MaNan TS : The First Meet With Her; With Love (Part 2 - PG 21) - Page 20

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Posted: 9 years ago
this ws jz a awesome TS setting an example of true n pure love...
dey way u penned it down was marvellous n d lucknowi lang vch u used ws perfect...
a blissfull stry of MaNan n dr never ending pure love...
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Posted: 9 years ago
wow .

ur a amazing writer ..
every moment of thm u Penned it so beautiful ..

manan meet n thr respect towards each other was adorable ..

love it ..
I must say it is the second best os sweet cute loving so pure..
best end
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Posted: 9 years ago
Wow! Wow! And wow!
I really really am in love with this one just as I am in love with the other one!
The way you described Nandini, was so appropriate and real I felt as though I could picture her standing right there and dancing while manik as usual staring at her with his desired filled eyes, reaping the benefits of his unselfish love
I just want another chapter, a chapter after they claim each other, to know about their life there after and their happily ever after. I know you can't continue it as a SS but another shot will fulfil the gap. Please please just another shot!
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Posted: 9 years ago
Amazing n awesome out of the world
Loved it to such an extend
Ur god gifted sachi
Every word u write adds meaning even to a simple phrase
Just love ur writing
N this update was beyond perfect
In love with every bit of it
Thank u for such a Lovly story

It was a Bliss reading it

Keep writing
N stay blessed
😊😊

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Posted: 9 years ago
Just loved the update!!! Wonderful...you never seem to amaze me with your writing! Loved how manik respected her and waited for her for SEVEN months...that shows that truly theyre joined by hearts!
Nandini's surprise was beautiful!
Thanks for the PM...
Lots of love
Arunima
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Posted: 9 years ago
JaAnEmAaN,

AAJ PHIRSE HUME APNE lafz hin kar dia
lafzo mein baya karna mushkil ho raha hai

vese apke yeh kuch panktia hai jisne
dil chu liya hai..


baki k jijbaad hamare kal baya karenge..kyun shbd kam paar rahe hai,,

hamari jijbaad baya karne k liye..😊

Bas itna jan lijiye aap k
inhi
aafayon a toh jaan le liya hai..

👏👏👏"Kya main tumhe hug karsakta hoon?"😊

agar kisi ne iss tarah apni khwaish apne aasiq k samne takhe
toh aur kya chahiye..

"Tumse aaj tak bohot kuch suna hai; sivaye tumhari aawaz ke. Kuch kahogi nahi?"👏👏👏

Humein laga tha ke humne aapke saarey aansuoun ki wajah mita di hai. Per yeh?😊
Edited by SIAZAHEED.1 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
so its the end
loved it
kuch chize syd km mille tbhi acche lgte h
2 updates
stry end
but still
became my fav
its something yrr
something pure
something magical
a bless
i really cant tell u hw much i loved it
im speechless really
i wana right a big cmnt
but pta nhi kyon wrds h nhi mill rhe h
just thnk u for writting this
nd time time p shot stories likhte rhna
love u
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Posted: 9 years ago
I love u
No I mean I seriously do
I LOVE U for giving us the pleasure to read something beyond beauty like this.
I LOVE U for making us a part of this epic work of urs
Though as a reader
I LOVE U for making us believe in the purity of manan in such a way

U have actually made me speechless
Because ur praise can never be counted in words
Coz its beyond that

In the story manik asks her 'can I hug u'
Now I wanna ask u
CAN I HUG U PLS🤗

All the tym I read ur work it makes me dumbfounded
U made me travel into the different aura of manan
I can't thank u enough for this

Keep writing dear... always

God bless uhh😳


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Posted: 9 years ago
WOW SERIOUSLY IT'S INDEED AWESOME MESMERIZING PART EVER I READ SOO DIFFERENT STORY BUT UH WRITE IT SOO BEAUTIFULLY That ANYONE CAN FELL IN Love WITH THIS STORY I SALUTE UH..
TC STAY BLESSED
Keep Smiling 😉 😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
I am an admirer of your writings. You pen down your thoughts so beautifully. There is so much love n positivity in your work. I actually travel in Manan land while reading your stories. Please keep writing we will keep appreciating your work .stay blessed

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