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Posted: 9 years ago
update ws gud..
ur story is gud too..

continue soon :)
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Posted: 9 years ago



Thanks for pm.dear

Very interesting change in her...

They are doing good to put her on right track. .

Manik get disappointed. .well. he has to go long way. .

Looking forward to seeing more soon. .

Thanks for sharing this. ..

Stay blessed dear..




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Posted: 9 years ago
thanks fr the pm!!!...
its not easy to overcome depression!!!...

u r an awesome writer!!...

u described it so well!!!!!!...

update soon!
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Posted: 9 years ago
awesome part
now nandini wants her old self back
waiting for the return of our old nandini
take care⭐️
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Posted: 9 years ago
Awesome update. The way u penned this update was commendable. Hats off. Nandini's state was well penned. Hug session was blissful. Navni's part was amazing. Manbir's convo was well penned. Abhi's solution for nandini's problem was phenomenal and loved it.totally an mindblowing update. eagerly waiting for next update. Continue soon.thanks for pm
Keep writing
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Posted: 9 years ago
PART-30 IT'S OUR TURN...!!

Hello readers ...!! Early naa...!! I know...!! Last part was not that much good but was needed...!! So... this chapter will have many positive signs...!! All in all... this chapter...is a happy one...!!😊😊 the response for the last chapter was not good ...!! But I understand... that it was not up too the mark...!! Please comment it really encourages me to write...!! So here is the update...!!

HAPPY READING...!!😊😊
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Abhi: Aur jab zarurat hi nai hogi... iske toh ise apne pass rakhne se kya fayada...!! Hena... so will u do... what I'll ask u to do...??

( nandini just nodded... not sure of what is gonna ask her to do...!!.)

THROW THEM ALL...!! ( he said pointing towards the bottles kept... there...!!)

Listening to abhi... nandini just stared at the glass in her hand...!! She was blank... as he was asking her to give up her last support...!! Understanding her abhi came forward...

Abhi: See nandini...!! I know it's not easy to all of a sudden just leave... the thing on which u have been dependent for a long time...!! But we need to start from somewhere naa...!! So let's just start it from here...!! ( he took the glass from her hand...!! And showed it to her...!!) Throw this with ur own hands...!! And with a determination in ur mind that u will try to control urself to every extent...!!

Dhruv: so... nandini now take this..( he forwarded a bottle to her..) and throw it...!!

Nandini was just staring at the bottle and trying to extend her hand to take it...!! But somewhere she was feeling weak...!! In doing so...!! She felt that she cannot do this...!!

Manik was looking at her...!! As if understanding her condition...!! That she needed strength to do so...!! Then he looked at abhi...!! As if telling him something...!!

Then abhi held her hand and made her hold the bottle as if giving her the strength to do so...!! And telling her that he is there...!! They all are there...!!

And nandini felt strong... strong enough to throw the alcohol...!! So she openned the bottle... and turned towards the sink there and tilted the bottle to let the liquor fell...seeing her doing so... All of them came forward and held her hand... to tell her they are there... for her...!! But manik and cabir didn't held her hand...!!

As manik now didn't wanted to spoil that moment by interfering...!! As he knew as soon as she will see him...!! She will get angry... and may not take this positive step...!!

And cabir... he was in deep thinking...!! While witnessing all this...!! He felt a change in manik's behaviour...!! He also noticed manik and abhi talking through eyes...!! He had a doubt...!! (And his doubt cleared... as he saw abhi showing thumbs up to manik...!! As he had left her hand...!! And he was absorbing the happy moment looking at them supporting her...!! )
He had a doubt that it was all manik's plan to help her... in taking such brave steps...!! And as he saw abhi showing thumbs up and a smile to manik...!! He understood.. it was him...!! He thought of talking to both of them afterwards... on this topic...!!
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They had empties all the bottles... by now...!! (Nandini was feeling a little different today...!! she was a little confident...but was nervous at the same time...!! Confident because now she had a support of all of them... or I should say now she was able to feel that support of theirs... unlike the previous times...!! Where they were there for her ... but she was the one who was pushing them far...!! And was nervous because.. she has taken a big step now... as drugs toh she had already left but... now she is leaving the alcohol as well... she was nervous thinking that will she be able to manage everything ...!! And giving a break to her thoughts...navya said...!!)

Navya: chalo ab sab andar...!! Humne kheer banai hai...!!aur nandu tumhe toh hum apne haath se khilayege... aaj bohot hi khush kiya hai tumne Hume...!! ( saying navya held her left hand and took her inside followed by... evryone...!! Manik cabir and abhi were in the last...manik and abhi were also going inside...!! But cabir stopped both of them...! And seeing abhi stopping Mukti also stopped...!! But cabir then said to her...!!

Cabir: (mockingly) kha nai raha hu Tere abhi ko...!! (Then Seriously) Kuch baat karni hai...!! Tu jaa hum aate hai...!!

( understanding the seriousness in his voice she asked...)

Mukti: anything serious...??

Cabir: nai nothing...!! Tu jaa naa...!! Hum aa rae hai...!!

Then Mukti... left from there... !!
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Now three of them were alone ... then abhi asked...

Abhi: kya hua cabir...??

Cabir: vo toh tum dono mujhe bataoge...!!! Ki ye Tum dono ki aakhon hi aakhon mai kya baat chal rai thi...!! Aur ye toh kehna hi mat ki kuch nai...!! Kyuki time ke saath meri smartness aur bhi badh gayi hai...!! So jaldi jaldi batao...?? Yeh sab kiska idea tha...??

Manik: what do u mean kiska idea tha...!! Abhi ne kiya hai toh usika hoga naa...!!

Cabir: ohh...!! Abhi ye sab tera plan... tha...?? Ya fir tune kisi aur ke kehne pe kiya...??( he said eying towards manik..)

Manik: kehna kya chahta hai...?? AUR kuch bhi ho... main point toh ye hai naa ki.. nandini ki condition better ho rai hai...!! So that's more important...!!

Abhi: cabir u are right...!! Yeh sab meta nai manik ka idea tha...!! It was all his idea...!! Jab navya nandini se baat kar rai thi naa... tab manik ka msg aaya mere pass...!! Telling me to ask her to throw all the bottles...!! Fir uska haath pakad ke usse liquor girwane ko bhi isne hi ishaara kiya tha...!!

( Cabir then looked at manik...!! Giving him... i-already-knew-it look...)

Manik: haan toh kya faraq padhta hai... kisika bhi idea... ho... nandini toh theek ho rai hai naa...

Cabir: faraq padhta hai manik...!! Agar ye sab tu khud karta toh nandini ko teri care dikhti...!! Use pata chala ki tu uske liye kuch bhi karne ko tayaar hai...!!

Manik: agar mai karta toh vo Gussa ho jaati... aur shayad jo usne ek step liya hai naa usse bhi back out kar leti...!!

Cabir: vo Gussa hoti manik...!! Par wo back out nai karti...!! U didn't noticed it may be... but all of us have noticed that it's u who have brought so much of change in her...!! It is because of ur words that she agreed to get healed...!!

Manik: nai cabir... maine sirf use pain hi diya hai... till now... but now I don't want to come in between her way to herself...!! I will be behind her... always to protect her... but will not be beside her till she herself is not willing to see me at that place...!!

Cabir: par till the time u will not show her that u care...!! How will she be willing to be with u...!! U need to show her that u care...!! That u are there...!! And will always be... whenever she will need u...!! Just think about it once manik...!! What u are doing will never let u two be together...!!

Manik: right now my priority is her health ... and not us...!! I want her fit and fine...!! if it requires... me staying away from her... I will...!! Because her being back to herself is more important for me... than her being with me...!! I don't want her to be in trouble all over again because of me...!!

(Cabir understood it's useless... to argue with him...!! Because he will do what he feels like...!! So decided to deal with in his own cabira style...!! And hence... he changed the topic of discussion...)

Cabir: ok... fine... do as u feel like...!! ( he took a pause... and manik gave him manik faint smile... because though he was saying it all... but somewhere he also wanted to do the same what cabir is saying...!! He also wanted to show his care...!! To her ... then cabir continued...) Wese... manik u know what I am hurt...! Very very hurt...!! ( he said wiping his fake tears... but instead of manik abhi asked him the reason...)

Abhi: kyu... kya hua cabir...?? Tum kyu hurt ho...??

Cabir: u toh don't say only anything...!! ( Abhi looked at him in shock... as till now everything was fine then what happened to him all of a sudden...!! And looking at him cabir continued...) Kya haan... kya... ye bholi shakal kya bana raha hai...? Huh...!! Mera dost chheen liya mujhse...!! Aur fir esi shakal bana raha... hai...!! Aur tu saale...( to manik) pehle toh har baat mujhe batata tha nandini se related ... aur mai teri saari problems solve bi karta tha...!! Aur ab tu mujhse hi jhoot bol raha... hai...!! Yahi thi teri dosti...( he said dramatically...!! And abhi understood he was just trying to change his mood...) 2 saal dur kya raha... apne purane dard ke saathi ko bhul gya...!! How could u manik... how could u...?? Huh...!! ( he started faking tears and anger...!! And now manik smiled brightly... looking to his nautanki... he said ...)

Manik: please yaar cabir... kabhi toh apni nautanki band kara kar...!! Matlb har baar ye Nayi Nayi nautanki laata kaha se hai tu...??

Cabir: ab kya kare yr...!! Born talent hai...!! Jaise Tere pass hai... 24 ghante... angry look dene ka...!! Vese hi mera hai... talent of drama... u see...!! Achha remember u were about to discuss some idea... before this all happened...!!

Manik : haan yaad hai... par ab nai... let nandini be a little more stable... then we will work on it..!! Once she is better naa... then we will execute that idea...!!! Till then let's just forget about it...!! Because it's still time for that...!!

( both of them hugged each other then... as it was much needed... cabir could see his pain... and manik needed that hug to let go off his pain... then breaking the hug manik said...)

Manik: ab mai jaa raha hu...!

Abhi: par kaha...??

Manik: nandini ke liye... uska pehle step pura karne... dairy lene jaa raha hu...!! I want it to be special... as it's her first step to betterment...!! So I want to bring it myself...!!

( saying so manik left after checking on nandini who was along with Mukti alya dhruv and navya... eating kheer and they all were trying to cheer her up... trying to talk with her...!! And the new thing was even she was trying...to get involved in their talks...)
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As manik left...!! Cabir texted evryone to meet up in the living room...!! In 15 mins...

So they made nandini rest in her room... after giving her the medicine... and she slept under the effect of medicines...!!

At 12 pm living room...!!

All of them were sitting... cabir and abhi were having the kheer bowls in their hands as they didn't had it earlier...!! So they were eating...!! Them Mukti asked...

Mukti: ho gayi tum logon ki important baat toh ab hame bhi bata do... what's going on ...??

Abhi: haan Cabir bol naa... u didn't even told me why have u called us here...!!

Cabir: guys...!! I want to make evry thing alright...!! So I need ur support...!!

Dhruv: par buddy...!! Hum sab toh pehle se hi sab theek karne mai saath hi toh hai...!!then all of a sudden...??

Cabir: nai dhruv...!! Hum sirf nandini ka point of view dekh ke sab sahi kar rae hai... par we never thought about manik...!! We need do something for both of them...!!
( then he narrated the whole conversation between abhi manik and himself... how manik is not ready to do anything for himself...)
So this is why...!! I want all of us to do something for both of them...!! And I have thought of something also...!!
( And he discussed his plan with all of them...!! And then discussing about its consequences... they thought of executing it today itself...!! )

Cabir: manik has always proved himself as true friend...!! Now IT'S OUR TURN...!!
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At nandini's place 1.30 pm...!!

Manik entered with a gift wrapped in beautiful starry wrapping paper...!! And then looked around but didn't found anyone in there...!! But then nandini's caretaker came from the kitchen...!! And he came to know all of them left for somewhere... one hour back...!!
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So here is the next part... do tell me how was it...?? I updated early naa... now it's ur turn...!! Comment long long...!!
And keep thinking... what's the plan...?? Where did they go...?? Will their plan work...??? Is manik right in staying away from nandini...?? Is the journey from manik and nandini to manan smooth ahead...??

Will be waiting for ur response...!!


AMAAYA...!!😊😊

Edited by AMAAYA - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
It was amazing.. Am with cabir.. Thy have to do smthng for manik
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Posted: 9 years ago
Awesome update. They shd do smethng for manik
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Posted: 9 years ago
superb update...
finally nandu is letting out herself...
but what about manan????
hope to see them again together asap...
cabir still understand manik very well...
loved manbir bond...
what will happen in next update..
waiting for nxt update...
continue soon...
stay blessed nd keep smiling...
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Posted: 9 years ago
Awesome update
Loved it
Nandini took the 1st step
Cabir is a true frnd
Manik is so much In pain
Cabir and his nautanki
Hahaha
What r they planning
Waiting for the next update
Update soon

Thanks for the pm

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