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Posted: 9 years ago
#31
Thank you everyone for the support and love..
SURPRISE

I am back with an update..

CHAPTER-2A

NANDINI'S POV

After that incident i went straight to home and rang the bell.

Mom- are nandu tu ro kyun rahi hai..

Well yeah i was crying whole way thinking of what he did and many more things like now he would blackmail me and like if i didn't slept with him then he can take the contract from me but i need to do this it's really important for me , for papa...

N- kuchh nahin...wo...wo i am not ...feeling welll ma...main kamre mein ja rahi...

And then i rushed to my room , bolt the door and start crying...

Yeh kya ho raha hai mere sath..isse. Isse stupid se singer ke job se better thi meri life...haan manna paise kam the but self respect thi papa ki society mein...lekin yeh bhi zarrori hai aur agar maine uski baat nahin maani to...nahi nahi main uske ghar nahin jaungi... Kal tak ka wait karte hain...

Tring...tring...tring...my phone rang...
It was some private number...

N- hello whose this??

M- its manik so kya decide kiya are you coming...you know i don't have whole day...

N- are you mad i am not coming...and tum..tumhare pass..tumhare pass mera number kahan se aaya...

M- ohhh god...you are so dumd...dont you know owner who main SONY LABELS
ka

Well i thought ki that was a stupid question...

M- and you know ki agar tum nahin aayi toh main yeh deal tumse le sakta hoon aur mujhe yeh bhi pata hai ki yeh tumhari aur tumhari dad ke liye kitni important hai...

N- hey tumhe mere dad ke bare mein kaise...

M- tch tch tch god tum bhul kyun jati ho ki main THE MANIK MALHOTRA hoon

N- yeah THE MANIK MALHOTRA jisse sirf logon ke sath khelna aata hai... Manik Malhota ...sorry sorry THE ARROGANT MANIK MALHOTRA... But you know what main tumse darti nahin...( she was crying continously )

M- hey mind your tounge young lady...tum janti nahin ho kem main kya kar sakta hoon...if you want this deal then then be at my place...Exactly at 8:00 pm

And he cut the call.

Aab main kya karun...fayada utha raha hai yeh meri majboori ka..
Mana kar doon deal ke liye ...
But dad...unka operation nahin hoga phir...
I think ke mujhe jana parega...but...

AUTHOR'S POV

She was fighting a battle between her heart and mind
Her mind said ki you don't have to do this and on the other hand her heart said ki agar apne dad ke liye apni kurbani deni pare toh wo bhi deni chahiye aur yeh sirf ek raat ki baat hai. Sirf apne dad ke liye... Jisne paise ki kami hote hua bhi tere sari sapne poore kiye... Only for him..

The rest of the day passed in a blink and here Nandini was sitting in front of her dressing table getting ready in a hot red dress because of his stupid message ( or may be woh aapne night suit mein hi chali jati..)

" you should look appealing , don't think ki tum kaisi bhi aaogi aur main tumhe jaane doonga" - Manik

Well manik knew aayegi jaroor woh..

At 8:00 pm MALHOTRA MANSION

Nandini was baffeled seeing the mansion. She entered the mansion and a sevant came. He handed her the paper..which said

" first floor second room.."

Once she thought to run away but then again the thought of her father stopped her. She went to the room and was shocked. It more of looked like a bar with a bed and dim lights. It seemed as if everyday he brought a new girl to fullfil his desires..
( well main yeh bhi batana bhool gayi ki manik ki habit thi to be physical every day )

She was standing when manik came out of the washroom and saw her and smirked...

M- i so knew ki tum aaogi..

And without giving her a chance to speak he placed his lips on her's and pushed her towards the wall. There was hardly any space between their bodies which were provoking his desires. He was very harsh and he also bit her lower lip hard which started bleeding...

On the other hand nandini stood under him without any knowledge of what is happening. She was just too shocked to react. She started feeling disgusted of her self just after a kiss

NOTE:-

FOR PM BUDDY ME OR ELSE I CAN MISS OUT SOME OF YOU...

Abhi ke liye itna wo bhi sirf iss liye kyunki mujhe bohot khushi hui itne comments dekh kar... And as i am giving long updates so yeh story ke zyada parts nahin honge like i guess around 10 will be enough for it...
Baki ka Action next part mein jo ki hopefully i will update till tuesday...
Next part will be of THE FAULT IN OUR STARS...
Do comments wo bhi lamba lamba like first part ka response bilkul vaise hi...

LOADS OF LOVE

ADYA..

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Posted: 9 years ago
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itsss a niceee update yar... like it.. bechari nandu what she will do... vo sacrifice. .itsss soo .. n manik he just want her for one night.. itss gonna be interesting. ... :-) :-) :-) :-) ;-) ;-) love it .. . ... itsss quite awesome. .. ..I just love it .. now wait for next. ... keep updating like this. ... update soon. . waiting for next update eagerly impatiently. .. thanks for this update. ... thanks for pm too. .. lotsss of luv. ... :-) :-) ;-) :-) :-) :-) :-) :-) :-)
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Posted: 9 years ago
#33
Nice update so manik is taking advantage of her situation pata nhi an nandu ka kya hoga I think manik is gonna fall for her at the end so it I asani se nandu KO nhi chodega. Waiting for next hot update.
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Posted: 9 years ago
#34
Awesome update ...hope they fall in love soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Thanks for the pm.n update!! So nandini did agree...I have a feeling that manik might end up doing nothing...who knows..but since this is a dark story nobody knows what might happen...
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Posted: 9 years ago
#36
Nice... but bohut short updt tha...plz thora lamba wala updt karo...
Eww...manik's charactr is really v dark...

Plz continue soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
#37
Nyc update...
Thanx for pm...
Aw nandu ka sacrifice...
Now waiting for the day when manik and nandini started loving each other...
Eagerly waiting for next part...
Updaye soon..

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Posted: 9 years ago
#38
Awesome update...yaar its a requedt to update next part soon plzz...n u deserve applause for ur work..keep it up! Stay blessed!!.. Keep writing 😃 ⭐️ 👏
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: millie17

Nice... but bohut short updt tha...plz thora lamba wala updt karo...
Eww...manik's charactr is really v dark...

Plz continue soon


Baby please don't say ki short tha..
I mean first was really long..jaan leli thi us update ne..
But this is seacond update ka A part and B will be up soon...
So please aur seacond prob. Ki exam ke padhayi ke beech yeh update kiya..
Do appreciate the story and critisice as well but update ke liye abhi mat bolo..
Aur 30th ke bad i wont update in parts like A and B but in a full chapter...
Ohkay..
Thanks you...well your comment shows you were eager to read so keep commenting and loving me...
Heheheheheh...
Bye...
Adya05 thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: shivanichauhan1

Awesome update...yaar its a requedt to update next part soon plzz...n u deserve applause for ur work..keep it up! Stay blessed!!.. Keep writing 😃 ⭐️ 👏


Aawww..heheheh..thanku vely muchhh...
Hehe...main poore baby mode main hoon abhi...!!!
U know applause vali baat kissi ne nahin boli...
Love you yaar...mood achha ho gaya...!!!
U know exams disgust me...i really during exams it is the most pathetic period aur wo bhi hindi ka..
So your comment did a miracle and i feel like dancing and wo bhi at the mention of a mere word applause...
Love yaa...bye
And keep commenting and loving me..

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