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Posted: 9 years ago

#171

Nice update...can't wait to see what will happen when ranbir will come back...n what turn will story take after 15th chapter... Update the next chapter soon...

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neeraja

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Posted: 9 years ago

#172

First of all a big big sorry for the delay.. chalo ill not waste much time of yours.. hope u like the update..and haan..one more thing..plzz in the middle of the update itself don't search for eggs tomatoes or chappals.. pehalae pura padh laena then decide with which thing u want to hit me.. ok happy reading..

Chapter 14 :

Navya was getting restless with Manik's proposal of going Banglore again.she was too annoyed to hear the word Banglore anymore, whereas Manik was totally exhausted in explaining her the importance of the project they were taking up in Banglore. Abhimanyu and Mukthi were looking at each other and were the silent spectators of their argument. Both were correct at their own places. After soo much heated argument between the bro-sis finally Navya spoke

"bhai..! if u r going im also coming with u this time..&its final.. either we both r going together or else u r not going at all.."

"what..! Navya r u crazy..? I mean why do u want to accompany me.. what will u do there ??" Manik spoke totally exhausted by the one hour long argument which was still going on..

"mai jo bhi karu..aap sae matlab.. aap bas mujhae jawab deejiyae.. aapko akalae tho mai jaanae nahi doongi.. im definitely coming with u.. so book tickets for four of us.. wait mai hi Aaryaman ko call karthi hun.." saying this Navya picked up her cell to call Aaryaman and Manik immediately snatched the cell from her

"navya... plz listen to me..ok lets do one thing..ill go today u people join me day after tomorrow.. we ll see the city and sath mae we will return back..ok..?" he asked hesitantly with pleading eyes

"aur aap yae do din kya karogae,..?" navya asked narrowing her eyebrows as she confirmed that Manik is definitely hiding something from her..

"umm..mai..han..ill wrap up the work in two days.. after u ppl come we ll have fun together..what say ?"he said looking at Abhi Mukthi who were sitting with their hands on their heads

Abhi nodded in agreement whereas Mukthi was looking at Navya. Mukthi and Navya exchanged a victorious smlie and finally agreed.. Manik sighed in relief as he was having a tought time in convincing his dearest sister who never expected a NO in reply whatever the reason maybe.

After some time :

Meera maa had packed Maniks luggage and he was all set to leave. " Ok so see u all day after tomorrow".. saying this Manik hugged Navya and Mukthi and left for airport.

In Banglore:

Nandini was in collage when her cell beeped . it was a text from Ranbir "hey..im back in Banglore.. have to talk something important.. will pick u up at 6:30..be ready.. :)"

Nandini smiled to the fullest on receiving the much awaited text from Ranbir. "ill be ready..see u soon.." she replied.

5:00 - Nandu's house :

The door bell rang and Anjali aunty opened the door. It was a parcel wrapped in red. It was sent for Nandini Murthy'. She took the parcel and called nandu.. "nandu.. beta tarae liyae parcel aaya hai..!!"

Nandini was totally busy in selecting a dress for her to wear to go out...her whole room was scattered with all different kinds of dresses...it was a total mess when she heard Anjali calling her

"coming aunty.." saying that she threw the dress she was holding in her hands in utmost frustration on the bed and went down.. as soon as she opened the parcel the frowns on her face vanished and were replaced with a smile and a little blush.. it was a pretty red frock accompanied with matching accessories.. and a note which read as " I know u might be confused as what to wear and what not to..so let me make the work of my darling easy.. I hope u like this dress..agar pasand aayae tho pehan laena.. will be waiting for u.. urs Ranbir."

She immediately ran away to her room to get ready. She saw the time it was already 5:30.. she freshened up and wore the red dress sent by Ranbir.. she was looking absolutely pretty in that frock.. along with it were a pair of diamond earrings and a red and white stones bracelet..with a glittery red clutch (please imagine all these things..i don't know how to upload pics here..sorry once again )

She got ready by doing minimal makeup.. and now she was totally ready..onceagain she glanced the clock..it was 6:25.. Ranbir waold be there in 5 minutes..when she got a text..of course it was him..

"hope u r ready..im waiting downstairs.."

She took a final look at herself and moved downstairs. As soon as she came down Anjali saw her and said "aaj koi kuch zyada khubsuraat lag raha hai..." nandu blushed even more and said "aaisa kuch nahi hai.. vo mai Ranbir kae saath bahar jaa rahi hun.. bhai ko bata diya hai..chachi ko bhi bata daena.." saying this she rushed out. Ranbir was standing outside the car waiting for his princess. he was looking into his phone when nandini came out.. he lifted his head up and the moment he saw her the world around him froze..she was looking breathtakingly beautiful. The colour of the dress was matched perfect to her skin tone..her little makeup.. everything was driving him crazy.. as nandini found his intense gaze on her and blushed even more.. now her cheeks colour was also adding more beauty to her.. she came and stood in front of him.. "nandu..u r my death tonight.." Ranbir whispered huskily looking at her and tucking her hair strand behind her ear..she lowered her head trying to hide her blush.. he made her look at him by lifting her head with his index figure..the moment their eyes met..aah..they both were lost..

Ranbir moved a bit closer to her face.. he was just about to kiss her when..nandu's phone rang.. both came out of their trance.. nandini blushed to the deepest shade of red and Ranbir started looking here and there.. she accepted the call and

"haan bhai.."

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"haan Ranbir kae saath hi hun.."

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"theek hai..ill take care of myself.."

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"ok aajaungi.. der nahi karungi.."

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"haan..haan..ill take care of myself..ab byee..!!"she ended up the call and looked at Ranbir

"chalen.."he said opening the door for her like a perfect gentleman and he himself sat on the driving seat and started the engine and they moved out of the house..

"hum kahan jaa rahae hai..?" nandini asked as Ranbir took the route which lead to the outskirts of the city..

"surprise hai..wait na.. ull know it very soon.."he said

Even Ranbir was looking dashing and handsome. He was wearing denim jeans with a dark blue tee with a black blazer. After a good 30 minutes drive they reached a farm house, actually it was Ranbir's farmhouse but nandu was unaware of the fact..

"beautiful farmhouse.."she said as soon as she got down from the car..

"tumhae pasand aaya..?" he asked standing beside her and she nodded her head like a 2 year old approvingly..

"tumhara hai yae ..?" she asked as she saw the name board written Malhotra's' on it..

"yeah..!" he said and took out a blind fold from his pocket..

"yae kis liyae..?" she asked surprisingly.. he didnt speak anything and started walking towards her taking small and seductive steps. The moment he took a step towards her she took a step backwards.. soon she hit the car behind them.. she was about to run away from there when Ranbir held her hand and pulled her towards him and she banged in his chest.. she gasped in shock and he in a single move turned her towards him and pinned her to the car..

"ranbir.." she spoke..it was merely audible.. his proximity was making her weak on her knees.. in reply he just hmm'ed and was looking deep in her eyes.. he palmed her eyes with his hand and she immediately closed her eyes in response.. he gently tied the blind fold and held her hand..

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Posted: 9 years ago

#173

"par..hum.."before she could speak anything further she was silenced by his finger on her lips.. "shhh..!! do u trust me..?" he asked coming very close to her..she could feel his breath on her face.. not able to speak anything she nodded her head in a yes' and he continued "then don't speak anything.." she again nodded.. he in the next second picked her up in his arms and moved to the pool side where the arrangements were made.. she encircled her hands around his neck and rested her head on his shoulder. When they reached pool side he placed her on the ground carefully and opened the blindfold. She had still her eyes closed.. he took her in a back hug resting his chin on her shoulder he whispered in her ears huskily "open your eyes.." she shivered on the intensity of his voice and his proximity and very slowly opened her eyes.. as soon as she saw the view in front of her she was totally stunned. Whole pool was full of red rose petals with scented candles floating in between..a small gazebo was set with a table and chairs for two people,the whole garden was lighted with small small lights which were twinkling like stars..and adding more beauty to the already beautiful arrangement it was a full moon day.. she was totally speechless seeing that.. when she turned around to talk to him he wasn't there..while nanding was busy admiring the beauty around..ranbir immediately ran to his car to bring something.. she started searching for him when she heard the strumming of guitar.. she moved in the direction of music and saw him sitting on a chair with a guitar in his hand and a small bornfire nearby and he sang looking intensly at her

sajde mein yun hi jhukta hu, tum pe hi aake rukata hu

kya yeh sabko hota hai

(he sang coming towards her and her eyes twinkled and heart dance in joy hearing hi calm and soothing voice)

humko kya lena hai sab se, tum se hi sab baate abb se

ban gaye ho tum meri duwa

(she sang moving towards him)

khuda jaane ke main fida hu, khuda jaane main mitt gaya

khuda jaane yeh kyun huwa hai, ke ban gaye ho tum mere khuda

(he gestured opening his arms and pointing his finger upwards as if telling her to ask god herself)

tu kahe to tere hi kadam ke main nishano pe chalu ruku ishaare pe

tu kahe to khwabon ka banaake main bahana sa mila karu sirhaane pe

(she sang looking deep into his eyes conveying that every word she sang she really meant it )

ho tum se dil ki baate sikhee, tum se hi yeh raahe sikhee

tum pe mar ke main to jee gaya

khuda jaane ke main fida hu, khuda jaane main mitt gaya

khuda jaane yeh kyun huwa hai, ke ban gaye ho tum mere khuda

(he sang and pulled her towards him and entwined their hands )

dil kahe ke aaj to chupa lo tum panaho mein

ke darr hai tum ko kho dunga

dil kahe sambhal jara khushi ko na najar laga

ke darr hai mein to ro dunga

(he sang looking into her eyes not breaking the eyelock and slowly placed her hand on his heart and with eyes asked her not to leave him )

o karti hu sau vaade tum se, baandhe dil ke dhaage tum se

yeh tumhe na jaane kya huwa

(she sang sensing his insecurity regarding her and silently promised herself of never leaving him)

khuda jaane ke main fida hu, khuda jaane main mitt gaya

khuda jaane yeh kyun huwa hai, ke ban gaye ho tum mere khuda

(he sang lifting her up in his arms and twirling her she opened her arms in air feeling the moment)

he ended the song and put her down and turned her to face him. It seems even nandu's Aaiyappa was also happy for them and suddenly it started raining. They both didn't move an inch and were lost in each others eyes. Slowly Ranbir lifted his hands and cupped her cheeks and moved his face close to her eyeing her shivering lips. She closed her eyes in response and taking it as a yes he placed his lips on hers.he kissed her slowly and gently and eventually nandini's hands travelled into his hair pulling him closer and his one hand was on her nape while other hand was on her waist. The kiss started slow but grew passionate with each passing second. Both were kissing each other pouring their love for each other in that kiss. Soon they broke gasping for air and Manik rested his forehead on hers. She was blushing like hell and still had her eyes closed.

"nandu.."he called her so much lovingly she opened her eyes to look at him at found him kneeling down in front of her

"nandini..im not so good in expressing my feelings.. so I wanted to keep it simple.. Nandini Murthy today I want to confess my feelings for you that I love u..yes I love u nandini.. the first time when I saw u in the coffee shop .. that very moment I fell in love with u.. your sweet talks..your innocence..your pure heart.. everything I love it.. I will not say that ill not let any problem come to you.. but I promise you that whatever it will be ill be there with u..whatever comes to you will first have to face me before reaching you.. ill never leave you alone.. ill be always be there on ur side.. ill protect you from this evil world... ill always love you more and more with each passing moment...I LOVE U NANDINI" saying this he opened the small box that he brought for her and opened it.. there was a beautiful platinum ring in it.. he again continued..

"nandini I want to marry u..have kids with u..get old with u.. in short u will be my life from this very moment..i want to spend my entire life witu u and only u...i want to start my day seeing your face and end my day with u in my arms.."

He was looking at her for her response she had tears in her eyes.. she was overwhelmed by his words and the love for her.. she never expected such a pure confession from him.. she didn't say anything further and nodded her head in a yes and he made her wear the ring. She pulled his collars in order to make him stand as he was still kneeling in front of her. He stood up and she kissed his forehead and then his eyes followed by his cheeks.. " I LOVE U TOO Ranbir.." she said and hugged him tightly.. he too hugged her with equal force as he was now on cloud 9. After what seemed like forever they broke the hug.. the rain was also stopped by then.. they were sitting on the bench in the garden..he held her hand and caressed the ring.. he took her in a side hug and she rested her head on his heart.. no one was speaking.. sometimes silence speaks more than words..

After sometime Ranbir asked looking at her who was playing with his fingers.. "nandu.." she just hmm'ed in response..

"nandu look at me.." he said and she immediately looked up at him asking what

"lets have dinner..bhook nai lagi hai..?" he asked her and in reply he got the most cutest reply.. "bahut bhook lagi hai.." she said caressing her tummy making a cute pout and he immediately pecked her pout and stood up and picked her in his arms and took her to the small tent with two chairs which was arranged a bit away from the bench they were sitting at present.

He reached there and placed her on the ground and pulled a chair for her like a perfect gentleman and she sat... he took the other chair..and asked her "so kya khana hai meri princess ko..?" he said and she replied rubbing her hands exicitedly.. " mujhae abhi..umm..pasta khana hai.."

"your wish is my command.."saying this he called someone and after 10 minutes a butler came from the house and placed the pasta on the table served both of them and left from there.. as soon as he left she said "tum khilao na..".. and how could he resist such a cute request..he came towards her and asked her to stand.. first she was confused but she stood up..he took her to his chair and made her sit in his lap and started feeding her and he got fed by her in return.. soon they were done with their dinner with some cute romantic moments..and Ranbir asked the butler to get ice-creams for them..and got the first biggest shock when he asked nandini what flavour she wanted to eat..she began "mujhae chocolate butterscotch pista vanilla strawberry almond crunch caramel aur..aur.."she was thinking for more to say when Ranbir cut her in middle and said "mai tumhae flavours ki list batanae kae liyae nahi bol raha hun..tell me what u want to eat now.."

"aur tumhae kyun laga ki mai tumhae list bata rahi hun.. yae sab mujhae abhi kae abhi khana hai.." she replied angrily..

"nandu..are u out of ur senses..itni ice-creams kaun khata hai.. beemar pad gayi tho.." he said a bit louder this time. She who was till now sitting in his lap with a jerk got up said loudly "kya problem hai tumhari aur bhai ki haan...mujhae ice-cream kyu nahi khana datae..?" and turned her face to the other side angrily

"ok..ok calm down.. u eat as much as u want mai kuch nai bolunga.. but gussa mat ho..come sit ..."saying this he pulled her in his lap and she clapped her hands on her victory.. Ranbir signalled the butler to get all the flavours she asked for and within no time he was back with a tray full of ice-creams of different flavours.. she happily started eating them with her hands and when she found Ranbir staring at her she asked him with by raising her eyebrow if he wanted some. He slowly took her hand with which she was eating and slowly yet seductively licked her fingers. She immediately blushed and tried to get up from his lap but he had encircled his one arm around her waist so tightly that she couldn't move even an inch. She tried to free herself when he leaned forward to her ear and whispered in her ears huskily " why are you even trying.. ill not let u go at any cost.." and she blushed even more.. he took a spoon from the table and fed her the left over ice-cream and she ate it blushingly..

After they ate they were walking in the garden hand in hand when nandini suddenly sneezed.. Ranbir immediately got alarmed and now after a very long time realised that they got totally drenched in rain and she was still in those damp clothes and on the top of that the over dose of ice-creams which she ate made him panic even more.. he mentally kicked himself for being so careless around her.. he then instantly picked her up in his arms and she got startled.. he gave her what look to which nandini asked all confused"Ranbir what happened all of a sudden..tum aaisae kyun react kar rahae ho..?"

"Im sorry nandini..im stupid.. how could I be so careless.. im an idiot..u are still in these wet clothes..im so sorry baby.."he said walking towards the house and she tried to get down from his arms and he gave her a glare and she kept quite having no other go.. soon they were inside the house and he took her to his room and made her sit on the bed. He opened the cupboard took out a towel and gave it to her and asked her to dry her hair.. he then again moved back to the cupboard and started searching for something..finally after 5 good minutes he found it. He came towards her and handed her a baby pink floral sleevless frock to her and said.. "u go and change..washroom wahan hai.." and pointed towards the washroom. She knew there was no use of arguing as he was behaving like Cabir in this case.. she sighed and moved into the washroom and came out .. she was looking soo cute in that frock that he again got lost in her beauty.. suddenly something striked her mind and she asked "Ranbir do u keep girls clothes in ur cupboard..?" she asked narrowing her eyebrows and he starts looking here and there.. "vo..umm.. vo..baath yae hai ki.. i.. I mean.. main a..vo bus.." he was fumbling for words and she got more suspicious seeing him like that..she crossed her arms on her chest and asked sternly "kis kae kapadae hai yae..?"

he was stunned at her question and directly looked into her eyes

"vo when I went to select that red frock for u na..tho I liked this and I brought this for u..socha tha time aanae pae dae dunga.. but vo aaisae kaam aa gaya.. this was for u only.."

She smiled brightly listening his words.. and he continued..

"chalo..its late ill drop u home.."he said taking his car keys.. when she stopped him

"u also change..agar bimar pad gayae thooo.." she repeated his words .. "accha..!" he said and she nodded her head in a yes.. he smiled and took out a blue jeans and a red tee shirt and went to washroom to change. Within 5 minutes he came out and they moved out to his car.. after 30 minutes of a silent drive Ranbir parked the car in front of nandini's house.. she was about to get down when he pulled her back and said "aren't u forgetting something..?" and smiled naughtily.. she immediately understood what he was saying and leaned forward to his face palmed his eyes and slowly kissed his cheeks and whispered "good night" in his ears.. he moved back cupped her face and kissed the corner of her lips and said "good night princess..sweet dreams.." she blushed hard and got down from the car and quickly ran to her room directly..

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neeraja

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Posted: 9 years ago

#174

When Ranbir returned to his farmhouse and entered it, to his biggest surprise he saw Cabir sitting there in the hall..

"hey cabir..tu yahan..?" he asked surprised..

"kyun bae..meri behan sae milkae mujhae bhul gaya kya..?" Cabir said faking sadeness and both laughed after looking at each other.

After some time:

Ranbir and Cabir were sitting in the bar counter of the house and were sipping their drinks.. Cabir observed that Ranbir was smiling more than usual and getting curious he asked "kya hua.. tera face itna kyun glow ho raha hai..?"

Ranbir blushed and told Cabir everything skipping their kiss . Cabir immediately got up and made a hell serious face. Ranbir got worried seeing him like that.. Cabir came towards him and Ranbir closed his eyes expecting a punch from Cabir seeing his expressions.. but for his surprise Cabir hugged him tightly and said "I m very very happy for u both.." Ranbir hugged him back and said "thanks for accepting us.."

"one more tear from my princesses eyes and u r dead" Cabir said after breaking the hug.

"I promise.. ill not give u a single chance for complaint.." Ranbir replied

As it was the occasion to celebrate.. and getting approval from Cabir , ranbir was way too much happy and drank soo much that he was out of control.. he within few minutes dozed off..

Cabir made him stand with great difficulty and made him lay on the couch. While doing so accidentally ranbirs wallet fell down from his pants pocket. Cabir picked it up to place on the table beside and saw Ranbir was smiling and giggiling like idiot murmuring Nandini's name. cabir smiled seeing this and kept the wallet on the table , while doing so accidentally the wallet got opened and what cabir saw next made hi freeze at his place. There was a pic with Ranbir and some other girl. He picked up the wallet and took out the pic from it and turned it around something was written on it which is as under

mannu bhai ki ladli Navya...'

Cabir checked his wallet again and found the business card of Manik Malhotra. Cabir was surprised to see all this. He immediately took out his cell and called Raghav (his secretary) and said "Raghav I want complete details of Navya Malhotra and her brother Manik Malhotra as soon as possible" saying this he cut the call and some past memories flashed in front of his eyes. He closed his eyes recollecting those pleasant memories and thought "agar yae Navya hai..tho vo kaun thi jis sae mae mila tha.."

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Finally like finally I made it.. didn't have time for proof reading.. kindly ignore mistakes...

Hit like and comment..plzz yaar...

Plzz..plzzz...let me know ur review by writing comments..

Hope to c u all very soon...

Take care..

Loads of love..

Neeraja..😊

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Tammy18

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Posted: 9 years ago

#175

Long time no see..

Well glad u updated..

Really liked d chapter..

I think ranbir is only a name n manik n cabir gonna use dat fr theirs ladylove

Really want to knw reason behind this name..

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forumlove

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Posted: 9 years ago

#176

It's awsm yaar
Par jaldi mystery open kar yaar
Warna curiosity k mare mera dimag shift hojayega
Plz jaldi
Update soon

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Mamiza

@kitkat5756

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Posted: 9 years ago

#177

Ufff baibyyy dill khush kar diya ...kya awesome update thi ...sachi mein...YESS Ranbir hi manik hain I know it , I just know it ...dill garden garden hogayi hain ...the date was super awesome ...the dress which Ranbir gifted nandu was awesome ... Nandu am sure was looking like a fairy ...awww manan moments kya bataun it was awesome ...date in the farmhouse awww ... Then the decoration kya baat hain ... Then the song which manik sang for nandu outstanding ...awww the dance was so cute ...loved the way Ranbir proposed nandu sooo cute ...each and every word were very touching ... The dinner was so sweet ...hahaha nandu ordered all flavours of ice-cream to eat... Then hahaha nandu got suspecious by the spare dress nandu apki nanad ka dress hain yeh bad mein sAb sach pata chal jayega ... The way they say good-bye was so sweet ...Ranbir ko cabir ko dekh kar jhatka lag Gaya ...Upps uski wallet cabir ki hath o lag gayi aur navya ke sath pic bhi cabir ne dekh lia... If Ranbir is manik then y even he is lying , aise bhi kya baat hogayi apna nam bhi jhoot bola ?? Cabir navya ko janta hain ??? Yeh ho kya raha hain ?????plz confusion door kardo plz ... Jaldi update dena aur confusion door kar do plz

How are you ??? Sorry aj chotu comment kar rahi hu meri hath mein chot lagi hain ...love u itna Sara ...update jaldi ...thanks for the pm ... With lots of love and hugs

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Ammu

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Posted: 9 years ago

#178

Hiii chinnu...what's upp???
I so so so knew it ki he's manik only not ranbir shanbir...yayyy... From day one I'm saying this only and every time you confused me but still i was adamant ki u keep on saying ki he's manik only... See now I've proven right... Ab aap kya doge gift k tor par...hmm??
Chalo koi nahi aap bhi kya yaad rakhenge kii aapki itne crazy reader teh jo khud writer ki story ki phol first day hii khol ke pm kiye teh... 😆 😆...I'll pat myself on behalf of you that i guessed it correct... Ufff...coming to updates..haan I've so many to catch up with all thanks to you... Inne saare updates kii baarish karaaye aapne kii i found tough to take time to quote... Firstly i was hell busy with presentations and meeting's... Nextly this moron virus is busy in playing hide and seek with me from last month...huhhh

Ok let's start with manik yaani your so called ranbir taking nandu on movie date with him...
Paranormal activity like seriously... Oh gosshhh...inne saare pictures k beech aapko yahi movie milna tha kya???... I was hell scared by remembering that... Huhhh...
Nandu bade sherni ban kar andar gaye teh aur choohe ban kar vapis aaye... Hehehe... Aur jaao bhaai aur bf k khilaaf... Yahi hona hai sabnu jo elders ke against ho...
Wow Manan moments were cute...then nandu back to home...poor girl still in dazed state after seeing that movie ki she found shadow of someone in her balcony after affects of horror movies... Hehehe...lo jii khud ke neend toh udd hii chuke teh chale dusron ke bhi udhaane
Cabir is again back on protective bhaai mode... Checked CCTV... Call manik in that hour... Hehe har kisi ko mile aise bhaai why only for me.. You..or nandu and navti...huhhh...
Then their date...and revealing of so called trip to London... Jo India k Delhi mein teh...hahaha... Poor nandu fighting with her turmoil ki what those feelings were...manik's sure about his feelings... Oyee hoye...badi jaldi akal aagaye mahaashay ko...hmm nandu's absent minded behavior and always lost and busy in her phone ki she had partially forgotten about her sweet sii family... Huhhh...
Here Mr. Malhotra is back...arre wow he gifted car to navya to compensate on his mistake...
Cute sissy's baked chocolate cake for bhaai...hmmm...how sweet... Haawww...i so hate it when bhaai's make bad faces and give wrong comments on sister's culinary skills...huhh
Wow new entry Meera maa...she'so sweetheart like anjali auntie... Wow she loves manik and Navti as her children's... Hehehe...laddoo malhotra its cute...ye mom log k dialogue miss kaise nahi hote... Ki apne jawaan hatte katte beton or betiyon k dekhar bhi mom log ye bol teh hai ki kinna dugla ho gaye hai hamaara baccha... Huhh...saare mamma's ek jaise hai
Wow cabir's concern to his baby sister again took my heart away...
Here comes today's review...
Update was just amazing.. Seriously mind blowing... Manik convincing his baby sister is a treat to imagine... Wow how cute they would've agar if they shown as sibling's in tv...uff..
Then debating for hour's... Huhhh...she's so stubborn manvaa hii liye apne baat... Oohhh Mr. Malhotra had some other plans in his mind to execute... Good going lover boy... Agar sister's ko saath mein le chal teh to they would've become disturbing elements for you...
Hmmm...manik reached Bangalore and nandu got ranbir's message... Wow kya telepathy hai donon k beech...Awww our doll is becoming mental just to choose a dress... Poor girl poore room mein tsunami laa dii...wow impressive Mr. Malhotra knows every unsaid things about his cute baby princess... He sent her Attire's and accessories... Awww...lucky girl...
Hmmm...anjali auntie... Naughty auntie apne chotu ke leg pull karne mein busy hai...
Ahmmm ahmmm... Mr. Malhotra's k toh hosh hii udd gaye after watching his yet to be become lady love in such a cute frock after 15 days..Janaab hold on you guys are standing in road... Control your emotions yaar...
Ho!!so confession is going to be in farm house...
Hmmm...arrangements were beautiful to imagine... Pool side small gazebo rose petals with scented candles in water... And blue moon day... Wow its superb romantic...
Then his confession... Haayee kinne cute confession teh...wow...shaadi bhi huye nahi janaab bacche tak pounch gaye...
Wow she too confessed her love and got engaged with him in presence of million Star's shining upon them and smiling moon...wow
Then their first seal of lips after confessing it really felt very real...then cherry on the cake is rains...wow yaar just magical...
Then dinner and ice cream part was adorable one... Then panic attack on manik was shooo cute... Aww...he took one more dress for her...haayee majnu jii jaante ho aap you're very cute... Then that cheek kiss was good
Cabir in malhotra's farmhouse... Manik said everything... Naughty boy kiss ko skil kar dii...
Then super excited and overwhelmed friends chats on something but nothing topics
Haawww...poore talle ho gaye..cabir got suspected about his identity...
god knows what happens when he come out from hangover...
Superb update chinnu... Continue soonish...
Thanks for the pm...i still didn't read OS prologue... I'm fully drained out... I'll quote when I read that... Take care stay blessed..

PS: chinnu agar aapko isse zyaada lambaaa comments chaayiye toh send me ORS of apple flavor in with next update pm... Uff... Varna I'll faint... Hehehe... Jokes apart par dil se thank you for sending me pm after also not getting comments for your work couple of times... I'm sorry for that... Keep loving me the same way... I'm blessed to have you all.

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dhillon90

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Posted: 9 years ago

#179

Wowww awwsome
Amazing
Superb
Fabulous
Fantastic
Wonderfull update
Thnks for pm me
Finally sach saamne aayea...ranbir hi manik hai...beatifull manan confession...ab ye cabir aur navya ka kya past hai...enjoyed a lot...lovd it...continue soonn

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neeraja

@neeju_chinnu

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Posted: 9 years ago

#180

Originally posted by: Snehasn
Hiii chinnu...what's upp???
I so so so knew it ki he's manik only not ranbir shanbir...yayyy... From day one I'm saying this only and every time you confused me but still i was adamant ki u keep on saying ki he's manik only... See now I've proven right... Ab aap kya doge gift k tor par...hmm??
Chalo koi nahi aap bhi kya yaad rakhenge kii aapki itne crazy reader teh jo khud writer ki story ki phol first day hii khol ke pm kiye teh... 😆 😆...I'll pat myself on behalf of you that i guessed it correct... Ufff...coming to updates..haan I've so many to catch up with all thanks to you... Inne saare updates kii baarish karaaye aapne kii i found tough to take time to quote... Firstly i was hell busy with presentations and meeting's... Nextly this moron virus is busy in playing hide and seek with me from last month...huhhh

Ok let's start with manik yaani your so called ranbir taking nandu on movie date with him...
Paranormal activity like seriously... Oh gosshhh...inne saare pictures k beech aapko yahi movie milna tha kya???... I was hell scared by remembering that... Huhhh...
Nandu bade sherni ban kar andar gaye teh aur choohe ban kar vapis aaye... Hehehe... Aur jaao bhaai aur bf k khilaaf... Yahi hona hai sabnu jo elders ke against ho...
Wow Manan moments were cute...then nandu back to home...poor girl still in dazed state after seeing that movie ki she found shadow of someone in her balcony after affects of horror movies... Hehehe...lo jii khud ke neend toh udd hii chuke teh chale dusron ke bhi udhaane
Cabir is again back on protective bhaai mode... Checked CCTV... Call manik in that hour... Hehe har kisi ko mile aise bhaai why only for me.. You..or nandu and navti...huhhh...
Then their date...and revealing of so called trip to London... Jo India k Delhi mein teh...hahaha... Poor nandu fighting with her turmoil ki what those feelings were...manik's sure about his feelings... Oyee hoye...badi jaldi akal aagaye mahaashay ko...hmm nandu's absent minded behavior and always lost and busy in her phone ki she had partially forgotten about her sweet sii family... Huhhh...
Here Mr. Malhotra is back...arre wow he gifted car to navya to compensate on his mistake...
Cute sissy's baked chocolate cake for bhaai...hmmm...how sweet... Haawww...i so hate it when bhaai's make bad faces and give wrong comments on sister's culinary skills...huhh
Wow new entry Meera maa...she'so sweetheart like anjali auntie... Wow she loves manik and Navti as her children's... Hehehe...laddoo malhotra its cute...ye mom log k dialogue miss kaise nahi hote... Ki apne jawaan hatte katte beton or betiyon k dekhar bhi mom log ye bol teh hai ki kinna dugla ho gaye hai hamaara baccha... Huhh...saare mamma's ek jaise hai
Wow cabir's concern to his baby sister again took my heart away...
Here comes today's review...
Update was just amazing.. Seriously mind blowing... Manik convincing his baby sister is a treat to imagine... Wow how cute they would've agar if they shown as sibling's in tv...uff..
Then debating for hour's... Huhhh...she's so stubborn manvaa hii liye apne baat... Oohhh Mr. Malhotra had some other plans in his mind to execute... Good going lover boy... Agar sister's ko saath mein le chal teh to they would've become disturbing elements for you...
Hmmm...manik reached Bangalore and nandu got ranbir's message... Wow kya telepathy hai donon k beech...Awww our doll is becoming mental just to choose a dress... Poor girl poore room mein tsunami laa dii...wow impressive Mr. Malhotra knows every unsaid things about his cute baby princess... He sent her Attire's and accessories... Awww...lucky girl...
Hmmm...anjali auntie... Naughty auntie apne chotu ke leg pull karne mein busy hai...
Ahmmm ahmmm... Mr. Malhotra's k toh hosh hii udd gaye after watching his yet to be become lady love in such a cute frock after 15 days..Janaab hold on you guys are standing in road... Control your emotions yaar...
Ho!!so confession is going to be in farm house...
Hmmm...arrangements were beautiful to imagine... Pool side small gazebo rose petals with scented candles in water... And blue moon day... Wow its superb romantic...
Then his confession... Haayee kinne cute confession teh...wow...shaadi bhi huye nahi janaab bacche tak pounch gaye...
Wow she too confessed her love and got engaged with him in presence of million Star's shining upon them and smiling moon...wow
Then their first seal of lips after confessing it really felt very real...then cherry on the cake is rains...wow yaar just magical...
Then dinner and ice cream part was adorable one... Then panic attack on manik was shooo cute... Aww...he took one more dress for her...haayee majnu jii jaante ho aap you're very cute... Then that cheek kiss was good
Cabir in malhotra's farmhouse... Manik said everything... Naughty boy kiss ko skil kar dii...
Then super excited and overwhelmed friends chats on something but nothing topics
Haawww...poore talle ho gaye..cabir got suspected about his identity...
god knows what happens when he come out from hangover...
Superb update chinnu... Continue soonish...
Thanks for the pm...i still didn't read OS prologue... I'm fully drained out... I'll quote when I read that... Take care stay blessed..

PS: chinnu agar aapko isse zyaada lambaaa comments chaayiye toh send me ORS of apple flavor in with next update pm... Uff... Varna I'll faint... Hehehe... Jokes apart par dil se thank you for sending me pm after also not getting comments for your work couple of times... I'm sorry for that... Keep loving me the same way... I'm blessed to have you all.

u know what do i do whn im xtremely happy...?

i cry... same was the case whn i saw ur comment... i was smiliing same time tears started rolling down my eyes bluring my vision making me difficult to read... i love u yaar... ssly..i love u to moon nd back... im just totally at loss of wrds... i just cant say thnks..coz it would b a small wrd to say...i dnt no wht to say nw..but thnks... thnk u sooo sooo much... u no wht..whn i toldmy sis dat a grl is nt accepting da fact that Ranbir is nt der nd confirmed dat he is Manik nly nd is posting da same in rply... frm dat day onwards whnever i update she asks me..di wht did she say today... u r da 2nd person who call me Chinnu aftr my bro who callse so nd he himself gavee that name...

once again thnku fr u lambaaa update lke comment... tak care...

keep smiling..

may god fulfil all ur wishes... stay blessed...

urs Chinnu