MaNan SS//Lips Do Lie//Link for Thread 2 on pg 150

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sunset17

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Posted: 10 years ago

#191

It's simply superb..loved it..

Continue soon. :)

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Sanskruti

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Posted: 10 years ago

#192

IT'S AWESOME

DIII THE DATE U USED NA IT'S MY BIRTH-DATE

AWESOME UPDATE

U NAILED IT

THANKS FOR PM

TAKE CARE

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APS_AURA

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Posted: 10 years ago

#193

Woww..wat an amazinggg start..full of love,romance,desire,drama suspense..d title of d story is quite exciting..waiting to knw wats in store 4 us further & hw d story unfolds..
Do continue soonish & pm me..plz.. :)
Keep up d gud work !! Stay blessed !!!
#OkThanksBye ! ;)

Edited by apsaura - 10 years ago

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aarohi arora

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Posted: 10 years ago

#194

What was that yaar...
I mean first meet mein kiss...
Cont soon...
Cant wait for more...

LOVE,
AAROHI...

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sujal1fan

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Posted: 10 years ago

#195

Originally posted by: Cooldude101
Okay so I have fallen in love with this SS of yours as well. How do manage to make your stories so light and intense at the same time?
The prologue was down-right hilarious for me as Manik's snidey comment made me laugh out very loud. And here people looking at her as though she had disturbed their love making session🤣
Ah! the kiss! I could spend hours drooling over that one hell of a kiss between them
This chapter was introductory, I suppose. I really want to know how they get on the trail of goan mafians and even if they are being chased, where is Nandini's family and more importantly, why are Manik and Nandu together?😳

Yeah I know lots of questions raised n you shall find the answers gradually😊

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A.N

@monsoon_lover

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Posted: 10 years ago

#196

Th story is very interesting...
Nandu kissing some stranger..and then dreaming about him...i know the stranger is manik 😉
I want to know about nandu's family and Manik...
Cant wait to read the next chapter...
Continue soonish.
P.s...i spent my childhood in goa 😆

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anika mehjaben nahin

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Posted: 10 years ago

#197

Hahaha 1st meet n they kissed wht will they do whn they will meet again🤣 ...liked it but something is wrong..manik is not an ordinary man n THE MAFIA THING 🤣 well its insane idea n awesome... Looking forward to read nxt update soon

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Dashreyaa

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Posted: 10 years ago

#198

As I promised I am here to follow the new story...

Prologue

wow already become the fan of your this story too just after reading prologue...

So nandini is dreaming and in real she hate him and yes there so many things haven clear yet...but I like the way you write so interesting and excited to know more