Manan ff~Manik,nandini & their complicated love story EPILOGUE - Page 50

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Amazing update
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this story is gonna end very soon and m trying to wrap it up afap. i dont wanna be rude or something but i never got the response that i desired, moreover half way through this story i observed that the responses were really less, probably because of the late updates and thats why i never complaint about it but the response for the last two updates was really disappointing. i really have to gather myself up to give an update because i wanted to finish this story but with such response i get more demotivated and i delay the updates and i know m wrong on my part to do this but even i have my limitations. i cannot force anyone so all i can do is request all the readers to just drop a comment or a like, at least now when this story is gonna end;i'll be really grateful and a warm thanks to all those who read this story and comment on daily basis, it's majorly for you people that i continued with this story so thank you so much and m really sorry if i have hurt someone's emotions, i never intended to do that
CHAPTER 44

one week flew by in a blink and once again there was hustle and bustle in SPACE. manik had planned something to win nandini's heart and everyone was oblivious to it. this made manik's condition even worse for now for the first time his frnds were not there to calm him down, motivate him or help him, this time it was just him, he had to do everything alone. this very thought both scared him and made him feel good, he was scared for obvious reasons but he was happy coz noe he remembered how he promised nandini that he will show her how much he love's her and finally today he wud do that all on his own.
every student was present in the audi for the performance by fab 5. this function was being held to give the students a break from the hectic life of the college and to give them one pleasant week before their results were announced. the function had many performances including dances, dramatics and of course the cherry on the cake, fab 5's performance.everyone enjoyed the function and finally manik and his band members entered the stage for their performance and the audi was echoing with loud cheers,hoots and whistles, everyone was super excited for it and without wasting a minute they started off with their performance.

Lately, I've been, I've been losing sleep
Dreaming about the things that we could be
But baby, I've been, I've been praying hard,
Said, no more counting dollars
We'll be counting stars, yeah we'll be counting stars

I see this life like a swinging vine
Swing my heart across the line
And my face is flashing signs
Seek it out and you shall find
Old, but I'm not that old
Young, but I'm not that bold
I don't think the world is sold
I'm just doing what we're told
I feel something so right
Doing the wrong thing
I feel something so wrong
Doing the right thing
I could lie, coudn't I, could lie
Everything that kills me makes me feel alive1

Lately, I've been, I've been losing sleep
Dreaming about the things that we could be
But baby, I've been, I've been praying hard,
Said, no more counting dollars
We'll be counting stars

Lately, I've been, I've been losing sleep
Dreaming about the things that we could be
But baby, I've been, I've been praying hard,
Said, no more counting dollars
We'll be, we'll be counting stars

I feel the love and I feel it burn
Down this river, every turn
Hope is a four-letter word
Make that money, watch it burn
Old, but I'm not that old
Young, but I'm not that bold
I don't think the world is sold
I'm just doing what we're told
I feel something so wrong
Doing the right thing
I could lie, could lie, could lie
Everything that drowns me makes me wanna fly

Lately, I've been, I've been losing sleep
Dreaming about the things that we could be
But baby, I've been, I've been praying hard,
Said, no more counting dollars
We'll be counting stars

Lately, I've been, I've been losing sleep
Dreaming about the things that we could be
But baby, I've been, I've been praying hard,
Said, no more counting dollars
We'll be, we'll be counting stars

Take that money
Watch it burn
Sink in the river
The lessons are learnt

Take that money
Watch it burn
Sink in the river
The lessons are learnt

Take that money
Watch it burn
Sink in the river
The lessons are learnt

Take that money
Watch it burn
Sink in the river
The lessons are learnt

Everything that kills me makes feel alive

Lately, I've been, I've been losing sleep
Dreaming about the things that we could be
But baby, I've been, I've been praying hard,
Said, no more counting dollars
We'll be counting stars

Lately, I've been, I've been losing sleep
Dreaming about the things that we could be
But baby, I've been, I've been praying hard,
Said, no more counting dollars
We'll be, we'll be, counting stars

Take that money
Watch it burn
Sink in the river
The lessons are learnt

Take that money
Watch it burn
Sink in the river
The lessons are learnt

Take that money
Watch it burn
Sink in the river
The lessons are learnt

Take that money
Watch it burn
Sink in the river
The lessons are learnt

manik's hoarse and husky voice made everyone jump on their feet and gave everyone goosebumps. the drums, the keyboard and the guitar made the song extremely exciting and joyous. the fab 5 were smiling on th stage and thanking everyone when manik took the mike

m: thanq everyone for your love and support and for beingsuch an amazing audience. i wud like to present one more song for someone really close to my heart, this song reflects what m feeling right now. and i hope that someone special knows who m i talking about, but just to be safe,this is for u minion

manik said the last line looking into nandini's eyes with passion and intensity blowing her out of her senses; and fab 5 too. well nandini's situation was obvious but fab 5 unlike nandini were not looking lovingly at manik but of course with rage coz they had practiced for only onr song and this surprise was freaking them out

c(whispering):saale nano ke ashiq, bahar miliyo yeh saari ashiqui nikal loonga, yeh tere surprise ke chakkar mein ham fass gaye. ab agar koi jhol hua na stage pe toh dekh lena

but manik ignoring cabir tolg evryone about the song and at once their rage was gone and they were all excited to do this

Na aaye ho, na aaoge, na phone pe bulaoge
Na shaam ki karaari chai, labo'n se yun pilaoge

as soon as manik started singing, nandini's eyes pooped out and with every word she could see her and manik's flashback running across her eyes
Na aaye ho, na aaoge, na din dhale sataoge
Na raat ki nashili bye se neendh mein jagaoge
Gaye tum gaye ho kyun, yeh raat baaki hai
Gaye tum gaye ho kyun, saath baaki hai
Gaye tum gaye hum tham gaye, Gaye kyun toh jiyein kyun

manik's intensity and passion gave nandini goosebumps. manik was looking straigth into her eyes and was confessing to her all that he couldnt say
har baat baaki hai

Na aaye ho, na aaoge, na dooriyaan dhikhaoge
Na thaam ke woh josh mein yun hosh se udaoge

nandini remembered how she used ignore manik everytime he wud curse her minions, manik on the other hand was remembering her cute and super exicited behaviou everytime she was happy
Na aaye ho, na aaoge, na jhoot se sunaoge
Na rooth ke sirhane mein, remote ko chhupaoge

she remembered how she wud miserably fail at lying to manik and he could see that angry nandini actually hiding his tv remote for not letting her watch her favourite program
Gaye tum gaye ho kyun, yeh raat baaki hai
Gaye tum gaye ho kyun, saath baaki hai
Gaye tum gaye hum tham gaye, har baat baaki hai, Gaye kyun toh jiyein kyun

everytime manik said those words something pricked inside nandini and she did not even realise when tears made their way through her eyes.

Aankh bhi tham gayi, na thaki
Raat bhi na bati, na kati
Raat bhi chherti marrti
Neend bhi lutt gayi, chiin gayi
Raat bhi na sahi, na rahi
Raat bhi laazmi, zaalmi

with every word manik confessed to nandini how much he regretted his acts and how much he suffered to be with her, to seek her forgiveness and that how much he loved her
Gaye tum gaye ho kyun, yeh raat baaki hai
Gaye tum gaye ho kyun, saath baaki hai
Gaye tum gaye hum tham gaye
har baat baaki hai
Gaye kyun toh jiyein kyun
Gaye kyun toh jiyein kyun

Na aaye ho, na aaoge, na phone pe bulaoge
Na shaam ki karaari chai
labo'n se yun chhudaoge

for the first time nandini felt complete and healed, she understood every emotion of manik and eveything that he wanted her to know but couldnt say it to her...and with this all her doubts got cleared

manik sang the whole song but admist the last part he saw nandini running out and crying and as soon as he finished the song he ran out behind her but couldnt find her. he called her out but she was nowhere to be seen. it was raining heavily and there was no sign of nandini when a voice from the audi made manik freeze. it was nandini an she was singing, he rushed into the audi and everyone made way for him so that he could see nandini drenched in water, but singing

(Even if we can't find heaven)
Hands
Put your empty hands in mine
And scars
Show me all the scars you hide
And hey, if your wings are broken
Please take mine so yours can open too
Cause I'm gonna stand by you
Oh, tears make kaleidoscopes in your eyes
And hurt, I know you're hurting, but so am I
And love, if your wings are broken
Borrow mine so yours can open too
Cause I'm gonna stand by you
Even if we're breaking down, we can find a way to break through
Even if we can't find heaven, I'll walk through hell with you
Love, you're not alone, cause I'm gonna stand by you
Even if we can't find heaven, I'm gonna stand by you
Even if we can't find heaven, I'll walk through hell with you
Love, you're not alone, cause I'm gonna stand by you
Yeah, you're all I never knew I needed
And the heart, sometimes it's unclear why it's beating
And love, if your wings are broken
We can brave through those emotions too
Cause I'm gonna stand by you
And oh, truth, I guess truth is what you believe in
And faith, I think faith is having a reason
And I know my love, if your wings are broken
Borrow mine so yours can open too
Cause I'm gonna stand by you
Even if we're breaking down, we can find a way to break through
Even if we can't find heaven, I'll walk through hell with you
Love, you're not alone, cause I'm gonna stand by you
Even if we can't find heaven, I'm gonna stand by you
Even if we can't find heaven, I'll walk through hell with you
Love, you're not alone, cause I'm gonna stand by you
I'll be your eyes 'till yours can't shine
And I'll be your arms, I'll be your steady satellite
Now when you can't rise, well, I'll cry with you on hands and knees
(Cause I) Cause I'm gonna stand by you
Even if we're breaking down, we can find a way to break through
Even if we can't find heaven, I'll walk through hell with you
Love, you're not alone, cause I'm gonna stand by you
Even if we can't find heaven, I'm gonna stand by you
Even if we can't find heaven, I'll walk through hell with you
Love, you're not alone, cause I'm gonna stand by you
Love, you're not alone
I'm gonna stand by you
(Even if we can't find heaven, heaven, heaven)
Yeah, I'm gonna stand by you


nandini finished the song. music was never just singing for her, it was a means to convey what she always felt and couldnt speak and just like manik confessed his pain nandini shared her heart with manik through the song. no doubt nyonika was right...music set them apart and only it could bring them both together. nandini finished her part and went out through the back stage. manik was frozen on his place, he wanted to follow her but he just couldnt move

c: abbe saale ab kya yahan kharra jaa

it was only when fab5 and group pushed him that he ran behind nandini

nandini was standing right in the middle of the rain her back was facing manik

m: nandin..

n: i love you manik, i love you, every cell and every ounce of my soul had been in love with you since forever now and it felt like every power in this world tried its level best to snatch u away from me, but u didnt leave, u didnt. thanq manik for being there when i needed u and thanq for being a part of my life which no doubt is the most beautiful one..and i dont know what m saying coz for the first time m not thinking..m feeling...and its beautiful...thanq

well once again manik was numb as always and before he could say anything a pair of lips captured his, drowning and drenching in each other's passion, love and need. proving their love and showing what truly their hears felt. manik and nandini would never break away if the group wouldnt have reached there

c: wooohhooo!!!!!!

cabir's scream made them both conscious and they broke apart.

mu: omg m so happy

and mukti ran and hugged both of them followed by everyone...


it was not as good as i wanted it to be..sorry...just one or two more updates and the story would end



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Posted: 9 years ago
Awesomeee
The songs were sooo rightly chosen
Loved it
Finally Manan together without any doubt and hesitation
😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
nyc part dear... finally she forgive him
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Posted: 9 years ago
Wow finally nandani confessed...im so happy plz keep writing continue soon waiting for next update take care 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
manik n nandini confessed

wow

songs were so beautiful

finally they r together
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Posted: 9 years ago
Awesome update
Finally manan confessed their love to each other.
Continue soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
Wow update...
Finally Nandu forgave him...
I loved song selection...
Waiting for next..
Luved it...
Thnx for pm..
Update soon..
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Posted: 9 years ago
The songs were awesome
Emotional too
Waiting for update
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Posted: 9 years ago
Wow wat a beautiful update...::::
Manan nd der beautiful way of conveying each other feels...:
Its way beautiful...::::

Manan nd der togetherness...

Plzzz update new part soon

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