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Posted: 9 years ago
Mawara I knew it the waiting will be worth it. It was awesome...I loved it..it was a full package of cute moments, romantic and at some point awesome funny...loved the update..

Nandini's confession and Manik's reaction was superb...Manik's expressions were so so cute..his behavior was just of a child...but finally Nandini cleared the misunderstandings and finally everything became alright...and then the most needed hug...but Manik Nandini ki care karna nahi bhulega...then MaNan awesome emotional magical moments...hehe now Manik himself agrees that he is lallu Manik...wah mere Cabira u r the best..

Hmm...Manik knows that Nandini is angry...and how cutely Nandini complained na that Manik has hurt her...but Manik is always ready to make up to her...I loved Nandini's this innocent line to Manik..."Mery pehly waly Manik ban jayen na please..!"...wow !!!!!! Superb yar Mawara..Nandini is afraid of thunderstorm..but Manik is there to protect her...hehe...I loved it that Nandini didn't let him kiss her..because she was angry..how cute..

Oh toh finally Manik noticed his room's condition...he planned to set Nandini's room...so cute... Nandini ne dream dekha and Manik was there too...she was chasing butterfly...mujhe nawazish ka matlab nahi pata 😔 ..
I enjoyed that scene so much where Manik was instructing Mohan about Nandini..it was the awesome scene..every single girl dream for someone like Manik who will be this much caring for her...hats off Mawara for this part...

Now the most funny part of the update...Nandini saw her room and thought it was a Dream...the funniest line was..."Mohan Dada..! Ap mery dream main kya kar rahy ho?"...I was laughing like crazy after reading it...
MaNan phone conversation was very very cute..I loved it..Nandini's room was actually beautiful..the butterfly, the chocolate box, the hanging jars of golden fish...everything was so dreamy..perfect selection..

Then most awaited MaNan romance...it was lovely..how cutely Manik asked her permission for a kiss...and then MaNan kiss...it was magical..

Nandini found Fab5 poster and asked Manik about it...Manik became angry..it's a new part of ur story and I know u obviously have something in ur mind for it...so I will be eagerly waiting for it and also for the grand proposal as u said..
Thanks for pm
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Posted: 9 years ago
Mindblowing update
Finally manan patch up all
the misunderstandings r clear now b/w
them
Both love each other unconditionally with
Lots of love , tender , n care ..
Manik is such a cute baby when he cries n
Loves her like a mother with all her love
Manik's idea! For nandu's room was brilliant
Nd mohan ki toh adhi raat ko prade ho gai 😊

whole room was decorated with nandu's choice , it was indeed
a beautiful room
nd their full passionate n soulful kiss which was blissfull

Nandu get a clue about his past (fab5) now i think manik
will come out of his shell


Update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
awesome awesome awesome writing as usual. ...
yeee...they are back again with so much love...
cute dress and cutest decor of room of Nandini
what a great lover manik is seriously like best lover...
fab5 dekhna main maza aayega...
so much cute romance...
jaldi update krna plz...
waiting...
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Posted: 9 years ago
Awww angel 😛 ur a gem seruxly ⭐️ really really loved d new twist man 😛 it was notcrap at all bt anazing n wonderful 😃 really loved d way nandu cleared all his misunderstandings n wiped his tears 😊 really nandu cute antics n his laughing 😃 😛 really loved manik gesture of fullfilling all hr dreams 😛 wether its a decor or chocolates or buttetfly 😳 dt was out of d world 😃 😳 n wht i loved d most were hanging gold fishes 😉 really loved his plea for kissing 😃 😳 n dt was cherry on d cake 😳 bt wht is his past? Y he is so dark? Were r other 3 members if d band?? Plzz curiousity level is peaking so update soon will b w8ting for it eagerly 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
hey mao..
amazing update dear..
chalo acha h ki misunderstanding clear ho gayi.. manik bilkul bacha h yaar..
manik aacepted he is lallu.. hehe..
nandini room decor was beautiful esp goldfish decor nd butterfly.. it was so beautiful..
fab 5 new mystery..
loved it..
ab nandu banegi detective nandu..
lokking forward for ur new update..
continue soon..
thanks for pm.
bye.. take care..
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Posted: 9 years ago
Hey
It was just mind-blowing
N don't you dare call this update as "crap" !!!!
U r portraying Nandini very beautifully as naive as well as strong
Manik as strong as well as in a vulnerable state...
That's the beauty of this story
Thanks for the PM
😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
amazing...
beautifully penned...
Manan...
thank you for the wonderful updates...
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Posted: 9 years ago
nice update ... 👏
excited to know who are Jack,Max and Tiger 😲
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Posted: 9 years ago
U r such an amazing writer... I love all ur ff... Whenever I take a break from my studies,I open if n read ur ff.. This update as always was awesome... Waiting for the next update n yes for its love...plw do send me pm if its possible for u,I l b very obliged...
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Posted: 9 years ago
update toh mashaallah boht badhiya tha...i loved it very very very much..
i am toh just love this ss...
ufff kya story hai yar..
pagl bana diya es story ne toh...
aaj tak maine etne comment kisi bhi story pe nhi ki jitne yaha karti hu..
girl u r rockstar man...

this update is chummeshwai update..ummaahhh...
i mean kya story,kya dailogue..wahhh superb...i am became diehard fan...yarrr mai to fan hi ban gai yar tumhari,etna badhiya likhti ho..
ab tell me ke next update kab deri ho...
i knw ye que thoda,i mean boht jaldi puch rahi hu,coz tumne kal hi update diya tha,but es kambakt dil ka kya karu,uff es dil ka kya karu,mai kya karu,mai kya karu...dil hai ke manta nhi..
so plzz next update likhna start kardo n fatafat post kardo...


hey hey mawara,just ignore me girl,i knw ke writting story its not easy job,but ab kya karu wait ni hota,but u take u r time..
i am waiting for u r update...
lots of love
nidhi

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