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Posted: 9 years ago
Gud nah it was awesome
Loved Nandu and manik teasing
Helpless bros were a delight to watch
Wonderful update
Thanks for the pm!!
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Posted: 9 years ago
Yaar it's too awesome
Bht mast
Wnt Manan movements
Yeh secret jaldi reveal karo n plz
Update soon.
Jaldi bht jaldi plz
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Posted: 9 years ago
Awesome update
loved it
continue soon
thanks for pm
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Posted: 9 years ago
Nw dats a freaking awesome n hilarious update ..
U knw I've nvr read such situations in other ffs..
This ws damn unique..
Lolz.. throughout d chap I ws laughing lyk mad
Loved it..
Waiting fr nxt
Ty fr pm..
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Posted: 9 years ago
Wowww superb
Mindblowing
Fabulous update
Awesome Amazing nandu teasing session...poor manbir aur apni behno konbigado apne laad pyar se...manik ki kya haalat ho gyi thi hahahahaha...thnks for pm me...enjoyed a lot...lovd it...continue soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
awesome update please do pm me too
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Posted: 9 years ago
Sorry late reply kia.. kall rat se net Kami nahi kar raha tha😭😭...bdw awsm update...👏👏wah kya sabak Sikhya nandu...really tortures isse kehte hia..😉...ab nandu bachke jaogi kaha...😳...ah mystry ???? Solved kr vhi do. 😛
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Posted: 9 years ago
so so so so sorry for the delay
just loved the all parts
it all were so so much beautiful
everthing was so amazingly described
thank you so much for the pms


your ekta


Edited by manan_eku - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Part 17

In maniks car :

"manik hum kahan jaa rahae hai..?" nandini asked him as he tied a blind fold around her eyes.

"you will know it soon.." he said. She could clearly guess the naughtiness from his voice and gulped her saliva and said

"manik open this blind fold na please.." she said in the most pleading tone that no one would say no to her but manik controlled himself and said..

"stop talking in this baby tone or else ill eat u alive.." saying this he slowed down his car and slightly bit her cheek. To which first she gasped and later blushed hard. He smiled seeing her blush and said leaning close to her ears "agar aaisae hi blush karhi rahogi tho ill not be able to stop myself till we reach.." saying this he nibbled her earlobe and she softly moaned his name.

He controlled himself somehow as he wanted to reach the place asap and continued driving. Nandinis mind was occupied with the thoughts of their near future and she was blushing hard. Finally manik halted the car that means they came to their destination. Nandini's heart started beating fast with each passing second. Manik got down from the car and came towards nandinis side and opened the door and picked her up in his arms and said huskily

"punishment time Mrs.Malhotra.." nandinis breath got struck in her throat hearing his intensified voice and she shivered a bit

"abhi I have not done anything and u r shivering jab action shuru hoga tab kya karogi..?" he said coming close to her face. She could feel his hot breath on her face. He pecked her lips and said further walking inside "ab I cant wait anymore".

He directly walked towards the bedroom and dropped her on the bed. Nandini's hands were tied on her back and eyes were covered with the blindfold. She had no idea where was she and what was going around her.

"manik.. remove this blind fold na.." she requested making a puppy face. He sat beside her on the bed pulled her close by waist and opened the blindfold. Nandini was stunned seeing manik deadly close to her face and eyeing her lips.. she blushed more and turned her face to the other side. He made her face him and directly without giving her time to react placed his lips on hers. It started slow but with each passing second grew wilder as manik was waiting from so long to do this but couldn't because of the surroundings and that was the start for another beautiful moment in their life.
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after few hours

He kissed away her tears and gathered her in his arms. She snuggled more and more into him and he smiled seeing her doing her cute antics.

"did I hurt u..?" he asked looking at the love bites on her neck and shoulders and she nodded a no'

"mani.. u r the only person on this earth who would not even in ur dreams think of hurting me.." saying this she kissed on his heart and he smiled.

"nandu.. u know...I love this glow on ur face.." he said caressing her cheek.

"and the reason for this glow is u.." she said lovingly and he pecked her forehead.

"take rest for some time.. u might be exhausted.." he said palming her eyes and she hugged him more tightly and soon drifted into sleep while manik was humming a lullaby in her ears. He felt her breath even and smiled looking at her angelic face which had the worlds most beautiful smile playing on her lips. He kept pecking her cheeks nose eyes forehead time to taking care she wouldn't wake up and soon he was also asleep.

After few hours nandini woke up and was searching for manik on the other side of bed without opening her eyes but not finding him anywhere she immediately opened hey eyes and got relieved seeing him standing near the window looking outside. She carefully wrapped the duvet around herself and got down from the bed and walked towards him.

A smile crept his lips feeling her tiny hands wrapped around him from back. He kissed her palms and brought her front and side hugging her said

"itni jaldi kyu uth gayi.. u could have slept for sometime"

She rested her head on his chest and said in a sleepy babish tone

"tum nahi thae na.. iss liyae neend tut gayi.."


He laughed at her complaint and picked her up in his arms and made her lay on the bed and he himself lay down beside her. He held her close to himself she placed her head on his heart and was playing with his fingers which were entwined with that of hers. He was running his fingers in her hair when he asked her

"baby... why r u not sleeping.. mai idhar hi hun na.. take some rest"

"mujhae neend nahi aa rahi hai manik.. I just want to stay like this.."she said looking up into his eyes and again got busy with his fingers.

"ok if u r not sleepy then get up we will eat something.. my chotu sa baby must be hungry..?" he said and placed his hand on her bare tummy and she again shivered on his touch and to hide her blush hugged him tight. He smiled at hey shyness and said

"even after what all happened u r feeling shy hmm..?" she whispered in her ear and placed a wet kiss on her shoulder.

"manikkk..." she moaned softly and he just humm'ed lazily.

Suddenly something striked her mind and she said

"manik.. bhai aur navya kahan hai..?"

"neechae unkae room mai.." he said nuzzling his face in her neck.

"chalo utho.. we should go down.." she said and tried to get out of his grip but he was not in a mood to leave her

"after some time we will go na.. now don't spoil the moment..plzz.." he replied placing feather like kisses on her neck and shoulder.

"nahi.. chalo utho.." she said pushing him away from her and he pulled her towards him in a jerk and fused his lips with hers. He kissed her passionately. She moaned in his mouth to leave her as she was running out of oxygen but he paid no heed to her and deepened the kiss more and more. After getting satisfied he left her lips and both were panting heavily. He pecked her lips and she smiled.

"if u r done Mr.Malhotra then I think humae neechae jana chahiyae.." nandini said getting up and sitting on the bed and he snuggled in her lap.

"neechae jana hai..?" he asked pleadingly and she ruffled his hair on his cute gestures and nodded a yes. He made a sad face. She pecked his forehead and bent down and whispered in his ears

"at night im all yours.. so now stop making these faces and let me go.."

He smiled naughtily on her words and said "ok.. only on one condition.." she raised her eyebrows and asked "what" to which he replied "u will not wear ur dress.. my shirt" and she blushed. He kissed her blushed cheeks and picked up his shirt which was lying on the floor nearby and made her wear it himself.

"chalo now lets go.."he said getting down the bed and wore his track and vest. "manik tum jao.. ill be there in 5 minutes.." she said and went into the washroom and he nodded and went down. After manik went nandini came out the washroom wore a leggin and other clothes properly and went down.

As soon as she came down she saw manik and cabir sitting on the dining table, the moment cabir spotted nandini he said

"arae wah.. badi jaldi aa gayae tum dono.. aur tarae sarae kapadae kya chor lae gaya jo apnae majnu ka shirt pehan kae ghum rahi hai.."

Nandini blushed and manik gave a glare to cabir which he simply ignored. To avoid further teasing nandini asked

"bhai where is navya..?" and cabir pointed towards the kitchen and nandini went inside the kitchen to c what navya was doing

"wow..navya.. this cake seems so delicious.." nandini said as she saw navya icing the cake.

"banaya kisnae hai.. u know navya malhotra is an expert in making cakes.." navya said and patted herself to which nandini added " so tho hai.. but a small correction Mrs.Dhawan.." she said and winked at navya and navya rolled her eyes and nandini laughed loudly.

"tumhara bhai na.. ek di aaisae pitae ga marae haton..ki nani yaad dila dungi.." navya said irritatingly.

"kyu.. kya hua.?" Nandini enquired curiously

"ek tho hum itnae tired thae uski wajah sae phir jahnab ho cake yaad aa gaya.." she said absent mindedly and bit her tongue after realising what she said.

"ohooo. So meri bhabi jaan is tired because of her naughty husband and now is icing a cake for him.. not bad haan.." nandini said naughtily and navya blushed.

"nanduu tum bhi na.." she said shyly..

"aww.. u look so cute like this.." she said and pulled her cheeks and navya returned the favour by complementing nandini saying "aur tum bhi bahuth hot lag rahi ho bhai kae shirt mae.."to which nandini blushed and both started laughing.

"navya.. aur kitni der yaar.. mai bhuk kae marae mar jaunga.." cabir shouted from outside and the girls gave a pause to their laughing session

"bhukkad..!" navya murmered under her breath and nandini heard it and said

"oh hello.. tumhara bhai kuch kam nahi khata.. ja mare bhai ko bhukkad bol rahi ho.." she said irritatingly

"haan haan.. mear bhai sirf khana khata hai.. tumhara bhai tho mera dimaag bhi khatha hai.."she too replied in the same tone both were about to get into an argument to defend their bhai's but at the same moment manbir entered the kitchen to c what was taking them so long. Cabir took the plate in which navya had put the cake pieces and immediately stuffed his mouth with a piece so did manik and NavNi gave them a irritated look.

"dekha.. mainae kaha tha na..?"Navni said in unision

"kya kaha..?" manbir together

"huh.." navni said and turned their faces and manbir decided to focus on cake as it was damm delicious rather than solve their fight which was something very common between them. Navni walked out of the kitchen tapping their foot and sat on the dining table opposite to each other. Meanwhile manik asked the butler to serve their lunch and he did it. Manik and cabir walked in the dining area and saw nandini and navya sitting opposite to each other making grumpy faces.

Cabir sat beside navya while manik beside nandini. Both of them dished out food in the plates to feed their loves. Manik took a spoon full of rice and placed near her mouth and she turned her face. He sighed at her tantrums and pulled her into his lap and wrapped his arm around her waist tightly and said in her ears

"eat it when im feeding u lovingly or else I have my ways.." and again took a spoon full of rice and fed her. She ate without further protests as she knows it will be useless to argue with him. The case was no different with navya. Cabir was feeding her and she was eating silently. After both were done with their lunch manik taking the lead spoke

"so now would you do the honours of telling me what happened to both of u..?" he asked looking at nandini who snuggled more in his arms and was playing with his fingers. Nandini nodded a no so he looked at navya and asked her to speak up for which she too nodded a no.

"agar tum dono nahi batao gae tho how will we know..?" cabir said helplessly as none of the stubborn heads was ready to speak.

"bhai.." nandini called cabir softly and he looked at her and signalled her to continue "vo.. navya nae aap ko bhukkad bola..." she said in a complaining tone and navya too joined "bahi issnae bhi aapko bhukkad bola.."

Manbir looked at each other and then he girls sitting beside them and said in unision "to is mae galath kya hai..." and busted out laughing. Nandini and navya made a perfect o' and palmed their mouths with their hands in shock and nandini said

"we both were fighting for defending u and u both are laughing"

"aur to aur pura ka pura cake kha gayae.." navya complained.

Cabir pulled navyas cheeks and said "arae meri pyari navya cake abhi thoda bahuth baki hai..wait ill get it for u both.." saying this he got up and went into the kitchen and brought the remaining cake which they left in the kitchen. The couples fed each other when maniks phone started ringing. He smiled seeing the called id and accepted the call

"yeah mom.. hum sab saath mai he hai... Ok we will be there by evening... ok byee.. love you.." saying this he ended the call and spoke to the other three

"we have a party tonight.. humhae ghar jana hoga to get ready as we don't have party wear here.." he ended and picked up nandini and said turning towards Cavya.. " we will leave in 30 minutes" and left to their room for getting ready to leave.

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So for the first ever time I wrote something like this.. I hope it was upto the mark.. if not please forgive me...

And do let me know ur views regarding the update..

Hmm.. views have reached 26k+ but comments nahi badh rahae hai.. just tell me one thing is the story that bad that u r just reading and leaving it..?😕😭


Hmm c u soon with the next update..

Take care..

Keep smiling..

Loads of love..

Neeraja...

Edited by neeju_chinnu - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
RES
UNRES

SO THE UPDATE WAS JUST AWESOME
JUST LOVED IT
BUT DIDNT READ THAT WALA PART
NAVNI FIGHT WAS TOO CUTE
THANKS FOR THE PMS
CONTINUE SOON


LOVE YOU
EKTA
Edited by manan_eku - 9 years ago

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