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sanviM

@sanviM

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Posted: 9 years ago

#201

Awww.. it was sooo cute

I luv this inocent nandu she is so naive

And that chocolate sharing gesture was soo sweet...

Manik itni chotu si nandu pe gussa kaise dikhayega...it's impossible to be angry with her

Pls pls pls update soon

Eagerly waiting

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music_manan

@music_manan

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Posted: 9 years ago

#202

I loved your update. From the beginning to end it's awesome. The cabir's talk with nandu. Everything is vry emotional. Then manik's point of view towards nandini. It's vry beautiful . Chocolate sharing n falling of nandini is good

It's vry nice to see both of them in this boss Secretary relationship. I loved it. Then she is intelligent also, who finished files immediately. Nice n awesome again.

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CutiePie_Me

@CutiePie_Me

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Posted: 9 years ago

#203

I loved the chocolate scene.. and update was nice.. I liked the update

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aarohi arora

@aarohi_angel98

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Posted: 9 years ago

#204

That was something cute...
Like both are faling for each other but dheere dheere...
Song is perfect for them... "dheere dheere se meri zindagi mein aana"...
Cont soon...

LOVE,
AAROHI...

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pujadas187

@pujadas187

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Posted: 9 years ago

#205

Lovely update.. Beautifully written..

Manan morning encounter undr table.. Nandu share hr ol choclate wid him.. Manik's joke...

Thnks..fr making it a ss...
Continue soon...

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sameeksha

@mini_manan

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Posted: 9 years ago

#206

<font size="5">Sorry for late comment dear or should i say ki dono update ka comment ek saath karna padh raha ha..solly par kya karte 2 din se thodi busy thi aaj hi free hu or dekho to zara free hote hi tumhare ek naye update ka gift mil gya..
Concept new ha...and definately bahut cute he...
Nandini ki baate sunkar to aisa mann kar raha that ki use kha jao 😆 😆 par phir socha ki agr me kha gye to manik ka kya ho...aakhir uska bhi to dil aa gya na is cute ki nandini par.. 😆

Meea fab part vo half chocolate wala or nandini ka manik ke upar girna or manik ka joke karne waala tha..

Haye tumne to din bana diya..
Loved it.
Cont soon.
Love..mini</font>

Edited by mini_manan - 9 years ago

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srija-n

@srija-n

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Posted: 9 years ago

#207

Awsm part ... loved it ... :-)

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Suprabha

@shaanmaan

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Posted: 9 years ago

#208

Wow it was a lovely update Now cabir is nandu's buai For one chocolate nandu goes under the table just thn manik comes Manan's expression were worth seeing Whole update was superb update soon