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Cooldude101

@Cooldude101

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#11

This was good and to see the transformation in Manik would be good. So if you can please make this into a SS or FF. I was feeling so scared for our Nandu!😕

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ChaiParantha

@Thatgirl16

Dazzler

+ 5

Posted: 10 years ago

#12

Yaar u r truly best in this genre...

Omg ye toh pagal hai manik...

The character is somewhat psychotic...

I love nandu as usual... She is my fav.. But here she is sweet innocent n different from both Ur other stories where she is rebellious...

All in all I loved this os...

Thanks for the pm

Aditi

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priya

@priya_sejwal

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#13

Omg...it was quite scary

Manik being so possessive...it's going to be iinteresting if uh will chge it into ff n shw manik's transformation...

Btw uh r Awsumm writer...uh wrote it very well..liked it

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pihu

@epshitatabassum

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#14

Nyc

Plz chang os into ff

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Heema Somani

@heemasomani

Rocker

Posted: 10 years ago

#15

Awesome OS

manik is possessive

can u pls try to make this a ff

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jai18

@jai18

Navigator

Posted: 10 years ago

#16

U rock girl!

Loved the concept :)

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filled wit manan

@happiegal

Explorer

Posted: 10 years ago

#17

Awesome storyline..it's really good. Make it as a ff

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Jyoti

@bhagupur

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#18

Very interesting story ...very interesting scene description. Must say you have very unique ideas in your writer mind. 👏👏. I hope you will continue this story ...Thanks for sharing this amazing peace of work. ⭐️

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Ashmita18

@Ashmita18

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Posted: 10 years ago

#19

Such extreme emotions are really dangerous... over possessive nature, over protective nature, obsession, all these are really strong feelings and they can harm a lot... it was a bit scary... although he loves her but he treats her like a possession... it was good but a bit harsh...Anyways I liked it...