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Posted: 9 years ago
Read all parts in one go. Seriously loved it .looking forward to read more. Update soon and wanna see jealous manik it'll be fun to see that type of part. But keep it up girl .your words has some magic in it.
Edited by Maramkhan - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Hey sorry didn't before was busy
Read all parts in a go
It really seems interesting
It's something different
Thanks for the pm
Love you
Ekta
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Posted: 9 years ago
Hello ppl 😛
So here I am back with part 7 of BRUTAL LOVE
Guyz ...this time many old readers didn't even commented ...
Are you ppl not liking the story ???
And second thing many of you want me to open maniks dark past soon but guyz ...sorry to dissapoint you but it will take some time ...at first I need to make manik trust nandini ..I can't made him tell everything just like that ...but yaa I will try to open up navya harshad part as well as nandini mother suicide thing soon ...
But manik thing will take some more updates ...
Hope you guyz will understand ...

I know many ppl didn't commented this time but still many commented too ...
So thanku soon much for that ...

Now chapiieee ...
Hope you like it ...




PART 7



NANDINIS POV -:



Next day I and navya entered the college together as always ..we made our way to canteen ..we reached canteen but mukti and abhi both were not their ..we saw cabir and manik sitting together ..cabir saw us and passed a smile while manik winked at me and I rolled my eyes in annoyance ..



'nandini ...hum apni class ke liye jaa rhe hn ..' Navya told me ..
'Are navya wait ...I will also come with you ... There is still time for my class ' I told her ..



It was not that I want to join her or something ..

It was just that I didn't wanted to leave her alone with harshad as cabir was also here ...

I knew that navya was strong but still I can't take any risk with him as I know he is a damn jerk ..

I just can't let him hurt my friend again..



'OK come ' navya said normally and we left for the civil sector ..



We reached in her class and I saw harshad .he was talking with some boy ..
I was about to leave but then I saw harshad walking towards us so I stopped there ..



'Hello girls ' harshad said coming towards us and smirked ..

'Hello Mr ..coward ..oops harshad ' I too said in an attitude ...

'Ooo looks like ppl ate still stocked to the past things ' harshad said with an attitude ..

'Of course harshad ..u know someppl don't forget everything so easily ...so beware .' I warned him .
.
He laughed sarcastically and making an innocent face he spoke coming towards navya 'really navya
??'


But I came forward navya and said coldly 'really harshad '
Harshad rolled his eyes irritatedly ...


Navya dragged me back and said 'nandini ...chodo na ...usee he is not that important ' and I nodded
I was about to left the class but was stopped as I saw cabir and manik standing there with questioning faces ..

Maybe they have listened harshad and our conversation ...


Cabir raised his eyebrows in order to ask me that what was going on ??
I didn't replied to him and passed him a faint smile ..

He again raised his eyebrows but I ignored it and left the class completely ignoring manik too ...


I need to do something ..

I can't let harshad hurt navya again ..

I was so tensed ..

I knew harshad is a big jerk ..he will definitely do something ...

I need to be with navya as more as I can ...

I remembered how after all the things navya was broken ...

She never showed it to anyone ..but I know she is ...


I was walking in the corridor thinking all this ..

Then I listened manik calling me from back ..

I didn't turned and kept on walking ...

Finally manik came by my side panting heavily .


.
'Hey ...listen what was that ?? He asked still panting heavily ..

'What ??' I retorted annoyingly ...

'That guy ?? What was that ?? ' he said

'That's none of your business ' I shouted ..

I was seriously very annoyed at that time

'Hey listen ...tell me ' he ordered me ..

'I told its none of your business ...' I told him but this time calmly ...

I saw his face expressions ...

It was looking like someone first time spoke with him like this ...

I saw his jaws getting tightened ..

Anger was rising inside him ...

But I dont give a damn ...about it ..

So I kept on walking ...


But was stopped as manik held my wrist and dragged me inside an empty room ...and pinned me to the wall ..placing his both hands on the wall ..


'Tell me ...what is the matter ?? He spoke in anger but slowly ..

I told u its none of your business ' I spoke softly ...



I don't know why whenever I say no to him for anything there is some pain ...some expectation of him got crushed ...
I can see the pain of dejection in his eyes ...
...


Still I chucked my thoughts ...


'I said tell me ' this time he shouted irritated ..


Then I remember his words ...yesterday ..how I was asking him why he hate love ?? So I too replied his same words too him ..


'I said its none of your business ..don't try to interfere in my personal life ..it should not matter to you that what I do or what I don't .' I replied coldly ..

This time I saw his eyes getting softened ...

Maybe he remembered how in the same way he spoke to me yesterday ...


I was also hurt by his words yesterday ...



I was about to speak something further but was stopped as he pressed his neck on my lips ...


Yes !!! He had tilted his face sideways and giving more access to his neck pressed it on my lips ...




I was shocked ...
No ..!!
This is crazy ...
I can't kiss him ...like that again and again ...
But again I didn't kissed him ...



So he also didn't kissed me ...🤢
What the hell ??
This qutub minar ...
He is such a monster ...😡



After some good time when he felt that I will not speak anything more he tilted his head back and looked at me all smirking ...🥱



'Never ever talk to me like this again . ' he spoke coldly ...



But I ...I was just standing there all shocked ...I was numb ...
How this guy always made his way ..just like that ...



He didn't said anything further and left me ..
He reached till the door ..and then turned and spoke huskily 'next target will be your lips ' and smirked ..and left ...



But from outside I again listened him shouting loud enough for me to hear ' and still some ppl say ..they don't get affected by me ' ..



Arrghhh 😡

Ayiappa ...this qutub minar ...

Iski building to mein hi giraungi...




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Dono ek doosre ka dard batana chahte hn ..
Dono ek doosre ka sath chahte hn ...
Dono alag alag jate hn ..fir bi mil jate hn ...
Shayad dono is zalim duniya me ek doosre ka pyar chahte hn ..😊

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So plz shower your love as your likes and long wale comments ..
Hope you guyz like it ...



Lots of love
akanksha

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My ongoing manan ss LAFZ



Edited by akkukh - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
nice update...cont soon
thanks fr the pm
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Maramkhan

Read all parts in one go. Seriously loved it .looking forward to read more. Update soon and wanna see jealous manik it'll be fun to see that type of part. But keep it up girl .your words has some magic in it.


thnx :) dear
updated ...
read it ..
n jealous manik ...ohk will try
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: manan_eku

Hey sorry didn't before was busy

Read all parts in a go
It really seems interesting
It's something different
Thanks for the pm
Love you
Ekta



glad uh liked it ..

luv uh 2

akanksha
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Posted: 9 years ago
Nuc update
Nandini aur manik ek dusre se kitna bhi door jaane ka try kre pr fir bhi ek saath aa jaate hai...
Manik nandini ki problm jaanna chahta hai pr apni batana nhi chahta...
Manik aur uske chup krwane ke tricks hahaha
Lovd it
Thnks for pm me
Continue soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
Amazing update
I really liked bold Nandini
Manik hehehe...neck kiss
And after leaving dialogues
Next target will be ur lips and still ppl say I don't affect them 😆

Dono ek doosre ka dard batana chahte hn ..

Dono ek doosre ka sath chahte hn ...

Dono alag alag jate hn ..fir bi mil jate hn ...

Shayad dono is zalim duniya me ek doosre ka pyar chahte hn ..
And the lines are awesome
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: dhillon90

Nuc update
Nandini aur manik ek dusre se kitna bhi door jaane ka try kre pr fir bhi ek saath aa jaate hai...
Manik nandini ki problm jaanna chahta hai pr apni batana nhi chahta...
Manik aur uske chup krwane ke tricks hahaha
Lovd it
Thnks for pm me
Continue soon



manik baba is manik baba ...
thnx :)
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: DikshaAnand

Amazing update
I really liked bold Nandini
Manik hehehe...neck kiss
And after leaving dialogues
Next target will be ur lips and still ppl say I don't affect them 😆

Dono ek doosre ka dard batana chahte hn ..

Dono ek doosre ka sath chahte hn ...

Dono alag alag jate hn ..fir bi mil jate hn ...

Shayad dono is zalim duniya me ek doosre ka pyar chahte hn ..
And the lines are awesome



thnx dear ...
hahah

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