#2 She resides in me.Manan ff(THREAD 3 PG 1) 24 nov

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dhillon90

@dhillon90

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Posted: 10 years ago

#181

Amazing
Superb
Emotional update
Awesome song n my fav too...i m just curious to know what happened...u penned it very beautifully
Lovd it
Continue soon

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Anu

@RomComFan

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Posted: 10 years ago

#182

Love the look into the past... and their present too..how much they love and need eachother..looking foward to seeing how they get together gain...

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ayush

@ashi..motu

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Posted: 10 years ago

#183

Hey kaju..
Sorry for late rply..
Was busy in office..
Update was fabulous..
Flashbacks are awesome.. Especially manik ka Nandini ko maa bolna..
Manik all tym big flirt.. Hehe..
Song selection is nice..
I just loved it..
Especially humdard wali line.. Poori ek villain movie m mjhe wahi ek line smjh aayi thi.. Hehe..
Humdard mera fav song h..
Thanks for using it.
Good going girl..
Just loved ur update..
U r a great writer yaar srsly..
Update soon..
Thanks for pm..
Bye..
Take care..
God bless u..
Lots of love..
Puccha.. :)

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arshuaar

@arshuaar

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Posted: 10 years ago

#184

Emotional
Recalling their past...
song was awesome...
Manik all time flirty ...
Nandu always keep Manik aways from troubles
after all she is his Shining Star...
thanx for PM😊

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Kajal

@angel2015

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Posted: 10 years ago

#185

Originally posted by: chocopie26

I also wish that ur story reaches each n every heart in this world...my comments r nothing...u write sooo beautifully..that I can't hold back...ur poems...Oh God..I feel lyk making a song on them...I'm telling u if by God's grace I become a singer...I wish I cud sing smthing written by u...n yeah Destiny has differnt plans for all...I wish it has beautiful plans for u unlike me...Stay Blessed
Continue Soon...

I really wish..one day..you become a singer..and I write for you..and wish..I could also sing with you.. :)

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love_manan

@love_manan

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Posted: 10 years ago

#186

heya...read the chapter today only...and i love the way u are showing their emotions...bt one req to u...plzz...reveal the secret now...its almost ur 15th part...as u havent clarified excatly waht and how all happened in their past...though we have udea of manik's mistake...bt plzz...now start showing flashback more than present...as u have beautifully penmed down the situation of their present...i think now in upcoming chapters u should reveal the truth...and their past...its just my view...loved the update...pm me...nxt time plzz..

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Vidushi

@chocopie26

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Posted: 10 years ago

#187

Originally posted by: angel2015

I really wish..one day..you become a singer..and I write for you..and wish..I could also sing with you.. :)

Yeah I wish...😊

Tell me when r u updating ????any 1 of the stories????.

I'm really desprate 2 read

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Ashmita18

@Ashmita18

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Posted: 10 years ago

#188

It was soo painful... they both are in pain... they both need each other... but destiny is playing it's own games... they are sooo much in love that they can't be together... what an irony... their flashbacks just add more to the pain they are already in... amazing update... it was full of emotions... determination in manik's mind to make nandini happy... and nandini's questions as why all that happened... it's all sooo heart wrenching... great going... uh are doing an excellent work...

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navla

@navla

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Posted: 10 years ago

#189

wonderful update...

d song u choose is perfect...for the situation...

i hope nw manik bcum her shadow n give nandu smile back...

u pinned it beautifullly...every emotion wrote was outstanding...

take cr...

waiting for next part...

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passionatepuja

@passionatepuja

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Posted: 10 years ago

#190

hey...i just red ur story in one go...i just love ur love story or i can say intense love story...ur poem are just fabulouls...ur very talented nd very good writter...thanks for the story nd plz pm me the update but for that we need to be budy so plz accept my buddy request

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