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Posted: 9 years ago
Nice update nd thaks fr the pm
So nandini has been saved she was in a state of fear then only she looked at him to get a shock that he was real but nandini doesn't react the way he thought
So cabir nd abhi knew that in goa that manik loves nandini and he wants her back in his life nd helped him that's so sweet
Mukti nd navyas reaction fr manik being thier was gud nd the song manik sang oh God wer do he get that strange songs as nandu says
So the journey is still on
The qoutes u add in middle they r very nice
Continue sooonnn
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Posted: 9 years ago
Sorry yaar dat I never commented b'caus I'm not dat expressive. But it doesn't mean I don't love u r story so plz give updates. Plz...
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Posted: 9 years ago
Awesome update
That was awesome they both slept together and nandini was fully on him
So it was his plan and Abhi and cabir joined in manik's plan
And then mukti and navya got angry when they saw manik
And when manik was singing the song nandini was getting irritated
And then nandini was gonna miss the train but manik gave is hand and nandini hold it
And manik is doing all this to make nandini realize her love
Loved the update
Hope nandini realize her love for manik soon
Update the next part soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
Yaar kavya i am waiting pls pm me 😭
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Posted: 9 years ago
the update was really reallly cutee dear😊😛
manan are ssooo amazing yrr...cabir,abhi, aryaman & even the 2 other matas were awesomee😉😆
and the last part was total ddlj yrrr...kya yaad dila diya😆
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Posted: 9 years ago
😭
mujhe kyon nhi kiya pm
maine lst prt m cmnt kiya tha
huhhh
this is not fair kavya

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Posted: 9 years ago
Super doopppeerrr
Aweeesmeee upddaattteee...

Jst lived it ...

Nandu sleeping over Manik ... Aahhhaaa...!!
Then that train vala scene. ... Fullonnn ddlj ...


Jst loved it .z!! Amazinng ...

Update soon ... And do pm me wen u update ...

Btw thanks a lot fr the pm ..
Jst luv yur writing skills ..!
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: anupandey

😭

mujhe kyon nhi kiya pm
maine lst prt m cmnt kiya tha
huhhh
this is not fair kavya


Your in box is full :(
re fill it!!
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Posted: 9 years ago
Hey I responded to the previous one but didn't get pm.. Please please please pm me chappy 20 I request you... I love the story n the efforts you put in.. Please pm naaa please .. The best part of the previous chapter was the way he pulled her n hiding behind curtains brilliant idea.. Hehe
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Posted: 9 years ago
Awesome update...
It was amazing...I just loved it...
Manan hugging each other and then they slept on same berth...that was so cute...
Manik's plan was so nice...chocolate and smillie wali biryani...too cute...
Nandini is too cute and her self talks...she is so adorable making annoyed pouts...
Update soon...

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