New Manik Nandini [MaNan SS ] -* Open the umbrella of love *

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Nandini smiled as the first ray of sun kissed her cheeks and thought how beautiful the morning was until she felt arms around her waist . Her sleepy eyes started to widen and with a great effort she turned back looking at her worst nightmare .

An unknown boy was sleeping beside her on her bed , hugging her close . She did not how to react it just came out of no where .

Next thing she knew was that she was screaming and the unknown man was closing his ears cursing her for doing so.

What happens when you make love with someone whom you don't love ? Umm correction , with someone unknown to you , whom you do not know . You never wanna see that person again but nope fate decides to bring that person again into your life ... So what's next ?

An awkward love filled comedic journey of two lovers who never fell in love yet loved each other . For them love was impossible yet became possible.


*Scroll down for first part *

Hey guys so yes this is my new SS and this one is with a unique concept . Hope u all like it and do comment back your opinions . If interested to read more of my stories on MaNan or other couples do vistsi my index ( Scribbled Pieces ) and for pm of this story please buddy this account , (Dabangg_Sam ) or leave back a comment asking for pm I will buddy you and send you pm .

Love
Sam


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Posted: 9 years ago
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Index
Part one - Scroll down

Edited by Texie-Shady - 9 years ago
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Part one

*Manik's Dialogues in italic and non bold Nandini 's dialogue in bold and non italics "

Nandini smiled as the first ray of sun kissed her cheeks and thought how beautiful the morning was until she felt arms around her waist . Her sleepy eyes started to widen and with a great effort she turned back looking at her worst nightmare .

An unknown boy was sleeping beside her on her bed , hugging her close . She did not how to react it just came out of no where .

Next thing she knew was that she was screaming and the unknown man was closing his ears cursing her for doing so.


...

After sometime she realised where she was and she looked at the man who was looking at her like as if she was insane . His one hands were still in his ears and...

Oh god she never noticed , he was just shirtless , she then peeped inside the blanket she was holding close to her chest and the scene she saw just made her heart pop out .

She was sane of clothes .

Again she could hear her voice rising up and echoing in the room .

"W*F ! Why the heck are you screaming ? "

"What are you doing beside me ? Why are you in my bed ? "

"Correction miss . I m not the one in your bed . You are the one in my bed . I guess I do not have to explain why ! "

"Oh god ! Don't tell me you and I ..."

"Yup you and I "

"Oh god ! Did we just had ... ?"

"Yup we had that what you are thinking now and I just don get why are you over reacting , your acting as though I harassed you . Whatever happened between us you too were involved equally . "

"Aiyapa This all ! My head pains like hell"

"That's what happens when you drink so much that you can not control . "

"Just stop giving me lectures and tell me where my clothes are "

"On my head . Look , you may find it ! "

Manik just could not believe, this little creature who willing came to him yesterday night at bar and submitted her now was eating his brains . W*F was wrong with her .

He looked at her who was keeping her hand on her head and so close to tears .

"Oh no no . Don't cry ! Wait I will search for your clothes "

He quickly got off his bed and looked around . Suddenly his leg felt something silky . He looked down and there it was .

"Here ! Take them "

He handed them to her .

"Now will you keep standing here like idiot . Get out so that I can change "

"God you are this little creature bossing me around . Can't believe it "

...

Nandini came out wearing her black dress . Manik who was just going through the magazine with his coffee stared at her for sometime .

Nandini looked at him , who was busy catching an eye on her and probably noticing her curves and figure .

"Ahem would you please stop looking at me and please will you tell me what place is this so that I can hire a cab home . "

"Umm you wanna hire a cab in this situation . I mean to say your dress . I guess it does not fit to move around in the city so early in the morning . I can drop you home if you don't mind . "

"Okay "

Saying that Nandini pulled her dress down trying to hide her legs .

"Don't . I have seen it all "

That line left Nandini red and she realised that she was not with just some stranger , she was with some stranger who had seen through her .

"Monster "

...

It did not take long for Nanidni to reach her home but then it seemed like ages to her .

Every time she looked at him her heart beat fast and she just looked away .

Don't worry her heart assured . This is the last time she would see him .

She quickly got off the car after he parked in her lane .

"Don't ever come back here or try to find me . I hope never to meet you again"

"Oh dear miss do you think I have no work than to stalk you ? I have no interest to see you and We will never meet again ."

Saying this he put on his shades and drove away .

Nandini looked at his car disappearing down the road for sometime and she turned away .

"Rich spoilt jerk . Hope never to meet him again "

But fate had decided something else . It had already written the story now it would play the action button .

----TBC---

Hope u all like it do comment back your opinions . Feel free to criticise or give back suggestions.


Love
Sam

Edited by Texie-Shady - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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👏 Yay finally!!!
naya updt 😃
dat in manan hehe
n first meet dat hehe
consummation without n how will they fall in love??
interesting n rich spoilt brat is d exact descprition of manik nandu gud analysis!!
hehe now updt dont leave it lyke others!! promise hai
lov u Aresha😃
Edited by Aresha_uchiha - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Thanks for PM,Dear.😊
It was So Interesting SS.😊
This Part was so Nicely explained.😊
Please continue soon.😊
__________________________________
(MISSING KSG and KABHI So Much)
PriyaCherry.
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Originally posted by: Aresha_uchiha

👏 Yay finally!!!

naya updt 😃
dat in manan hehe
n first meet dat hehe
consummation without n how will they fall in love??
interesting n rich spoilt brat is d exact descprition of manik nandu gud analysis!!
hehe now updt dont leave it lyke others!! promise hai
lov u Aresha😃

haha Manan Ma . I was literally deciding to keep the name as Abhi and Shayana 😆.
@ bold , as if you don know how they fall for each other 🤔
Haha !
I don know let's see . You know my situation ni 😆
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Interesting... Sly smile

Thanks so much for the pm

Update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Congratulations for the new ff... Very interesting
Plot is diff and I totally loved it
Do let me know when u update next ( sorry u universal prob at my end ... Can't pm ... It always bounces back )
Cheers
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Posted: 9 years ago
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awesome start...
manan had an one night stand...unexpected...but amazing...
keep up the good work and continue soon...
can't wait to see how they meet again...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Intersting continue soon
Tnx for pm 👏

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