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Posted: 9 years ago
Amazing update...
And the dress was amazing...
Waiting for nxt update...
Post soon...

LOVE,
AAROHI...
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Posted: 9 years ago
Bang...wowoo...what an update yar...i loved it...loved it from the bottom of my heart...do i need to tell u that...u have succeede in showing nandini the cutest creature of this world...oh my god...she was damn cute yar...loved it...and the way she complained him and that hug...and ya how can i forget that RAT...it was hillarious and consequences of that situation was awsm...their intimacy...and at the end...manik get to know about her being an orphan...and he was like...omg omg...i cant explain how much i loved it...

u r spoiling us...ab na din rat forum sirf tumhari stories padhne ke liye kholti hu main...u write so well dear...waiting for the nxt update of Dheeree...intazar nai ho raha hai... waiting...waiting...jaldi jaldi.update karna...and yeahhh pm.me also
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Posted: 9 years ago
Dheere dheere se meri zindagi me aana... wohooo dheere dheere manik is entering in nandu's life...n same with manik's life... i loved dis update to d core... strting wid nandu's mrning she brought tulips fr him.. aww... nd manik asked her to throw dem?? Vry bad bt hmari nandu kch km thdi h uske jawab ka to koi jawab hi ni h waah...heheheee... nd again her choclates... evn my favrt is dairymilk only... aha kash mjhe v kvi aisa boss mil jae...heheee... nd dt rat prt ws too gud.. he palmed her mouth to stop her frm shouting hahaa..bt der closeness ws amazing thing... n der goes aryamann prt...arghhh muh tod dungi mai sare aise ldko ka... its nice to see manik undrstng nandu so well.. nd awww our cute innocnt nandu cried bcz arya ws staring at her n she dnt find it gud...so pure soul... den manik consoled hr n dat 'promise' thing ws d bst prt... pure bonding hs strtd dheere dheere n also trust... aww...loving it nd ya nandu's attire ws vry cute yr... i really liked it nd der manik bcm so upset to find out abt nandu he shares wid cabir n dey share so good frnshp...he suggstd to take care of her... wowww nw wud luv to see manik's soft side fr nandu nd d way he said bacchi h wo...hehee... so cute...looking fwd fr more amazing scenes of dem... u r rocking in dis ff really... thnks a lot fr d pm... tc...love yaaa... nd update sooonnn...waitinggg...
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Posted: 9 years ago
Wow.

amazing Update

loved it.

rabta song my most fab.


the rat scene was superb.


manik consoling nandu so sweet.

Nandini dress is beautiful...

and last part was very emotional.

waiting for next Update...
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Posted: 9 years ago
amazing!!!!! *_* *_* I love that hug!!!!I absolutely cant wait for the update!!!!! I love this innocent yet clever nandu..maniks promise!!!! now I want a manik even more :'( :'( :'( im really forward to party :D :D
thanks for the pm!!
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Posted: 9 years ago
Hey awsm update... Manik & Cabir convo great... Nandu such a innocent girl... So if m not wrong Aryaman 1st villain of ur story... Nandu ka dress awsm... Is Aryaman upto sumthing???? He is giving negative vibes... Cant wait for party there is something big dhamaka in party... Update soon keep smiling!!!!
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Posted: 9 years ago




"Tum kuch ziada ni bolti?"He said coldly and smiled sheepishly.


"Ap ko aisa lagta hai kion kay ap bohat kam bolty hain..!"I said nodding my head in a very serious tone and Manik sighed. "Waisy I think you need a friend..!"I suggested.


"Mjhy kya chye kya nahi ab ya tum mjhy btaoa ge?"Suddenly Manik Sir shouted. My all joyness flew away in seconds and my face went pale. Then he look at the flowers and frowned. "Kis ki ijazat say tum ya flowers li ho throw them in the waste bin?"He said coldly. Leehhh ab pholoon say bhi problem hai..! Kharoos..!


"I thought this will help to make you a little happy..!"I said making a bad face and he sighed.


"Kya ho tum? Aren't you scared of me?"Manik Sir asked in a confused tone.


"No..!"I said casually and I saw his expressions softened.


"Why?"He asked politely.


"Because ap ya jo angry look dikhaty ho this is all fake..!"I said smilingly and I feel he was shocked for a second. Then he turned his face and started typing on his laptop. I shrugged my shoulders making a bad face as I thought he ignored my COMPLIMENT.


I run from Manik Sir's cabin my heartbeat was breaking all the records. Once again we were so close. Being so close to Manik Sir was really something different. What was that..! I have never felt like this for anyone before. I was thinking all this when I banged into someone. I look at the person and sighed.


"Hye beautiful..! Itne khoi khoi si kahan ja rahi ho?"Cabir bhai said in his all time chirpy voice and I smiled.


"Nowhere..! Wo Manik sir asked me to call you..!"I stammered and he nodded.


"Kuch hua hai?"Cabir bhai asked and I shook my head in no. What would I tell him? Suddenly Cabir bhai clicked his fingers in front of me and I smiled again.


"Lets go..!"Cabir bhai said and dragged me with himself. We reached Manik Sir's cabin and I saw peon had caught the rat in trap I again shrieked and hide behind Cabir bhai. He laughed and held my hands.


"Relax behna..! Just a rat..! Khaye ga nahi..!"He said laughingly and I made a bad face. But during all this I noticed something very beautiful and that was MANIK SIR's SMILE..! Aiyaappa he was smiling on us..! Manik Sir smile bhi karty hain..! Although it wasn't very wide only a lopsided smile but it was beautiful more than I imagine. Yeah I have always imagine that how will he look when he will smile and he was looking more and more handsome I wished that he keep smiling like this alway




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Posted: 9 years ago
amazing

loved it

keep writing

update soon

eagerly waiting for the party
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Posted: 9 years ago
wow such a amazing update
manik and nandini's conversation was funny
now manik know that nandini is an orphan
his care for nandini will increase
plz update today
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: paarsaa

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