#2 MANAN SS YOU BECOME MY STORY for all readers New link -150 - Page 29

It was beautiful dear ut seems u n ur best frd is back again:)

Awesome update👏

Thank u forbd pm
Thinks are getting clear slowly...
Again a fab update
Peaceful kiss...
Next would b nandini reaction...
Keep updating...
Continue soon ..

Awesome update
Just loved every quotes
They kissed again yappieee
Now thinking what will happen when nandu come to know everything
Continue soon

Awesome update...
Thanx for pm me...

Amazing. Amazing. Amazing. 😃

Awesome update...
Nandu ...so cutely she was asking all her insecurities...
Manik's answers ...wow...
His love was so much prominent...
Superb...
Mukti n navay RAW and manik ISI...heheheheh
Their kiss...awww
I hope she remembers what happened...
There's something that manik wants to tell bt couldnt...reveal it soon...
Thnkz 4 the pm

Thanku for giving such a long update..
Coming to the update..
It was superb..
Finally they kissed..
Now wanted to know nandinis reaction..
Man an moments were cute..
Thanks for giving such a lovely update..
N for PM also..

Hi dear...sorry for commenting late... but i started reading this story only one day before...i can understand how it feels when when ur hardwork is not paid off...for writing a single comment only i rewrite it 2-3 times...so i can understand how much efforts you put to write such a long update...
u are just superb writer dear...👏 seriously...how could you write to different stories with different concept at a time...i started reading why can't i love my best friend...and completed it in 2 days...it is also awesome from there i got to know about this n completed this in one day..
now coming to the story its just AWESOME...👏 and became my favorite...it's a totally different concept n i loved it... loved the way how manik knows nandini in and out ...by each chapter i'm felling in love with manik's character more n more...
the way he answered her each question was really heart touching😊
OMG...they kissed again😉😳
hope nandu remembers the convo n forgives him...
eagerly waiting to know the reason why manik left her ...
i loved each and every manan scene starting from the fare to the first kiss.😃
and now the teasing session of manik...
waiting for next update...
take care
i promise to comment from nxt time😃

Hey... Such a beautiful chapter yar..