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parthadmirer

@parthadmirer

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Posted: 10 years ago

#231

Chapter 10...

amazing mind blowing update again...👏

manik was hurt and he did not wanted to talk about fab5...

so nandini too didn't forced him and very cutely starting singing..

and at last manik smiled...

how cutely she asked manik to watch cartoon film with her...

and he agreed...

so cute...😳

so the 3 friends are not dead...

infact there is some misunderstatnding between them...

and nandini hear this conversation of mnaik and cabir...

she is shocked and hurt that why manik lied to her...

manik and nandini maa conversation was also great...

the way he made her believe that he will always take care of nandini...

manik ask nandini to come with him to pune...

the car trip...

poor nandini she is getting bored...

and manik busy in laptop...

so finally they reached pune and whom she sees there was shocking..

there she sees max.. manik friend..

his buddy member of fab5...

now really waiting to see how nandini will bring them together...

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Mehaklovely

@Mehaklovely

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Posted: 10 years ago

#232

Osm...
Loved it...
Nandini cutness n manik concern for her it's amazing...
N plz.. jldi btao past about fab 5 wht happened.. i wanted to know...

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Prakhathi M

@prakhathim

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Posted: 10 years ago

#233

awesome!!!! jack is so flirtarious guy... n max is so sweet... tiger... angry guy with soft heart... nice intro... really excited to see wats gonna happen and manik 's reaction would be worth seeing!!!! .. nandu is so cute... manan scene uff... respect a lot manik..

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Kritika_05

@Kritika_05

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Posted: 10 years ago

#234

Woaw congratulations for new thread dear
Commendable job 👏 👏
D update was amazing
It was a RoMedy 😆 😆
But uh left it on a cliffhanger
Lets see what's nxt
Try to update soon 😊

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Shanhavi

@shanhavi_manan

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Posted: 10 years ago

#235

Loved your update
Fast update as compensation good!!!
Will be waiting for update
Don't worry we will not make u feel guilty
Enjoy ur vacations
U r an awesome writer and keep ur spirit alive
Loved Manik's love and respect for Nandini his baby
Shanhavi

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591994

@591994

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Posted: 10 years ago

#236

Heyy..sorry for being so late.. Bt yr...the update was absolutely fantastic...manan romance...the fab 3's character ..everything is just perfect..n somehow it matches with their real life too...as ashish b karan are my favourites too...so its a treat fr me..as u introduce them in the story...i was so much happy when i saw it...so thanku so much fr that... U r really an awesome writer i genuinely respect ur writing n ideas too...i mean u r expert in every part be it romance, suspense,frndship or emotional scenes...u always prove in ur stories(all) that u r amazing... Thanx fr pm ... Byee...tc...

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Tiara115

@Tiara115

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Posted: 10 years ago

#237

wow yr update was mixture of suspense drama and romance ... as usual manan were the best ... tiger saved nandu ... thank god ... now the suspense will be out ... what happened to fab 5 why they broke ...

whenever u get tym update ... we will wait . ..

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Claire_D

@Claire_D

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Posted: 10 years ago

#238

Two updates back to back! Thank you so much! Mawara you write so well. The way you portray each emotion whether from Manik or Nandini's POV is amazing. It's like you can feel what they go through.
Coming to the update, Nandini finally meeting all the members of Fab 5. Such a dramebaaz she is! Her acting just to know the room no. of Jack!
MaNan Romance! Manik is such a gentleman! He respects her a lot! And definitely won't cross the line before marriage! Nandini surrendering herself to him, shows her trust in him! I so loved this part!
Finally Manik hears Jack's voice! Can't wait to see how things unfold from here! Manik's reaction! The reason for their split!
Continue soon!!

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Rochee1803

@Rochee1803

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Posted: 10 years ago

#239

It was fabulous amazing i read 10a to 11c in one go it was full on drama romance suspense loved it totally har ek cheez u have penned down it amazingly... Roop tera mastana pyaar mera deewana bhul koi humse na ho jaye... It made manan romance more sexyyy uff manik controlled himself such a gentleman MANIK MEET FAB 3 again uff ab kya hoga janne k liye me bht betaab hu plzzz nxt jldiii see lots of love To MAWARA