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Diksha Anand

@DikshaAnand

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Posted: 10 years ago

#271

It was awesome
How do u manage to right so beautiful lines
Manik's dialogue are perfect
One of the most romantic nyt which they sent together the KISS
But wat will happen in the morning
How she will react ?
Will Nandini remember all dis?
So excited for next update
Good job 😊

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NAVYA64

@NAVYA64

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Posted: 10 years ago

#272

awesome update

loved it so much

amazing

cont soon

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@MaNanholapeople

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Posted: 10 years ago

#273

Awww they kissed again and why did yuh ended it on suspense thats not fare but the update was wonderful as always i love your writing like really how can yuh guys write so nicely and i cant even write i am so bad i know but awesome update bae

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AsthaVerma92

@AsthaVerma92

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Posted: 10 years ago

#274

Wow r manan 2nd kiss... Owsm blossom taar i jst loved it...
To the core... Plz try to post best friend soon

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ChocolatePie14

@ChocolatePie14

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Posted: 10 years ago

#275

WILL NANDINI REMEMBER EVERYTHING???!!!! ANYWAY LOVED IT!!!!!! AND ALSO LOVE YOU... KEEP UPDATING AND EID MUBARAK!!!!!!

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music_manan

@music_manan

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Posted: 10 years ago

#276

Hi there, such a nice n long update. Their convo besides the lake is so quiet n emotional

Manik's fight between heart n mind is beautifully potrays here. Their soft kisses give me goosebumps. It's nice to hear Nandini's words. Her soulful words makes me emotional too. Then mukti nnavya raw agents. They r hilarious. Hehehe. Beautiful explanation of love is given. Everytime we think Wht is love? But we can't say so beautifully like u did. Kudos for u. I think your health is not good. So all the best for your health. I ent know what will the reaction of Nandini. Hope for the best . Love u bahut Sara. Waiting for next. Stay blessed n keep smiling.

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anjali3010

@anjali3010

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Posted: 10 years ago

#277

Heyy osm update thnxx for d pm...so finally they kissed...hope Nandu remember everything...and tell d reason soon why manik left

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anushkamahato

@anushkamahato

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Posted: 10 years ago

#278

👏 👏 that was so cute...d beach scene..d bed room one...gosh m in luv wid manan again nd all d silly questions of nandini...!!! Thnx of d update nd i'll be waiting for d nxt... See u soon.. . . . With lots of Love 😊 😊 [:*] [:*]