nikl jate h...
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On the way back to home they both thinking about each other only nd there he saw that girl again ...yes nandini ki car khrab ho jati h nd drivr machanic Dhundhne jaata h nd here nandini is alone nd manik saw nd stop the car nd come out firstly she scared nd said to herself :- aiappa ye kon yha aa rha h plz ab to kuch kro n...ye kon ho skta h
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Aaiappa smile nd said time is finished dear...
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bt phr when she saw manik she relax...

Manik- you nandini right...meeting me hm mile the remember...
(Nandini taught oh god aiappaa ye mere pas kyu aa rha h...isne mujhse baat ki aiappaa mai to yhi gir jaungi...)
tmhe bhul hi to nii paa rhi n...(in low tone)

Nd her chain of thaught broke by clicking of manik's finger she said- yes yes manik malhotra right...
Manik- yaa ...(they shake hand nd when their hand touch their hole body is giving goosebumps...)kya hua u r alone hear
Nandini- yaa wo actually meri car n khrab ho gyi h so...
Manik- oh koi baat nii come I will drop u home...
Nandini-no no apko tkleef lene ki koi jroort nii h mai chli jaungi mera driver aata hi hoga...
Manik- ye highway nd so dengerous mai aapko is trh Akela chod kr nii jaa skta...plz come n...
Nandini - after some nakhra she agree nd both leave in manik's car...
Bt ...bt...bt
thodi dur h aati hI his car too stop he came out nd open his car bonnet nd check then he come to knw ki gari grm ho gyi h
Nandini- manik kya hua...
Manik- wo actually gadi grm ho gyi h hme wait krna padega...
Nandini -ohh it's ok...(aiappaa ye kya ho rha h aap kya kr rhe ho ek to itni raat upr se sun's a an Sarak nd hm dono akele)
Aiaipaa again smile said :- abhi aage aage bhut kuch hone wala h...
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They both are talking when whether get change nd start raining nd manik come inside bt nandini she enjoy this rain she open her hand in air nd move round...
manik-nandini kya kr rhi ho thnd lg jayegi come inside
Nandini-no manik tm bhi aa jao let's enjoy...

Manik saw her enjoying the rain bcs of water drop her saari stick to her body to which her curves belly Is showing nd ise dekhe manik ke andr ho gyi chemical locha now he can't control nd come out nd from back hold her waist nd pick her up to feel more...now he put her down nd turn her around now bcs of his magical touch she to can't control she cupped hi right cheeck nd come close he take it as positive nd capture her lips after kiss
he pick her up nd place her in his car back side nd come over her lock the door nd start giving her kisses on her body...nd she only moaning his name...nd yesss they did it...
now after some time they both tired he kiss her tears nd placed his head on her chest...nd nandini take her saari nd cover themselves nd close her eye...
Nd thaught:-aaiappaa mai to sirf baat krna chahti thi bt aapne mujhe iske itne pass Le aaya...
Mai hmesha se ise psnd krti thi or aaj...
Aiappaa said:- I knw beta...bhut dino tm dono ek dusre se pyar krte the bt...khte nii the so...Here it goes waiting time is finished...nd laugh..
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Manik open his eye nd said - kitne dino se tmse baat krna chahta tha pta h ...hr meeting me tmse baay krna chahta tha kehne chahta tha that I like you a lot nd look towards her she said I too want to talk to u manik...nd too want to talk to u...
(Yes guys they both love eachother bt kbhi keh nii pate or aaj aakhir aiappaa ne sun hi li)
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After some days
They both girlfriend boyfriend madly in love with each other...nd they both decided to do shopping bcs it's nandini birthday so they go to mall...
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Uske bad nandini ki birthday ati he.. so manik use shopping me le jata he..
M- nandu baby jo pasand aye wo purchase karo today is ur day..
N- Aww. . Manu baby thnk u I love u..

Or wo do no shopping me Bzy ho jate he..
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Nd now Ullu I mean dhruv ka entry hota he!...

Dhruv - Iss aliya ko to.. pata nahi kaha bhag gayi dhoond k hi chorunga aj. Me isko!
Usi time aliya bhagte huyi manik se takrati he.. Nd wo manik k Upar gir jati he
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Nd hamari pyari nandu wo dekh ke gusse me waha se chali jati he ..
Nd aid to herself :-ye gadha ise yo mai...us chipkali ke saath kaise chipk rha h aiappaa...aahhh..
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Aftr some talk wid aliya manik realised she hvnt cm back frm trail room.. Toh wo check karne jata he nd dekhta he ki nandu waha nahi he. . ( he is going to be dead now ) ..
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By dat tym nandu gussa me food court me jake under her breath manik ko galiyaan de rahi hoti he .. to use goli ki awaj ati he.. . Nd wo bahar jake dekhti he ki Ullu I mean uttu kisiko dhund raha hota he.. Uss time wo manik ko call karti he Cauz wo scared ho jati he. .
Convo-
n- hey
M- where d hell r u.. I m searching u Haan. .
N- Oo really I thought tum Bzy ho us chipkali ke sath
M- who..
N- I dnt knw her.. u knw Wat talking to u is just lyk wasting my precious tym.
M - Wat is wrong wid u nandu. . Tell me where r u.. I'm coming. Shopping pura karna he .
N- no need.. me Akeley kar lungi. .
Nd Bechara manik be like ki ya lrki bhi n...
. Ta bhi mukti ki phn ati he..
Mu - buddy kya kar raha he?
M- nandu ki prblm kya he yaar.!
Mu - buddy ur in prblm. . Bolo kya he prblm.
M- wo he meri prblm. .
M - or agar meri life koi prblm na ho to ye uski life ki sabse bari prblm he.!
Mu - manik baba tu shant ho ja! Dkh wo wahi hogi.. (by dat tym uski eyes nandini pe parti he)
M - don bye .. I saw her. . (By saying this he cut d call nd run towards her directon .. )

Nandini nikal neki time use koi sudden pull karta he wo sochti he wo manik he.. so wo nakhre dikhati he.. but she feels k touch similar nahi he toh wo ghumti he. Nd uttu ko dkhti he ..
Nandini- aiappaa ye manik ye h kon...
Aiappaa- it's not ur manik...piche muro to shi...
She turn back nd saw ullu means uttu...
*dhruv in lala la land**.

But apne hos me an eke bad wo gun ko nandu ki head pe rakhta he.. or chillata he.. /-
aliya I knw tum yaha ho jaldi ayo nahi to me ise Mar dunga. . Aliya darker manik k hand hold Karke dhruv k samne jati he .. /-
Ye dkh kar nandini angry ho jati he. .
Said aiappaa aj is effiel tower ko mai nii chore wali... Or dhruv bolti he
N- hey .. whoever u r shoot me .. mujhe dar nahi lagta. ...
M- nandu ye tum kya bol rahi ho.. me kese jiunga
N- kiu chipkali he na.. glaring towards aliya. .
M- Wat rubbish .. I love u .. idiot. . . ..
N- achha I love u aiappaa dekha apne he said I love u is effiel ko dekho to shi...
M-he nandu ke aiappaa ise smjho n...
Aiappaaare mai kya kru tmhari girlfriend h hi itni ziddi...ufff I'm sorry dude...
Manik -looking towards dhruv hey u leave her
Dhruv- kyu nii chodunga ye teri item h kya...
Manik- yes ye meri hi item h u pille ht...
Nandini- manik move just move nd u pille ...shoot me...
Shoot me...pille...
* nd they were fighting lyk tom and jerry*.
Ta bhi druv gun chalata he nd ek pin typ goli ek uncle ko lag jata he nd he scream in pain..
Vg- o uughh. . Kon he ye shaitan bacha. . Jisne mere bum pe pin diya..
*nd manan k fight tabbhi stop nahi ho raha soo..

druv rone lagta he.. Fir sab use dkte he .. Nd nandu pakarneke niye nd uspe nisana lagane k niye manik druv ko marne jata he..
Nd ta bhi dhruv manik ko hug Karke
Dhruv - u knw what buddy this girl alya n mujhpe bhut Julm krti h...jb dekho ghr ke kaam krwati h jharoo lgwati h or agr koi glti ho bhi jaye n to broom se Marti bhi h pure colony me ghuma ghuma kr...mai bhut pareshan ho jaata hu...or dekho n abhi bhi mujhe pita h...nd start crying nandini looking at them in shock ...nd
Dhruv - Mujhpe itni saari Julm dhati h ...mai pareshan ho gya hu buddy...crying like a baby
now manik broke hug nd give him his hanky...nd he take it nd surrr...apna nak Saaf krta h...
nd give to manik
manik- it's ok buddy isse rkh lo ...
Dhruv -ok...nd place it in his pocket...
Fir nandu manik k pass jake sorry bolti he.. Nd jab wo dekhte hi k manik still gussa he. So being naughty she kissed him publicly .. .. ..
MANIK fir happy hoke response karta he.. Nd use trail room Leke jata he.. Nd kissing her wildly. . He Dhire se open her zip toh she told him abhi nahi Manu Aftr party. . Fir manik bolta h ki. . Aj ka shiyappa mast tha. . Thnks to ur ayappa. . Nd kiss her again ..
Aiappaa- to mila diya n tm dono ko...is ziddi or effiel tower ko ...
Manik look up between kiss nd aiappaa ko aakh marta h
Aiappaa beshrm abhi jo kr rha h wo continue kr...
Manik again busy in her...
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The end...
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Posted: 9 years ago


2016 start hoke Feb bhi agaya but meri life toh jaha tha uha hai iss valentine days ko bhi mere pass koi date nehi hai nehi nandini esa nehi ho sakta kuch kar plzzz ayiappa help me...
U know readers walon '
Mujhe bhi humesha se filmy wali love story chaiye tha Purna ki favourite srk ki ddlj k tarah phir mujhe laga meri pass toh amrish puri ki tarah dady hai hi nehi meri chaha toh khushi se mujhe bolenge jaa nandini jeene apni zindagi...
Par mujhe toh thriller wali love story chaiye ddlj k baad maine sab love stories dekhli koi bhi plot meri sath nehi jati tab mere samne ayi Purna ki 2nd fav film jab we met usse dekh kar mujhe bhi Purna ki tarah laga ghar se bhag k aditya I mean shahid ki tarah kisi ko life pe lani thi.[par Purna se toh nehi huyi but Purna story pe mujhse e zaroor karaygi]
Maine toh 3 bar bhaagneki plan bhi banaya phir nehi bhagi but nandini bohot huya iss bar tujhe valentine '''''-'-'-'-'-day k pehle apni true wali love ko life pe entry karani hai... Ehi soch k main already station agayi hu...
Nandini ki train pe. Bhage gi soch soch kaha milegi mujhe meri love... Simian ko toh London se Paris Jane ki train pe raj mila, meera appa ko chennai Jane wali train ko mila & Geet ko vatinda Jane ki train pe par mujhe koi si wali train pe mile gi meri raj or aditya...
Aippaa maine aditya means shahid kapoor ka charecter ko bola hai mujhe aditya roy kapoor or uska bhai kunal roy kapoor nehi chaiye ok...

Bohot soch ne k baad nandini ko laga...
Dekho dekho kaya laga

Nandini panjub ki train pe jaye kyu ki agar train pe koi nehi bhi mila kya pata golden temple pe kisi pe raab dikh jai...
Sare plan soch k main agayi train k samne chal nandini jee le apni zindagi khud ko bol ke nandini train pe charne gayi phir usse yaad aya...
Nandini tu bhi na heroine train pe train chorne k baad bhag k jati hai inti jaldi bhul gayi...

Shimran, meera & Geet ne kaya shikha hai. Haa geet ko kisi random ne pakda tha but nandini hope ko give up maat kar... E soc k nandini train ki start hone ki wait kiya.
Jab train chalu hui nandini bhagi...

Then.
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Phir

Yeha se meri friends ne continue kiya hai

Written by #Escapist_Antu
Nandini bhag rahi thi ...our tab train ki kamre se ek haat uski haat pakarke khich leti train ki andar. nandini samne dekhti hay ek tall and handsome guy khara hain.nandini uski dark brown eyes dekhtehi speechless ho jati hain.

Written by #Cryptic_Audhora
Aur phir nandini us ki akhome kho jate hain phir wo Brown eyes wala larka nandini uski lalala se bahar nikalti hai yeh bol kar ki tym pe nehi aa sakte ho keya tum...agar tym ka kheal nehi rehta hain to phir train me jane ki zarurat keya hain tab nandu apne lalala se bahar nikal kar us larke ko datne lagti hain q ki uski wajase simran ki tara nehi kar payi...aur upar se uska dopatta vi woha chor nehi paya...

Written by #Prity_Agarwal
Lo iske bad kya tha suru hogai dono ki tu tu mai mai larki wahase jane lagti phir uska dupatta larke ki jins ke poket ke kye chain mai attak jati hai

Written by #Escapist_Antu
par nandini samaj ti hain ki uss larke ne uski dupatta khicha .or vo bohot gussa ho jatihe.vo gusse se muh morke dekhtihe ki larkeka koyi galti nehi hain..usski dupatta galtise atak gayi .

Written by #Mousumi_Jms_Majumder
ok..ab ldke ki intro.. ek tall boy kandhe pe bag leke yaha waha ghum rha...(bg.music- jaaa ne ja dhunta fir rha
... mujhko aawaz do.. chup gye ho sanam.. tum kaha...) main yaha khke saree girls trun kr rhi h..

mnk- kya yaar ab ye din aa gya.. dadi ne meri biwi dhund ne me pura line lga di.. bt mujhe nii krna sadi.. chal manik vag isse phle koi jake dadi ko batay nd mujhe wapas jana pde...

aree train... koi roko isse..abe rok.. main rh gya... areee...

tabhi kisine hath nikala...

aree vai hat nii chain khich...

finally chad gya... aree wohi wala ldka mujhe aise q dekh rha h... kahi ye...nooo...
manik vag piche...

aise hi gate pe jake use ek girl dikhi jo train ke piche vag rhi thi...
aur kya.. ho gya.. phla milaap

Written by #Escapist_Antu
manik pov: pehle se hi ittna problm..or dekho ajki jamane pe kissiko help vi nahi karna..ye larki samajhti kya apne ko..tinny girl..ek to main isko train pe uthaya or thanks vi nahi kaha isne.ulta jhagarna suru kar dia.
oh god..ab kya hua? isne mujhe aise gusse se kiu dekh rahi hain??
damn shit!! yeh dupatta !! yeh kaise mere pocket ki chain pe atak gayi??oh noo...yeh to pherse bakwas suru kar degi ...god damn!! mere sath aj kiu aisa ho raha hain

Written by #Bhumika_Malhotra
Nandu pov- maine socha tha ki jb train chlegi r m bhagogi koi mjhe raj ki trah samalega r tb m apna duppatta phekogi bt iski wajh se yeh bhi nhi hua khadoos... bt jb m jane lgi tb mera duppatta uski jeans pockt m phas gya... oh god. Pta nhi kya soch rha hoga.. but I know uski glti h its just a accident.. meine jaisa socha woh utna bura nhi h chl nandu tk ur duppatta bck... n- may I hv it back pointing to duppatta M- ya sure I wanna say something but nandu cut him in. Between n said don worry I know its not ur fault its just a mere accident.. so chill m chillaungi nhi r nahi kaungi... manik after listening this give a slight smile n say thanks 4 understanding... after that she pases by taking her duppatta bck n he say she is not bad that I thought...

Written by #prity_Agarwal
Or nandu baha se chali jati hai phir dono hi ek dujhe ke khayalo mai kho jate hai man: wo itni buri vi nehi thi i think mujhe usse friendship karni chaiye n udhar hamari nandu ka vi yehi hal tha fir kya tha dono hi ek hi direction mai chalne lagte hai


Written by #Manu_Saxena
dono eek disre ki trf chlte hue eek dusre sae tkra jate hah !!! nan: oh i m sry!! mani : its ok!!! by the way i m manik n u????
nan : i m nandni!

#navya_khan
Manik handshake karneke lia hath age barate hai... But nandini usse handshake karneke jaga hug kardeti hai... Manik shocked ho jata hai par phirbhi hug krta hai...dono ek dusre ki touch pe shiver kartahai Do noki body me jese electric shock lag geya (love ka effect you know )
Written by #mayra
Then they broke the hug N: So manik tum kaha ja rehe ho? M: Pata nehi N: What do u mean by pata nehi? M: Wo actually main ghar se bhag k aya hu n till now i have no destination N: Ayyoo what an co incident main bhi ghar se bhag k ayi hu M: Main to shadi k liye bhaga tum? N: Main pyar k liye M: Oh u mean u r in a relationship? N: Ayyoo no manik...tum kitna buddhu ho mera matlam tha main apni true love ko dhund ne k liye bhagi hu...kya tum bhag k apni gf k sath shadi karne ja rahe ho? M: Abhi to mujhe buddhu bol rahe the or ab tum khud buddhu wali baat kar rahi ho N: Matlab? M: Matlab miss minion mujhe shadi nehi karni issiliye bhag k aya hu N: Hwww tumne mujhe miss minion kiu kaha M: Awww kiu ki u r as chotu as them n also as cute as them even more than them
Nandini blushed N: Huh main agar minion hu to tum bhi to great wall of china ho M: What? Great wall of china se mera kya similarity he? N: Moon se bhi usko dekh sakte he n i m sure moon se agar main earth me dekhu to tumhe bhi dekh sakungi bcz of your hight that y great wall of china M: Wah kya logyc he N: Main to hu hi smart girl jo mera bf hoga uska to jivan dhannya ho jayega or tum ho buddhu ram M: Oyee miss minion dont underestimate the power of a common man N: Ooo dialougebaji n all haan? M: Ek chutki manik k kimat tum kya samjhogi nandini baby...eshwar ka ashirwad hota he ek chutki manik...har ladki ka khowab ho ta he eeekk chutki manik...
Written by #noor
Nandini looks at him each and every feature of his is not unseen by her...manik looks at the way she is looking at her and smirks...seeing the smirk nandini comes back from her lala land and manik noticed this...woh ek saath beth jate hai aur phir baatein karne lag jate hai...
Written by #shivani_vats
Manik- vaise minion... ghar se to bhag aayi tum ab kha jane ka plan h?? Nandini- well...plan too kuch h ni... bttt...haaa... i have a plan...nd she almost jumped in exictement... MANIK:--- Shortieee... ittaaa jump mt kro train k bahar nikal jaogi ni too... NANDINI:---- jokkkeee thaaa??? MANIK:---- nhi..i was damn serious... NANDINI:--- (Sarcastically) hahaha very funny... huhhh... MANIK:---- U r tooo mch... NANDINI:--- Nd u r magarmacch... MANIK:--- Wattt???? NANDINI:--- Nthng..vaise tum kha jane vale ho?? MANIK:---- Dont know..jha pr ye train rukegi vhi jana h bs... NANDINI:----- Tooo hm chennnaiii chle???? MANIK:------ wattt chennnaiii...no way... NANDINI:---- ohhh hlo... wat do u mean ha... MANIK:---- why r u freaking out...??South India nd me... naaa... never... i toh dont even like south indians... their dressing sense...itss..itss so funny..lungi nd all... nd the south indian food... na na i cnt bear it... (alll of the sudden nandini almost held him ny his collars) NANDINI:---- Dont evn dare to criticise south indians... MANIK:--(showing fake fear) kyuuu tmhara bf south indian h kya...??? NANDINI:---- nooo...I...the NANDINI MURTHY .. i m south indian... nd nw...its done ki v r going to chennnai...nd thats it... MANIK:----- ahhh ahhh..let me correct... we nhi...u r going there... (a naughty yet evil idea strike in nandu's mind ns she started to act as if she is crying... she started to cry loudly... manik got panicked..he tried to shusshhh her bt all in vain... a south indian family was sitting overthere...a motu saaa healthy sa man asked...) man:----- tummm kyuu rotiii???? NANDINI:---- Annnaaa... yee... hamara pati...hmara parmeshwar..hmko chhhod k jane ko bolti... ( manik widen his eyes in shock...that man glared at manik... manik gulped his saliva... then a woman from the same family said) WOMAN:----- Betaaa..tum aisa kyu krti...phool si to patni h tumhari... tumko kidhr jana... (Isse phle manik kuch boltiii... ...i mean bolta...nandini said) hm dono ghr se bhag k shadi ki...bht pyr krti ek dusre se..ab khi rhne ka thikanaa nhi ae... (Nd she winked at manik...nd manik showed her eyes... that motu sa healthy sa man almost roared... ) MAN:----- Tum log hmare saaath chlti... orrr agr tum kuch boli na... tooo mai tumhara sambhar bna degi (he said pointing towards manikkk) CHENNNAIII AAAIII AAIII CHENNNAAIII EXPRESSS !!!!!!!!

Written by #bhumika
Manik pov- in motu uncle k sath agr na bola toh kya pta yeh mera barta oh sorry sambhar bnake apne kutte ko khila denge...or yeh nandini bhi n such a drama queen kitni achi acting krti h mein iska pati parme...shwar..
whatever But I have no other option that to bear my so called wifey.. huh his trance broke when Nandu shake him n ask by eyes what happen kaisi lagi meri acting... n wink... Manik was hell angry now but keep his mouth shut...otherwise her so called anna will do something that he can't imagine N- anna aap kitne ache ho apne hme rehne ki jagah di... by doing faking acting... Man- tumne mjhe anna boli tu mera bhi kuch farz h n apni choti behen k liye... n cry as he gets emotional... Mjhe meri choti behen mil gyi... Then they do some chit chat den d lady from dat family ask nandu about her love story... When both heard d word LOVE STORY both gets shocked n say LOVE STORY at d same tym... Both were thinking what to do now... kha se laye ab yh love story... Nan pov- aunty kuch bhi puch lete but yh love story... soch nandu soch nhi toh pta nhi yh gr8 wall of china kya bolega... R pta nhi kahi man hi man mjge curse kr rha hoga for dis marriage thing.

Written by #Escapist_Antu
ab kya karu??? inlogoko toh kuch kehenahi paregi..par kya kahu..idea!! filmy story hi kehe detihu..par konsa story kahu??? nandu soch.jaldi jaldi soch..
nandu: keya hain na anna hamdono ek hi college par thi.isne mera senior tha.clg ki pehle din jab main gate se cls ki tarha jarahi tou kuch senior ne mera rasta block kar diya.unlogone mujhe rag krne laga..par tab isne mera samne aya our uss logoko bohot danta.aise hamari pehela mulakat hua.
manik tou yeh sunkar shocked ho gaya..manik's pov: are yeh larki!! kinti drama kar sakti hain yeh!! god...dramaqueen hain ek no. ki.

Written by #bhumika
nandu- r bhot sunya ki clg pdne aate ho ya ragging krne principal ko complaint karo ( students get scared) Std to manik- sorry we understand ur point iske bd hm aisa kuch nhi karege Then said sorry to nandu She said okkk Nandu to manik- thank u apne un logo ko danta r bade pyar se samjhaya bhi... hiii im nandini,nandini murthy n u M- hii im manik, manik Malhotra R u new to dis clg she said yes m- okk (After that he help me whenever im in trouble actually he's my savior) Uske bad we become frndz N slowly frndzshp turn into liking... n liking into LOVE d way nandu was telling this to anna & family manik was admiring her n thinking ki kitni asani se jhut bolti h... such a lier...
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#Naziat_Nazia
Nandu: hum ek duje se bohot payar krti bt hamari family nehi mana to hum vagke sadi krli Manik pov: ma sadi na krna ki lea vagi or isna mari sadi kara di apni story pe!!!!! kaha phas gya me (bgtune:toba tera jalwa toba tera payar..)

Written by #Prity_Agarwal
Uske bad wo anna convaince ho jata hai n manan ak seat par baithte hai or nan baha baithe baithe so jati hai manik ke sholder par head rakh kar manik use without blinking eye dekhe jara tha man(pov):ye sote huye kitni beatiful lagti hai i just wanna admaring her till eternity pov end an unknowingly nandu ko dekhte dekhte manik vi so jata hai ak beautiful si smile ke sath

Written by #bhumika
Unwilling both slept on each other shoulder R samne k seat pe anna r unki family dono ko dekhte h r admire krte h... ki kitne ache lgte h dono 1 sath... Few hours later First nandu get up n by moving her head manik also get up... both realize der position n feel awkward... Den both part away n remain silent... Like dis dey remain silent for hours till dey reached CHENNAI... anna tell both of dem dat we have arrived... now come wid me to our house... But manik said- aapke ghar hm apke ghar kaise ja skte h.. aap toh hm dono ko itne ache se jante bhi nhi h... kahi hmne aapse jhut bola... Anna- dekho m beshak tum logo ko ache se n janno r hm isi train m mile h pr mjhe tum dono pe bharosa h ki tum dono bhut ache ho r waise bhi maine isse(nandu) ko apni bhen mana h toh is naate tum usk husband ho toh indirectly tum hmre family member hue n... ab no more discussion chlo hmre sath... M- okk I accept my defeat n smile... den all d four(manan+ anna& lady) leave for anna's house.by

Written #Monica_Felicity
In anna's house manik n nandini are called for dinner but manik is shocked to eat coz he hates south Indian food but slowly he tried to eat . seeing his condition Anna says nandu to make manik eat with her hands @first nandu is shocked but then agrees to do so during this they both share a cute eyelock after their dinner their and are left in a single room to stay as they r husband and wife ...m: (in mind kaha phas gaya main is minion ke saath) hey hello tum na niche so jaau me bedpe sojaunga ok n:wth no mujhe niche nahi sona mujhe upar sona hain m: smirks n says ok we both will sleep on the bed n:growls wat!!!!!!!!!!no we can't m:wat why can't u control urself haan minion nanduuu!!!!! n:no not like that ...after thinking a Lott agrees to sleep but on one condition that they both will sleep on either side of the bed but gradually in sleep both of them cuddle with each other and sleep manik holding nandu's waist nandu holding manik shirt... Manik was the one to rise 1st but seei ng sleeping nandu's beauty he is mesmerized n adores that sleeping beauty kisses on her head. He thinks he shudnt disturb her sleep n cuddles her more n sleeps but he is still awake n acting like sleeping ...nandu wakes up sees their position thinks to scream but stops as she sees manik sleeping n adores him n kisses on his cheeks but manik is awake he opens his eyes n sees nandu after this act nandu feel awkward but manik smiles instead seeing his smile nandu is shocked but manik smirks n come close to her ears n says I loved it. Huskily hearing this nandu blushes thinks- ayyo ayyappa why is he doing this while manik comes close n gal between them is decreased their lips are inches apart then he slammed his lips on hers nandu is shocked first taken aback but then responds equally then manik holds her waist very tightly seeing her weakened due to kiss this slowly becomes a passionate kiss n they broke apart due to oxy ----------1st kisss

Written by #Poonam_Maharjan
After kiss both get up n both feel awkward room is totally silence no one dare to face each other tavi door pe knock hote n nandu said k open kartehai n waha Mrs Anna note hai Mrs Anna are tumlog uthga chalk acha hai aj gharpe puja hai to jaldi she tayar hajau n nandu tum mere awo hum tum KO tayar karti aur manik bete tum v tayar hojao yah lo tumara kapde puja k liya yahi pehana n with this c left with nandu n manik feel relief k after their latest kiss in counter. nandu KO face kar na napada n when he check the dress to change he found what LUNGI

Written by #Noor_Ali
Manik not having any other option wore it with great difficulty...nandini wore a beautiful saree...Both went downstairs looking at the floor avoiding each other..they came downstairs greeting everyone and soon the pooja started...and ter pooja manan came back in the room..nandini went in the washroom to get ready ignoring manik...As soon as manik heard the washroom door locked he sighed...
manik pov:
It's high time manik...akhir kab tak nandini aur mein usse ignore karegaye ab mujhe usse baat karni parigi...
End of maniks pov
he looked back and saw nandini coming on of the washroom in a kurti and leggings...

Written by Isra_Jannat_Naina
Manik...was mesmerized..by nandus beauty...nd nandu..also..sees..him..she..shys as manik..was...lokng..at her...nd aftr sme tym..their..eyelock..broke..nd..manink.says:n
andini..m.sorry..i didn't want to..nandu cut him nd says:its it was..neither.ur.fault..manik in happiness...hugs her..nandu shocked nd manik rocked...
manik was feeling gud in the hug same ws with nandu...they didn't wntd to leave each other..bt...nandu..realises...nd broke the hug...they feels...awkrd..bt...there..was
..a...knock on the door...nandu opens the door the lady said sme other lady's want to meet them...nd lstn their luv story...nandu didn't wnt to bt still goes...as nandu leaves manik smies nd says...nandu...in just few hours u changed...me...this..girl...surely..has...smt
hng.

Written By noor
Nandini sab ko apni love story batati hai aur phir sab us ko tease karte hai itne main manik aa jata hai aur phir sab manan ko tang karte hai aur woh chale jate hai...
Manan room mein aa jate jate hai aur blush karte hai ...nandini tamatar ki tarha laal ho jati hai...manik usko dekhta rehta hai...manik usko tang karta hai
Manik: "awww mujhe nahi pata tha ke larkiyan itna blush karti hai aur phir tamatar ki tarha laal ho jati hai"
Nandini makes a cute pout
Manik felt like kissing her pout but controlled himself and continued teasing her itne mein woh gussa ho jati hain aur phir balcony mein jati hai...manik yeh dekh kar pareshan ho jata hai ke ab isse kaise manae...woh usko back se hug karta hai ...usse sorry bolta hai lekin nandini nahi manti...phir aata hai manik ke dimaag mein idea...woh kamre mein jaake...guitar utha kar nandini ke piche balcony mein jata hai aur phir
Laal laal gaal jaise tamatar
Nandu ka gussa char gaya chaat par
Kaise manoa mujhe lagta hai daar
kaho kuch toh ruyegi woh balti baar baar
Nandini piche mor kar manik ko tight hug mein le leti hai aur thanks bolti hai...

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#Shuadhi_Adhiba
They broke the hug and Manik again say sorry...
Nandu said it's ok...manik go back to his mischievous mood
He hold her waist tightly and start coming close to her...passed her waist towards him.there lips were inch apart...nandu close her eyes tightly lost in his proximity.

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#Isra_Jannat_Naina
They...kissed...2nd...kiss...they were kissing...each...other softly as it was a sorry kiss.After sme time they broke apart nd joins their forehead manik says :nandu wht is your feeling 2wards me bt she pretends...nd says:who...me i dnt hv any felngs 2wards u manik says :toh ab hum frnds bhi nahi hai...he was thoughtng coz of his act nandu dsnt cnsdr him as her fend..nandu says manik no...ur my frnd seh bhi jiyada...manik...says...frnds ...seh.bhi jiyada wht nandu??nd smirks

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# bhumika
Nandu says- ha manik I m feeling something above friendship that I don know either its LOVE r just a mere attraction I am confused manik was listening all dis very sincerely... n he also thinks d same... So finally he said M- nandu, tum apne ghar se bhagi just becuz u wanna find ur TRUE love... Nandu nods yes M(continue)- so how it will look like if i'll say that may be im ur TRUE love as u said earlier that u feel something more than friendship... n u don know what is love... u just saw in movies n u wanna find dat typ of guy she nods, then he says day dey r movies just a imagination but its a reality ur life ur decision so u should think twice while chosing any decision... but I just wanna say ki I don know what dese feeling mean but I can't My lyf widout u, ur bakbak ur simplicity so I just wanna say y not we give it a try whether its. Love r just a atraction Take ur own tym then we give me ur ans consider my words... Then he left d room leaving a confused nandu behind...



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#Isra_Jannat_Naina
nandu was thoughting wht to do...thn she recall...train..incidnt...their kiss...she says to herself:my journey of finding luv is different from simran..and ddlj bt i will give it a try that great wall of china ko ek chance de hi deti hu...nd she smiles

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#noor
She goes to manik running before its too late...actually she was copying the bollywood scene when the girl runs to catch the guy before he leaves...woh kamre mein aati hai aur dekhti hai ke manik apne mobile pe kuch kar raha hai toh woh uske pass ja kar baith jati hai...manik uski taraf dekhta hai...
Nandini: "I am ready to give this relationship a chance"
When she said this manik was so happy that he grabbed her in a bone crashing hug

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Isra Jannat Naina
nandu also response the hug ...manik...was trying smthng naughty on her so he while hugging her caresses her back...coz of which nandu felt shiver...nd tries to break the hug bt manik tightens it more nd says:wht hppnd small rat wont let your boyfriend at least hug you...
nandu blushes hearing the word boyfriend.

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#bhumika
n manik smile n smirk n said M ur boyfriend ur great wall of china small minion my rat my permanent rat i won't let u think dat u did wrong by takng dis decision... den dey both hug each other tightly as if there is no tomorrow... At d same time a knock on d door broke der hug & feels shy but hide it Nandu goes an open d door... There is a lady(mrs anna) on d door said come downstairs as its dinner tym.. n den said nandu can u help in laying d dinner to d table... nandu unwilling said yes leaving a happy manik behind. After sometym manan &all other family members of anna laid on d table & hving der dinner. Meanwhile anna asked manik what will he do to earn her livelihood...(which work he's gonna do as to be independent) Manik said I don know as if m new to d city n I don know anything about it... so u can suggest me n help me in settlng do... Anna more than happy agree n said im always happy to help u tell me what can u do so dat it will be easier 4 me to find a perfect work for u

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Isra Jannat Naina
manik said singing is my passion so its related somethng anna says:manik aftr tomorrow there is a fair in their village where he cn sing, manik says he will thought abt this...that motu man gets angry nd says :tumhko jaldi karna hoga kyoki fair mein names dene ka waqt kal sham takh hi hain..

Written by
Yuga Prabhu
He gave his name...hurriedly then sochta hai...naam toh de diya abb gaunga kya..everyone present there was very happy...specially nandu...
At night...
N : manikkk she said in her sugary voice...
M's pov: ..abb isske chotuse dimaag mai kya chal rha hai
Pov end...
M : haaa jii boliyen...
N : will u plz sing a classical sng for me tomorrow in tht fest...plzz plzz
M's pov...
Ohh teri abb marr gayi..abb isse classical sng kahase sunau..
M : but nandini i dnt sing classical sng...muze sirf rock n pop ata hai...
Nandini faking tears...haa manik tumahre kehenese i gave this relationship a chance...n tu ho ke mere liye itna nhi karr sakte..
M's pov..ufff kitna drama karti hai yeh ladki
Shuadhi Adhiba
Both manan were unware of the fact that woh fair will be recorded by the tv as a cultural of India... and it will host Manik's grandma...
Other side Manik was thinking what to do?




#noor
It's the day of the fair...manik had rehearsed a lot...and nandini and really learnt alot from him due to which manik decided that they will sing together and nandini excitedly agreed...
Manik and nandini reached the fair before the event began and soon the fair started with manik's grandma taking the lead. ..and nd nadi fer some while it was manan performance time and as soon as manik's grandma announced manan naam she paused

#bhumika
As soon as manik grand mom announced manan name she paused as she witness his grand son coming towards d stage with a girl(nandu) Grand ma pov Manik yaha woh bhi chennai ke ek small se fair me... m dreaming r what my grand son d heir of Malhotra industries in a village fair woh bhi 4 singing competition... n who is dis girl I need to find out but first I need to hide myself so dat my arrogant r ziddi pota mjhe yaha ne dekhe...till d tym I want him to... she hide behind a curtain Manan reached d stage n start der performance on d Song... (Diya dakha dhoop ko r hogyi subah... bas main r tu) All d tym while singing dey we're seeing in each other eyes Soon performance gt over... N dey leave d stage G.ma pov- I think for dis girl my ziddi pota is doing so im impressed wid d grl afterall she can control my grand son I need 2 find out her details winner tym its none other than our manan wid a trophy & cash price of 50000... Dey come toward stage n received der award dey were very happy...

Isra Jannat Naina
meanwhile grandma called cabir and tell him everything and told him to come there.as cabir was in the same city he reached there.
meanwhile in the fair
some girls take nandu with them...so manik was alone as soon as nandu left manik felt a hand on his shoulder ...he just turned and something was on his mouth and he fell on the ground he just saw a lady's leg and his vision got blurred.
After one hour
manik opened his eyes and saw a fan.
manik p.o.v
what is this fan on the sky that to taking circles ...hows it possible...then he look at his side nd saw a window he again thought :aree yeh fair toh open field mein tha tho phir window khase aa gaya????(actually he was in a room,and he thought he was still on the fair...and he was watching the celling where a fan was hanging).he sits on the bed at looks at his sourrdings nd he remembered everything.sudd
enly he sees nandu was entering in the room.he at once jumps on her with alot of questions that how he is here????.nandu:manik relax, voh ur grandma was here so,i have to give you that gas thaki tum vehosh ho jao.manik:tum mojhe bol bhi toh sakti thi nandu:as if tum sun the,tumhari grandma tumahri pass anehiwali thi so when i saw that mujhe tumhe voh gas dena para tha.manik:achaa vaise yeh batao how do you know ki voh meri grandma thi...koyi or bhi toh ho sakthi thi na.nandini:don't you knw nandini murthy smart hain.manik:tell na.
nandu:voh actually mane jab bashundra malhotra ka naam suna toh muje thora confusion hua...parh aftr our award main washroom ki taraf jata vakt ek lady ko phone pe tumhe mill jane ki bath kerte suna...i was scard phir mane pas mein ek stall dekha jaha different medicine milte hain mene vaha se utaya...baki ka tum feel kar chuke ho.
manik:tumahri chotisi dimag mein ese ...ese faltu ideas kaha se ate hai.
Tujhse hi sikha hain...manan hear a voice from their behind..nd nd nd

#noor
When they turned around they saw cabir...they were shocked and then they got another 440 bolt ka jhatka when they saw maniks grandma...they both shared glanced and were about to run when manik grandma took manik ear and twisted it...he screamed in pain pleading to let go
Grandma: "ab samajh me aaya ke mere saath hide and seek khelne se kya hota hai"
Manik: "arrey please dard ho raha hai"
After pleading alot maniks grandma left him...she bombarded him with questions on why is he here? What is he doing here? Who is this girl? Etc after answering all the questions...Cabir and maniks grandma persuaded them to come back mumbai...
Manan maniks grandma and cabir...came back mumbai and straight to malhotra mansion even though manik denied but soon they dragged manan...as soon as they entered they saw malhotra's sitting with fab 5...and soon as manik entered they started questioning him...but soon after manik telling them his sided story they understood his point of view...after chit chat...nandini left for her house...same was the scene there but after a session of question and answer murty's were finally satisfied...
Days passed by manan used to talk on phone and were missing each other immensely...even though they used to meet each other...murty's and malhotra's became good friends and were seeing this change in both...
Cabir saw manik sitting in each room...and thought of talking to him...soon the conversation took another side and manik finally confessed him feelings and the other side navya and nandini were siting together and soon she confessed her feelings...
Soon this news was heard by malhotra's and murty's and thought of surprising them they arranged a marriage...but thought of keeping this a secret of whom the groom groom and bride is...
As soon as manan got to know...they tried their best to stop this marriage but to their dismay malhotra's and murty's stayed put...
Finally they sighed in defeat and thought of moving on...and nd thought maybe destiny didn't wanted them two to being togther...they thought they are not meant to be togther...
Marriage day arrived nandini and manik still didn't know as the marriage was in a venue...they were told that they are gonna have their marriage at the same day...manik arrived with a grumpy face and soon nandini arrived...but soon they were told to sit togther on the mandhap to seek answers they asked their parents and soon they got to know the plan...they laughed and laughed even manan did on their stupidity...soon the marriage was over...
In the room nandini sat in the middle waiting for manik...manik arrived and after few minutes of silence manik confessed him feelings and so did nandini...they made love and lived happily ever after...
THE END!!!!
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#fall_in_love_with_chocolate_thieves ?????

Nandini tujhe pata hai aaj world ki sab se big chocolate ki exhibition hai or e kar raha hai world ki sab se best chocolate company Malhotra's or e 1st time India pe ho raha hai... Navya says to nandini...

Or iss news ko sunke nandini ki mouth ' pe a jati hai water ' .
Nandini - navya chal jate hai hum bhi todhi chocolate chak ke ate hai...

Navya - tu pagal hai nandini uha hume chocolate dekhne ko bhi nahi naseeb hogi or tujhe chakni hai...

Nandini - navya tu kyu itni soch rahi hai Purna e story uski friends se likhay gi hume chocolate k sath or bhi bohot kuch milegi dekh lena...

So nandini & navya ajate hai exhibition hall
Entry marte hai... world ki sab se big wali chocolate ko dekhte hai or nandini & navya khushi se pagal ho jati hai. Phir dheere se chocolate ki pass jake ek hat chocolate pe daal ke ek pieces
leke bhaagte hai...
O dono aga age security piche piche par nandini & navya khana start karke or bhi speed se bhagte hai...
Bg- Dhoom Machaale Dhoom Machaale Dhoom
And full exhibition Hall pe bhag te bhagte
nandini & navya bichar jate hai...
Unke piche lag jati hai full security teams...
Par
But
Suddenly

Nandini entar karti hai ek room pe jaha use milta chocolate khate huye chocolaty eyes ' wala manik malhotra
& navya ko security incharge Cabir



#shanaya_Ahuja
Nandini enter in the room .. Wo dheere dheere enter kerti hai room me...and then finally ek hott handsome boy se takra jaati hai..jaise hi wo girne wali hoti hai...our manik malhotra hero ki trah save ker lete. Hai... Both are lost in each other eyes...then nandu realised their position and straighen herself...
Bhaar se guards ki awaaj aati hai - kha gyi wo ladki dundho usse (gabar style)
Nandu heard it and look towards manik with pleading eyes to save her
Manik move his finger on her lips for removing chocolate from her pouty lips
Manik- to wo tum ho chocolate chor
Nandini- woo woo ..I love chocolate just like u indicating towards the chocolate bar in his hand
Manik- to chorii keroge
Nandu- ager hum mangte to wo mujhe us badiii si chocolate me se khanne nhi dete
Manik smiled...
Manik pov- oh!!! God she is tooo cutee..the chocolate on her corner of her lips making me crazy to kiss her hungrily
He moved forwards and slammed his slips with her ...nandu protested then she realised the sweet taste of chocolate on his lips ..and started enjoying ...both chew each other lips ...and after about 15 min broke up...
Manik- tum to chocolate se bhi sweet ho
Nandu blushed
Manik again come towards her and said in her ears - in want to taste them again and again
Nandu move back and run away from their
Cabir - wo girl kha gyi
Dusri tarf navya is hiding behind a door
Cabir- tum sab udherr dekho me ess room me check kerte hu
Cabir entered the room
Navya put the hand on her mouth so that ...koi awaaz na ho
But yes cabir started searching here and there
Navya closed her eyes
And cabir saw her finally
Cabir pov- ye to whii hai na ...marriage wali girl..she is tooo cute
Cabir come close to her
And hold her from her waist
Navya opened her eyes
Cabir- nice to meet u again chocopie
Navya- tummm
Flashback
Navya in her friends marriage
Cabir was also there ...
Navya was running having garlands in her hand but she fall on cabir
Navya- sorryyy
Cabir - sorry mat bolo ..utho mere uperrr se...tum bahut bhaari ho
Navya straighten herself
Navya- how dare u call me fat
Cabir- jakke apni friend se puchoo kitni mottiii ho tum
Navya put a chocolate cake from a table and throw it on his face...
Navya- awww now go and look at itself
Flashback over
Cabir moved towards her
Cabir - to tumhe yaad hu me
Navya- hmmm
Cabir- chloo ab mere sath..tumhe manik sir ke pass le jaunga fir wo decide krenge kya kerna hai
Navya- plzzz mujhe chord do
Cabir- ye to chocolate uthane se pehle sochna chaheaye tha
Navya pov- ye khaduss mujhe nhi chodega..
Navya - acha chlooo
Cabir- etni jaldi maan gyiii
Navya - hmmm mujhe pta hai tum mujhe punishment dilwa ke rehoge
Cabir- chahu to bacha sakta hu..if u give me what I want
navya- acha!!! Bataoe kya chaheaye tumhe
Cabir- kisss
Navya- u jerkk esse pehle me marna pasand kerungi
Scene change
Nandu was running ..manik is behind her
He caught her hand ..and she collided with her chest
He make her face him by turning her
Nandu- chodo mujhe
Manik- punishment for stealing chocolate to deni hogi
And he again kiss her on her neck..and about to claim her lips again
Nandu push him
Nandu- me essi waisi ladki lagti hu...how can someone thought Sooo low about a girl
Manik getting up
Manik: how dare u push manik malhotra
Then someone knocked the door
Manik- come in
Cabir entered with navya
Cabir: sir ye rhi wo girl joo chorii kerke bhaagi this
Manik: hmm or dusrii yha hai
Cabir: sir police ke hawale ker de
Nandu started crying listening word police and manik anger melt
Manik: nhi enhe mere gher le CHLO...they will work as servants in my house for 7 days
Navya- humm ye nhi krenge
Manik - cabir call police
Navya - nhi nhi him krenge
#bhumika
Navya pleaded manik to not work as servant but he results into deaf ears cant able to listen anything later nandu pleaded him that plz forgv us hm aage se aisa kuch nhi karenge... Agr hm unse pyar se mangte to voh hme nhi dete n we both love chocolates so much ki hm chori krno ko mazboor ho gye h... SORRY manik after listening this not once think said okk but on one condition... She got confuse as what he'll ask but to her dismay he ask her to be friends She once think ki kya karu aage khai piche kuya agr iski bat n mani toh polic ko de dega So she agree to his condition .

Written by Isra Jannat Naina
nandu says ok manik bolta hai cabir i hav give nandini her punishment bt navya ke sath tu jo chahe kar..nandu nd navya got shockd cabir smirks nd says:navya ji chalie or wo navya ko le jata hai nandu unke peche jannewali hoti hai tabh manik pakar leta hai or kehta hai...khaa chali Choclate flood...nandu says ;i hav to save navya...manik says u hav to options whether do what i say or else i will reveal the truth...nandu says:ok as u say...manik smirks nd says:toh give me my choc...nandu gives him a bar of choc...bt manik says:tch tch i want in manik malhotra's style with this he grabs her nd nd nd...

Written by Monica Felicity
Puts chocolate in her mouth forcefully n sucks it from her mouth n this turn into a passionate kiss but nandu is shocked n takes aback n starts scolding manik 'tumne mujhe kya samaj rakha hain u said we are frndz but koi frnd eisa karta hain kya really u r a monster' while saying this manik was fully staring into her coz she was cute when she was scolding him he was just lost in her n he start smiling unknowingly nandu sees this n get angry n makes pout manik smiles seeing this she starts moving out of rooom but he stops her saying he will complaint to police abt theft but nandu says ok do whatever u want how dare u ki... nandu stops n blushes imagining wat she was abt to say manik sees this n starts teasing her ki...

Written by Isra Jannat Naina
manik says:agar itna achaa chocolate roz mile toh har din chocolate ki exhibition karu nandu blushes nd says:manik i knw i taste gud bt chocolate is much more...manik says:achaa hw i taste..nandu thought to tease him:manik mujhe kaise pata hoga tum kasa taste karte ho coz maine toh sirf chocolate ko taste kiya.
manik P.O.V
oh so ur teasing me nw see wht I'm doing...he grabs nandu nd takes her to the hall where the exhtibtion ws gng on...nandu was hell scared as what the monster was upto...
Written by Shanaya Ahuja
Manik take nandu to tha hall
Manik : ab bolo u don't taste me...u only taste chocolate
Nandu (scared) : yes
Manik: sachh bola warna...
Coming very close to her
Nandu; acha acha suno... Placing her hands on his chest
Manik: ha bolo
Nandu; wo uuu uu taste good..ab theek hai...plz don't kiss me in front of everybody
Manik smirk...he again take her to the room
Manik: to tum kya keh rhi thi..I taste good
Nandu: hmmm
Manik; so u don't want to taste me again
Nandu; nhi mummy kehti hai..jyada meetha khane se diabetes ho jaati hai
Manik; acha
Nandu nodded
Manik : but I love diabetes and he again slammed His lips with her
Nandu also respond.
Nandu broke up after some time
Manik: u become my addiction nandu
Nandu blushed
Scene change
Navya : cabir what will u do with me
Cabir ; hmm kuch bhi kerwa sakta hu..but first make coffee for me
( they are in cabir house)
Navya went and make coffee
Cabir; navya I want chocolate coffee
Navya( from kitchen): okkk
Navya POV: but mujhe to chocolate coffee bnane nhi aati
Cabir went to kitchen after some time to see why she is taking so time
When he went he saw navya is searching in goggle how to make chocolate coffee...
Cabir: to tumhe chocolate coffee bnane nhi aati
Navya nodded
Cabir POV: she is looking tooo cute
Cabir; kuch nhi hota me sikha ta hu
He started preparing it..and finally when he took a chocolate bar to add in it...navya said; thodi so chocolate le lu
Cabir broke one piece of chocolate bar and give it to her
She started eating like a kid ..now cabir can't control on himself and finally kissed her...navya didn't respond first..but after some time she became wild...and cabir smiled between the kiss
Manik get a call
Manik: why did u call me??
Neyonika; u have to tell what is going on...why didn't u come for meeting
Manik: I don't care..go to hell.
And he cut the phone
Nandu listened whole conversation
Nandu; aapko unse esse baat nhi krni chaheaye thiii
Manik (monster jaag gya);hold her tightly from her shoulder...
Manik; now u commoner will tell me how to talk..u stealer !! s**t!!! Who can kiss anybody
Nandu stated crying hearing this...and jerk his hands and went away without saying anything further
#bhumika
Manik pov- Monster ko jagane k bd nandu toh rote-2 bhag gyi but after some tym I had realize what a blunder i had done by making my sweet angel cry due to dat neonika... i den strt calling her... but to my dismay she didn't pick up d call i again try many tyms but she didn't pick up i think that she is super angry on me ho bhi ku n tune kam hi aisa kiya h apni angel ko rulane ka now ibhave to think ways to manofy her afterall its manik Malhotra's angel...
#Elle_Daftarian
To manofy nandini manik call his chocolate company manager and give him some instructions and after that he call cabir and told him to ask navya about nandini's address ... she told him and after knowing nandu's address manik to himself- mission manofy nandu start ... Within a hour manik's surprise ready for nandu and manik goes nandu's home ... he was about to ring the bell but stop and smirk... he enter through window and open main door of house slowly slowly he go put nandu's surprise in living room and then he knock on nandu's bedroom door and nandu think may be its navya so she opens the door and shocked to find manik there and manik is also shocked to see her...
nandini is wearing white shots and baby pink top ... her top was short showing her belly button and her hairs was in a messy bun and due to crying her lips was so soft and nose was tomato red and eyes was swollen... manik can't his eyes away from her and he scan her from her head to toe... and first he saw in her eyes and feeling guilty for making her cry then he saw her chubby cheeks and tears on them ... he feel and urge to suck her tears and then he saw her redfish nose ... he feels like cherry on the cake and wanna bite her nose and then he saw her lips and he feels strongly to kiss her hard and more hard and won't stop till eternity ... But he stop himself because he knows it will feel her bad ... Nandini said - manik.. He didn't listen .. Nandini(shouted)- manik.. What are u doing here?? Infact I should say what are doing in a commoner's house??? Manik came back from his lalala land from nandini's shout ... Manik- listen nandini ... Pls I'm sorry ... I didn't wanted to hurt you ... Pls try to understand .. He holds her ears ... Nandini was hurt but she was sad with manik's words ... Manik take her hand and both move towards living room ... And the scene nandu saw numb her due to excitement...
There was a beautiful princess castle made by chocolate and a princess crown with dark chocolate and milk chocolate dressing was there ... Nandini feels excited ... In excitement she hugs manik ... Then remains hugging each other sometimes then nandu come to the reality and broke the hug and she was feeling embarrassed so she was looking at the ground ... Manik move ahead and took princess crown and make her wear and said so princess ready ... Let's go to the ride of your castle and castle was so beautiful... She was mesmerized... Manik took some chocolate and make her eat then some amount of chocolate was at the corner of her lips ... He tried alot to control himself but couldn't control himself ... He said to himself that he would just suck that chocolate won't kiss her or make her uncomfortable.. He moves towards her to suck it and in anticipation nandini close her eyes and parted her lips as manik was after sucking chocolate moving apart ... Nandini took manik's lips in her lips and suck them after that their kiss deepen ... And their explore each others mouths lovingly ... After good 25 minutes they unwillingly broke the kiss and join their heads ... Both were super happy and blushing ...
#Isra
manik again says :I'm sorry nandu...nandu blushes hearing the word nandu...nd says:its ok.manik says:which smooching orrr nand hits him.meanwhile cavya was sitting on cabirs cabin while navya was sitting silently nd blushing...cabir says:wht u did is illegal, so to cover it wht u will do????navya:as u say.cabirs trick workd he said :ok than u hav to be my date fr one month.navya was shocked as well as angry nd says:why u wnt that????cabir said sadly:u knw I'm the cool guy still i dnt hav any girlfrnd my frnds insult me on fb tht I'm a gay tht i hav nt any gf.navya being the madhubala gt emotional nd says i will be your gf as my frnds also calls me lesbian expect nandu.
manan
manik says:would lyk to join me on chocolate club(chocolate club is a club where evrythng of chocolate as well as drinks...hehe)
nandu gt spr exited nd agress.
at night
nandu ws ready to go in her black shiny gown. it ws backless.manik cme to pick her in red tee, black blazer nd black jeans.they bth were lost in each other.and aftr eyelock session they reached the chocolate club.people were lookng lyk zoombies in drooling chocolates.nandu gt excitd nd ordrs chocolate drinks (made by me...hehe).sm boys were checkng hr nd one boy askd hr fr dancng bt she whispered smthng on tht boys ear while they all lookd at manik nd smiled nd the boy went away.manik got angry nd held hr hand nd pinned hr in the wall nd said:bohot hasi aarahi thi naa...nandu feels pain in hr hand said:manik its hurtng.manik loosens his grip nd said sorry nandu started to cry manik gt panicked nd said :srry srry srry nandu i ws nandu m srry bt nandu ws nt stoping so he said: i luv u nandini.bomb fell on nandu she lookd at him said :wht.Haa nandu I luv u nd thts why i actd lyk this will u accept my proposal????nandu said:bt on 1condition m:wht is tht..i cn do anythng???n:tht u will give me chcolate a lot manik chuckles :anythng fr u.and they pst their pic together saying luv each other nd on the same tym manik notification shws tht cabir also pst a pic they saw tht cavya together written lovers.manik ,cabir bth lykd their pics.
aftr manan marigge
m:cm with me nandu...nd saws tht manik hs opn a chocolate factory named "manan".nandu says:i luv u manik.m:i luv u too.
manik p.o.v
chocolate u hav changed my life. coz of u i gt anthr chocolate to live fr lyftime...really luv both of you nd they live happily ever aftr.
The
End.
Pari_mananholic thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago
Wow awesome...
Luved it...
Thnx for pm...
Update soon..
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Posted: 9 years ago
All d 3 stories r jst amazing...
Totally luved it...
Thnx 4 d pm...
Plz cum up wid new stories soon...
Will be waiting anxiously...
Take care...
Stay blessed...
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Posted: 9 years ago
All 3 stories were mindblowing. Loved it to core. Thanks for pm
Keep writing
Stay blessed😊
Edited by archu_asok - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Amazing stories..
Laughed alot..
Plz pm me
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Posted: 9 years ago
Sweet n hilarious

Chocolatey story

👏👏👏

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Posted: 9 years ago
Chocolate drinks... hehehe
Awesome story... I love this choclaty manan
great job dear
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Posted: 9 years ago
Awesome stories
All were so cute and beautiful
Manan were amazing in all
Update more soon

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