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Posted: 9 years ago
#21
Interesting. I would like to read bigger updates.
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Posted: 9 years ago
#22
It was a very cute chapter wanna see more manan moments and college moments too..
Loved the ff keep writing and update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Chapter-2

Fake people have an image to maintain...
Real people just dont care...

---In collage---
--Canteen--
**fab -5 was already in the canteen and was waiting for manik just then abhi and nandini enterned the... And as cabir saw them he spoke..**

Cabir -hey! Nandu... Whatssup behna...

Nan- hey! Cabu...

Cabir- be yaar tera "BFF" kaha hai yaar hum sab ko jaldi bula ke khudhi nahi aaya abhi tak..(emphasing on the word bff)

**manik abhi tak... Yeh larka...!!!.. Nandini thought and said..**
Nan- hah woh cabir.. Woh aata hi hoga

**just thenmanik enterned the canteen and back huged nandini... Abhi was really very annoyed seeing this and he mumbled ***

Abhi- shaitan ka naam liya aur shaitan haazir...

**manik heard that and replied **

Manik-did u said anything.. Mr.abhimanyu(giving a deadly glare to abhi...)
Abhi-( looking on otherside) lagta hai "kisi"ke kaan bajh rahe hai

**manik was about to say something when soha enterned the canteen and went near manik...she was really annoyed seeing manik hugging nandini..but said taking manik's hand which was on nandini's waist**

Soha -heyyy! Manikk!!

Manik-(taking his hand back and putting it in pocket) hii..
** then manik shifted nandini towards soha..
(Means - abhi--- manik- nandini--soha)

Manik- chalo guys practise kar ne nahi jana kya??!!!

Cabir- EUREKA!!!!! Bhout jaldi yaad aagaya yaar tujhe manik...

Soha -i can also join you guyss he na... Alya..

**before alya could speak alya shouted **

Manik- NOOO...

** the whole gang was staring at manik and then manik replied **
Manik - i mean... If i am not wrong nandu..
Mene.. Shayad... Sirf fab -5 ko nahi bula tha..

** soha was really pissed off till now so she went stomping her foot... Alya felt bad for her soo she shouted..**

Alya- soha!!! wait...( alya got up and was about to go when mukti held her hand and said)

Mukti-where are u going we have to practise..

**Alya was really angry on manik so she shouted**

Alya- yaar manik tu hamesha kyu karta hai uske saat easa... U knw she bloody likes u...

**manik too shouted on alya**

Manik- i don't like her... Why don't understand... And u cant froce me to ve good with her everytime..

Cabir- calm down guyss...

Mukti- chodo na... Yeh sab guyss... Lets go and practise... Musicana aa raha!!!

Dhruv- hmm guyss we should go.. Aaur wese bhi musicana se phele we have to win inter - collage competition alse!!

Cabir - chill yaar dhruv.. Hum log hi jeetne wale hai...
Abhi- ha.. Nandu chal hum logo ko practise karni hai... Aur yeh navya aur aryaman kaha reh gaye..

Mukti- u you what abhi... You should not waste ur time... U knw na ' time is very precious '
Kyu ki musicana aur inter collage dono hum log hi jitne wale hai..

**just then aryaman anad navya enterned and heard all the conversation and said..**

Arya-hahahahahha...(laughing loudly) look who is talking about time..haha...

Navya- huh... Tum log na yeh galat femi dur karlo toh hi accha hai... Kyu ki musicaana ki trophy hamare hote hue koi nahi jeet sakta.. Samje!!!!

Cabir-miss madubala...

*** cabir was about to say something when manik and nandini enterned in thier conversation andshouted loudly**

Manan in unison- stop it guyss!!!!!

Nan- cabir...navya stop fighting.. And be friends...

Cabir(lokking at navya)-huh...

Navya -(looking at cabir)-huh...
Dhruv- agar tum sab ka hogaya ho toh... Can we go guyss...

*** then both the groups were going for practise when manik called nandini **

Manik- nandu!!!

**manik went near herand nandini was seing here and there... Manik saw her condition due to his gaze ans smriked mischievously **
Nan - ha... Mani...

Kaise baataon tuje...
ki dil mere kya keh raha...
Rahe na fasle jo hai apne darmiyaan...

**manik went near her nad held nandini by her waist **

Tere qureeb me reh saku...
De de tu apni...raza...

Nan- manik... Sab dekh rahe hai...
Manik- i dont care!!!!!!..

**manik pulled her towards himself and tucked her hair strand behind her ear**

Pass bithaon... Yeh zulf sawaaru...
Aur bhaahon me lelu tujhe...

**then manik went near her ear and nandini clutched his shirt ... And closed her eye. ..

Manik smirked seeing her condition and went near her ear and said huskily**

Manik-jaldi se practise khatam kar ke anna same place... Bye

Kaise baataon tujje..
keh dil mera kya keh raha..

**nandini opned her eyes and saw manik smirking...she understood that it was his mischief..she hit him on his shoulder and said**
Nan-you are crazy manik... Monster
**nandini came out of his hold and giving a deadly look to manik went to her group... and manik too went for the practice **



Hola people... Hope this update is long enough...
Hope u all like it...
If u like it then shower with ur comments and likes
Next update cmng soon... Till then
STAY TUNED... Keep rocking keep smiling
Love,
Zeen




Edited by manan_truelove - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#24
READ ALL CHAPTER IN A GO
FAB WORK GIRL
PLZ PM ME NXT CHAPTER
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Posted: 9 years ago
#25
It was nice update' . please post the next part soon . and pm me next time if possible . keep smiling 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: anjanbapidas

it was nice update. Pleaand yaase please post the next part soon. And pm next me next time if possible. Thank you dear.




thanku soo much dear for likeing my story ... and
i am really very ... very sorry... i rarely get time to update..
as i am in 10th std... i am really sryy and yaa i hav updated the
next chap ... hope u like it
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Posted: 9 years ago
#27

Originally posted by: diyamanan

READ ALL CHAPTER IN A GO

FAB WORK GIRL
PLZ PM ME NXT CHAPTER



thanku sooo much. ... for liking my story ... means alot 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
#28
awesome...read all the chapters in one go...loved all of it...
amazing bond between manan...dont like soha being too clingy to manik...
all the couples except manan and dhrulya are fighting with each other...cavya and mukbhi...
keep up the good work and continue soon...
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Posted: 9 years ago
#29
Hey Zeenat
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glad to read this new story but if uh don't mind plz make nxt parts lil long means more 3-4 paragraph extra than this part...
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ur story is Awesome
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so i will love to read more
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n update soon
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tc stay blessed
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and plz pm me n accept my buddy request tooo... 😊

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Posted: 9 years ago
#30
SORRY!!!!!!
I am really very sorry guyss... I knw u all want chapter :3...
But guyss i am in std10th and abhi merei semister examss chal rahe hai...
I really have to score well in this examss as i will get internalss on the basis of this examss.. Result... Plzz guyss try to understand... And trust me... I cannot update till 12th of oct... Trust me...13thoct ko 2to 3 partss saat me de dungi...pakka
Sorry sorry
Love
Zeenat
Edited by manan_truelove - 9 years ago

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