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Posted: 9 years ago
#71
Hahahaha 🤣
Awesome update maza aa gya
I wish i could hv seen it in real.
Jst luvd it

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Posted: 9 years ago
#72
Hey dear kya ham aapko chinnu bulaa sakte hai... Apart from neeju, kyunki it always remember me of someone and will bring tears

I am so impressed by your this story it has every essence of relationship...
Especially the bond between bro-sis
I never imagined about ManYa's bond, but you penned it very well
Manik and cabir is such a caring and loving brothers its really something which cannot expressed
I loved this update...
Hahaha nandu prank on poor iyer... Bichaare bhaag gayee
I think new entry is ranbir malhotra.. Am I right??
Continue soonish
Take care stay blessed
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Posted: 9 years ago
#73
awesome update...
loved it...
i think nandu was just acting to be possessed to scare rahul away from getting married to her...
maybe nandu's past lover could be aryaman or mady...
can't wait to find out...keep up the good work and continue soon...
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Posted: 9 years ago
#74

Originally posted by: angel2015

sorry for updating heading..so late..


yaar fr gods sake dnt say sry na...
i do completly understand...
dnt make me feel more guilty by saying sry..
i no u r nt well...
it completly ok..
tak care..
get well soon.. :)
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Posted: 9 years ago
#75

Originally posted by: Snehasn53

Hey dear kya ham aapko chinnu bulaa sakte hai... Apart from neeju, kyunki it always remember me of someone and will bring tears

I am so impressed by your this story it has every essence of relationship...
Especially the bond between bro-sis
I never imagined about ManYa's bond, but you penned it very well
Manik and cabir is such a caring and loving brothers its really something which cannot expressed
I loved this update...
Hahaha nandu prank on poor iyer... Bichaare bhaag gayee
I think new entry is ranbir malhotra.. Am I right??
Continue soonish
Take care stay blessed


sure u can call me chinnu.. actually its a name given by a very spl person to me.. my brother..nly he calls me vit dat name till nw.. :)
nd cuming to da bro-sis bond.. its quite similar to wht i nd my bhai share.. dats da reason i hve two pairs of cute bro-sis in my story..
nd cuming to ur guess its nt ranbirs entry.. 😉
usmai abhi time hai..😆😉

till den keep smiling
tak care...
thnks fr da rply...
loads of luv
urs chinnu 😉😃😛
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Posted: 9 years ago
#76
Read last two parts now
It was awesome loved it
And I think this nandu lover and all was Cabot and nandu plan right
Please om me next time
Love you
Ekta
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Posted: 9 years ago
#77
Hello ppl... im back with chap4.. I just wanted to tell u something very important.. first u read the update aur ha.. neechae ka note padhna math bhulna..

Happy reading..

chapter 4 :


A HOTEL IN DELHI :


the bro sis trio were sitting around a table in a lavish 5 star hotel nd chitchatting something nd everythng...disturbing their sweet nothings conversation a waiter came to tak the order frm them

"sir... order plz.."said the person..


"marae liyae aalu paratha nd chineese veg manchuria..." said Navya clapping her hands exicitedly closing the menu card in front of her


Mukthi nd Manik exchanged looks nd da waiter looked at her as if she asked him to serve an octopus for her...

" kya... aaisae akhen phad phad kae kya dekh rahae ho...kyu yahan aalu paratha aur veg manchuria nahi miltha kya..?? "she spoke a bit louder this time...


" of course mam..miltha hai na... aur kuch..?" asked da waiter...


"hmm... nahi abhi kae liyae itna kafi hai...baaki ka baadmae dekhangae..."


"ummm...mujhae mexican veg noodles khana hai.."said mukthi


" ill have a hydrebadi biryani.."said manik ... and gestured the waiter to leave nd get wht they had ordered.


" so ab batao wht... is the thing u want to tell me nd nt able to speak it out.." asked manik watching Navya nd Mukthi's silent eye talks...


"aa...ab vo...vo kya hai na... vo bhai baat yae hai na ki..." started Navya looking at Mukthi who was busy tearing the tissue in her hand into pieces... sensing that sumthng was seriously important nd they are nt able to speak it out...Manik said...


" navya... u no na..u can talk to me anything nd everythng... common baat kya hai seedhae seedhae batao mujhae..."asked Manik sounding a bit serious this time...


"vo Manik bhai...baat yae hai ki... i like someone..i mean ki..." started Mukthi..


Manik raised his eyebrows signalling her to continue... she started looking around everywhere except Manik...


" aur vo usae bohat pasand karti hai...vo bhi iss sae bahut pasand kartha hai..i mean she likes him a lot..but is confused nd worried...what if..." taking the lead Navya explained him


"sirf like yaa...???" streched Manik...looking at Mukthi who was a bit blushing by now


"aa...vo... boltae hai na special friend..a kind of best friend..but not best friend nd more than a best friend...aaisa hi kuch..." said Navya...covering up for her bestie


"naam kya hai uska..?" came Manik's stern question scaring the hell out of the girls as they knew wht will be the consequences...


and from somewhere came a person nd placed hand on Mukthi's shoulder from back.. scaring da already scared Mukthi more...


"hey...tum log yahan..?" asked the person...


"tum...!!!!! tum yahan...!!!!!! " exclaimed the girls who turned back to look at the person..nd after seeing who it was jumped out of their chairs


"haan kyu...tum logon nae pura hotel reserve kar liya hai kya... yaar yae kaisa saval hai.. koi hotel kyun aata hai bhala... khana khanae kae liyae aur kyun..." spoke the person luking at the girls who had a faint smile on their pale faces...


"haan haan...tum aa saktae ho..kyu nahi..." said Navya to the person


(Navya's POV :

lekin aaj hi kyun...hey Mata rani...iss ghadae ko bhi aaj hi aana tha yahan... agar bhai ko iss kae barae mae pata chal gaya tho isi hotel mai iska tandoori bana kae sarae guests ko khila dengae...)


"guys whts happening...kya batae chal rahi hai...u ppl can tak by sitting also na.."said Manik


( NAVYA'S POV :

ab tho pakka gayae...manae bola tha Mukthi ko ki bhai kae vapas aanae kae baad batayangae lekin issko badi jaldi thi...apnae pyaar kae barae mai bhai ko batae nae ki... ab sab kuch sirf Mata Rani kae haath mai hai...bichari Mukthi pehalae sae hi itni tensed thi bhai kae reaction ko laekar...ab kya karae...soch Navya soch...ab tujhae hi kuch karna padaega)


her chain of thoughts were broken by Mukthi who held her hand fr support nd both sat on chair beside each other...in front of them Manik nd the other person were sitting...


"so whats ur name..?" asked Manik... nd before the girls could interrupt



"hi... im ABHIMANYU...ABHIMANYU THAKKAR" said Abhi extending his hand for a handshake...


Navya nd Mukthi exchanged looks...nt knowing wht was cuming fr them in the very near future...


"so u ppl study in same collage right..?" asked Manik... both the girls smiled nd

Abhi replied "yeah...v r from the same class..nd belong to da same gang...right girls..??"


not knowing what to rply..they again smiled faintly... nd what they heard next popped their eyes out of their sockets..nd their mouths shaped a perfect O...nd Abhi chocked and spit out the water he was drinking


"so...u both..Abhi nd Mukthi love each other...am i right or i am right..?" asked Manik with a mischievous smirk on his face

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so ppl hwz da update...maza aaya..?? nahi expect kiya na Abhi kae barae mae..hehe..i guess yes... ok now let me think abt da question in ur mind...

hw does manik know about Abhi right... stay tuned to know the reason...nd wht abt nandu.. remember she fainted right..?? ;)... catch u soon in the next update... let me know ur feelings regarding this chapter


NOTE : u may b thinking ki why don't I update regularly.. the very main reason is.. I hve told u earlier na ki im a CA student .. yaad hai..? so my exams are cuming.. they will start from Nov2 nd will end by Nov15th... frnds plz try to understand its not easy for me to manage and update regularly.. ill definitely but after my exams .. till then I can update only twice a week.. plz try and understand my condition.. ill update one chapter in the mid of a week and one at the weekend..is that ok with u ppl.. plz do let me know..or u want the updates only in the weekend..

Chalo I hve spoken a lot...

Ab aap hi batayae..mai kya karu...

Nd to forgive me in advance for not updating regularly..

Sorry .. kaan pakad kae sorry...

Aapki raai batana mat bhuliyae ga..

CHAPTER 5... pg : 12

C u in the weekend with the next update..

till then keep smiling...luv u...c u soon...take care..

ba byeee...

lots of love

Neeraja...

Edited by neeju_chinnu - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#78
Sorry for updating heading so late..
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Posted: 9 years ago
#79
Awesome update
Mukti abhi ko lyk krti hai...
Pr manik ko kese pta chl gea...w8ng for nxt update
Lovd it
Continue soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Chapter 5 :


" nandu...nandu...kya hua...uth na beta..." said a worried chachi keeping Nandus head in her lap nd sprinkling water on her face nd patting her cheeks lightly to wake her up...

"nandu... u r scaring us...plz wake up...dekho wht i bought for u... ur favourite chocolates..wake up baby doll..." said Cabir vith almost tears welling up in his eyes seeing his darling sister lying lke dat without any movement...


"santoshi i think hamae doctor ko bulana chahiyae.." spoke chacha equally worried...


nd slowly veryyy slowly she opened her eyes...trying to figure out where she was nd tried to realise that she was in her own room in her chachi's lap...in a merely audible tone she spoke


"kya hua ?"...


"beta u suddenly fainted nd vo Rahul neechae bhaaga aaya...tab humae pata chala kae u suddenly fainted..batao beta kya hua...y u fainted out for no reason...hua kya tha...?" chachi spoke


"pata nahi chachi mai Rahul sae baat karnae hi vali thi tab suddenly sab kuch black hogaya aur phir kya hua mujhae kuch nahi pata.." she exclaimed tooo very innocently...


"shukr hai Aaiyappa ka ki sab kuch theek hai... u tak rest... aur agar kuch chaiyae ho to mujhae bulana... dnt hesitate ok..." saying this chacha chachi left da room leaving the bro-sis duo alone for some time... as soon as chacha nd chachi moved out Nandu sat back taking the help of the headboard


nd Cabir silently stood up moved upto the door closed it nd locked the door nd came back to Nandu...

da moment he sat beside her...they both burst out laughing ... holding their stomach shedding tears of joy for laughing soo much... both hi-fi-ying each other in between nd again laughing like maniacs... cabir rolled out of bed nd fell on the floor but still didnt stop laughing stopped for a moment to take breath nd again looking at each other started laughing ...




after a few good minutes of laughing their heart out both started panting heavily for air...

as their breath had stuck as a result of sooo much of laughing...

after composing themselves Cabir spoke

" Nandu must say...u were an amazing actor... becharae Rahul ka chaera dekhnae layak tha... u missed it yaar..mujhsae tho ruka hi nahi jaa raha tha... bahut control kiya mainae apnae aap ko..."


" aur nahi tho kya...Nandini murthy sae panga laena...is nt gud for ones health.. i guess ab thk usnae apnae return tickets bhi book karva liyae hongae.." she said nd winked .. nd both again burst out laughing


" chal bahut drama hogaya aaj...u must b tired... take rest... kal subah baat kartae hain..." Cabir said nd stood up to leave ... nd she held his hand nd " thank u bhai.. for supporting me nd respecting my decision... thnks alot...it really means alot to me..."




"nandu... i trust u ...dats da reason y i supported u...nd kya yaar itni formal hogayae hai tu... senti baatae karnae lagi hai...chal chuck it...ab mujhae lagta hai tujhae chain ki neend milaegi us becharae ki to pata nahi...shayad soyaega bhi nahi...'' cabir said laughingly..

" good nite "

saying this he pecked her forehead nd walked out of the room.. she too replied

" good night"

She sat on the bed... thanking her Aaiyappa for gifting her with such a beautiful family... she slowly walked out into her balcony...sat in the swing there nd started gazing the stars... nd unknowingly she drifted into deep sleep...


so frnds i hve decided dat ill give u updates in weekend itself...
hmmm... itna hi ho paya hai aaj...
India ka match tha aaj aur kal mera xsm hai..
so thats all fr nw...
c u on friday vit chap 6...

cuming to da update :
So koi bhoot vooth naki tha... Bro- sis ka plan on tha... ;)

No worries no past nothing... do comment nd let me know ur views... chappals tomatoes nd eggs are happily welcomed...

CHAPTER 6: pg -14
Keep smiling.. take care..

Neeraja

Edited by neeju_chinnu - 9 years ago

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