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Cooldude101

@Cooldude101

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 9 years ago

#181

Originally posted by: A.Hajnal

"Sometimes at the best moments a single word or a look is enough."
- Honore De Balzac

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Dedicated to the amazing Cooldude101; she has ranted, cried, pleaded and begged from God to the fairy god for this moment to come soon. When 4 months before I imagined and had penned a small part of this moment, I had decided I would dedicate this chapter to her. So here it is, you all will like it! :)

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That quote at the start couldn't have been truer.😳
THE BIGGEST FANGIRL MOMENT OF MY LIFE!!!!!🥳
Finally the god acknowledges the stupid little follower. (Not that you didn't earlier, but this is another level❤️)
That moment in your life, when fiction turns into non-fiction and you become a sidekick in your own life, I think I have felt it all in this precise moment, the time I was reading the update with a roaring heart and a very curious word-thirsty mind.
You have that effect on me, your story influences some moments in my life, and the other are spent thinking about the possibilities of everything being right and what could happen in the story and what not.
They say an empty mind is the devil's workshop, but my mind is filled with your thoughts when nothing else is left to be thought about.
Thank you, this couldn't have been more beautiful than this.
The feeling and the expectations were all so justified today, today I understood that sometimes keeping high expectations pays off, you are the very example of it.
This chapter conveyed all those feelings, those emotions that define why MaNan are still such an essential part of our life. The beauty of the moments captured so beautifully that I couldn't stop my tears from falling along with being in the most euphoric state, I could be.
The beauty of literature over videos were reiterated today for me.
Nothing I can say or do can ever be enough to thank you my author, nothing can.
Yours Faithfully,
Smriti😳

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Ankahee

@Ankahee

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#182

Res 😳

Beautiful chapter, the moment was perfect, it has been coming for so long, the pitch just right, the build up just as it should be, and the moment itself, breathless. The saying "holding my breath" totally relevant.

I must say first, I really like how you wrote Silvia, she pops out so well, visually, she comes alive. Not sure where this is going, but I am looking forward to reading a bit more of Edmond and her, see how much you made me think of these characters too.

And then the context how they are in the story, the part that is missing, with time and Manik. They are the ones who know, all the missing bits. Silvia thought, Nandini is a figment of imagination, ghost, a story, all this while, when everyone was telling Nandini the same about Manik.

Manik and Nandini, both were in a different space time, which didn't exist for others, and yet, they both did and knew.

Finally they meet, they know, and yes Nandini's delusions are as contagious as Cabir's sense of humor...😆

Wonderful writing as always. Looking forward to next part. ⭐️

Edited by Ankahee - 9 years ago

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A.Hajnal

@A.Hajnal

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#183

Originally posted by: Cooldude101

That quote at the start couldn't have been truer.😳
THE BIGGEST FANGIRL MOMENT OF MY LIFE!!!!!🥳
Finally the god acknowledges the stupid little follower. (Not that you didn't earlier, but this is another level❤️)
That moment in your life, when fiction turns into non-fiction and you become a sidekick in your own life, I think I have felt it all in this precise moment, the time I was reading the update with a roaring heart and a very curious word-thirsty mind.
You have that effect on me, your story influences some moments in my life, and the other are spent thinking about the possibilities of everything being right and what could happen in the story and what not.
They say an empty mind is the devil's workshop, but my mind is filled with your thoughts when nothing else is left to be thought about.
Thank you, this couldn't have been more beautiful than this.
The feeling and the expectations were all so justified today, today I understood that sometimes keeping high expectations pays off, you are the very example of it.
This chapter conveyed all those feelings, those emotions that define why MaNan are still such an essential part of our life. The beauty of the moments captured so beautifully that I couldn't stop my tears from falling along with being in the most euphoric state, I could be.
The beauty of literature over videos were reiterated today for me.
Nothing I can say or do can ever be enough to thank you my author, nothing can.
Yours Faithfully,
Smriti😳

Awww...You are so damn cute and sweet!!! 🤗

I am so, so glad I could make you this happy and that I was somehow able to deliver as per you expectations, believe me, I was so scared for falling short, esp whenever I thought about the expectation you have from this moment. But I am so happy and relieved that you liked it so much!

@Italic:- Wait a min, so I was the God of this fic? 😲 Dude, you are crazy...😆

I am glad now you know that I always had you and you expectation & prayers in my mind when I was writing this chapter. 😳

@Bold:- Your words, a high of another level when I read your words and get to know that I could make you feel the MaNan magic again. Because that is the most amazing thing ever, the power, the ability to make one feel MaNan's magic again. It's not one of Richa's or PaNi's, but yea, we have to be happy with whatever we can get...😛

You already do that, with your words and your trust, for always patiently waiting, for always reminding me why is that I am writing...Thank you, Smriti, for being the amazing reader that you are...🤗

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Sandhya098

@Sandhya098

Navigator

Posted: 9 years ago

#184

Hello dear... Just picked up ur story randomly n believe me read all parts in ur go without blinking even after my migraine problem n my head is paining like hell but still I was reading like a maniac...

Superbly penned every part was awesome...

Cabir I just love him he is really such a true friend...

Navya is also a sweetheart...

Aaliya n dhruv how shallow they are...

Nandu never loose her hopes n found manik...

The last chapter was so emotional...

Finally manan meet...

Cabir was so shocked...

N the quotes u used r superb...

Waiting for the next part update soon eagerly waiting...

Please accept my buddy request n pm me...

Continue soon...

Thanks for sharing such an amazing story...

Really attached to ur story...

Keep writing...

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tanu45

@tanu45

Explorer

Posted: 9 years ago

#185

I loved your story. please update soon. 😊

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A.Hajnal

@A.Hajnal

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#186

@noor.21:- Thank you so much for your kind words, Noor...🤗

@nita24:- Hey you, thank you so much. And don't mention it, you are always welcome. 🤗

@Tasniya09:- Yes, Finally MaNan meet! Thank you. 😳

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A.Hajnal

@A.Hajnal

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#187

@bhagupur:- Thank you for always leaving such sweet and kind comments.

I agree, the moment was like time has frozen.

You are always welcome! 🤗

@Tanu45:- Thank you so much, for reading and for the sweet comment! 😳

I am in the prosses to post it, a few days more. 😃

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A.Hajnal

@A.Hajnal

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#188

Originally posted by: Sandhya098
Hello dear... Just picked up ur story randomly n believe me read all parts in ur go without blinking even after my migraine problem n my head is paining like hell but still I was reading like a maniac...
Superbly penned every part was awesome...

Cabir I just love him he is really such a true friend...

Navya is also a sweetheart...

Aaliya n dhruv how shallow they are...

Nandu never loose her hopes n found manik...

The last chapter was so emotional...

Finally manan meet...

Cabir was so shocked...

N the quotes u used r superb...

Waiting for the next part update soon eagerly waiting...

Please accept my buddy request n pm me...

Continue soon...

Thanks for sharing such an amazing story...

Really attached to ur story...

Keep writing...

Oh, Welcome, Fresh blood...!!! 😈 lol

I am so, so glad you found the story so interesting...And liked it so much that read it in one go, that is a huge compliment...😳

I can't help but agree with the words you said. Cabir is love. He and Manik are and always will be cherished by those who know the true value of friendship. They define friendship in it's truest form...

I am so glad you found the quotes interesting. 😃

Will surely PM you when I update. 😳

Thank you so much for such kind and sweet words...🤗

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bashful_moon

@bashful_moon

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#189

Heyaa writer... Whassup???

Please give yourself a tight wala hug on my behalf... Firstly for those wonderful chapters 8, 9 and this chapter 10 and secondly for writing without any expectations... Your honesty and your passion sets you apart and I mean it...

Anais Nin --- " We write to taste life twice, in the moment and in retrospect"...

Thanks a tonne writer for making this quote come true.. We sang, breathed and lived Manan in all their glory while they lasted.. We are still living in our alternate universes of Manan's happily ever fter and still stalking, lurking and even dwelling on nostalgia lane ending at Manan' s abode... But when it comes to the writings like yours, your dreams come alive and your fantasies get wings... I might forever reside in Manan land but it is your words that would make my stay vivid and pleasant... We are both living in retrospect - You through your writings and I through your words. .. Thanks for this life writer...

Finally they have come face to face with each other.. Hope and risilience have paid off, it seems... I loved Cabir's POV... Well he is doing all this for the girl who was ( as he is still doubtful of Manik's existence) his friend's life and now also someone very dear to him. But he is also doing it for himself : well he might have loved Manik unconditionally among Fab 4 but he is after all a human isn't he???... There is a limit to which even he can hold on... He desires a closure too... Justifiable??? -Probably yes probably no!!! Understandable???--- Definitely yes!!!

My Nandu- the firefly personified - tiny but tenacious, shattered yet still strong, dejected but still dauntless... Well I fo not think I can ever do justice with my words as yo how much I love this Nandini, monster Manik's Nandini... All I could do was wish her all the best... This is THE Nandini ( I know my Grammar teacher would die of a heart attack on such a misuse of article) of THE MANIK MALHOTRA ( double whammy!!!! I know)!!!

Chacha is also guided by motive similar to Cabir but it is natural i suppose... It retains the human quality but the essence of the man he is is still intact... I love and respect this Chacha tooo...

Better not to talk about Alya, Dhruv and Mukti.. They make Nyonica sound much better... For all the bitchiness Nyonika played fair... She gave when she took something but with these three morons it is just take and take and take.. Who need an enemy if one has friends like them???

Guess should stop all the asinine ramblings and senseless rants here. Keep writing and ignore the typos as I'm typing from my phone.

Edited by bashful_moon - 9 years ago

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A.Hajnal

@A.Hajnal

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#190

Originally posted by: Ankahee
Res 😳

Beautiful chapter, the moment was perfect, it has been coming for so long, the pitch just right, the build up just as it should be, and the moment itself, breathless. The saying "holding my breath" totally relevant.

I must say first, I really like how you wrote Silvia, she pops out so well, visually, she comes alive. Not sure where this is going, but I am looking forward to reading a bit more of Edmond and her, see how much you made me think of these characters too.

And then the context how they are in the story, the part that is missing, with time and Manik. They are the ones who know, all the missing bits. Silvia thought, Nandini is a figment of imagination, ghost, a story, all this while, when everyone was telling Nandini the same about Manik.

Manik and Nandini, both were in a different space time, which didn't exist for others, and yet, they both did and knew.

Finally they meet, they know, and yes Nandini's delusions are as contagious as Cabir's sense of humor...😆

Wonderful writing as always. Looking forward to next part. ⭐️

You updated!!!

God, I can't tell you in words how much your feedback makes me giddy with joy! 😳

Oh, I can't tell you how much Silvia has made me cry with frustration. She took +3 months to come out and reveal herself. She and Edmond have a story on their own and I am pushing them to talk with me, knowing that they will take months to spill something interesting for me to write...😆

^ God, I can scare anyone with the way I talk about these characters but I can talk to you this way as you understand. 😳

@bold:- See, that makes them more interesting, doesn't it? They know all about Manik, a part of his life which is unknown to Nandini, the readers and a part of which even I don't know.

@Italic:- I so want to talk you about all of it but for that all you have to wait just a bit more. 😃

@RED:- Awwiiee, you talking about MaNan...Best thing ever...!!!

Word, Cabir is love, bas...!!! 😳

Thank you so much, for everything!!! 🤗