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noor.21

@noor.21

Explorer

Posted: 9 years ago

#161

If there is possibility of meeting, would they meet soon? Manik and Nandini that is.

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Jyoti

@bhagupur

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#162

Thanks for pm.dear

This is a very difficult story. ..

Manik is lost 4 years back. ...

And now nandni is searching him. ..like inch by inch move...

Cabir help her like a good friend or brother. ..

But didn't seen...imagination boy from last chapters. .

What is happening with him. ..

Looking forward to seeing ...

Stay blessed dear...

Thanks.

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nita24

@nita24

Explorer

Posted: 9 years ago

#163

Hey amazing story
Pls pm me too next time
Tc

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Cooldude101

@Cooldude101

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 9 years ago

#164

I want to jump out of my seat and cry out both with satisfaction and annoyance. Matlab they are so so close, but no you just had to end it there na?😭
Manik, Nandu aaa rahi haiii!🥱
I am going to go read the first chapter again, which gave us a status of Manik Malhotra's brain, that guy saw her too, felt the connection but didn't know who she was? Why? whhhyyy?😵
I don't get time to complement you since I'm so so stuck in my ranting that this time I'm going to take this comment to say that I am so proud of myself to find this story,( oh no it's so much more than just a story, but I don't know what to call it? Hope to a better ending? Yeah that suits it.) and feel sorry for all those who haven't read this and don't know the value of literature.
You couldn't have been more amazing for me, in my eyes, though I have no idea about you, but you are such an inspiring person for people who want to try writing, while I am a pure science person and shouldn't be crying out or lashing out on MaNan's goddamn fate, but can't help it!
Half of the times my words make no sense, but credits to you as you take them into your stride and feel motivated by them. I don't know what I would do if you didn't.😕
So next updates, hopes are on a skyscraper level, higher than the Burj Khalifa, and plaese please just get me some Manik, man.
Love you dude! Respect!😳

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Ankahee

@Ankahee

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#165

Fantastic and upbeat tone of update, the bend that was not seen, has finally arrived. Loved the positivity. Little hopes, grudgingly sneaking back into Cabir, the breakthrough at the end, tenacity of Nandini of never giving up finally rewarding unexpectedly. The surprise of unexpected help can brighten the day just a bit brighter. The feeling when one is almost there...almost...

I find it very interesting how Cabir thinks of them as mirrors, and cannot think of them separately, but ends up thinking of them together always. He is definitely perceptive.

Man-ek? Punning on completely different level here indeed, in more ways than one. Brilliant. 😆

Waiting for next update😃

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Ankahee

@Ankahee

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#166

Originally posted by: A.Hajnal

Haha, so the update made you un-res...That is a huge compliment for me...Even though your kindness has more to do with it than anything else...😆

Your words, Dude...Your words...They give me a high that nothing else can...You are always so genurse with your words and so encouraging...And nothing makes me more happy than making you feel connected with the characters that are so precious to me...😳

I can-t wait, I CAN NOT wait to introduce you to Manik...He is amazing... Makes me speechless...Even though I doubt I can do justice to this character, I hope and wish to at least show you a glimpse of him with my writing...Enough to make you know him, if not you fall for him...

The attempt is to convey the purpose of the chapter in the quotes...😃 But I am so glad you like them. I know your love for good quotes, so I try to come up with something new everytime, a few times to also show off the writers I know...😆

Like 'Luigi Pirandello' is my fav Italian writer...I did my college thesis on his works...He is the experts on madness, Identity, social pressure and so much more...An amazing writer he was...I will post my fav quotes of him with Manik...I have saved the best ones for him...Wait for them, you are going to love those ones...😳

"We all grasp on to a single idea of ourselves, the way aging people dye their hair. It's no matter that this dye doesn't fool you. My lady, you don't dye your hair to deceive other people, or to fool yourself, but rather to cheat your image in your mirror a little."

Luigi Pirandello, Enrico IV - Diana e la Tuda

Cannot wait for this part of the story to begin too. 😳

I think it is really cool concept of starting the chapters with quotes, setting to the tone of the update. I have read books that do this, and I really like it cause it gives us an insight into what author reads and considers significant enough to share. Loved the quote you used here, so true, describes, smoke and mirrors phrase to the t, mirrors and deception hand in hand. I will look up this writer, and lucky you, for not only having studied him, but thesis work too. Looking forward to many more quotes, and of course the chapters that will make this beautiful story complete. 😊

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ershilpavyas

@ershilpavyas

Beginner

Posted: 9 years ago

#167

You r going at very slow pace dear its reducing my love for story...no doubt u r excellent writer but too much gap b/w updates makes me lose interest...pls update soon next time 😊

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Khushbu

@gudda_k

Navigator

Posted: 9 years ago

#168

manik is lost from 4 years...

amazing update...

loved it...

continue soon...

thanks for pm dear...😊

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A.Hajnal

@A.Hajnal

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#169

A/N:- I am way too late this time, I know and I am very sorry for it. My laptop crashed down out of nowhere but thank God I had saved some part of the chapter with me. But still had to re-write most of the chapter. So the chapter is ready, will send it to beta and will try to send it the sec she sends it back to me. Thank you for being patient with me! 🤗

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A.Hajnal

@A.Hajnal

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#170

Originally posted by: shreya31
Firstly, I dunno wat to say!! It is an awesome build up, the journey of Nandini inching closer to Manik slow & steady, her emotions, her belief, Cabir' belief in Manan, Cabir' emotions related to the accident, his need for Man-ek as friend, brother, confidante!!!!! Each n every emotion is so well potrayed tht every reader wud hv had a sad smile on their face while reading the part about cabir's anguish.
The Man-ek symbolism continues😊
As always, Cabir is love😳his last thought in his sub-conscious, it ws bang on!!
M so glad m reading something as beautiful as ur story!! I love ur writing n i also like tht quotes tht u use in the chapters😊 i really wanna know how do u find quotes whch r apt for each chapter???
Ll b waiting for the next chapter😳
I hope i m the first to comment like last time😛

Thank you so much, Shreya! 🤗

Your words mean so much, it makes me smile and motivate me to continue! 😳

I am glad you like the quotes I use. About the how do I find the right now? I try to find a quote on the emotion that describes the whole chapter. Something, a word, a feeling, an emotion that defines the chapter in the true sense.

Haha, I wish you all the best for it. Let's see if you can hattrick this time. 😉