MananSS---PURE BLISS - updated chapter : 6 pg 12 - Page 7

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hey nice story
Continue soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
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When will u post next chapter? Tomorrow?
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Heyyy!!!!guysss
Longgg time ...
Hope ap sab log acche honge...
I know I know...
Ap log bhout gussa hoge na...
I am really very sorry...
But don't u worry ...
I promise 17th march se I will update daily..
Pakka promise...meri boardss paas AA rahi hai...I am
Really very tensend...and isliye hi I didn't update
Again sorry...but please ab aur 15 dayss...and then I will
Update back to back...pakkka...
Please dua karna ...and wish me luck ...
Highly tensend ...10th ki boardss start ho rahi hai meri
8th march se ...
And once it gets over matlab17th march ko I will update
Daily...I promise to compensate

And yaa...cmng to the story
Abhi toh story sirf start hoyi hai...
Picture you abhi baki hai mere dost..
There are lotss and lotss of romance..drama...action
And many more thing
I promise u will enjoy fully

Cholo now byeee...will update on 17th march...pakka
Plzz dua karna and plzzz wish me luck...
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Edited by manan_truelove - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Edited by manan_truelove - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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hey guys I am back I knw I am late I am really sry for that...and thanku u soo much for all ur wishes to all the readers one more thing I am also on wattpad and there also I will be posting pure bliss

my user name is : zeen_1212
u all can have a look...one last thing plzz its arequest do not tell about the leangth of the chapters as this stoey is all planned till end and if I will make the chapters big then this story will get over faster...hope u all understand
enough of me ; here is all of urs update..
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chapter--5
TO LOVE IS TO CARE ...
manik and nandini enter the canteen and saw that abhi and fab4 were sitting together and chatting and were surprise to see it and soo to grab there attention manik spoke loudly
manik- woohooo!!!!! yeh hum kya dekh rahe hai nandu ...fab 4 and abhi are sitting together and chatting...wow that amazing and something new ...haina nandu...!!!!
nan-yaa ...wese guys tum log itne dheree se kya baatein kar rahe ho hum bhi toh bolo ...tum logo kya baatein kar rahe ho...
*fab 4 and abhi were to surprised to see them and couldn't answer and so after sitting on the chair manik spoke*
manik-kya ??? tum log ease kya dekh rahe ho hum dono ko ...
alien hai kya hum dono..kuch toh bolo
*calming himself cabir spoke*
cabir- ahhh!!!!!! acha tum dono aaagaye nandu tu apne Bhai ko aur manik tu yeh lady bheem ko samja ..kab se yeh dono ladh rahe hai aur hum logo ko pakka rahe hai ...
manik- achcha ...par aesa lag toh nahi raha tha...
nan- tum log sab kya chupa rahe ho..?????
mukti- yaar ...manik chal na yaar hum lodg sab teri hi wait kae rahe the lets go practise ...
manik- are par...
*dhruv said before manik could complete*
dhruv-yaa buddy chod yeh sab lets leave ...we have to practise a lot
abhi -yaa nandu chal ...muje tere se kuch kaam hai
*before manik and nandini could react abhi dragged nandini out of canteen and fab 4 took manik to the jamming room they all didn't let them say anything to eachother *
*OUT OF CANTEEN*
NAN-aree Bhai wait na atleast mani..ko muje bye toh bolne dijeye...wait na..
abhi[with fake sadness]- ha...ha.. ja tere Bhai se zyada wo tera manik tere liye imp hai...haina...
nan- aree Bhai.. ap aesa kyu bol rahe ho...aesa kuch nahi hai...bolye ap ko kya kam hai...
abhi-umm..kamm...haa..lets.letss go home..chal
nan-aree par Bhai..abhi toh collage khatam bhii nahi hui hai..aur
mani..
abhi-aree phir se manik...mene toh socha lets spend some time together phele ki tarah jis tarah hum log spend karte the ...aur wese bhi kinne time se hum dono ne acche se baat bhi nahi ki...
aur tu hai ke uss manik ke piche padi hai ..jaa ussi ke saat karle tera sara time spend..
*nandu being innocent felt bad*
nan- umm sry Bhai...chalye ghar ..aj me sirf mere Bhai ke saat rahungi..okk
abhi- superb... tera phone dena..
nan- phone kyu Bhai?????
abhi- aree meri pyaari bhena... agar hum dono ke pass phone hoge toh hum isme hi busy rahenge aur saat me ho kar bhi saat me time spend nahi kar payenge...
nan-ohk Bhai..yeh lo..
*abhi took nandini's phone and switched it off as per cabir plan
they didn't wanted to meet eachother or to talk to eachother
so that they can proceed in there plan **
----meanwhile in the jam room----
manik- aree guys ..chodo muje .. yeh tum log sab muje kich kyu rahe ho...aur nandu... nundu ko mene kuch bola bhi nahi ...
cabir-are manik... kyaa nandu... kabhi apne yeh dosto par bhi dhyan de ...
manik- guys asea nahi ...its just ke...
mukti- leave it...guys bhout time hogaya hai we all didn't party ...lets party,...
manik- party..par kyu ..I mean iss waqt ..
mukti- yaar... manik hum logo ko kabhi party karte waqt dekte hai kya???? aur hume kabhi party karne ke liye koi reason chahiye ????
alya- kabhi bhi nahi!!!!!
cabir-yaa ...lets go to my house ..mom is not home...
manik -ohkk fine chalo..par ek min ..let me inform nandu..
*before anyone could say anything manik called nandini...but till now abhi had switched off her phone..*
manik-aree yeh nandu ka phone switched off kyu aa raha hai...
I am sry guys par phele let me goo and let check her...I hope she is fine!!!
mukti-a..ahhh...manik muje yaad aaya ke abhi ka phone aaya tha aur usne bola ki nandini ke phone ki battery low hai..aur who log ghar ja rahe hai...
manik- what!!!! ghar ???par kyu???? I mean nandu ne muje kuch bola bhi nahi aur abhi ne tuje kab phone kiya ? tu toh??
dhruv- aree buddy...abhi ne text kiya hoga haina mukti *[ mukti nodded]* aur tu nandini ko jaane de yaar ...unn doo Bhai bhean bhi toh time spend karna hoga na...let them ..na...lets goo hum log bhi party karte ...
mukti;cabir and alya in unison- ya..ya lets gooo...
*fab5 went to cabir's house and were partying hard...manik was countiniously calling nandini but her phone was cmng off he was getting restless*
manik thought-uff yeh nandu bhi na ...phone kyu nahi utha rahi...hope she is fine...aur subah se use baat bhi nahi hui..uff me kyaa karu iss larki ka...ahhh..I miss u nandu!!!!!
*same was the condition of nandini...abhi and nandini were watching movie...but she was physically present with abhi but mentally she was with manik*
nandini thought- uff!! yeh Bhai mera phone bhi nahi de rahe ...I knw mani.. tum bhout worried hoge na...I am sorry...tum subahe ke baad se mili bhi nahi ..thik se byee bhi nahi bola..uff I miss u manii..!!!!!
*both were missing each other badly and were worried about each other but there bad luck there beloved friends and sibling
were not leaving them...
both didn't meet each other the WHOLE DAY both were restless**
hope the chapter is long enough ...
if u liked it press the below button and plz comment..
will update soon
love,
zeen
Edited by manan_truelove - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#66
Awesome

Awww ' poor manan couldn't even meet each other

Naughty fab4 n abhi

Eagerly waiting for next part dear

Vidhi
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Vidhiarora1

Awesome

Awww ' poor manan couldn't even meet each other

Naughty fab4 n abhi

Eagerly waiting for next part dear

Vidhi


Thanku sooo very much for commenting. ..
Glad u liked it ...
And yaa will update very soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
#68
Hey, read all the parts in a good..awesome ff...poor manan..I hope this staying apart brings them closer to each other..
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Posted: 9 years ago
#69
Found this lovely story now
Both r sad & missing each other
Cont soon
Plz pm me
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Posted: 9 years ago
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When will u post next chapter? Tomorrow? [/QUOTE
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