MaNan TS : The First Meet With Her; With Love (Part 2 - PG 21) - Page 14

Update soon

wow u always surprise me with ur writngs

plz update d second part soon plz

JUUHIII!!!!!! YAAR!!!! WHY AREN'T YOU UPDATING!!!! I AM REALLY ANNOYED YAAR!!!!! PLEASE SHONA PLEASE UPDATE!!!!!!!! I BEG YAAR!!!!! LOVE YOU SO MUCH!!!!!!!!!! PLEASE JAAN PLEASE SHONA!!!!! PLEASE!!!!!

Super awesome story..I'm already a fan of your ff and now this story is damn awesome I wanted to comment after reading it a few more times bcoz it's so beautifully penned that I feel my simple comment would not do justice..You are a talented and wonderful writer and u take us readers on a wonderful ride make us feel a rainbow of emotions and leave us craving for more such is the beauty of your writing..simply wow..I understand it's your story and you planned it as two shots but is there any chance you can make it a four shot..usually I love short stories but first time I want the story to extend a couple of more chapters and now you understand how much I love this story but it's just a request even if you end it as a two shot it's okay but please give an epilogue..and by now you understand how eagerly I'm waiting for the next chapter..please continue soon..pretty please and keep writing such amazing stories you are among my favorite writers..loads of luv keep writing and keep smiling :)

Khoobsurat! You left me speechless and that was the only word which came out from my mouth after reading this I know you may be wishing for my long comment par kya karu you yourself had done the job to make me seal my mouth lol so agar next time mere paas alfaaz nahi bhi rahe toh mai try karungi but this was peace. ..

I love ur story its awesome yr when u update I eagerly waiting for ur story update na pls

update next part soon ...

plzzz
waiting ...

hi
this was one off the best post i read here.
keep up the good work.
please continue soon..
best wishes for future..

It's really beautiful
Waiting for the next update