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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: kitkat5756

Ufff baibyyy dill khush kar diya ...kya awesome update thi ...sachi mein...YESS Ranbir hi manik hain I know it , I just know it ...dill garden garden hogayi hain ...the date was super awesome ...the dress which Ranbir gifted nandu was awesome ... Nandu am sure was looking like a fairy ...awww manan moments kya bataun it was awesome ...date in the farmhouse awww ... Then the decoration kya baat hain ... Then the song which manik sang for nandu outstanding ...awww the dance was so cute ...loved the way Ranbir proposed nandu sooo cute ...each and every word were very touching ... The dinner was so sweet ...hahaha nandu ordered all flavours of ice-cream to eat... Then hahaha nandu got suspecious by the spare dress nandu apki nanad ka dress hain yeh bad mein sAb sach pata chal jayega ... The way they say good-bye was so sweet ...Ranbir ko cabir ko dekh kar jhatka lag Gaya ...Upps uski wallet cabir ki hath o lag gayi aur navya ke sath pic bhi cabir ne dekh lia... If Ranbir is manik then y even he is lying , aise bhi kya baat hogayi apna nam bhi jhoot bola ?? Cabir navya ko janta hain ??? Yeh ho kya raha hain ?????plz confusion door kardo plz ... Jaldi update dena aur confusion door kar do plz

How are you ??? Sorry aj chotu comment kar rahi hu meri hath mein chot lagi hain ...love u itna Sara ...update jaldi ...thanks for the pm ... With lots of love and hugs


tq..tq sooo much... i luv u tooo... tak care of ur hand yaar... thnk fr u lambaaa comment... luv u loads...
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: neeju_chinnu




u know what do i do whn im xtremely happy...?
i cry... same was the case whn i saw ur comment... i was smiliing same time tears started rolling down my eyes bluring my vision making me difficult to read... i love u yaar... ssly..i love u to moon nd back... im just totally at loss of wrds... i just cant say thnks..coz it would b a small wrd to say...i dnt no wht to say nw..but thnks... thnk u sooo sooo much... u no wht..whn i toldmy sis dat a grl is nt accepting da fact that Ranbir is nt der nd confirmed dat he is Manik nly nd is posting da same in rply... frm dat day onwards whnever i update she asks me..di wht did she say today... u r da 2nd person who call me Chinnu aftr my bro who callse so nd he himself gavee that name...
once again thnku fr u lambaaa update lke comment... tak care...
keep smiling..
may god fulfil all ur wishes... stay blessed...
urs Chinnu



Awww...feelings are mutual dear and thank you so much for giving this much love..
I'd everything which I desired and deserved... Let god gives you all the happiness varna royenge toh flood aa jaayenge... Agar ham doob gaye toh who'll quote on your update
So no more rona dhona chinnu
Edited by Snehasn - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Finally it's out
Loved it
Pls reveal his reasons soon
Awesome update
Enjoyed it and thanks for the pm!!
Luv u
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Posted: 9 years ago
I m ur new reader
Superb story
Bohut confusion hain lekin mujhe lagta manik aur ranbir same hain
Update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
Lo mujhe toh pehle hi pata tha someting fishy... Wah conffesion ho gaya aur sala ka pyaar vara threat vhi... Majnu ranbir oops manik nandu ka ice cream ka list dekhke mu khula ka khula reh gaya... Just thinking jb nandu ko sach pata chalega toh kaise react karega...bdw awsm suparv update...keep it up...
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Posted: 9 years ago
part 15 :

After 6 months :

days will pass time will fly

many will come many will die

the stronger will stand and weaker will cry

so grow stronger wings and learn to fly...


a fresh Sunday morning 10:00 AM :

nandini walked into their office and turned towards her cabin and was about to enter when someone called from behind

"nandini tum yahan... kuch kaam tha kya.. mujhae bol deti mai kar dataeta..." he said

She gasped loudly as she wasn't expecting anyone so early it being Sunday.

"omg.. raghav u scared me.." she said placing her hand on her chest

"sorry I didn't mean to scare u.." he said in an apologetic tone

"its ok raghav.. kuch kaam hai.. ill take care of myself" she said and rushed into her cabin and bolted the door.

Aiyappa its better ki mai door locked hi rakh dun.. agar vo monster aa gaya tho.. I think aaj kuch zyada ki ho gaya.. hehe.. jo hua so hua.. mujhae tho bahuth maza aaya..' she thought to herself and sat on her chair thinking about the morning incidents and started laughing like crazy. Breaking her chain of thoughts her phone rang and she accepted the call in the first ring

"haan.. bolo..kya...!! tum usae rook..mai kuch karhti hun.." she said and hung up.

aiyappa.. yae itni jaldi kaisae aa gaya.. zaroor kisi nae uski help ki hogi.. but mujhae bhagna hoga.. wait a sec.. navya ko call karthi hun..' she dialled navya's number and she accepted the call after a very long time and nandini was moving to and fro in her cabin. The moment navya accepted the call nandini showred her with questions

"navya itni der kyun kardi call accept karnae mai... pata hai.. vo aa gaya.. itni jaldi kaisae aa gaya vo.. ok u also take care agar bhai vahan aa gaya tho mujhae call kar dena.." she spoke all in one go and what the reply came shook him to core

"meri ladli behana.. tum logon ko kya laga tum aaisae harkataein karogi aur bhag jaogi aur humein pata nahi chalega..sab kae sab pakadae gayae hai.. better yehi hoga ki u also surrender urself.. tak care baby doll.." saying this cabir hung up the call.

Someone was knocking her cabin's door. Nandini immediately got alarmed and started running here and there in her room to hide somewhere but couldn't find any.

"nandini.. u by urself open the door.. warna ull regret later..i have the spare key of ur cabin.. better u open the door by urself.." the voice came from outside

mai kaha chupu.. think nandu think..' she thought and immediately hid under the table. After a few seconds the door flung open and HE came inside. "nandini.. I know ki tum yaha andar ho so stop playing these hide and seek and come out.." he yelled in frustration. Nandini was looking at his moves from under the table and saw him coming towards the table and palmed her mouth to control her anxiety. "nandini come out by urself.. I m warning u.." he said in a threatening tone but she didn't move an inch.

"mujhae cabir ka cabin check karna chahiyae.."he thought and moved outside her cabir and she sighed in relief and sat closing her eyes and calming her heart which was racing a few moments ago.

"tumhae kyun laga ki ill leave u so easily.." a voice from behind made her froze at her place. HE was just behind her

"I told u im gonna find u out..so chalo.. we have so much to discuss" he said in her ears huskily and the intensity in his voice gave her gooseburngs all over.

"mai..im not coming with u anywhere" she said both were still under the table

"and im not going without u anywhere" he said and forcefully dragged her from under the table and made her stand.

"tu..tu..tum jao.. im not coming.." saying this nandini started to push him and he held her hands

"tum aaisae nahi sunnae wali.." saying this he picked her up in his arms and started walking towards exit.

"mai sabko chilla chilla kae bulaungi.." she said trying to get out of his grip which was highly impossible but she was trying.

"haan haan bulao bulao.. ab isi ki kami reh gayi thi.." he said dramatically and she frowned.

"chodo mujhae.. leave me.." she again tried freeing herself

"nanduu babyyy y r u wasting ur energy.. kuch tho bachae kae rakho.. ull need it after a while.." he said and winked at her and she after getting the meaning of what he said started beating him.

"dekho stop it.. warna mujhae math bolna badmae.. coz im gonna punish u really hard this time.." he said in her ears and bit her earlobe. A shiver ran down her spine thinking of the consequences and she kept quite. They reached the parking and he put her down for opening the door and she tried to run away but he was fast. He caught her and dragged her to the car ignoring all her pleads of leaving her but all went into deaf ears. He opened the car door and pushed her inside and said pointing his finger "don't u dare move an inch from here.. don't make me do what I don't want to.."

And she nodded cutely finding no other way other than to agree with him. She was expecting all this but not so soon. Even her bhai was not on her side today. She made a grumpy face and he entered the car and leaned towards her. His face was almost very very close to that of hers. He moved his nose seductively on her cheeks and fisted her hands in her top. He without her knowledge keeping her engaged in his activities' and opened the dashboard took out a scarf and tied her hands.

Not feeling his touch she opened her eyes to look at him and found her hands tied and her eyes widened in surprised.

"yae kya battameezi hai " she spoke angrily

"aur tum nae jo kiya vo.."he retorted in the same tone

"please manik.." she said making a puppy face

"Mrs.Nandini Manik Malhotra now don't make these innocent faces.. mai nai padnae wala tumharae jaal mae.." manik said turning his face and ignited the engine and started the car and drove towards the destination he planned to take her...

i know aap.ko bahut bada jhatka laga hai...
but kya karu...
views have reached 21k + aur comments tho 21 bhi nahi miltae..
so silent readers jaldi bahar aa jao..
chalo sry fr this chotu update..
vil try to compensate tmro...
till then keep smiling..
tak care...
loads of luv...
neeraja :)

Edited by neeju_chinnu - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Awesome
Fabulous update
ye sb kya tha jhatke pr jhatka...
thnks for pm me
Lovd it
Continue soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
Tooo gud
Loving it !!!
Manan were supercute
Lovely
Ur doing a fab job keep it up
And glad u updated
Thanks for the pm!!!
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Posted: 9 years ago
Pehle dimag mai aya ah kya ho raha hai nandu vagg rahi hai kisse Kyu??? What the chall kya raha hai ...bad me jo Jor ka jhatka laga ..allah bohat jor se laga..😲 Mrs.nandini manik malhothra ah Kab Hua..😉..tum toh bohat fast nikle..🤣..oh not suspense. ..ki Nahi wait kar lenge. ..btw awsm update. ..👏👏👏
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Posted: 9 years ago
He he funny update
Mrs nandini manik malhotra phrse jhakta laga 😉
Again suspens
Pls next update long dena
Waiting for next update

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