MaNan FF: More than this! PART 5,PG 5, 14/10/15 - Page 2

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Part 2
*Flashback to Nandini's wedding*

"The wedding is off!" Madhyam announced.

"Madhyam please don't do this" Nandini pleaded as tears rolled down her cheeks. "I promise that there is nothing going on between me and Manik."

"But at the party last night Manik beautifully described the way you kissed him after some concert." Madhyam sarcastically responded.

"Maddy, I say a lot of nonsense when I'm drunk." Manik intervened, deeply regretting his antics at Maddy's pre-wedding party. He must have told them about their Musicana kiss.

"But drunks also gain the courage to speak the truth."

"Maddy, that happened 3 years ago when we were in college and it didn't even result into a relationship." Nandini tried to explain.

"I wanted to marry you because I thought you were 'pure' but now you're just another s**t." He rudely said, insulting her pride and dignity.

"Which century did you come from? Her past relationships doesn't define her character nor does it concern you." Manik angrily told him. "Hypocrites like you sleep around with so many women and yet expect their wife to be 'untouched'."

"Manik is right." Chachi added. "Nandini beta, let go of Madhyam. You deserve so much better."

"So Manik can have her all to himself, right?" Madhyam laughed.

"You piece of filth!" Manik yelled grabbing his collar. The Malhotra's and Nandini pulled Manik away before his anger escalated.

"I think you and your family better leave now!" Chachi demanded, receiving death glares from each member of Madhyam's family. They left leaving a heartbroken Nandini at the altar...

*End of flashback*

"Nandini, don't stress about the media our team has it sorted." Mrs Malhotra said whilst they were all having dinner. "I want the two of you to focus on moving forward TOGETHER." Manik and Nandini looked at each other awkwardly with no clue as to how they were going to make this relationship work.

"I'm going to rehearsals now" Manik claimed, trying to change the subject.

"Excuse me, you are not going anywhere without Nandini. For the first few days of your marriage, I want you to spend time with each other" Mrs Malhotra ordered. Manik sighed dragging Nandini with him...
Edited by abzy. - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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awesome update...
madhyam is just too selfish...he has the right to do anything he wants but his wife shouldn't have been touched by another guy...thats ridiculous...pure stupidness...
the reason behind manan marriage is revealed...
can't wait to know how manan meet and had a kiss together...
hope they have a bright future together...
keep up the good work and continue soon...
Edited by sharon.babu - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: sharon.babu

awesome update...

madhyam is just too selfish...he has the right to do anything he wants but his wife shouldn't have been touched by another guy...thats ridiculous...pure stupidness...
the reason behind manan marriage is revealed...
can't wait to know how manan meet and had a kiss together...
hope they have a bright future together...
keep up the good work and continue soon...



It was the same Musicana kiss, but the story is set 3 years after it
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Just to clear any confusion everything that happened in the show up unit the Musicana break up scene also happened in this story but 3 years ago. So Nandini doesn't know that Manik had genuine feelings for her..

Part 3
"What are we doing at the shopping mall?" Nandini asked, feeling puzzled but relieved at the same time as their deadly silent car journey was finally over.

"Keep yourself busy here whilst I go to rehearsals."

"But your Mom said we should stick together!"

"Nandu, this is real life not SPACE where you don't have to stick by the rules. Besides I need a break from seeing your face 24/7." He teased.

"I am not dying to spend my time with you either. I don't want drama at home that's all."

"We'll just pretend that we spent the whole day together like any other loving husband and wife." He stated whilst displaying a sarcastic grin on his face. "I'll pick you up in 2 hours, make sure you're here"

Nandini sighed in frustration as she watched Manik speed off "Monster Manik, I'm not going to be the only responsible one in this marriage."

*At Fab 5 rehearsals*

"What's this yaar, we've been friends for so long and you didn't even invite us to your wedding?" Cabir joked, the others except Dhruv were laughing along with him.

"Seriously guys?" Manik questioned once they had calmed down.

"Manik I told you that we can't trust Maddy!" Fab 5 became friends with Maddy through mutual friends, little did they know that he was Nandini's fianc.

"Mukti, I don't think we can trust Manik either" Dhruv added in a very serious tone.

"What are you trying to say buddy?" Manik asked, confused about his sudden change of mood.

"You kissed Nandini during Musicana, the night that I was going to confess my feelings to her." He furiously responded.

3 years later and one of his deepest regrets were still haunting him to this day. The time where he was torn between friendship and his feelings for Nandini.

"That was before you told me you loved her. Once I knew, I swear I ended everything because you mattered more to me Buddy." Manik tried justifying his ' big mistake'.

Dhruv sarcastically clapped. "Wow, Manik you're such a hero! What are you guys doing, come on clap for him! He made such a sacrifice" He ordered the rest of Fab 5 as they tried consoling him.

"Buddy please, I didn't tell you because I didn't want to see you hurt."

"Enough, Manik! You always have to be one step ahead of us in everything we do." Dhruv yelled, Manik nodded in disagreement. "But guess what the world doesn't revolve around Manik Malhotra!"

"Buddy, please just listen to me" Manik desperately pleaded.

"No I can't be around you anymore" Dhruv responded whilst storming out of the room.

"Manik, don't worry. He'll be alright once he cools down" Cabir advised as he tried comforting Manik...

*At Malhotra residence*

"Where the hell were you?" Manik roared in anger. "I searched for you everywhere"

"Well you shouldn't abandon your wife next time, Manik." Mrs Malhotra replied.

"Mom, I did tell him that we should spend time together." Nandini innocently claimed whilst sniggering at Manik.

"Just shut up, Nandini! Mom, she's just trying to make me look like the bad guy." He stated whilst gritting his teeth.

"Manik just get out of here until you've calmed down!" Mrs Malhotra shouted. Nandini waved him a sarcastic goodbye, pushing his buttons even further.

"Gladly!" Manik yelled whilst stomping off to his room.

*Few hours later in Manik's bedroom*

Nandini hesitantly entered the room to see Manik angrily strumming his guitar as he recalled today's events.

"I did warn you not to leave me at the mall alone." She said feeling satisfied after getting her mini revenge on him. Manik continued to strum his guitar even louder. "Manik, are you okay?" She asked, feeling guilty for making him this angry.

"I was absolutely fine until you came into my life." He hissed whilst grabbing onto her arms, shocking Nandini. "You're coming in between my friends and now my family as well."

"Manik, you're hurting me" She cried as she struggled to escape from his tight grasp.

"Good" He yelled, holding her tighter whilst drawing his face closer towards hers. "Now you know, how I'm feeling."

"Please let me go" she begged whilst moaning in pain.

"This marriage is nothing but a sham. So stay the hell away from me Nandini!" He angrily claimed as he finally released Nandini.

"We both had a choice Manik, so whether you like it or not you're going to have to deal with the consequence." Nandini screamed back without knowing the situation Manik was placed in ...

*Flashback to Nandini's wedding*

"The choice is yours Manik. Marry Nandini and make reparations or Fab 5 lose their contract with Island Records." Mr Malhotra presented Manik with a life changing decision.

"Why are you doing this to me?" Manik yelled as his eyes started to fill with tears.

"You'll understand later on in life but this is for your best interest" Mr Malhotra replied. The Malhotra's knew that Nandini had the capability to present sunshine when Manik was faced with storms.

"The last thing I need right now is the stress of marriage, especially to Nandini." He attempted to convince his parents but they refused to listen to him.

"You have one choice Manik, make sure you choose wisely."...

Edited by abzy. - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Wow...this is different, wonder how she will find out the truth about Musicana breakup...and what that will do to them, terrific job!
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Posted: 9 years ago
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awesome update...
loved it so much...
could you please give us a character sketch...
does dhruv still have feelings for nandu...did alya start falling for dhruv...is there any abhi in this story...or soha...
i don't want FAB5 breaking up...
hope they sort out their past soon...
can't wait to see what happens next...
keep up the good work and continue soon...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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ur story is amazing n interesting one request update daily...otherwise if u will update once in month we may loose interest ...update soon n pm me
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: sharon.babu

awesome update...

loved it so much...
could you please give us a character sketch...
does dhruv still have feelings for nandu...did alya start falling for dhruv...is there any abhi in this story...or soha...
i don't want FAB5 breaking up...
hope they sort out their past soon...
can't wait to see what happens next...
keep up the good work and continue soon...


Thank you!

Next part, I will try and explain Dhruv's perspective but no he doesn't have feelings for Nandini anymore. You will have to keep reading to find out where the other characters fit in...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: piyasmanan

ur story is amazing n interesting one request update daily...otherwise if u will update once in month we may loose interest ...update soon n pm me


I had more time this week so that's why I was able to update regularly but hopefully expect to find an update this time next week 😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Amazing concept...
Manan r married nd deep down still they hav feelngs fr each othr..bt cant shw to othrs..
Maddy has such a cheap mentality..he slept wid girls thts fine bt his wife shouldnt be touched by sm1 else... Like seriously...konsi era se he ae...
Here come dhruv..such selfish, selfcenter nd shamless person... Sab kuch janne k baad bhi wo manik ko blame kr rha hai... Usse toh manik ki sacrifice ki koyi pari hi nhi..sirf apni hi pari hai... Wow toh manik ki frndship deserve nhi krta...
Nw come to the main point.. How manan continue their marriage..fell in love...
Waiting eagrly to knw...post asap..nd do pm me pls...

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