#3 MANAN SS ~ YOU BECOME MY STORY Chap21-140 New thread Hyper link-157 - Page 94

Why do u always have to leave it on a cliffhanger ?? :(

Hi... I'm reading your story since a week and I'm really very very happy after reading it... And you know why because your story strongly represents my life till date... Thanx a ton for such a amazing portrayal of sentiments of two souls. And I do understand the turmoil u must go through when idiots like me don't comment but I promise I'll comments on all ur updates more often

Update sooon ...n plz update I love my best friend also!!

Hey Kavya
I am your new reader
I read it all in a go
Now pls ha don't give sarcastic smile... As how I found it today?? Where were I'd been these days?? And how was the story???
So my answers are... I found in forums 15 page... These days I was hell irritated with my own... Well I say ki you have written my whole story in your story till that Goa trip... But the change is i was the one to taught about life to him and he's the one to listen my lectures or you think crap..and one more change is instead of Goa my place was northern Karnataka... Where I met again... But to my surprise every single thing changed..
I didn't want to hurt him so I plainly rejected his proposal... But he being my rescuer in hard times still there with me everytime when I needed... Story started 14yrs ago but still on going... My stranger became my bestest buddy... But for him I'm his same love for whom he'd fallen long back... But change is neither me nor he ever kissed... But he gave quick pecks on my cheeks in public just to annoy and embarrass me to the core
But he's the mirror reflection of some Bollywood actor's...I think like that coz he doesn't pay any heed to public
Well enough of my personal bakbak
Now coming to the story
I just loved it like anything
I lived my memories once again...thanks to you
I do believed in what all manik said about life and love
But I changed fully and he becomes my reflection full vice versa
Life na it's just unpredictable
I loved the way you explained about live laugh love
I loved every single line of your story
I liked the way how he changed her in just 5days
There convos are teaching new lessons to us
There day out at fare it's just mind blowing... I enjoyed a lot... The food tasting... Robbery... Gol gappa... Bike ride everything
I loved his way of proposals..
I somehow connected to beach conversations of Manan...she kissed him... It's awesome
He left... She's broken but not ready to accept
Life is about being selfish... We can't break down like that only... We've to pretend to be strong not for others but for our own selves
Again comes Goa trip... He once again appeared... But this time she can't hold herself and pour her heart out
Life shows us the value of every single thing
However we reject it but we've to face the reality
Mukku's birthday bash... Her over protective side for her baby doll.. Navniti bond it's just beyond any words
Aryaman is mediator to bring Manan together he's a true friend... Like friend in need is a friend in deed...
He's doing every possible thing to hook them up
Drunk nandu is always treat to witness
Again kiss.. Now definitely she's lady hashmi lol
Wow I liked there convos in fort
He kissed her cheeks... I was like oh how romantic he's... He preferred her cheeks rather than lips... Coz true love is about feeling the moment not to think about lust of having them
Listen... I just clean bowled for your this dialogue.."kissinee kaata kyaa"?
I loved it like anything...he is a true gentlemen
Waiting for her approval... Her confession... Her everything
Their water rides again took me into my memory lane... I again liked his promise of being with her... Through his gestures
Again the day came to goback where they belongs ...she is again confused what to do what not... She walked away after his confession...
She missed him but too adamant to accept it
Their train journey was superb...
Their hide and seek... Chocolate... Song... Smilie in biriyani... Washroom scene its all beyond imagination
Here comes the new hide and seek of time... He finally appeared in front of her... To save her from every obstacle.. Which almighty send to reunite these pure confused souls
She finally in his arms which is her solace forever...where she belongs... But not ready to give her heart win... But playing along with time
Hayee i loved all Guy's for supporting our manik to win back nandu
Navti... Yaar they are indeed lady Rambo's of your story lol
Finally they are together again atleast for sometime... I hope so

PS: now I can't comments more than this... If you want more than send me apple flavor ORS... like your favorite Orange flavor glucose... Mine this one
Chalo enough of my non stop blabbering
Take care stay blessed

nice promo kavya!!! Eagerly waiting 4 the update. Keep writing kavya!!!

nice promo kavya!!!eagerly waiting 4 the update. Keep writing kavya!!!

Originally posted by: Snehasn53

Hey Kavya
I am your new reader
I read it all in a go
Now pls ha don't give sarcastic smile... As how I found it today?? Where were I'd been these days?? And how was the story???
So my answers are... I found in forums 15 page... These days I was hell irritated with my own... Well I say ki you have written my whole story in your story till that Goa trip... But the change is i was the one to taught about life to him and he's the one to listen my lectures or you think crap..and one more change is instead of Goa my place was northern Karnataka... Where I met again... But to my surprise every single thing changed..
I didn't want to hurt him so I plainly rejected his proposal... But he being my rescuer in hard times still there with me everytime when I needed... Story started 14yrs ago but still on going... My stranger became my bestest buddy... But for him I'm his same love for whom he'd fallen long back... But change is neither me nor he ever kissed... But he gave quick pecks on my cheeks in public just to annoy and embarrass me to the core
But he's the mirror reflection of some Bollywood actor's...I think like that coz he doesn't pay any heed to public
Well enough of my personal bakbak
Now coming to the story
I just loved it like anything
I lived my memories once again...thanks to you
I do believed in what all manik said about life and love
But I changed fully and he becomes my reflection full vice versa
Life na it's just unpredictable
I loved the way you explained about live laugh love
I loved every single line of your story
I liked the way how he changed her in just 5days
There convos are teaching new lessons to us
There day out at fare it's just mind blowing... I enjoyed a lot... The food tasting... Robbery... Gol gappa... Bike ride everything
I loved his way of proposals..
I somehow connected to beach conversations of Manan...she kissed him... It's awesome
He left... She's broken but not ready to accept
Life is about being selfish... We can't break down like that only... We've to pretend to be strong not for others but for our own selves
Again comes Goa trip... He once again appeared... But this time she can't hold herself and pour her heart out
Life shows us the value of every single thing
However we reject it but we've to face the reality
Mukku's birthday bash... Her over protective side for her baby doll.. Navniti bond it's just beyond any words
Aryaman is mediator to bring Manan together he's a true friend... Like friend in need is a friend in deed...
He's doing every possible thing to hook them up
Drunk nandu is always treat to witness
Again kiss.. Now definitely she's lady hashmi lol
Wow I liked there convos in fort
He kissed her cheeks... I was like oh how romantic he's... He preferred her cheeks rather than lips... Coz true love is about feeling the moment not to think about lust of having them
Listen... I just clean bowled for your this dialogue.."kissinee kaata kyaa"?
I loved it like anything...he is a true gentlemen
Waiting for her approval... Her confession... Her everything
Their water rides again took me into my memory lane... I again liked his promise of being with her... Through his gestures
Again the day came to goback where they belongs ...she is again confused what to do what not... She walked away after his confession...
She missed him but too adamant to accept it
Their train journey was superb...
Their hide and seek... Chocolate... Song... Smilie in biriyani... Washroom scene its all beyond imagination
Here comes the new hide and seek of time... He finally appeared in front of her... To save her from every obstacle.. Which almighty send to reunite these pure confused souls
She finally in his arms which is her solace forever...where she belongs... But not ready to give her heart win... But playing along with time
Hayee i loved all Guy's for supporting our manik to win back nandu
Navti... Yaar they are indeed lady Rambo's of your story lol
Finally they are together again atleast for sometime... I hope so

PS: now I can't comments more than this... If you want more than send me apple flavor ORS... like your favorite Orange flavor glucose... Mine this one
Chalo enough of my non stop blabbering
Take care stay blessed

Haaaye...I have always loved the comments of the one who are reading it from start..hehe it kind of gave me a idea that the story is going in a flow..Thank you soo much for that than!!^-^
So your story..hmm..actually I agree with you life na it's never same never relevant with anything it changes you..it never remains same *experienced*but than you have to Go with it..but make sure you don't live with life but live life...
And now coming to this story...i'm more than glad you liked it :)
So Thank you for that!! ❤️❤️

PS-Apple Glucose...hmm I'll try that now ;) and address dedo apna...bhejvaa dungi :P

Promo makes me die to read your story..!
Waiting waiting..!

nice promo