Manan ff: dheere dheere se meri zindagi mein aana - Page 2

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: asangel

Nyc cncpt...plz cntinue nd pm me

Sure dear will pm u
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Posted: 10 years ago
#12
Nice concept different from other ff
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Posted: 10 years ago
#13
Engineering students who also love Music (might be not all of them)
Nice start
Cont Soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
#14
cont soon and plz pm me
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Posted: 10 years ago
#15
nice concept continue soon
its intresting
plzz pm me if you can
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Posted: 10 years ago
#16
concept seems interesting
plzzz continue soon and pm me
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Posted: 10 years ago
#17
Nice concept
Continue soonnn
Do pm me nxt time
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Posted: 9 years ago
#18
Hello guys! Good noon! First of all Happy ganesh chaturthi! And sorry for not posting for so many days...I was busy in my college work...so sorry...here is your chapter...
Chapter 1

Let's start from start...
First day of college for girls
And boys were in second year...
Nandani was shifted from manglore to here...she just landed to college with her bag...and she visited first time to Mumbai...

Same as nandani navya also shifted...

They both met at gate...and there navni's friendship started...

Alya n mukti was friends with manik, cabir n dhruv from school and they were meeting today after 1 year

Alya: mukti call kabir where are they?... They told us to meet at gate at 7...and its 7:20 where are they?

Mukti: alya chill! Wait call karti hu

Boys room:
Cabir: ( in sleepy voice)manik tera phone baj rha h utha!!

Dhuru: abbe ghade utth tera phone baj rha h!!

Dhruv: manik uth na freeshnup ho ja aaj second year ka first day h late ho jahengai nhi toa first day pai Hi...

Manik: buddy plz 5 min!

Cabir: hello kon h jo itni subha subha pareshan kar rha h?

Mukti: abb saale uth!! Kha margya tu?

Cabir jumps!

Cabir: dhruv abhi tak phuncha nhi?...mukti Maine usko kab sai bheja tha...paka koi ladki kai saath ruka hoga...

Dhruv hits him with a pillow!!

Mukti: tu aa jaldi kar vo pta nhi kha h!!

Cabir: wait mai dhruv ko dekh kai usko bhejta hu...

Dhruv: abbe saale tu sirf mujhe phasa...and hits him

Cabir: accha abhi yeh sab chod vo dono gate pai khadi h jaldi bhaag

Manik: kya hua itna shor kyu maach rhi ho?

Cabir: tu utth aur nahane ja mukti n alya aa ghi h

Manik: abbe oye jaise khud toa tayaar hoke bheta h na!!

Cabir: ja na tu!!

Manik: accha abhi jaldi kar uth varna vo dono aake bhaval machahengi

Navni's scene:

Navya: new admission?

Nandani: yes u?

Navya: same first year?

Nandani: ya u?

Navya: ya branch?

Nandani:computers u?

Navya: same..

Nandani: Hi nandani!

Navya: navya

Nandani: chale? Rooms bhi dekhne h na ...n aaj Hi h na Colg..

Navya: ya let's go!

They talked to hostel people and there room no. Is 102

Mukti n alya also gets rooms

Room allocation:
101- manbir
102-navni
103-muklya
104-dhruv n abhi

And all balconies were attached...

Navya: nice rooms!!

Nandani: yeah! Pretty good let me check the washroom

Navya goes to balcony

And in cabirs balcony he was brushing bcoz manik was taking a bath

Navya: shouts

Nandani: what happen?

Navya: balcony mai koi ladka rheta h

Cabir comes after washing face

Cabir: hello madam! Mai koi balcony mai nhi rheta yeh room mai rheta hu...

Navya: yah alag hosteles kyu nhi h mahatarani?

Cabir: tum kisisai baat kar rhi ho?

Navya: tum chup raho!

Cabir: r u mad?

Navya: mahatarani yeh pagal ladka plz mujhe baacho yeh kaise atranghi log h...kaisa Colg h yeh...n subha subha is manhus ladke ki shakal kyu dikhai? N yeh sab kya hh?
Yeh balcony sab joint ...n baju mai sab ladke...shi shi shi!!

Cabir: just shutup! Pta nhi kya bolu ja rhi ho..

NavtaNavta: mujhe tumsai baat Hi nhi karni h comes in room

So here was chapter 1 sorry for short 1...do comments...so that I can write more...next one wi be bigger bye...see u soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
#19
even I am also a computer engineering 3rd year student. and kash I ve manik as my class mate !!!!

day dreaming !!!!

whatever welcoming the new story.

I am happy as it's based on engineering clg.

are you also an engineer? ?
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Awesome start ... Totally unique concept engeneering college really different and sound very very intresting ... Love all the characters ... Superb start sweetheart... Whole heartily welcoming the new story ... Update the next part soon ... First encounter cavya hahaha they start fighting so cute... Waiting for our manan to meet for first time... I have send u buddy request if possible include me to ur pm list ..refreshing start..seems am gonna have fun reading ur story for sure..update soon... With lots of love and hugs

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