#3MaNanSS:Dheere Dheere Link To Thread 4/PG1/17th-OCT - Page 46

again suspense...
beautifully penned...
Manan ...
fab5 together...

All d best for the first day in uni.

Amazing n feb update...

Thks for quick update...

Manik was crying for nandu...

Fab3 conversation was gud...they care for manik...interesting...

Manik tld nandu abt his past n how alone he was...feel bad for manik...

Romance was beautiful...

OMG cabir bhaiya came so fast ...its amazing...

Cabini bonding is too gud...

Nandu ki chori pakdi gayi...

Manik heard tiger ... hope all secret wiil b out nw...

Update next part whn u get time...

Amazing update...
Finally nandini came to know y manik hate fab3...
Nandini called cabir such a dramebaaz she is...and when cabir arrived she ran as she knew she will get scolded by the two...she is so cute...
Now manik heard tiger's and nandini's convo...
Update soon...

Pls update 😭😭 desperate wait for the next part pls

All the best for uni ... and its ok

sorry for being late

Girl again suspense..

But awesome update..

I must say nandini is really a kid..

I like the way she making efforts to unite fab 5..

Manik is such a sweetheart.. And also cabir how he carecares for his little sister..

In fab3 I like max, sweet guy..

Pls update soon..

Love
Suji :-)

Mawara first of all I m so so sorry for commenting so late..actually I found ur update late and then I had an exam so couldn't comment..but I read it already two times as I couldn't hold myself from reading...

Ok now about the update...it was awesome...I was imagining what's gonna happen next from the time I read the last update but honestly couldn't even imagine that it's gonna be this much awesome..

First of all I want to say something about the characters...well I didn't have any idea how will Manik react finding Fab3...I thought may be he will be a little soft towards them but u presented him at that situation so beautifully and it was truly natural...loved u for creating second Manik I mean Tiger...I loved his actions in the update...he actually a true friend...I also loved Max so much...he was perfect as his character..sweet, caring and friendly...but I am not so happy with Jack's character..it's not that I didn't like him..but it's not that much..I loved his flirting nature but didn't like carefree nature...I mean when everyone was so shocked to react how could he be so carefree yar...I didn't like it..

Fab3 scene was awesome..it was amazing..I enjoyed their conversation and leg pulling session so much..I loved this line so much..."Chal bay..! Jhoota..! Itna tou hum tjy janty hain..!"
Aww..Max was so cute na ???..he went to ask about Manik's girl..and Manik talked to him so calmly..

Nandini is so naughty yar...kitna drama karti hai yar...kaise Cabir ko bulaya na..hehe
I loved my Cabira so much..I loved it how he addressed Nandini as Mera bacha..! Meri behna...oh he is the sweetest and cutest.

Manik's story or Fab5 story is really mysterious..Manik is so sad about it..but I m happy that Nandini interrogated Tiger and Manik heard the truth..ab pata chalegi puri story..

Ok now about my most favorite section..MaNan scenes..these were awesome..from careful Manik to romantic Manik..Uff their romance was super romantic..I loved it so so much..the kiss was amazing..and the whole make out scene..Nandini was ready but Manik was in control..he respects her so much..

Thanks for the update Mawara..best of luck for ur university life..I wish it goes awesome..but please thoda time nikalna aur update dene ki koshis karna..please
I will be eagerly waiting..

looobng beautiful wonderful update...
u always send PMs
ek din nai diya toh i will understand...dnt wryy...
itnaaa update diyaaa...
bada waala aur masst wala..
bass i am happy !!
i loved the update :) :)
story bahottt massst hai...
i knew that there must have been a strong reason for these 3 friends to leave manik alone...
but i want them to confront him and get friends again...
aur woh hote hote tune chapter end kiya...hahahahahaahhahaha...
koi baat nai...waiting for next update...
this one was GREAT MAWARA :) :) :) :)

awsuum updt