MaNan : Short Stories[3 new Stories pg - 53&54] 20/2/16 - Page 22

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Originally posted by: manancraze

Cute os...😳.

Manan r childhood buddies... Confession scene was superb...😃


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Awesome OS .loved it.manan's friendship part was mindblowing. Manan's meet at college was amazing. Their bond was well shown.Manan's confession was mindblowing. Totally an beautifully story and it was beautifully penned. Thanks for pm

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Awww super cute story!!
Loved it! So glad they met each other again!
Destiny always has its ways!
Do continue with more stories!:)


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Posted: 9 years ago






Written By Bhumika
Valentine week Special os
Happy Chocolate Day
This is a story about a girl whose age is might just 18 years old & a young boy whose age is 21 years.
This boy is a tutuion teacher of science who teaches to higher secondary students.
One day her father comes and ask for the classes for her daughter. The girl was unaware about the tution and she insisted her father that this tutuion is boring yeah kisko kuch smjh nhi ata hai, yeah sb students fail hoty hai.
But father says I don't think so it's name is famous in all the town.
G- no dad. Mujhe nhi jana
D- ek bari jkar th dkho agr nhi smjh aya th wapas aa jana... For my concern please go. You are my loving daughter. So tum apne dad ke sath aisa kraogi. (in a emotional dramatic way)
Phir kya tha girl ko apne dad ke baton mein ana pada
G- Kk dad. I'll go but only if like it and I will continue to it.
D- that's my daughter
That girl None other than nandini
Next day outside the centre she thought ki dad N kha phasa diya but for his concern I will gv it a try. In d class there were many students throwing paper balls & chit chatting. When dey saw a girl entering in class dey thought of tease her like
Studnt- r u new to dis class u know sir is very rude N strict he totally like discipline etc
N- I doesn't fear from anyone. I m a brave girl and why I should I fear I'm always gooD in the class ( but in actual she is fearing some fear that if she gets a scolding on very first day)
At same time manik was at her back and he had listen all the convo and as he enter and says hello students
Her thoughts were broken by
the entrance of a boy in the class.
Nan pov- y dey all of a sudden bcm silent. N dat boy standing is so smart so cute N innocent but her trance broke by D greetings of students" HELLO SIR" & D boy and starts introducing hi class I'm MANIK MALHOTRA ur new science teacher. And I will not scold anyone ( every students of the the class laughs & Nandu feels little ashame)
(Nandu pov She is shocked that he is a teacher. but look so young as if he's also a student)
Class begin
Manik(m)- so class 2dy we gonna study acids
N he start explaining it.
Now D tym 4 discussn dat how well dey understand it.
While discussing he points a finger towards a nandu N ask her to explain dis formula but she not able to explain as when she had seen him she was not able to uter word
Now he ask hr 2 sit N ask whats ur name she said- Nandini Murti he says okk N well done as it's a tough formula never mind iexplain it
Class got over
Man pov
She is so cute N looks like intelligent too. But I'm in doubt that why she is not able to uter a word she just requires little more attention. N she'll b perfect in it.
Some days went like dis.
But after a some time she gets normal and becomes
very attentive in class N try to note all d point required her.
One day it's very difficult topic arise N she has a doubt in it so she goes to him N- Sir may I ask u something
M- ya sure
N- sir actually I need a help in dis topic(periodic table)
It's difficult to remember all d chemicals so can u help me in it.
M- y not it's my duty to help my student in der problems N ur very brilliant student.
Let's do one thing it's quite late now so 2mrw after class ur doubts session will take
N- okk N thank u sir
Next day after class her doubts were taken at one point she was so confused so she was just eating pens top, chewing her nail in nervousness that whether it's a correct formula r not & many more this was not gon unnoticed by manik N he was mesmerised on hr cute antic that she is just a cute little girl of 7/8 year.
He said to her that u r a child of 7-8 year just to tease her he said tum bachi ho badi kb hogi N she got irritated by dis N said mein bachi nhi hun mjhe bachi mt bolo...m not a kid... He said nhi tum bchi ho abhi bhi bachpna gya nhi hai tumhara
N -nhi (in a irritating way) M-okk u win I lose... She got happy N said thats Great...
Few moments later he ask hr what happens she point towards a problem he smile N said just a simple problem N solve it N Nandu in excitement hug him N said Sir u r genius u solve it so quickly N easily.
M doesn't hug her but he thought of coming some one so he breaks the hug
Days went like that..
They were getting attractive towards each other unknown to D feelings.
Nan pov- he's so nice gentle N caring. Nandu what r u feeling he is ur teacher stop thinking this it's wrong. She was confused in her feelings what she was feeling for him
Man pov- she is so nice cute bubbly girl I never saw in my lyf manik what r u thinking she is just a student not ur frnd or gf to whom u r thinking about.
Aftr few days later
He announced in class that der will b a full syllabus exam N who will top D exam will get a prices.
All were very shocked that how come so soon D test series arises they r not prepared for it.
N our Nandu was bitting her nails in nervousness for a test. Manik notice it N thought of motivate hr.
Class got over
He stop Nandu N ask y u were lost in class after test announcement.
She said m nervous of tests that whether I will b able to get gud mark r not.
He thought to lighten D mood said Iknow u won't b able to get it as u r coward u fears of having a tests.
"Test r part of life if u fear in it then how come u face dis cruel world."
N- den further says I'm not a coward I can face the challenge.
M- I assure u that u will not get gud marks but to his dismay
N- accepted his challenge Don worry I will get gud marks N prov u that I'm not weak then she leaves
Man pov
I know u will accept my challenge thats y I gv it to u
I know u can do it
I trust u...
"Dead day arises "
Test series
All were nervous but Nandu was confident as she had to prov her so how she can b weak
Test exam begin N get over by 3 hrs
Results declaration(top 3)
1- NANDINI MURTI-90%
2- CABIR DHAWAN-85%
3- MUKTI VARDHAN-80%
After D results prices were distributed to dem like Parker pens
Class got over
N- I told u N I will top D exam see I top it wid 90%
M- I know u will do it. If I'll motivate u in +ve manner u won't score it
So I thought of opting reverse psychology by demotivatng u N see it works
Nandu after listening to it ohh so ab har gye ho th bhane bna rhe ho
M- no I'm serious mujhe pta tha tum kar logi
N-kk fine (pov She was so touched that her sir care for me)THANK U sir for enhancing my skills
N then she in her childish manner said u only said who will top will get a gift so where's my gift
M- diya th Parker pen so ab kaunsa gift
N- wh th test series ka tha what about the challenge M- so tumhe ab challenge ka gift bhi chaiye
N-ya offcourse any doubt
M- Kk here's ur gift but at present I have only small amount of gift u have to handle.by only this bunch of chocolates only
N - koi nhi I'll handle with it
As she opens the box she founds her favourite chocolates and says thanku and again hugs him and wish him a HAPPY CHOCOLATE DAY
M- smiles N said thank u andsame to u
N -sorry
M- y sorry
N- becoz I will not share it wid u...:-P and not sorry for the hug & by saying this Nandu leaves by laughing
M- getting awee on her antic said it's for u only. Enjoy it...and I don't mind ur hug manik laughs to this..
**** THE END****
Edited by Angel_manan - 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Cuteprincess6

Superb
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childhood scenes were.so cuteee
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Written By Srishti
Nandini wake up bcs of beeping of her alarm nd saw the time it's 8 am nd she woke up nd went to her room window then she open her fb account nd saw today is chocolate day...
She suddenly shout shitt shitt shitt nandu haw can u be so careless today is chocolate day...u have to make this day km se km memorable n...rose day bhi bhul gyi or propose day shitt koi nii aaj mai apne boyfriend ko deti hu surprise...(she went to washroom for fresh n up)
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Other side manik walking to n fro in his room - pta nii is yaad bhi ho ga ya nii ki aaj kya h ...waise hi rose nd propose day dono bhul gyi or lecture de rhi thi...
Flashback :-
Manik ne bilkul filmy setup kiya for proposing nandini nd he propose her too bt baato baato me usne kh diya ki use to yaad rha nii kuch saare surprise usse hi plan krne hote h...she said -mt kro mai krungi (with thoda sa angry mode)
Manik - achha ji aap mere liye surprise plan kijiyega
Nandini - yess so it's done ki kl I have a surprise for u aajana kl sham 7 bje mere ghr...nd dekhna nandini kya krti h...
Flashback end :;-
Manik to himself -koi nii manik bulaya h n sham ko 7 bje dekhta hu kya plan h uska...bt phn kr du...nii nii agr phn kiya to kachhe chaba jayegi meri lady monster...or agr nii kiya to or wo bhul gyi ho to or bhi badi prblm...it's ok raat ko dekhte h kya setup h uska...
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Here nandini doing preparation for giving surprise to her boyfriend...she decorate her home beautifully. ...now it's 6pm she is going to get ready...she wore a beautiful red gown pura backless nd her breast covered with gown upper cloth her belly have net cloths which is exposing till her belly button...nd in down there is a oval Shape cutting till her toe...nd piche se full ...she let her hair open on one side nd looking very hot...ki use dekhte hi manik ki...ufff...
Now it's 7 pm nd ting tong bji bell...Manik is arrive...she open the door nd saw him looking extremely hot in his black tuxeco...Nd manik saw her looking so sexy...he have bookey in his hand nandini welcome him nd he came inside nd saw the decoration home is looking very beautiful nd then turn to nandini...said - wow tm bhuli nii that's great...
Nandini - phle ye Btao mai kaisi lg rhi hu...
Manik - saw her head to toe nd said coming close to her nd bookey ko niche sofe pr rkha hold her waist nd said looking very sexy that I couldn't control on my self nd going to kiss her but she put her hand on his mouth nd said - abhi nii manik malhotra abhi wait kro abhi to jashn shuru hi hua h...(Nd wink nd turn back.)
Manik - ufff (again go close to her hold her waist take the bookey nd give it to her nd kiss her back then shoulder then earlobe which is giving her goosebumps she moan which doing nothing bt increasing his desires)Nandini take bookey nd open her eye nd push him...nd said bs ho gya... abhi nii chlo maine dinner bhi bnaya h let's go she hold his hand nd take him to the dinning room where every dishes is his favourite wala nd also romantic setup too...They sat nd have their food...
Then they move to the hall balcony...nd gaze at stars nd suddenly manik said - nandini today is to chocolate day nd tmne mujhe chocolates to diye h nii nd then nandini realised ki usne khud hi chocolate banaye the n abhi tk usne usse freezer me dala hi nii...she said in loud tone by holding her head - shitt ye maine kya kr diya aiyooo nd ran to the kitchen...Manik after seeing her too ran with her in kitchen...

Kitchen:-

Nandini pick up the bowl from gas stove nd saw that chocolate is melting bcs she fogout to place this in freezer manik saw this nd lean to the kitchen slab nd said- whi maine socha ki abhi tk meri princess se koi gadbad nii hui...
She saw him in angry face - yha meri saari kiye Karaye pe pani Phir gya or tm ho ki mazak ura rhe ho...maine socha tha ki tmhe apne haatho se chocolate bna kr dungi or ab to ise freeze hone me bhi time lgega ab kya kru...
Manik saw her in sad face nd said bhut kuch kr Skte h...
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Manik came near her nd back hug her nd said - mai hu n ise mai aise hi kha Lunga (in husky tone )nd take the chocolate from her bowl...nd apply it on her earlobe nd lick it...nd down nandini understand ki kya krne wala h...
Nandini - manik...plzzz
Manik - don't spoil it now...let me love my love...nd take some more chocolate nd apply in her shoulder nd suck it nd trace his tounge from her shoulder to her earlobe...
Manik is making hard for her to stand on her knees she fisted her hand
Now manik turned her towards him ...
Nd eat the chocolate now nandini saw him in confuse nd he smrink nd kiss her lips...sucking her lips...bit her lips she open her mouth nd he inter in her mouth exploring every part sucking her tounge nd his hand tracing her back too...nd her hand fisted hus hair she too respond in equal force...they broke apart gasping for air...nd manik saw her by giving smrink nd said in her ears- baby bola tha n ki mai ise aise hi kha Lunga...Nd bite her earlobe now
said - do I have right to love my love...
Nandini - I'm only yours...(In low tone )

Manik ne bowl nandini ko pakraya nd pick her up in his arms nd go to her room nd placed her on bed by opening her blazer nd lay beside her nd take bowl...from her hand nd placed it beside bed table nandini bcs of shy go another side nd now her back is facing him he goes near her placed her hair in other side nd take chocolate nd apply on her back jha tk her skin is visible to him nd lick chocolate from there nd turn her around nd now her face facing him he apply choclate on her cheeck to neck shoulder knuckle nd finger tk nd lick every where she is having hard time to control herself...Manik said to her to open his shirt...she do what he said...nd now he is bare chest visible to her he apply chocolate on her lips nd kissed her again this time wild type...nd with his other hand open her gown nd throw it some where in the corner...now she is only on her inner garments he apply chocolate on her stomach nd lick there...He apply chocolate on her nape nd lick sucked nd bit there she is only moaning she come over her...Nd kissed him hungrily nd kissed his forehead both eyes nd cheeck bite his ear lobe nd take choclate nd apply on his lips nd kissed him now between kiss they changed their position he come over her nd now he take choclate nd apply on her both thigh nd suck it nd she clutch bed site now he open his pant nd throw it too now he only in his underwear nd come up nd ope her bra nd apply chocolate on her breast nd suck it lick it giving bites nd her next breast he do same now he come down nd open her panty nd kissed on her vegina his moan thoda sa loudly he come to her face eat choclate nd kissed her again...between kiss his hand goes to her vegina nd he creassed there nd she with one hand clutch his hair pulling more close nd with other hand she hod his hand which is on her vegina he take his finger nd placed it inside her vegina she hold him more tightly nd now when he realise she is out of breath he broke apart nd she realise her hand from his nd now he come down nd kissed her vegina nd then he take chocolate nd apply on her all over vegina nd suck there giving bite too...now he is out of control he come over her eat chocolate nd make her eat too nd kissed there tongue exploring every part of each other mouth in between kiss manik goes inside her nandini hold him tightly bcs of pain he too hold her nd with 3-4 push he goes inside her totally nd broke kiss too nd nandini hug him tightly for some time he wait inside her nd when he saw her pain is normal now he push push nd increasing his speed claim her his...
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After 2 hours they got tired nd manik lay beside her nd nandini take blanket nd nd covered themselves nd manik occupied jer in his arms nd after some time their breath got normal manik said - nandini...(in low tone )
Nandini - hmm (by closing her eyes)
Manik - tired
Nandini - hmm
Now manik saw bites which he gave her become red he Cressed her neck nd she open her eyes said - Kya hua...
Manik - sorry...(in guilt tone)Nandini - kyu??
Manik -see maine kya kr diya I don't knw tmhe dekhte hi mai out of control ho jata hu...I'm sorr...(going to say sorry bt she kissed him passonatly )
Nandini - aage se bola n to smjh lena...Manik this is ur right nd It prove that I'm only yours smjhe... (her eyes is twinkling )
Manik - ok fine ...
Nd take choclate and kissed eat nd kissed her again after some time they broke apart ...
Manik take bowl nd said kha tha n choclate kha jaunga see it finished... (nandini hit him lightly in his shoulder nd he laugh nd take her in his arm murmur in her hair I love you. ...she to said in his chest I love you more...nandini after some time slept in each other arms...
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So end of os manan choclate day...
Enjoy...
Edited by Angel_manan - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Wow they were awesome..
First was cute and sweet..
Second was hot and bold..
Luved it to the core...
HAPPY CHOCALATE DAY...
do write more...
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Posted: 9 years ago
Wow...pehele vala kitna cute tha...😳.
Loved little feelings... Manan r so adorable....

Second wala v cute tha... But...bohat HAWWTTT ☺️tha...😉.
Loved that os...😉
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Posted: 9 years ago
Amazing story..i luvd it..thnkz 4 d pm...

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