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Posted: 9 years ago

#831

Originally posted by: lovePANI
beautiful update

aww nandu is adorable
jealous with chocolate..
kaise na karti..in her husband lip chocolate was touching 😉
haha..

hot how he wished her good luck..
beautiful song..

thanx for pm

keep smiling n take care.

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Posted: 9 years ago

#832

Originally posted by: Pari_mananholic
Wow awesome update...
Manan jst can't stop romancing...
They r too much in love...
Nandu sang for manik...
Luved it...
Thnx for pm..
Update soon...

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Posted: 9 years ago

#833

Originally posted by: manancraze
Wow nice update dear...😛.
Manik believes in action and even I also believe in manik's kind of action...😉...
Nandu is jealous...wo v chocolate se...😆...
"KOI SUBH KAM KARNE SE PEHELE KUCH MITHAA HO JAAYE..."...😉...Manik and his double meaning talk...😆.
"Jooganiya"...my fav...like it too...

Cont soon.
Take care...😳

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Posted: 9 years ago

#834

Originally posted by: Angel_manan
Awesome Update.
loved it very much.
song was also nice.
MaNan romance just superb.
waiting for next Update.
keep smiling
stay blessed
lots of love
Purna

Thanks purna😛

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Posted: 9 years ago

#835

Originally posted by: Cute_Inaya

Awesome ... very cute update diya...

Manik is such a teaser ... and his double meaning talks... was carry on the cake...
Chocolate part was awesome...😉
manan romance was amazing...
Its one of my fav song...
Very amazingly describe... too good...
Continue soon... now let see what will happen next...
Thanks for pm. ...
Keep smiling...
Stay bless..
Lots of love...

Thanks inaya😛

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Posted: 9 years ago

#836

Originally posted by: Kavyashree22
Hell, m just commenting now you know why? Cuz i splited hot water from my nose mouth early morning cuz of your update, now feeling quite better but my nose swelled up. Like seriously, ''KOI SHUB KAAM KARNE SE PEHLE KUCH MITHA HO JAAYE ...'' okey the line is good but still the situation aahh live it now.. Mujhe morning time update padna hi nai chahiye thi 😭

Aww sholly

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Posted: 9 years ago

#837

Originally posted by: gtilwani45
I just love it..
Itsss soo awesome ..
So amazing. .just love to the core. ..
matlb so amazing.

nandu is so cute.
.
manik is all time naughty. .

loved manan moments.

or ayaman k pass yar solid reason tha ..
for being romance speed breaker..
Soo .fantastic. ...

Keep updating. ..

U r such a beautiful writer...
Update soon..
Waiting for next update eagerly ..
Thanks for this update
.
Thanks for pm too. ..

Love Geet

Am glad you like it Geet

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Posted: 9 years ago

#838

Originally posted by: Sreeja_babu
Wow!! Awesome update dear...
Lvd it vry much..
Manik ko bas mauka chahiye romance krne klye..
Manan romance is awesum...👏👏
Finally nandu's concert fabulous...
Lvd d update so much..Do continue..
Thnks dear so much 4 d pm...

Am glad you like it

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Posted: 9 years ago

#839

Originally posted by: SIAZAHEED.1
woowww!!!
whatt ann updatee dearr..!!!
loved their chocolate RomanCE,,
Back stage moments r superbbb!!!😊

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Posted: 9 years ago

#840

Thank you SooO much Guys for ur lovely comments and likes ...and sholly for updating late ...I hope am forgived by u ...bcz this update is worth waiting ...hope you guys Like it ...ENJOY😛

PART-12

Manik puts nandani down and was about to kiss her but stops after listening karan's voice ...manik makes a face like AA GAYA KABAB MAIN HADDI ...Karan saw there position and turned ...

Karan : sorry guys I didn't want to disturb u ...

Manik makes a grumpy face and said : but u did

Karan embarrassingly said : sorry ...

Nandani pushed manik a little to which manik makes a angry pout ...nandani looked at him and smiled looking at his childish behavior ...

Nandani : it's okay karan ...kuch kaam tha ...

Karan smirkingly came towards her and said

Karan smirkingly said : ur work is done doll😉

Nandani eyes became widened and said :Are u fr*** serious ...

Karan smilingly said : am hell scirious my doll ...

Nandani smilingly said: shit!

Nandani hugged him tightly and smilingly said : u knew what u r sweetheart karan ...love u ...love u so much ...

Karan smilingly said : love you too my doll ...

After listening I LOVE YOU...manik looked at nandani in shock ..

Manik Pov :

What the ...how can she said I love you too him ...manik relax ...relax manik ...they are friends ...but jo bhi ho ...she can't say I love you too anyone ...nope she can't...

he came towards them and fake cough to which nandani broke the hug and looked at him ...manik instantly placed his one hand around her Waist ...nandani looked at him in shock ...as she couldn't understand why he is doing this ...but ..Karan saw his expression and a smirk crept on his face ...

Karan smirkingly said : jealous of me is not a good sign mr. Malhotra ...😉

Manik annoyingly said :Excuse me ...am not jealous ...

Karan smirkingly said : yaah ...I can see that ...😉

Nandani looked at manik angrily ...but our manik gave her what did I do to which she gave him disbelief look ...and said

Nandani smilingly said: karan how much time ...

Karan smirkingly said : in two minutes ...

Nandani smiled and looked at manik who was trying to knew what they are talking about ...nandani just smirks looking at his face and said

Nandani : Manik

Manik : yaah

Nandani smirkingly said : actually I have some work ...so tum room main jao ...I'll be there in sometime

Manik just nodded his head and kissed her forehead and said : come soon am waiting ...

Nandani smiled and said : yaah

Manik gave karan a look to which he just smirks ...as soon as manik left from there ...nandani and karan broke into laughter ...

Karan :. ..hahaha ...sachme doll ... he was still ...jealous ...I mean that to me ...I can't believe this ...

Nandani : sorry he is quite like this only ...he loves me a lot ... can't afford to loose me now ...

Karan smilingly said : And today that was ur weapon

Nandani : aur koi chara bhi toh nahi ha ...I have to do it ...

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CORRIDOR-

Manik was walking in the corridor ...where nandani's room ...suddenly he saw something which makes him froze on it's place ...shock was clearly written on its face ...he was just looking at them without blinking ...yes it was fab4...Druv...Aliya ...Mukti ...cabir...his friends ...his family ... which is in front of him ...his childhood ...his college life ...and there allegations ...flashes in front of him ...a lone tear came from his eyes ...he quickly wiped them...cabir came towards him and hugged him tightly ...tears were flowing from his eyes ...manik too hugged him back ...cabir broke the hug and said

Cabir : kaisa ha manik ...

Manik smiled a little and said : Am fine ...

Mukti came and hugged him tightly and said : I missed you ...

Manik smiled and hugged her back and said : I missed you too mukti ...

Druv and alya both were to came towards him but manik was about to go ...but stop after listening nandani's voice

Nandani : Mr. Malhotra ...

Manik turned and looked at nandani ...confusingly ...but before he could say anything ...cabir ...Mukti ...Druv ...Aliya came and hugged Nandani tightly and said : we missed you so much baby ...

Nandani smiled and said : I missed you all ...how are u guys ...

Aliya smiled and said : absolutely fine ...aur meri baby kaisi ha ...

Nandani : am fine alya

Mukti said: what fine ... baby kitni patli ho gayi ha ...last time se bhi jyada ...

Druv came towards her

Druv worriedly said : really kya baat ha ...tumhari tabiyat toh thik ha naa ...baby ...

Nandani looked at cabir for help ...cabir give a assuring smile to her and said

Cabir : Guys relax ...see our baby is absolutely fine ...c'mon yaar ...she is N.M ...toh thoda toh figure maintain karna padega naa😉

Nandani slap cabir on his arm playfully and said

Nandani : shut up cabir ...

All laughed loudly ...except one who was just looking at them with shocked ... nandani saw this and smirks ...

Manik Pov :

Yeh sab ho kya raha ha ...why they all are calling her baby ...and from when they are so close to each other ...ho kya raha ha yeh ...

Nandani looked at manik and came towards him and said

Nandani shoutedly said: where the hell are u going ...Mr. Malhotra...

His mouth is become like oO shape ... he didn't expect her to say him like this ...

Manik stammeringly said : voh ...main ...voh ...

Nandani raised her eye brows and coldly said : voh kya Mr. Malhotra ...

Manik : actually ...

But cut off by nandani and said

Nandani sternly said: u knew what u r not going anywhere ...and u all also ...get ready ...u have to perform in next 5 min...

Manik shockingly said : what...

Aliya:Baby how can we

Nandani sternly said: I told you guys something ...am I clear or not ...

All nodded there head as yes ...but manik was just looking at her with anger filled eyes

Manik angrily said : am not

Nandani smirkingly said : really but u r

Manik angrily said : what makes you think am going to perform Mrs. Malhotra ...

Nandani placed her both hands around his neck and said

Nandani smirkingly said: what makes me think ...hmmm...mr. Malhotra ...if u forgot then let me tell you ...am Mrs. Malhotra ...manik malhotra ki wife ...aur agar Mr. Malhotra Mrs. Malhotra ki baat nahi manege toh no entry in the house for two days ...that means no cuddling ...no kissing ...and ...and u knew the better Mr. Malhotra😉

Manik was looking at her in shock and said : u can't be serious ...

Nandani smirkingly said : am hell scirious Mr. Malhotra ...be ready for the performance ...and don't u dare give me these looks ...am not scared of them ...

Manik : are you blackmailing me ...

Nandani smirks and said : what u think?

Manik : u r ...

Nandani smirks : well u r absolutely correct Mr. Malhotra ...now be ready performance ke liye sirf two minutes ha ...

Manik makes faces and was about to go but nandani holds him and pecked his lips and said : sorry ...

Left from there by giving manik another shock ...

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STAGE -

Manik came on the stage ...he was nervous ...yes the manik malhotra is nervous for the first time ...bcz in these two years...he didn't left nandani or fab5 but music also ...he never sang after talent hunt and now again he has to start where he ended it ... yes today he is going to sing the same song...he looked at the crowd then at his friends ...cabir and mukti gave him a sweet smile to which he also smiled ...he looked at druv and alya who was just looking at him ...he ignored it ...he picked up his guitar ...nandani smiled looking at him and give a flying kiss to which he smiled or should I say blushed ...he closed his eyes and sing ...

Tumhari dosti main bheegi si meri yeh

Zindagi,

Tumhari yaadon main shimti si yeh meri

Zindagi,

Tumhari dosti main bheegi si yeh meri

Zindagi,

Tumhari yaadon main shimti si yeh meri

Zindagi...

(Manik remember there moment ...fab5 moments ...how they were fighting ...laughing ...singing ...dancing ...wirh each other ...he knows that this is never be going to be same ...he remembered how they accused him for everything ...a lone tear came from his eyes ...)

Aaj main hoon yaha

Adhoora loge yeh sama

Akele main jayun kaha

O yaara ...o ...yaara ...ooo

O yaara o mere yaara

O yaara tu sunle zara

O yaara tu aaja re yaara...

O yaara kaisi yeh yaariaan ...

(Manik looked at nandani...she knows how it difficult for him ...but she wants him to sing .. sing again ...again for him ...for getting his lost family...she knows how much paining him all this but she wants him to be back like her old manik ...)

Pura clg pe raj tha

Sab se alag andaaz tha

Bas kal ki baat thi

Jab haatho main haath tha ...

Aaj sab ki rahe alag hai ...

Nayi zindagi sapne alag hai

Ab judaa to honaa padega..

O yaara o mere yaara

O yaara tu sunle zara

O yaara tu aaja re yaara

O yaara kaisi yeh yaariaan ...

(Manik remember how druv sing those lines ...he knows that time he meant each and every word ...Druv came towards him and hugged him tightly ...manik who didn't hugged him back for some time ...but after listening sorry ...he hugged him back...Druv broke the hug and again came to his position ...Aliya came towards him and hugged him ... he smilingly hugged her back ...today he is smiling ...but this smile is different bcz today he got his family back ... a big smile crept on nandani lips ...manik too looked at ger and smiled )

Hmmm...hmmm...

(Manik looked at nandani who was smilingly looking at him ...he closed his eyes and again feel all the moment they spend with each other ...a smile crept on his lips ... )

Kaise tujhse mila tha

Main kuch jhagdo mein tujhse judaaa tha ...main ...

Phir nazre teri meri nazro se milli...

Pyar tera meri har khushi bani

Aur tu meri zindagi bani ...

O yaara o mere yaara

O yaara tu sunle zara

O yaara tu aaja re yaara ...

Manik ended the song ...and fab5 had a group hug ...crowds were utting for them ...they were smiled looking at there magic ...there music still have that spark ... after sometime everyone broke the hug ...But manik eyes was searching for one person who was no where to be found ...manik looked at everywhere ...he looked at karan ...who just smiled and told him to go outside ...manik immediately runs towards the direction ...and there he saw his lady love ...his life ...his shining star ...his jaan ...was standing in front of him ...he immediately hugged her as tight as he can ...nandani move toward his ears and said

Nandani : I love you Manik and am sorry ...

On the very next moment nandani was lying on him ...manik was so shocked by this ...he was continuously calling her ...but she didn't opened her eyes ...then he saw something which makes him shocked horrified...scared ...he just uttered was only

Manik stammeringly said : kh..oo..n...

Screen frazes manik shocking expression and nandani who lying in his lap unconsciously...

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So how's it ...socho socho kya hua Nandani ko ...well fab5 ki entry ho gayi ha ...I hope you guys like it ...and thanks purna for the lyrics ...okay guys now I have to go ...please comment or likes karna mat bhulna ...comment or likes nahi mile toh next update kaise milegi ...

Take care

Love you all

Keep loving

Keep smiling

And

Keep shining For Ur loved ones

Love

Diya😛