MananSS---PURE BLISS - updated chapter : 6 pg 12 - Page 6

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Hadiqameraj thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Ok but plz kal lamba wala part post krna plzzz
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Posted: 9 years ago
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CHAPTER:4

If u have to choose between your friends and lovers choose ur friends...because
They all took u to ur love!!!
---meanwhile in the canteen---
**fab -4 were already sitting in the canteen ...dhruvalya were lost in themselves and cabir was thinking about manan...and Mukti saw cabir lost so she asked him**
Mukti-(poked cabir)-kya hua... kis ke bare me soch raha hai???
Cabir-han..ha..I mean kuch nahi ..
Mukti-kahi tu manan ke bare me toh nahi soch raha...??
**dhruvalya and cabir together said. .**
Dhruvalya and cabir in unison-MANAN?????
Alya-yeh kon hai mukti???
Mukti-are manan matlab manik aur nandini...itna bhi nahi pata tum logo ko...dufferss..
Cabir-Ooo. ...hmmm u are right ...me undono ke bare me hi soch raha hun
Cabir-dont u all think its high time...undono ko unka pyaar except kar lena chahi yeh!!!
Cabir (imitating)-'WE ARE "BEST FRIENDZZ" '
mukti (gigging)- Seariously dude!!! agar easa hi raha ...toh 50 saal ki umar me bhi wo dono best friend ...best friend ...hi kelte rahinge ...
Alya -hmmm ...but how can u be so sure mukti...ke woh dono ek dusre se pyaar karte hai???
Dhruv- baby!!! tum kya bol rahi ho... undo ki aakoh me dekho saaf pata chal jaye ga that they are in love...nandini ka pata nahi...but I am dammn sure buddy... is madly in love with nandini...
Cabir-exactly me ne jit na manik ko nandini ke saat kush dekha hai na...wit na mene kisi ke saat nahi dekha...
Alya-hmmm...u guys are right...
Mukti-we are always right!!
Alya -but ...guyss the question is hum un dono ko
realise kaise kawaenge????
Dhruv-let help them!!!
Mukti -ohkk ..so lets make our manik and nandini...manan!!!!
***abhi entered the canteen and was about to sit when he heard mukti and shouted loudly ***
Abhi-soch na bhi mqt mukti ..meri bhen us jerk ke saat kabhi nahi!!!
Mukti -heyy...u!!!! mind ur language!!! (angrily)
Cabir-guyss ..guyss..calm down. ..abhi idher aa beth ...hum log beth kar baat karte hai...
*** abhi sat down on the chair and with fab -4 and then Dhruv asked him***
Dhruv-but Abhi. ...problem kya hai??idher sab ko pata hai they love each other!!!
Abhi- Nooo... dhruv ..they dont...and u all knw I hate manik ... and I dont like him!!
Fab-4 in unison - but Nandini likes him...!!!!!
Abhi-no..wayss.. friendship tak thik tha ...but relationship ...Nooo ...
Aur wese bhi tum log itna sure kease hosakte ho???
Cabir-ghadhe...saaf...saaf
Dikh raha hai ...undono ki aakhon me dekh ...
Alya -yaa abhi ...he is right ...
Have u ever notice the smile ...on Nandini's face ...whenever manik is around ...or the shine in Manik's eyess when he is around nandini...
You knw what abhi ...if when a girl is in love na ...u can clearly see it in her smile...and when a guy is in love u can see it in his eyess.
Cabir -wahh...alya wahh...
Kya bola hai yaar...
Mukti-yaa ... abhi alya is right. ..and...and...we all can prove it to u !!!!
Cabur and dhruv in unison-kyaa???
Cabir -kaise prove karegi tu??
Dhruv- pagal ho gayi hai kya tu mukti!!!!
Alya-no baby!!!! we can ...I mean mere pas plan toh nahi hai...but..fristly ...agar woh dono ek dure ki care karte hai then...they like each other ...and if they are jealous seeing eachother with someone else ...then they are in love! !
Abhi-matalb...agar manik..likes nandini. .then he must be caring ???
Alya-of course...if he cares then we can prove ke likes nandini!!
Abhi - ohkk...than prove me wrong!!!
Cabir-wahh!!...alya ..kya idea...yaad dilaya...I have a plan guyss!!!
Mukti -ha toh ...kiski wait kar raha hai ...bolna??
**cabir told his plan tofab-3 +abhi and then dhruv said***
Dhruv - wahhh...mere sher...kya plan...hai tera...this would definitely work!!!
Abhi-letss see!!


ohkkk so here is the 4th chapter. ...
hope u all like it... stay tuned. ..
keep smiling ...keep rocking
love,
ZEEN


Edited by manan_truelove - 9 years ago
Hadiqameraj thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago
#53
Abay zeenat tu itnay short short parts Kio deti hai?
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Posted: 9 years ago
#54
Those who all want pm buddy me and one more thing
Pm to only those who will comment
Baki me kisi ko bhi pm nahi karungi
Sorry agar kisi ko bura laga ho toh
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Posted: 9 years ago
#55

Originally posted by: Hadiqameraj

Abay zeenat tu itnay short short parts Kio deti hai?

Abey...isse kitna lamba karu me chapter ko...
Ok ...nwxt chapter se jitna lamba hoskega utna karungi...
Pakka promise...
Aur yeh toh bata kaise laga tuje chapter
GAYATHRICR thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago
#56
Nice update. Jaldi in dono ko realize karwadao
Hadiqameraj thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago
#57
Haan ruk abhi tak parhanai parh kr btati hon
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Posted: 9 years ago
#58
awesome update...
loved it so much...
waiting to see ow they prove abhi wrong...
glad all of them are working together to make manan...
can't wait to see what happens next...
keep up the good work and continue soon...
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Posted: 9 years ago
#59
1stly thnk u for pm
nd udate was awsome
fab4 as cupid wow
nd this challenge thng was awesome
looking frwrd for furtherudates
love u
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Posted: 9 years ago
#60
It was awesome manan ko realize karwao aur plan tho batado yaar

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