manan ff a dream couple updated very imp note on pg 33

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Tiara115

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Posted: 9 years ago

#161

Nyc but chotu tha...

Do update soon

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Marvis

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Posted: 9 years ago

#162

awesome..
I found this ff and
I read all the update
ur ff is too good..
I love this
u describe and show manik and nadu realtion beautifully. .
plz continue ...

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juhi singh

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Posted: 9 years ago

#163

so so sorry guys for last update it was total crap ...my net is not working properly these days god knows why ...but i will try to update ...and a request to all of u ...plzzz do not read the update untill i pm u all ...its a request and for that i will pm my buddy list so who ever is not in my list do buddy me for pm...thank u love u ...juhi

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juhi singh

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Posted: 9 years ago

#164

chapter 10 c;*-

nandini pov;*-

we all came to club ...and settled ourself on couch which is luckily at the corner of club ... actually i was a little uncomfortable as i dont like loud music but soon i felt normal as being assured by love. ...we sat on couch and orderd our drinks ...he orderd on my behalf also...and that tym i realise he know me so well ...and when i m bzy admiring my lovly bf he started fighting with navya he and navya really behave as kids sometym ...i cant belive actually my best frnd and my bf r tom and jerry...soon our drinks come and we all started having it and engrosed ourself in talks ...aftr a while mukti suggested us to play truth and dare and we all agree aa it was a good idea for sure ...cabir spin the bottle and it landed on alya

manik;*- so alya truth or dare

manik asked her truth and dare and take a very little tym she choise truth

alya;*-truth

manik pov;*- alya choised truth and every one and i was just going to ask her when suddenly mukti asked her something which really shocked alya me dhruv as well nandini ...like seriously what disgusting quedtion is this

mukti;*-so...alya tell us who is good kisser manik or dhruv

serioulsy man what kind of qusn is that ...like more than alya i was feeling embarased listening this qusn i palmed my face ...and all i could hear cabir alya and muktis arrgument at the qusn ...and trust me i m not at all intrested in this nonsence ...i just want to go far far away from my these frnd cum enemy frnds

alya;*-no ...i m not answering what kind of qusn is this

mu;*-wo jo v ho ...u choise truth na ...so answer dena parega

cabir;*-aur wise v alya who is best kisser batana h ...who is good in bed nhi batana ...so relax

cabir said all this winking at me ...he was actually enjoying my situation what kind of frnd he is ...anyway after geeting no escape alya take a deep breath to answer that pathetic nonsense qusn ...all during this tym i was observing nandini...and to my surprize she was normal ... really i cant figure out how she can be normal ..

alya ;*-dhruv

well thank god she didnt take my name ...no one wants to be tagged as not good kisser...but i was happy at that tym as i want only nandu to give me that tag ...I was relaxed ...but to our dismay their is one person who is not satisfied ...and she is no one other than my baby

nandini;*-no...manik is best kisser

suddenly nandini shouted and everyone looks at her shockingly ...I clutched her hand to make her realise what she had done and ...she realised also...and as soon as she got to know of her deed she hide her face in my neck shyingly...but that was too late

cabir ;*-its ok nandini we all know manik is good kisser...chilane ki zaroorat nhi h

cabir said this teasing her ...and i again glare him to make him shut ...and the again game started ...this tym alya spin the bottle and it stopped on the person that I want ...my sweet ...no...not so sweet rival navya ...and to this I smile evily showing her glares ...

manik;*+so miss madhubala truth or dare

i speak looking at her ...and she glared back ...I was like wat the hell she is really not scared of me...hey god I should do something lgta h mere power down ho gai h ...like no one is scared of me

navya ;*-hum tum se darte nhi h ...toh dare

wat the hell she told she is not scared of me like seriously ...ok fyn ...just wait mudhubala ...now i will shw should scared of me

manik;*+really

navya;*-haan
i asked her and to my surprize she retoted back and that to much confident ...yeh ho kya rha h yr ...seeing this everyone else supress their giggle and i started thinking of dare that she should perform...like solid dare ...she should remember this her lyf tym

manik;*-ok fyn...wo bar counter pe jao aur ek drink leke aao

navya,;-*bas itna hi ...yeh toh yun kr lenge

i said this and everyone else look at me in complete shock and that how i can i be so simple...and navya is toh so happy ...and wont she ...she thought that now she will get away easily ...but no not at all ...manik malhotra can never be simple

cabir;*+manik yeh kya yr ...yeh kaisa dare h

mukti ;*-haan yr what is this manik

cabir and mukti shouted at me for spoiling the dare ...and i calm them down showing my eyes

navya;*+thik h hum jate h

she get up excitedly to complete her so simple dare ...and listening she got shocked ...and cabir and mukti look at me in excitement ...and alya dhruv nandini has confused expression

manik;*-in tapori language

she slowly slowly moved to bar counter and we all r watiching her in excitement

manik;*-buddy vedio shot kr

i orderd dhruv and he started making the vedio ...we all looking at her and trust me it was so much fun ...finally she reached their and the drama starts

bar tendr;*-yes mam...tell me what do u want?

navya;*-wo mai...wo

she again looked back at us hoping that we will stop her...but no way ...we gave her our ,* u have to do it* look and she turned back angrily

abe ghunchu ...mam hogi teri ma

bar tendr;*-mam ap ye ???

navya;*-yeh kya mam mam ...lga rhkha h...sune be tubelight ...ek aur tune mereko nam bola...toh tu zindgi m bol na payega...ab chal mereko ek orange juice leke us ...us konech wali table p LA. ..samjh gya

bar tender;*-ok mam

navya;*-humm thik h...chal jldi krna

oh my god ...we all brust out in laugh...that was epic like ...epic...navya soon came and after a good laugh we resume the game ...and...this tym it stopped on nandu

cabir ;*-aahaa nandini .

nandini pov;*-

it stopped at me and i got very nervous ...and moreover cabir looking at me mischievely...soon without waiting mukti asked me truth or dare ...and i started thinking over it ...if i will chose dare they will give tough dare ...and if i will chose truth ...they will surely ask persnal qusn...and i afraid to choice both ...but i have to chose one

mukti;*-,so nandini truth or dare

i chose dare ...though i dont want to...and look at manik nervously and he cluth my hand to relax me...soon mukti told the dare ...which shocked all of us

Precap ;*keep guessing

Sorry guys for being late and enjoy the update...and do comment plzz

Edited by juhiloveparth - 9 years ago