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CHAPTER--6
ONCE I START CAREING ABOUT
YOU...I WILL NEVER STOP...
-----MURTY"S HOUSE- AT NIGHT-------
*nandini and manik both were worried about each other as this was the first time they both didn't talk to each other and was away for sooo long abhi was not letting nandini call or even text manik and same thing was with manik fab-4 were not letting him go and meet nandini...both were getting restless...at last nandini had enough so she asked abhi for her phone...*
nan-Bhai ...bus na ...I am getting bored ..plzz muje phone dijiye ...muje manik ko phone karna hai...he must be getting worried...
abhi- kya yaar nandu itne dino baad hum ease time spent kar rahe hai and u ...ok fine muje sirf tune jo pasta mere banaya hai wo toh lade and then I will give u your phone...
nan-ok..i will bring it.. and then I want my mobile back...ohkk!!!!!
*as soon nandini went into the kitchen abhi took her mobile out and switched it on...and was surprise to see that there were 100messages and 70 missed calls from manik*
abhi thought- 70 missed calls from manik...kya fab-5 sahi bol rahe the...
kya sach me manik bura nahi... no..no abhi ek step baki...and then I will decide ease hi me meri bhen ko kisike bhi saat nahi milwa sakta ...
*abhi was right on his place after all he only had his small little sister on the name of family.. how can he trust someone soo easily ... he loved his sister very much and he has seen her growing ... so after thinking he called manik from nandini"s phone...but as soon as manik saw there was the call from nandini he picked it in one ring and before abhi could even speak manik spoke*
manik- hello nandu ..yaar tu kahan hai...and tu samjti kya hai khudu ko... pura din ho gaya u didn't even call...u knw how much worried I was...aur tere phone ko charge hone me itni der lakti hai...tu kar kya rahi ..how could u do this...
(listing to manik )abhi thought-- I think fab -4 sahi bol rahe the they both really love each other...but ab mene phone kiya hi toh lets have some fun..
abhi- hello ma...manik...me abhii bol raha hun ..mmanik..nandu...(abhi said in a crying tone)
manik- hello...abhi ...tere pas nandu ka phone... wo chor tum log kahan ho and nandu ko kya hua...
abhi-hum log ghar pe hai tu jaldi aa plzz...bye
*and with this abhi cut the phone...so this was their plan...as soon as manik heard this he got hell worried and just ran from cabir house ...seeing him fab -4 understood that there plan is on...and manik went and sat in his car and reached nandini 's home asap...and fab-4 also followed him...in 5 min
manik reached murthy's house and rang the bell...and meanwhile nandu came and gave abhi the pasta ... and asked him who he was talking but as soon as she could ask for her phone the bell rang and abhi went to open the door*
(at the door)abhi-manik...
abhi thought- yeh itni jaldi kaise ..I mean cabir ka gahr thoda kya bhout dur hai yahan se...
manik- abhi ... nandu kahan hai is she fine...aur tu kya soch raha hai...where is she damnit...speak up
*before abhi could even speak manik pushed him and went inside and started shouting for nandini*
abhi thought- hmm..me bhout galat tha ...fab-4 sahi bol rahe the...how could I not see it ..they both really love eachother...I should also help them and realise them ...
*abhi was still on the door thinking and fab-4 also arrived..they saw abhi and mukti spoke*
mukti -sooo mr. ab toh tumhe yakin hohi gaya hoga ki they both really love each other aur hamara manik galat nahi hai
abhi- hmmm...u guys were right they bothreally love eachother and yaa..I am sry for the morning actually nandu mere sis hai aur wohi meri sabkuch hai bachpan se lekar aj tak bhout pyaar se pala hai mene usse soo...
(cutting his sentence cabir spoke)cabir- its ok dude ..glad ke tu...samjgaya...and yaa tuje sorry bol ne ki koi zarorat nAhi hai ...
aur ab yeh senti baatein band karo...plzz ander chaalo...
(and cabir hugged him ..and went inside)
*mukti listening to abhi felt bad ..as she was very rude with abhi...and felt
sorry but before she could apologise to abhi ..alya dragged her inside..and abhi also went inside closing the door*
*meanwhile abhi and fab-4 were talking inside manik saw nandini and ran to her and hugged her as tight as he could...nandini was surprise to see manik..but as she saw his worried face she also hugged him*
nandini(still hugging him)-mani...kya hua tumhe tum itne worried kyu ho...
(listing to nandini manik realise about what abhi said on the phone and pulled out from the hug and saw Nandini carefully and cupped her face and said)manik-nandu..,,tum,,tum,,thik toh ho na ...tumhe kuch hua...(and again hugged her)nandu...tera phone kahan hai...aur tum ease kaise collage se muje bataye bina aagayi aur ha(pulled her from hug) tum kya hua .. tum thik hona(cheking her if she is fine)
nandini-mani...mani...me bilkul thik hu...muje kya hoga...aur tumhe kya hua why are u soo worried..and tum na yahan betho ...paani peeyo..
*she made him sit and gave him water...before nandini could sit beside him he pulled her and made her sit on his lap and put his head on her shoulder...nandini ruffling his hair ...spoke*
nan-mani...I am sorry who na Bhai ko mere saat time spend karna tha isliye aur unhone mera phone switched off kar diya tha...but tumhe kya hum why are u soo worried ????
manik- wo abhiii...
*before he could speak ...fab-4 and abhi arrived and saw them sitting like this and went all awwweee!!!!and smiled...cabir went on his teasing mood and coughed... seeing them nandini got up from manik"s lap and blushed seeing there condition*
cabir-aree... nandini...tum uth kyu gayi ""best friends"" toh ek dusre ke lap me beth te rehte( cabir spoke in a tesing way and emphazised on the word best friend)
mukti- yaa nandu...its fine ..tu beth ja wapis ..we don't have any problem...
* all this while manik was quit and he was trying to figure out every thing...about abhi phone call...fab-4 and abhi sitting together in the canteen and dissucing something...fab-4 's sudden partying plan..fab"4 not letting him go and meet to nandini...mukti"s excuse saying that nandini gave her message and went with abhi...and also about nandini's words saying that abhi wanted to spend some time with her and he realized that it was fab-4 and abhi's plan he got up and asked*
manik- was all this shit ...your plan...
*as soonn as manik spoke fab-4 and abhi realised that he is very angry and he came to every thing ...so cabir said calmly *
cabir -ammm... manik dekh hum log sirf Mazak ka rahe the ...
manik- bullshit!!! Mazak ...pagal ho kya tum log ...huh... tum he pata bhi hai what was going in me...when abhi called me and said that nandini is...(he couldn't complete his sentence) you all are ridiculous ...I mean tum log easa kar kaise sakte ho...
nan- manki...tum yeh kya bol rahe ho...kya hogaya hai tum he...
manik- nandini ...yeh question tumhe mujse nahi in logo se puch na chahiye...
nan - manik ...tum kya bol rahe ho..
*manik said every thing to nandini and explainedher everything*
nan- what!!!!!! ...I mean guys...why did all this ...I mean how could u all...
manik- forget it nandu...tum chalo mere saat...
*saying this manik dragged nandini with him to her room *
mukti- fu*k ...yar yeh sab na iss abhi ki wajah.. se ho raha hai...I mean na yeh prove karne ko bolta na yeh sab hota...ufff
abhi - meri kya galti hai... who meri behen hai ...me ease thodi na kisi ko bhi..
(cutting abhi's sentence dehruv spoke) dhruv- guys ...stop fighting ...
aur socho ki hum log un donno ko kaise manaenge
alya- hmm...aur abhi toh nandu bhi hum se gussa hai ...agar who ..hoti toh w0 hamari help karti ...but..
cabir-hmmm ..but ab humsab kare kya???
dhruv -ummm... I have an idea ..usse shayad wo dono maan jaye...
fab-3 and abhi- whattt??????????????? jaldi bol na !!!!!!!!!
(dhruv told his idea to everyone)
----meanwhile upstairs - in nandini's room--
(manik cupping nandu's face) - nandu tum sach me thik ho na...tum hai kuch??
(nandini made him sit on the bed and sat on her knees and said cupping his face)-mani... I am absolutely fine ...look ...aur wese bhi jab tak tum mere saat ho...tab tak muje kuch nahi ho sakta...
manik-hmmm...(saying this he stood upand went to the window)
* nandini knew he was upset because of his friends...so she went to him and back hugged him... feeling her warmth and her tiny hands on his chest...he smiled and closed his eyes*
nan- mani...I knw jo un logo ne kiya who sahi nahi kiya ...they shouldn't have done this...but...
(cutting her from between and pulled her infront of him)manik- but ..kya nandu...do u even knw...jab abhi ka phone aaya...and he said..that...ahh..I died 100 times ... muje hi sirf pata ha how I came here..
*and saying this he put is head on the crook of her neck..and hold her tightly...and nandini responded back and started ruffling his hair...
they both didn't spoke and just let the slience speak between them...and let each other's presence soke each other...after sometime manik spoke...*
manik - I missed u soo much nandu...it was the worst day of my life...(still holding her tight )
nan(ruffling his hair)- I missed u too mani...
* manik pulled out and cupped her face and kissed her forehead assuring her that he will always protect her...and nandini also closed her eyes to feel the moment...both were quit and there fore heads were joined...after somtime Nandini spoke *
nan- mani...I knw woh log wrong hai...aur me kisi ko bhi defend nahi kar rahi...its just who log hamare friends hai... aur we cant be soo rude to our friends na...isliye plzz jab hum log niche jaye to tum unhe maaf kar de na plzzz mani...mere liye plzz...
manik- hmmm
nan-hmm.. kya hota hai mani... thik se bolo..
manik- thik hai baba...kardunga me maaf..but ..sirf tumhare liye ...
*nandini smiled and manik too responded with a smile and they both went downstairs too meet their friends*
soo here's the update hope u all liked it and if u all liked it plzz guys plz comment and like if u all liked it...amd yaa I will update soon...
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zeen
Edited by manan_truelove - 9 years ago
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