Manan ff [BRUTAL LOVE][LINK TO THREAD 2 PAGE 1] - Page 17

Nice update

Originally posted by: bhagupur

Nice update. .

Manik hates love because

His mother and then his father.

But he found nandni is very interesting.

Let's see what he will do.

Thanks for pm.

God bless you.

even I don't know what he will do 😆
Thnx :)

Originally posted by: anya21

superb update!!!

loved it...

uff...manik nd his angry...

god plzz send nandini soon into his life 2 get away his angry...

nd his longingness 4r love nd care...

cabir u r such a gem person...

i always admire cabir's part...

haha..manik remember his 1st meet wid nandini...

he checked her bcs she wore plain tops nd jeans..hehe...

wat like seriously nxt kiss in lips?

uff manik will always b manik na...

how can i forgot dat...

i am gng crazy on ur writing...

loved d way ...u bring every part...

its like fruit 4r me...

keep doing ur wonderful work...

i always admire ur work...

wtng 4r d nxt part...

cont soon...

glad uh liked it ...
even I too love cabir like hell ...
aww ..thnku ...uor comments always make me smile ...
will update soon
love
akanksha

Originally posted by: princypriya

awesoem update

love the way u pinned the manik povs

cabir was really funny

there talks abt the nyo was amzingly pineed

manik was having of weried of nandu to kiss on lips of hers

he was thinking abt her he was smiling

he was jst feeling happy by recollecting every thing abt nandu

cabir was too shock too see manik having smile on his face in tht stiuation

he was thinking tht manik was thnking abt nyo and laughing cant imagine the cabir place

love the way the two r

continue soon

thnks fr pm

sorry fr commenting late

sty blessed

keep smiling

hehehehe ...😆
I m flashing my battissi Di ..reading your comment. ...
glad uh commented

love uh
take care ..
keep smiling
akku

Originally posted by: sws2

hehehe

Love Cabir.

Waiting for Manan moments.

Thanks for the pm.

😊

thnx :)

Originally posted by: mairaallauddin

Nice update

Manbir talk was awesome

Waiting for manan update

Plz Plz update the next part soon

thnx ...
and will try to update soonish :)

Awesome
but there was no manan scene
plz give manan scene in next part
after reading this part it seems like his past is really dark
loved their convo.
Update soon

Originally posted by: anjaliii84

<font size="5">no manan scene..but manbir scene awsm.N chudail hehe </font>

next mein manan scene pucca

hola. ...
so I am back ...
thank u guyz for appreciating ...but still many ppl didn't commented this time ...umm ...aren't u ppl liking it ???
I know thoda manan kam ho jata h but still story is like that only ..once mein sable past reveal krdun then it will only be manan ...
I can't show manik and nandini getting close just like that ...
so plz guyz ..specially silent readers plz drop your views ...

and yes #millie17 gitika di here I added furniture shop meet...
hope u like it :)



now chapiee ...


PART 6



NANDINIS POV -:




after such a tiring day finally we reached home ...as we reached chachi told us that navya's room furniture had been destroyed by Rita when she was playing ..so she told navya to go to the furniture shop ...


navya also dragged me with her ...

I seriously didn't wanted to go as I was hell tired ...

I seriously had enough for the day ...

so many things happened today ...

now I just wanted to collapse on my bed for a peaceful sleep ...




we reached the shop and what I saw made me shocked ..manik and cabir was also their ...manik looked at me and gave me a suspicious yet angry glare ...again I didn't understand that why he was giving me angry look ..



'hey navya. .hii nandini ...u ppl here ??.._' cabir greeted us . before I could speak anything navya said 'wohh !!! for some work ' and smiled ...


I was already very tired so I didn't wanted to go anywhere so I said 'navya you go inside ..and select the things ...I will sit here only '


one more reason for sitting there was also that ...ki I don't want to go inside as manik will be also there ...


'oh cool navya ..come ..actually manik us also not coming inside so we can choose the designs together 'cabir said ...


oh shit ...means I have to stay here with manik ...

no ayiappa ..plz ...

I was about to say to navya that I am coming with her but navya and cabir were already gone ...

its OK nandini ...

so what if he is here ??

ignore him ...


as cabir and navya left manik literally shouted on me angrily 'are you following me ??'

what '?? I shouted confused ...

'then ..what are you doing here ' he shouted again



and now I got it he was thinking that I m following him till here from college ...


had he lost it ??

is he crazy ..??

no he definatily is ...

'I have better things to in life rather then following you ' I mocked him angrily

'oh !!! really thats why you were following me after the class too ...' he said sarcastically snapping me back ...

and I was embarrassed ..

even I didn't know why I followed him ...after the class ..

but it was just that I was curious to know why he hate LOVE ...

this made me remember all the things that happened...

I looked down embarrassed..

I saw him smirking seeing my reaction ...


and bang on

our very own qutub minar is back ...


'listen I was not following you' I said softly composing myself ...

'I will check on navya ...' I said avoiding any further conversation with him and started moving inside ...

he was coming after me ..I knew ...but I wasn't reacting ...


and suddenly he dragged me. behind some cupboard and pinned me to it and spoke softly 'why you wanted to know why I hate love ??'

for the first time his eyes were soft ...

for the first I noticed he had very deep eyes ...there is some mystery in his eyes with lots of pain ...

we were standing there very closely ...his hot breathe were fanning my face ...he was looking at me very intensely...
I was almost lost in his eyes...

'tell me nandini ' he said rubbing by bare arms with his hands .
and I somehow came out of the trance ...

he slid his hands to my back and finally stopped them at my waist ...I shivered badly ..

'say something ' he said so intensely and holded me from my waist ...

my heart was pouncing 1000 times faster than it normally do ...
'I don't know even ' I said softly ...

he didn't replied and started nuzzling his face in my hairs ...inhaling their smell ..

I closed my eyes in anticipation...

I was loosing it ..

he was making me insane ...


he finally tilted his head back ..but still he was very close to me ..
'acccha ...you will again say that you don't get affected me ' ?? he muttered at my lips ..

'yesss ' I spoke stammering badly ..

he smirked on that ...

and obviously he will do that ...

whom I am kidding ??

anyone can easily say seeing my expressions that how badly I am affected...


'ok so ...you are again doing the same mistake of denying it ...so this time I will kiss you on lips ' he spoke softly bringing his lips very ..very close to mine ...our lips were just an inch apart ..


and eureka ...
he accepted that he kissed me in college ..



'manik see you accepted that you kissed me in the morning ' I said justifying me from that ilzam...



'what' ?? he asked confused still his eyes sticked on my lips..
'manik ...morning ...kiss ..u said I did that but it.. was you ...u accepted ...it see ' I said ..trying to make him remember about that ..


'what'?? he shouted gaining his senses and left me and then burst into laughter ..


'lyk seriously nandini ' he spoke between his laughter ..


I didnt said anything further and just ran from there as I was so embarrassed of what just happened..


I reached to the shop back and thank god navya and cabir were
still not there ...


manik came after me and was grinning like a naughty kid ..
finally navya and cabir came after sometime ...and we all left for our homes ..


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love
akanksha


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