MaNan FF: More than this! PART 5,PG 5, 14/10/15 - Page 3

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Posted: 9 years ago
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This story is amazing! Shit yaar manik had still not cleared out thins and now the outbursts ensue! Please keep on updating! I'll be waiting for this piece of work eagerly!
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Posted: 9 years ago
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interesting.
waiting to see the sparks between manan.

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Part 4

*The Next Afternoon*

Manik woke up feeling severely nauseous. He turned to see a tray placed on his side table which consisted of painkillers, water, soup, a selection of fruits and a pink note. Manik opened the note knowing exactly where it had originated from.

"The perfect hangover relief! P.S Gone to see Chacha and Chachi, Nandini." He reluctantly grinned whilst reading the note. "Nandini Murthy you'll never change." He said, whilst recalling the first pink note she gave him after sleeping underneath his bed.

His smile faded away as his mind revisited yesterday's events...

*Aliya's and Dhruv's apartment*

Aliya had secretly invited Manik into their home in order for the two best friends to reconcile.

"Buddy, just tell me what I can do to make things better." Manik helplessly pleaded.

"Just let me have my own identity, Manik! I am suffocating from your so called 'protection'." Dhruv yelled, releasing his inner frustrations.

"When I kissed Nandini, I never knew you had feelings for her." Manik explained as Dhruv rolled his eyes. "I didn't tell you about it after because I'd rather have my heart broken than yours."

"This is the protection I am talking about. I may not be Manik Malhotra the great rockstar who always gets girls first whether it be Nandini or Aliya. But I'm a big boy who can handle heartbreak !" Dhruv angrily declared.

"You're completely misunderstanding me, buddy!" Manik tried reasoning with Dhruv but he was having none of it.

"No, Manik! You thought that I wouldn't stand a chance with Nandini if you didn't reject her because you think you're better than me."

"No, because I knew she deserved to be with a guy like you, not me!"

"Of course. I bet your ego was satisfied when she said she had no feelings for me."

"Dhruv, if anything I've always felt inferior to you because you're a good person. So if you feel like I want to sabotage your happiness then maybe we should end this friendship." Manik proposed, leaving the fate of Fab 5 in Dhruv's hand...

*Manik's bedroom, (Midnight)*

"Cabir, Manik hasn't come home yet and I'm worried that his gone out drinking again." Nandini expressed her fears to Cabir on the phone.

Last night after their heated argument, Cabir had brought an extremely drunken Manik home. Nandini wasn't prepared to spend another sleepless night googling more 'cures for hangovers' or waste time pondering about Cabir's revelation...

Manik suddenly stormed into the room whilst trying to avoid Nandini's judgemental gaze.

"I'll speak to you later Cabir, Manik has finally decided to appear." Nandini said as she put the phone down feeling secretly relieved that Aiyappa kept her husband safe. "We need to talk."

"But what if I don't want to talk you!" he snapped.

"You have to because I need answers!" Nandini exclaimed. "I want to know about the truth that you've bottled up for 3 years."

"I don't know what the hell you're talking about." Manik denied all knowledge as his heart wasn't prepared to state the truth.

"Manik, whatever happened between us was real wasn't it?" Nandini silently questioned him but he didn't have the power to respond. "You said you were seeking revenge for that punch..but you left me because you knew Dhruv loved me, right?" She was in desperate need of answers.

"Nandini I c-" Nandini interrupted his sentence with a punch. Manik stared at her with pain in his eyes, knowing that he well and truly deserved that punch.

"Manik our story never ended from the punch to the kiss but from the punch to the punch!"...


Edited by abzy. - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#24
awesome update...
loved it so much...
i feels like deja-vu...hope that manan can actually get back together soon...rather than like in the show...
hope that dhruv gets some senes into him...i don't want FAB 5 to break...he needs to get things cleared in his thick head...
can't wait to see what happens next...
keep up the good work and continue soon...
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Posted: 9 years ago
#25
Continue yaar... Waiting for next part
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Posted: 9 years ago
#26
Hai...
Am a new reader...
I like your story and its new...
Please update faster...
Thank you...😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Plzzz plzzz update soon...eagerlyyy waiting for next part ...n Manan scenes...plzzz update next Chap...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Part 5

"Nandini, listen to me!" To stop her from going, he swiftly wrapped his arms around her slender waist and pulled her so that her face was just inches away from his. Nandini instinctively grabbed onto his bulky arms for support.

"No, Manik. Cabir told me everything. You only thought about yourself and how you'd become the 'hero', but where was my choice?" She questioned as a flood of tears trickled down her cheeks.

"What about you Nandini?" He questioned, pulling her closer towards him. "You were the one who believed that I was capable of stooping so low. Did you ever once doubt my intentions?" The pain he kept inside of him for 3 years started to erupt like a volcano. "No, right? because you view me as a monster just like everyone else."

"Congratulations Manik, you've finally acknowledged what you are, A MONSTER!" She claimed whilst angrily pushing his arms off her...

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5 days later, Nandini and Manik were still at silent war with eachother. Manik had practically moved into the guest room whilst Nandini took pride in occupying their master bedroom.

After finishing an exhausting day at work, Nandini came home to see Aliya, Cabir, Mukti and Manik rehearsing.

"Hi guys!" She cheerfully greeted Fab 3 but her 'Hi' didn't extend to Manik of course."Where's Dhruv?"

"Dhruv's not here because of you!" Manik furiously reminded her whilst storming out of her sight. Fab 3 empathised with Nandini, nobody wanted to be placed in Manik's bad book.

"Dhruv is refusing to speak to Manik." Aliya claimed. "Don't blame yourself Nandini, Dhruv has other insecurity issues that's coming in the way between him and Manik."

"We'll handle Dhruv. Meanwhile, you should fix your relationship with Manik." Cupid Cabir suggested.

"Where there is no love, how can a marriage succeed?" Fab 3 burst out laughing to her dramatic question.

"Nandini, you're still so oblivious! When we were dating, Manik never looked at me in the same magical way as he looked at you."

"But Aliya, he treated my life like a toy, when he was done playing with my feelings he tried passing me down to Dhruv."

"And it killed him, Nandini. Trust me, I was there to witness the horrible aftermath of your breakup. But Manik never stopped supporting you." Cabir tried justifying his best friends actions.

"What do you mean?"

"Do you remember the fire that happened in SPACE?"

"Of course, I nearly died remember."

"And you would have if it wasn't for Manik." Mukti abruptly interrupted.

Nandini was deeply confused, having been unconscious throughout the whole event, she didn't exactly remember who rescued her.

"What? I was told that I was rescued by the fire brigade."

"Manik rushed back into the fire as soon as he saw that you were not brought out to safety. He put his own life at risk just to carry you out of the fire."

"But..why would he do such a thing?" Nandini cried as feelings of guilt engulfed her mind.

"Because he loved you damnit...!" Cabir exclaimed...

*Mr Malhotra's office*

"The deal is off. I don't care if you take Island records away from me anymore. Fab 5 and I are talented, we can get signed by other labels." Manik snapped.

"Son, you and I both know that the success of Fab 5 relies on Island records."

"But nothing can be worser than living an everyday nightmare with Nandini Murthy. Dad, she's the root to all my problems!"

"Let me propose another deal to you then. It's a deal that you must keep to yourself." Mr Malhotra tried reasoning with his son. "Successfully complete 3 months of your marriage. Then you will have the option to divorce her whilst still being signed to Island records."

Although it killed him to have to tolerate Nandini for 3 months it was better than a life long commitment.

"Okay, fine." Manik agreed knowing that he was offered with his fathers best version of a deal.

"But you have to demonstrate to me that you can be responsible. This includes fulfilling all the duties of a husband and treating your wife like a Queen."

The deal was sealed and Manik was on a mission to take on the responsibilities of his 'temporary' wife...

Why Manik didn't tell Nandini that he saved her from the fire will be clear in the next part
Edited by abzy. - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#29
Hey...
Update was nice
Finally some truths are revealing
Gosh feel like kill that jerk... Idiot topiwala
Manan's cold war its intolerable
Manik really need some piece of mind... How could he claim nandu as responsible for that jerks absence
Freak.. Both malhotras are so cunning
What they think of themselves... How could they play in nandu's life like that??
Will be waiting eagerly
Continue soon
Take care stay blessed
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Posted: 9 years ago
#30
Oh it was awesome!
Glad i came across this ff.
Update next part soon please. :)

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