manan ff a dream couple updated very imp note on pg 33 - Page 15

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chapter=9c

manik pov;--
So after she came I quickly take her in hug and I m not joking as well I really missed her...I missed her even in half an hour ...we remained in same position until my phone buzzed...oh god I iseriously wanna kill that enventer of this pathetic cell phone ..

N;*--mani tumhara phone she instantly said observing my phone...and replied chucking the situation

M;*--i can hear I said this ...and in return she gave me "so what r u waiting for look" which is quite expected

N:*--so uttao na

M:*saying this she freed herself ..but I again pulled her into me...no actually let it be na...plzz stay like this ...but she again glare at me...and I have to pick it up...as I can't make her angry one more tym...becoz it is a fact jab manik gussa ho to usko easily manya ja skta eh pr nandini ko manana is not at all easy...
I picked up the call and as expected it was of cabir
M;*--haan cabir bol

C;*-haan good evening like seriously he called me to say good evening...I m sure someday he will be killed by me only

M:*--tune good eveing bolne k liye call kiya I shouted on the phone and he laughed on other side like I had cracked some joke

C;*-nhi yeh batane k liye phone kiya k in half an hour we r living so get ready after some 5 min laugh he speak up

M;*--we know that


C:*-]i know k u know...but jab tu nandini k sath ho a h tih tym kya khudko bhul jata h...iseliye thought to give u a reminder

M;*--so nice thought bye I kept the phone saying that sacatically

After keeping the phone I looked back at her who was till now watching and enjoying the show

Nandini POV,;*-
He was looking too cute the whole tym I was satring at him ...and first tym I got to know that he was so expressive ...his expression changes every sec ...he could be and super actor ...I was just staring at him ...

N;*--u could be an actor I confessed him and as expected he looked at me confused

M:*--what... come again he asked me as he was totally unaware of my sudden compliment

N:*-no seriously manik u could be an awwsome actor...u havent seen urself ..u r so expressive I again compliment him

M;*--acha...ab u got to know that u bf is so talented ...so u dont u should give him something and he was back to his fav track ...and only that's why I called him one track mind as his mind runs on only one track

N;*--what I asked him innocently but I and he we both know what he meant

M:*--really saying this he pulled me more and without any delay fussed our lips...and I also.responded back equally...he sucked my lower lip and i kissed his upper lips we kissed passionately and with equal desire from both if us we were lost in taasting each other ...when suddenly our door got knocked

Na;*-nandu ..nandu

We don't want to broke our kissed which has just started few mins back...knowing that manik will not stop for sure ...I pushed him a little and break the kiss...and as expected he got irritate

M;*--what the hell navya...

On this I gave him a cheek kiss and went to open the door ...and as fast as I opened the door navya came in

Na:*-nandu tum Hume kapre dene wali thi na

She reminded me and I take her to my bag

N;*-haan navya come I take her to my bag and all the tym manik was glaring angryly to her...but navya doesn't care
so navya ...mere paas teen gawn hai...tumhe jo lena h le lo...see this golden one...this white one ...and this red one. I showed her all three of them one by one...and she thought for a while

Na:*+humm yeh red wala acha h she said after taking the red one in her hand.

M;*+nhi wo tum nhi le skte he said this rudely

N;*--manik ... I shouted a little a him at it was so rude

Na;*-kyun nhi le skte

M;*--becoz it is my fab ...and i had gifted her he said this looking towards me and chuck that with a blush...she also chuck this babyish behavior of Mr. Monster manik malhotra
She the took the white one in her hands

Na;*-hum yeh white wala le lete h

M;*-,no... and he again dejected

N;*--ab kya hua I asked her in irritated tone
M;*--wo u wear it on our first date

Na;*--bas ab yeh toh hum pakka le rhe h she said this and ran away picking up the last one ...before even manik could say something ...after her quick departure I looked at manik in disbelif

Precap;*+clubing

So cute! It's totally awesome!

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so anazing update, loved the way Manik acted for the gowns..it was so much fun..expressions well depicted..

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chapter 10a<font size="2">nandu POV;*-</font>

So after navya went to her room ...running like a marathon ...I closed the door and their was a content smile on my face with a little blush ...it was such an Amazing feeling that ur bf was getting possessive even with ur clothes...I really I have no idea that he love my clothes do much ...I was blushing all the way thinking all this ...when suddenly I realised what he done to navya ...I know it was very sweet of him to care about me and clothes so much ...but...he talk very rudely to her ...which is definitely wrong ...he can't talk to her like that ...she is my bestfrnd after all

N;*--manik that was rude I said this and he just make an expression as if he doesn't care at all...which ireked me even more ... so u turned around to get ready for our clubbing

M;*--accha ...sorry baba...happy now I was searching some thing in my bag whin he suddenly said sorry ...which melts me indeed

N;*--its ok... I said this heading toward him ...then putting my hands around his neck I said this in a teasing way waise mr.malhotra appko nhi lgta aaj kl ...ap kuch jyada hi thank u aur sorry bol rhe ho...good going ...nice. On this he pulled me more by my waist

M;*--really by saying this he started nuzzling his nose in my neck very seductively and I had a very tough tym in controlling ...sec by sec his torture was increasing and it was geeting more and more difficult for me to control


N;*--manik...what ...r ...u ...doing this tym I somehow manage to say this in a trembling voice...as it was really getting hard to control ...I know I have to as we need to go to cubbling as well

M;*--well...baby...i think u r an adult nandu...so i dont think i need to tell u that...what is all this for he said all this very seductively bitting my earlope and I hissed in anticipitation...my breathe r becoming uneven by each passing sec ...

Soon we both get lost in the moment ...cub long...frnds...nothing matters...but soon our trance get broken by manik phone...as it started ringing...we unwillingly get apart seeing the caller I'd ...and manik quickly answered the call ...and I don't even need to tell who's call it was

M;*--haan cabir we r getting ready he soon kept the phone talking to cabir and looked at me ...and I have both the gawn in my hand red one and white one...as I m all prepared to asked him that what should I wear

N:*--which ...one kya pehnu I asked him with all excitement in my eyes

M;*--kuch nhi. I blused instantly on his cheesy comment...on which he quickly changed his expression aree i mean in m se kuch nhi...and why u r blushing...wait a sec ...u think...oh shit again he caught ...I tell u he always does that ...and what wrong with me...I always think like that ...but kya karo ...his expressions r so double meaning ...what can I do

N;*--yeh nhi phen skti matlb I quickly diverted the topic...as I don't want to get more embarresed ...and I also get succeeded also...listening me ...he went to his wardroble a take out a gift ...came back and give that to me...and all the tym I was just smiling yeh I asked him about it and he just showed his eye in a way telling me to open that ...I opened that gift ...and it was a long black colour gawn with slit at side ...it was just beautiful...it so pretty

N;*--tumne yeh kb khrda I asked him as all the tym he was with me so I have no idea as when and where he bought this

M;*--when...u ..were buzy with ur best frnd he said this sarcastically with a smirk ...and ...I chuckle that .and started observing my gawn...so liked it???...he asked after sometym ..and all instantly hugged him tight showing me how much I love it

N;*--i love it manik...its beautiful I said all this after giving him a tight cheek kiss

M;*--i know...and its beauty will be enhanced when u will wear it...so now go and get ready by saying this he pushed me to washroom to change

Manik POV;*-
Well it has been twenty min since she was in washroom ...with all her make up and all . Yes after some tym I pushed her in washroom she asked for all her stuff and I passed it to her ..
I was ready in black suit ... exactly 10 mins before her ...why these girls take so much tym to get ready

M;*--nandu aur kitna tym ???? I asked her again in these these twenty mins Nazi have asked this qusn atleast 10 tyms

N;*--bas do min again do min phicle 20 min ...do min pura nhi hua...well I chuckle that ...and all of sudden her phone started ringing

M;*--nandu phone baj rha h I again shouted and unwilling pick up the phone on getting the same reply do min...seeing the caller I'd I get quite ...I don't know...quite unexpected as it was of arymaan...I answered the call

Ar;*--hey nandini

M;*--nhi manik...woh she is in washroom...u tell me ...i.will convey ur message. I told him that i will pass the message taking the call but he just cut the saying that he will call later ...which is quite weird a bit
Mean while nandini came taking my name ...and I turned around being all stunned...she is looking ethrrnal...completely irresistible...only god know how I will control around everyone

N;*--kaise lag rhe hoon she asked me with her cute smile on her face ...I just love her smile ...its worlds best medicine it van cure any diseases ...specially mine...I reached to her

M;*--hot I said this shamelessly looking in her eyes ...and she was blushing hearing my unexpected compliment...controlling her blush she put her hand around my arm

N;*-chale she said this after holding my arm ...and we both headed towards downstairs
so yay ho gya ...sorry again clubbimg part nhi aaya but kya karo jo decide krti home n likh nhi pati...so aj s no precap ...jo hoga so hoga ...now enjoy and comment ...becoz jitna acga response utni jldi update...and a screat ...drunk manik is on his way .. so comment fast to get new update

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