Manan ff - Fire meets fire CS and Part 1 updated

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Guy's I'm going to update a new story .
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Character sketch

Manik manholtra - a 27 years old handsome hunk. Girls drools over him. C. E. O of manholtra ndustries. One of the top most companies in the world. Loves his family very much. For outside people he is an very aggressive , arrogant guy. But for his family he is their protector. But from 6 years he is got more angrier and a stone - hearted person after an incident. The only person who can control him, understand him and knows how to breaks his wall which he has made in his heart is his best friend nandini for whom he can do anything to make her smile and can burn the whole world. If anyone tries to harm her.

Nandini singhania - a 25 years old the most beautiful girl with a preetiest smile which can melt a stone - hearted person also. The youngest chief commander in C. B. I but the most successful and intelligent commander in comparison of others commanders who is older than her. Instantly she is staying in San Francisco for a case. She is away from her home , family and friends from 6 years because she is travelling continuously from one country to another because as soon as she finishes a case, a new case arrived because of that she doesn't not have come to India from 6 years and also she doesn't get any time to speak to anyone from 1 month. She is a heartless person and very cruel in her punishments when it came to her work. Her best friend name is manik for whom she can do anything.

Cabir manholtra - he is 26 years old, very handsome guy. Brother of manik and husband of navya from 3 years loves her very much and also his family. C. C. O of manholtra industries. A very jolly person. A very good - hearted person. Very good friend of nandini and misses her a lot because neither he has seen her and talk to her from 6 long years. Wants nandini to become his bhabhi, knows only she can bring the old manik from that incident which happened 6 years ago.

Dhruv manholtra - he is twin of cabir but smaller than him from with 1 min. He is also a very jolly and good - hearted person. Husband of aliya from 1 year and their marriage was a love marriage, both love each other very much. He is the marketing head of manholtra industries. He is also a very good friend of nandini and misses her a lot. He also has a same wish as cabir. Loves his family a lot. A very handsome guy.

Navya manholtra - she is 25 years old and wife of cabir. Loves him a lot and also her family. Respects manik very but scares of his anger. She is financial head of manholtra industries. She is also very beautiful and modern. Don't know about nandini and what nandini do but has listen very much about from her husband and family members. Becomes a very good of friend of aliya and mukti.

Aliya manholtra - she is 25 years old and wife of dhruv. Loves him a lot and also her family. Feels lucky to have this much good peoples. She also admires and respects manik very much for how much do for his family and loves them. She is the designer head of manholtra ndustries. In 1 year becomes very good friend of navya and mukti. She also don't know about and what nandini do but she has listen very much about her from her husband and family members. Whenever she and mukti asks where they only got as a reply. She is out of India for some work.

Mukti manholtra - she is 26 years old and sister of the 3 manholtra brothers. She is a very famous fashion designer and works as a one of the best designer in malhotra industries. She is very beautiful but has a very soft heart. She is single and waiting for her perfect match. She is best friend of nandini after manik. Loves nandini like her real sister. She also has the same wish as cabir want to see nandini as her bhabhi and misses her a lot. Also a very good friend of aliya and navya . Loves her family a lot.

Abhimanyu thakkar - he is 27 years old and a very handsome guy. Right hand of nandini loves her as his real sister. A very intelligent and one of the the best officers in C.B.I. He is an orphan. Loves nandini's mom and dad like his own. He is with nandini from 6 years with starting of the case.

Devyani manholtra - Dadi of malhotras. She is 59 years old. She loves her grandchildren and her family very much. Wants to forget what happened 6 years ago and move on in his live. Loves nandini and singhania's very much. Wants to see nandini as manik's wife, misses her a lot. A very sweet lady but at time she is very strict also.

Neeraj manholtra - manik's and other younger manholtra uncle, brother of manik's mother. His wife dies 8 years ago with his only son in a car accident. Treat her sister's children's as his own. Loves them very much. He is 45 year old and has taken retirement 6 years before only after making manik official C. E. O of manholtra industries. Because he know that time that manik is became capable that time to take this responsibility and he was absolutely right because in these 6 years manik has make the company worldwide famous and has set up many branches outside India which is also doing very good and has included the company in top 3 companies of world. He also loves nandini very much and respects singhania because they were the only one who has helped them when their own relative don't help them after the death of manik's mother and father in a car accident and their become bankrupt.

Shivani singhania - Mother of nandini and treats abhi as his own son. Loves both of them very much and also loves her husband. She is 40 years old and a housewife. Loves manholtra like her own family. wants to become her son - in - law. Feels sorry for him for what happened with him 6 years ago. She is scare for abhi and nandini because what job they both. But she that both her children is very strong and till the time they both are together no one can harm them.

Manoj singhania - Father of nandini and treats abhi also as his own son. Loves both of them very much. Loves his wife and manholtra like his own family. He is 45 year old and a very big business man. His company is also in one of the top 3 companies all over the world. Wants manik's as his son - in - law. Feels sorry for him for what happened with him 6 years ago.
He is the only one who motivates nandini and helps her in understanding other people for doing this job but he is also scare for her and abhi life's but doesn't show anybody.

Harshad saxena - A very handsome guy but a very disgusting fellow. Rivals of manholtra and singhania's. Hates manik very much.

In my story he is not a very important character. He will show only in two to three chapters.

Others characters will reveal later
Edited by SanKadEviArNaV - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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awesome start...
loved all the characters...cant wait for you to start the story...
different concept is really nice...
cant wait to see what happens next...
keep up the good work and continue soon...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Chapter - 1
In maholtra mansion

All malhotras are sitting on the dining table for breakfast except one person. All of them are waiting for him, because they know he can come any minute and they all are correct after one minute manik is coming from upstairs all dressed in his three piece suit looking deadly handsome and in his all time persona. He comes and sat on the right side of chair which is near the head chair on which Dadi is sitting. He wishes his family members and gave a small smile but they all know it is fake. They knows he forgot to smile after what happened 6 years ago. They all sigh and wish him back and wish him back.

After completing the breakfast, he get up to leave for office and say

Manik " Cabir, dhruv, aliya and navya reach office on time. Today we have a very important with Singh's for our new project. "

Cabir "okay! We are just coming to office after you "

Manik's nod and when he started to walk. Dadi calls him and he turns

Dadi "manik u got any news from singhania's that when nandini is returning "

Manik's eyes got softened and everyone and his body come at little ease. Everyone notice this change in his demaneour and everybody smiles inwardly but then he spoke with longing in his eyes like how much he is missing her.

Manik "no Dadi, i've speak to Singhania uncle yesterday only and he said that she doesn't call from 1 month and they don't know when her work is finishing "

Dadi lovingly and longly said "it's been 6 years since we have seen her. I'm missing her so much "

Manik said softly "me too "

Then he turns and leaves from his office. All family members sees him going and all smiles a sad smile, by seeing him like this.

Cabir "when she is not here than also manages to make him smile by only her name. Only she can bring our old manik back "

Everyone nods their heads at this except navya and aliya. They are confuse by seeing the immense love for a long and how much everyone is sure that this girl nandini can bring the old manik back like everyone is saying. They are very curious to know about her because anyone takes her name is every time so lovingly and the manik whom they're have see smiling only when he is with his family members and an angry young for all others. He also a genuine smile only by listening her name. But they don't ask to anyone because they know that everytime they ask to anyone. All say you will see her, when you will meet her personally. After sometime cabir, dhruv, aliya and navya also leaves for office.


At airport

A flight is landed just now from San Francisco and a very beautiful lady come out with a very handsome man who is looking Elder than her. Two cars are waiting for them outside.

Lady " Abhi bhai, I am going to malhotras office to give them a surprise. "

Abhi " Nandini I know that u will go first there only. So, I have called two cars and have told the drivers that they not tell anyone that we have arrived at India "

Nandini "that is why, I love you so much bhai. You go to house mom and dad will be very happy to see you after so long and tell that I will come after sometime. We have to go to bureau also for the case"

Abhi " yes! because of that only we can come India after so long. But mom and dad will not be very happy by knowing this that is why we are going to tell them "

Nandini "yea! We will tell them that we have taken a break for sometime and then we will join again. "

Abhi " okay! Now let's leave "

With this both moves to their respective cars and after loading their luggage they sat in the car, smiles at each other and leaves towards their respective destination. Nandini in white Mercedes and abhi in black Mercedes.



At malhotra industries

Nandini has reached just now and after parking her car moves inside the office with her all time persona. She is wearing a grey colour armani suit inside white silk shirt whose first two buttons are opened showing her slender neck. Her suit all button is opened and a black type of belt can be seen on mid torso which is actually is her gun holder. Her gun is not visible because she is wearing a suit and the gun is kept at the side of her stomach and her suit's jacket is covering that side.

She with a grace and an attitude entered the office and walks towards the reception area. As she is crossing people without giving a damn to them. They all turns towards her. Boys are drooling over her and girls are giving her angry stares, she just smirks in response. When she reached reception the receptionist is just giving her stares being jealous of her. She again smirks in response seeing this and taking out her aviators which she is wearing till now asks

Nandini "where is manik "

Receptions Linda gasped by hearing this, because till now no one has call her manik sir by his name and gives a angry stare to nandini and asks

Linda "do you have a appointment with him "

Nandini " I don't need any appointment, just tell him that nandini has come "

Linda is about to speak something else when a loud shout like Nandiniii came in between and before she can see what is happening and nandini can turn someone just pick nandini from back and twirls her. All the employee's got shocked by seeing this while nandini just laughed and say

Nadini "cabir put me down " between her laughs

The moment nandini stand on her she gets crushed between two bodies. One is hugging her or chocking her from front and other is from back. Nandini coughs a little and says

Nandini "guys you both want to kill me or what "

By listening this cabir releases her from front and dhruv from back. All others are seeing this scene with their mouths hanging open and eyes wide with shock including aliya and navya. They can't believe their and their bosses hugging a girl in front of their wives whom they have never seen before.

Cabir and dhruv can't believe till now that they their nandu is standing in front of them. They remember when they four are coming outside from manik's cabin after their meetings sometime before which went successful and after the meeting they are discussing about the new deal in manik's cabin and when they come outside they both see nandini standing at reception area first, they cannot believe that nandini is standing there but after she tells the receptionist her name. They both ran towards her screaming her name and takes her in a hug.

Nandini smiles at both of them and then cabir speaks

Cabir " oh my goddd ! Nandini I can't believe you are here, in front of my eyes "

Dhruv " we missed you so much nandu "

Nandini " guy's I missed you too and tell me where is mani "

By listening this both cabir and dhruv smiles faded a little, which nandini notices but before she can asks them. Aliya and navya came forward and nandini looks at them questioningly.
Dhruv and cabir notices this and cabir introduces them

Cabir "nandini she is navya my wife and she is aliya Dhruv's wife"

Listening this Nandini smiled and see towards and is shocked when she sees that they are they are jealous, she understands the reason that seeing their husbands hugging her they are jealous. She again smiled brightly and move towards them andhug both of them tightly. Navya and Aliya became shocked by her behaviour but they understands that she is a nice girl and only a good friend of their husbands then they reciprocate their hug with equal favour. Then cabir introduces nandini to them.

Cabir " and navya and aliya she is nandini singhania which we always talk about, after 6 years she is back. "

Again there is a shout from stairs and all looked upstairs. They see manik coming downstairs with a furious expression all gets scared except one person that is nandini. Manik cannot see nandini because cabir is standing in front of her and then he again shouts

Manik " What the hell is going here, why so much noise is coming from here and cabir why you all are standing here. You all don't have any work. Who is responsible for this commotion?

All employees and navya, Alya also thinks that now nandini is gone. Manik will not leave her except dhruv and cabir they know from today their old will starting to come back. After sometime cabir moves from front of nandini and suddenly manik stop shouting and sees nandini like he is seeing a ghost. Nandini smiles seeing him like this and walks towards him and stand in front of him and say

Nadini " mani"

Listening this came out from his shocked state and immediately take her in a tight hug like if he will let go of her then she will vanish. Dhruv and cabir smiles seeing this and all again get shocked of their life by watching their arrogant and heartless boss hugging a girl like this. Nandini gets to know in that hug that something is wrong. So, she pat his back lovingly like a mother do to his child and didn't move because she feels that manik needed that hug. After sometime manik's break the others and sees her and than he noticed how much beautiful she is looking.

Manik "when did u came India nandu"

Nandini " 1 hour before and I directly came here to meet you all and now I shall leave because it's your working hours and I don't want to distract you all from your work "

Manik frowns listening this and he was about to say something when nandini shows her hand to stop him and continues

Nandini "don't worry I am going to come to manholtra's mansion at evening and then we will discuss everything about what is troubling you since so long that my mani has become like this and I'll meet everyone there only and also I've not met mom and dad they must be waiting for me. Till the time you all complete your pending work. So, at evening we can talk without any tension of work."

Manik get amaze seeing that how much she know him that without speaking to her anything his miseries she gets to know something is wrong with him and he can just nod his head. Seeing this nandini just smile at him and others and left. Manik is just standing their like a statue watching from where she just left and after sometime he smile a genuine smile and moves towards his cabin but before entering his cabin he shouts

Manik " Everyone at their work now "

His employees who is shocked seeing their boss smile for first time they get another shock, but after listening manik shouts they all again started doing their work. Not wanting to didturb the good of their boss which is they are seeing first time and cabir, dhruv smiles and see navya and aliya who are looking confuse them. They signal them that they will tell them all things afterwards.




So, end of part 1. Please tell guy's you liked it or not. Please don't forget to comment and likes the update and don't take tension I'll update one story a day in order wise like tomorrow I'll update "undefined love " Then next day " Supernatural " and last but not the least " Fire meets Fire ". Please comment on all my stories and also don't forget to like. 😃😳

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Sooo cute.
Love Manan hug and their friend's bonding.
Thanks for the update.
😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Nice update
The surprise nandu gav thm.is super
All r happy on her return to India especially manik
Continue sooonnn
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Its really a very nice story update was awesome waiting to know what happen to manik n make manan confess their love n get married then it will be fun to read about their romance their work n update soon
U r an amazing writer dear ur all 3 stories r awesome loved it
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Loved the story!!
Continue soon n pls pm the updates if u can :)
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Posted: 9 years ago
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awesome update...
loved it so much...
nandu's understanding of manik is commendable...
wondering what happened 6 years ago...
can't wait for all of them to have reunion at malhotra mansion...
can't wait to see hat happens next...
keep up the good work and continue soon...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Interesting concpt n amazing start
Lovd it
Continue soon

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