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Posted: 9 years ago
Both the parts were awsome..
Sorry couldn't reply on the 4th chapter as I just read both the parts..
Although you PMed me but today was my exam so just reached home and firstly read this story..

I really really liked manik's POV about nandini and the kiss..
And cabir's renovation comment made me laugh hard..

Just loving the story.. please keep updating regularly..
And Lafz too..
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Posted: 9 years ago
Shi m zada senti ho gya tha upar 😆
Cabir and manik I love them both
Matlab how well they knw eachother
And cabir being a funny guy always handle the situation cooly
Furniture renovate 😆
Try to update long naa...
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: aishubangia

Wow... very fast update.. nice one... awsum it ws...

Manbir convo... luv them... cabiraa rocks... update ASAP


I m super fast ..u know
😆
thnx
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: deekshagarg

<font color="#cc6600" face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="2">Both the parts were awsome..</font>

<font color="#cc6600" face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="2">Sorry couldn't reply on the 4th chapter as I just read both the parts..</font>
<font color="#cc6600" face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="2">Although you PMed me but today was my exam so just reached home and firstly read this story..</font>
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<font color="#cc6600" face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="2">I really really liked manik's POV about nandini and the kiss..</font>
<font color="#cc6600" face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="2">And cabir's renovation comment made me laugh hard..</font>
<font color="#cc6600" face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="2">
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<font color="#cc6600" face="Times New Roman, Times, serif"
size="2">Just loving the story.. please keep updating regularly..</font>
<font color="#cc6600" face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="2">And Lafz too..</font>


thnx dear ...
btw how was uor exam ??
lafz ..will update next
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: DikshaAnand

Shi m zada senti ho gya tha upar 😆
Cabir and manik I love them both
Matlab how well they knw eachother
And cabir being a funny guy always handle the situation cooly
Furniture renovate 😆
Try to update long naa...



I know 😆
Hehehe
thnx :)
will try 2 update long next time pucca ..
bt actually WO kya h na I am updating by phone so ...ek do week mein lapii theek ho jayega ...
phone she karne mein bade lafde hn 😆
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: shindesweety

thanku so much for the update

and for the pm too


one request plzz story fast forward karo ya fir roz roz long long update 😃😃😃


I love this ff


plz nxt time se long update


update was nice

cabir n manik convo😊

renovation😲kitne baar😆

loved update

want manan parts

take care



thnx dear ...

will try to update long ...

wo abi I m updating by phone ...
ek do week mein lapii ..theek hojayega ...

anyways ...
tc
love
akku
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Posted: 9 years ago
Nice update. .
Manik hates love because
His mother and then his father.
But he found nandni is very interesting.
Let's see what he will do.

Thanks for pm.

God bless you.







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Posted: 9 years ago
superb update!!!
loved it...
uff...manik nd his angry...
god plzz send nandini soon into his life 2 get away his angry...
nd his longingness 4r love nd care...
cabir u r such a gem person...
i always admire cabir's part...
haha..manik remember his 1st meet wid nandini...
he checked her bcs she wore plain tops nd jeans..hehe...
wat like seriously nxt kiss in lips?
uff manik will always b manik na...
how can i forgot dat...
i am gng crazy on ur writing...
loved d way ...u bring every part...
its like fruit 4r me...
keep doing ur wonderful work...
i always admire ur work...
wtng 4r d nxt part...
cont soon...


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Posted: 9 years ago
awesoem update
love the way u pinned the manik povs
cabir was really funny
there talks abt the nyo was amzingly pineed
manik was having of weried of nandu to kiss on lips of hers
he was thinking abt her he was smiling
he was jst feeling happy by recollecting every thing abt nandu
cabir was too shock too see manik having smile on his face in tht stiuation
he was thinking tht manik was thnking abt nyo and laughing cant imagine the cabir place
love the way the two r
continue soon
thnks fr pm

sorry fr commenting late
sty blessed
keep smiling
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Posted: 9 years ago
hehehe
Love Cabir.
Waiting for Manan moments.
Thanks for the pm.
😊

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