ADarkMaNanSS-WILL MAKE YOU MINE CH-7 PG-30 25/10 - Page 11

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Posted: 9 years ago
Wow Nice
Getting interesting day by day
I was eagerly waiting for this
N thanks for the PM
Keep smiling n keep writing like this
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N don't worry length of the update doesn't matter. The main thing which matters more is the content of the update n honestly saying this story is something different n superb.
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Posted: 9 years ago
Woooww mtlb how, how do u always amaze me by ur updates
Its awesome, i luvd it
Update soon
Eagerly waiting
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Posted: 9 years ago
it was amazing update. Please post the next part soon. Thanks for the pm. Thank you dear. Keep smiling 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
Very nice update... ''
Hope all mysteries open ASAP...
Update nxt part soon...
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Posted: 9 years ago
Nice update.. janvi is manan's daughter..wow.. i guess maybe dis ws d reason she left mumbai. . Update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
nice update...Nd nxt part plz update soon 🤗
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Posted: 9 years ago
update was awesome
ohh so janvi manik ka daughter hey
day by day the story is going really interesting.
waiting for next update
cont soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
Nice update
Loved it
Update the next part soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
awesome update...
loved all of it...
manik was rally harsh on nandu...xant believe it...
i think janvi is manik and nandu's daughter...
can't wait to know more about the past...please include manik's condition as well...keep up the good work and continue soon...
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Posted: 9 years ago
So Thank you Everyone for encouraging the story..

CHAPTER-4

LONDON HOTEL..

The day's event shocked everyone too the core..
They didn't knew that Nandini was pregnant when she left but was it the real reason or did something else aslo happened 5 years back??

They knew that now it was high time and they should talk to manik about it...
After all it was his right to know that nandini was pregnant..( what FAB 4 thought )

Collecting the keys of their respective rooms , they all marched towards manik's room...
They started to ring the doorbell like if he wouldn't open door the very next second the Earth would just finish or so...

MANIK'S POV..

I was lying on the bed like everyday thinking about NANDINI and what all i did with her when someone started to ring the bell like a lunatic... I mean seriously like a maniac...

I stood up and went to open the door.. As soon as i opened the door a fumming red Fab 4 entered the room or rather attacked the room as well as me..

C- salle tujhe toh main jinda jala dunga...

A- manik hame sab samajh aa gaya tha but still we didn't expected this from you , second time bhi

Mu- aur kitni bari kiya tunne... Huh?? Bol chup kyun hai??

D- guys usse pehle poori baat goh batao...

C- yeah actually dhruv you are right... Manik tujhe pata hai aaj hum N.M ke show par gayi the...

M- aur yeh NM kaun hai??

D- NANDINI MURTHY

And this left manik baffaled.. Tears started to form in his eyes. He wanted to see her and ask her how are you?? Wanted to say " I AM SORRY NANDINI.. PLEASE MUJHE EK CHANCE DE DO. I WILL MAKE IT OK. PLEASE JUST ON CHANCE "
He came out from his thoughts when Cabir shook him..

C- aur thuje pata hai.. Jab ussne mumbai choda tab woh pregnant thi...

They all expected him too be shocked but what he did rose their anger to a new level..

He just bowed down his head and started crying silently...

Mu- wait don't tell me tujhe pata tha??

He just shook his head in affarmation...

Mu- you bloody knew it still tune usse jane diya. I didn't knew that you are such a bas***d...

While saying this Mukti literally held his neck and pushed him till the very end of the room..

M- i am sorry...

He just fell on his knees and started crying histerically...

M- i am so sorry , i know that maine yeh crime kiya hai issko theek nahi kar sakte but still i can do any thing to make it up to her...

A- and do you really think ki aab kuchh theek ho sakta hai...
You bloody knew that she was pregnant with your baby but still tumne usse jane diya and hamme bataya bhi nahin...

C- you know what you f**king deserve this , this what you got... And you should just get that in your head because... You know what.. Just leave it..
Abb tu hame bataye ga ki hua kya tha...

M- haan woh..

FLASHBACK.. ( 4 years 11 months back )

It was the launch of her first album. The party was a lavish one...
Dressed in a royal black backless gown nandini entered the hall. Her hair were done in a neat bun. With slight makeup she was looking very breathtaking. What should i say...ummm... Aahh i got it..!! VINTAGE BEAUTY !!
It describe her look perfectly..

Everyone's eyes were on her..
She was greates by everyone and then replying them politely she went to the table reserved for her... Of course with Fab 5

A- you are looking beautiful nandini..

N- thanks alya and tum bhi bohot achhi lag rahi ho..

A- see nandini tum ho mujhe compliment karne wali first , yeh log toh na...

And both of them giggled..

( so abhi aap log sochh rahe hoge ki inki itni achhi friendship... So in logon ko pata toh hai hi but kabhi us bate mein baat nahin karte but yeah ek mahina ho gaya hai and recording sogns ki karte wakt bhi Fab 5 wahin rehta tha so they became friends actually good friends , specially Mukti , Alya with Nandini.. )

Host- good evening ladies and gentlemen , so as we all are here for the launch of the album "1986" i would like Miss.Nandini Murthy to come upon the stage and sing a song for us...

Nandini came upon the stage..

N- good evening ladies and gentlemen and thank you for coming
So the first song of the album is "NAZAR LAYE NA"


Maine haara, main tera saara main
Meetha meetha tu, haan khaara khaara main
Tera saara main, saara main (x2)

Sindoori rang suhagan saccha
Saccha re sarmaya jo paaya hai woh
Tu dil mein maahi aaya hai
Maine maahi paaya hai
Nazar laaye naa, koi nazar laaye naa

Dil ne shagun manaaya hai
Ishq parauhna aaya hai
Nazar laaye na, koi nazar laaye na
Nazar laaye jo tumko jal jaaye woh
Chaand le jug begana ho
Nazar laaye na..
Nazar laaye na..

Maine haara, main tera saara main
Meetha meetha tu, khaara khaara main
Tera saara main, saara main (x2)

Kaajal, teeka peeche kaanon ke
Nazaron ko roke re
Duniya deti laakhon hi dhokhe
Meethi si hoke re
Tamki main mirche varoon
Saari sharam utaarun
Maahi naa jug ko haarun
Kehta hai dil...
Kehta hai dil...

Maine haara, main tera saara main
Meetha meetha tu, khaara khaara main
Tera saara main, saara main...


After the performance nandini was coming back to her seat when someone pulled her to a corner...

N- kya hai manik..

M- well nandini you are looking beautiful... I must say nice choice..
He said with a smirk..

N- ho gaya yan aur kuchh bhu hai nahin toh main jaun...

M- arre jao na maine kab roka...
But ek baat sun ke jao , i want you in room no. 1562 within 10 minutes...

And saying this manik left..
Nandini felt her cheeks getting wet.. Well yeah she started crying...
( well baki toh aap sab khud hi samajhdar ho )

FLASHBACK ENDS..

And THUD..

He got a tight slap and that too from Alya...
But he knew he deserved this... This all hatered is the fruit of his deeds..

M- i am so sorry ( sobbing )

C- but tune abhi tak real reason nahi bataya...

M- haan...woh...abb...wooh..woh

D- yeh.. Woh.. Amm ke agge kuchh bole ga..??

M- haan..

ON THE OTHER HAND...

N- thank you Sanya , agar us din tum logon ne yeh decision nahin liya hota toh aaj main kya karti...

S- arre Nandini you got what you deserved..
Aur Janvi kaise hai..??

N- haan janu toh theek hai...

S- waise nandini tumne mujhe abhi tak nahin bataya ki tumne woh deal achanak chod kyun di...
Matlab tum pregnant thi is liye ya aur kuchh bhi , you know ki tum mujhe bata sakti ho..
Maine aaj tak poochha nahin kyun ki mujhe pata hai tum comfortable nahi ho but if you feel like you know tum mujhe bata sakti ho...

N- haan.. Woh..



So guys i am back...
Aab toh next update mein real reason aa jayega...
Agar comments karo toh aaj raat tak update de sakti hoon nahin toh phir wait karna padega...
Depends on you all...


( while writing this , i was saying it all in a very polite manner to myself So please polite manner mein hi read karna )

Aur waise guys phirse bol rahi hoon isse liye kyun ki koi samajh nahin raha ki the respose is disappointing...
Comments kam ho rahe hai aur likes bhi toh aab next chapter achhe respose pe hi milega nahin toh bas is ke aage i can't write with such response...
I am first ch pe 77 likes third pe 68 comment toh iske addhe bhi nahin karte it hurts so please if you could comment toh meherbani nahin toh just answer this question ki why should i waste my time in writing this if the response is just decreasing.?? Why should i waste my time in weiting this if you all aren't liking it??

Starting me response achha tha... So hamari bhi kuchh expectations hoti hain if you all could comment then only i can write or it's the end...


CS OF SANYA...
SHE IS THE MANAGER OF T-SERIES IN LONDON..
GOOD FRIEND OF NANDINI..
BAKI KA HOPEFULLY NEXT CHAPTER MEIN SABKO SAMAJH AAJAYEGA...



Toh comments karna start karo...

LOADS OF LOVE

ADYA..







Edited by Adya05 - 9 years ago

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