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Uma

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Posted: 10 years ago

#231

Originally posted by: mehjaben_nahin

🤢 thnx for replying... I should have known... 🤢

Welcome dear

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Uma

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Posted: 10 years ago

#232

Originally posted by: aditimanan
Okay read all part in one go
U know after reading first part really wanted to throw eggs nd tomatoes hahaha just joking
But 2 nd3 part were really good atleast manik talks to nandu
That soha such a looser wanna kill her
So finally nandu going clg
Plz cabir ko bhi lao naa
Missing fab 5
Plz do reply
Pm me nxt chap
Cont soon
Lots of love

He he u r welcome to throw all of it, as i knew very well, reading my first part, most of u would be angry.Get ready to hate soha more than anything now, cabir, no chance i guess, if possible i wil surely bring him in, even i miss him a lot,added u to my pm list. Love u too dear

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Uma

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Posted: 10 years ago

#233

Originally posted by: farhana12
waiting for ur update
plz update soon...

Sorry to make u wait, wil post next part within few mins

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Uma

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Posted: 10 years ago

#234

Originally posted by: Nidhibansod
awsome yar...superb update..I loved it..update soon...I am waiting for next update..Plz update asap...!!!

Thanks a lot dear, wil update next part now

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Uma

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Posted: 10 years ago

#235

Originally posted by: kitkat5756
Awesome update sweetheart.. I was just searchinG in the forum and found ur story ..just red ur story in one go ...the story is beautiful and different..I really liked it ...if possible then adD me to ur pm list ..am looking forward for this new story Glad u liked my story, thanks a lot dear, added u to my pm list

U portraited every character pretty well Thanks again... Soha can never be good to someone Thats for sure ... She will always be a wicked witch ...manik's mom and dad is really sweet and caring ... I feel bad for nandu when I started reading ur story but I trust u u wont seperate our manan pakka promise or i should say nandini promise😆...am pretty sure nandu slowly will make manik nice person and get rid off his bad habits U got the point..soon manik will realise nandu's worth and will see actual face of wicked soha ... Am sure u have stored some intresting twists and turns for us in the story👍🏼 .. Maza toh bas start huwa hain ... Thanks for making nandu strong in the story ... Love stories parne main maza tab ata hain jab usme twists and turns ho

Thanks for sharing a lovelY story with us ...continue soon ...really looking forward for ur story..May Allah bless u...tc...with lots of love and hugs Love u too dear

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Uma

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Posted: 10 years ago

#236

Originally posted by: Sneha_p4
nice concept dear... different story... mai chahti thi ki aisi koi type ki story aaye Manan ki...Nd here ur...!!!!!!! read in one go...!!!! awosome dear...

Thanks a lot dear, continue reading, there are more to come around

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Uma

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Posted: 10 years ago

#237

Originally posted by: shristi sarda
Just came across this story...amazing concept...loved al the 3 parts...
Make manik nyhw jealous dt vl nly work I think...jst a thought..
Pls add me to ur pm list n continue asap!!!

Jealousy track wil come but little later, before that manik need to realise some thing more

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Uma

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Posted: 10 years ago

#238

Thank u so much for the wonderful response.

Thanks to all those who liked and commented on previous chappy

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Here goes the next part

Part 4

Next day morning, Manik with his eyes closed, stretched his hand to search for something/someone on the bed, and on finding nothing, he opens his eyes to see a empty bed, and he remembered how he kissed Nandini last time thinking her as Soha, he thought, she just doesn't want him to kiss her, so she left so early, he nodded his head and came down to have his coffee, when he saw Nandini was about to leave home for college, he called her "Nandini" she quickly turned and said " Good morning Manik, i do have some extra classes, so i have to start early, will see you in the evening." And then the day went by, evening Manik came back to see Nandini working on some notes, he went near her and said "You seemed to be very busy nowadays" Nandini replied " I need to submit this project tomorrow, but am not going to succeed in it, i guess" He thought a little and asked "Want my help" Immediately her face lit up, as she never expected him to help her, so she with a doubt in her face said " Sure" and after ten minutes he came back to help her, and they both were working on it and after some time, she found Manik little disturbed, he was roaming here and there, stamping his foot like a kid , noticing all these, Nandini told "If you want to smoke, you can, use the balcony" next moment a smile lit up on his face and he replied "I was about to ask you that, if you feel suffocated, just go down and have a tea and make one for me, before that i will finish it"

Nandini came back with 2 tea cups and she entered the room and find him leaning on the grill in the balcony with cigarette in one hand and he was lost in thoughts, she wondered whether he was looking hot or the thing in his hand is making him look like that. she cleared her throat and he came back within minutes, and both had tea, that is when Nandini asked " Where is Soha, did she know, you are here.. in this room" He laughed a little and replied "She has gone out with her friends, She'll back by midnight possibly, till that am free" and Nandini raise her eyebrows at him and both laughed again. Once the project was completed they both went down for dinner together and while returning back, Manik asked Nandini "Do you mind, if i come back to your room , until you feel sleepy" Nandini gave a confused look, and Manik explained "No, i need to stay alone till Soha returns, and i didn't feel sleepy today" Nandini replied "Oh, i don't have any problem sharing the room with you, and of course, you have equal rights in the room" And they both chatted so long and finally slept on the bed.

And next morning as usual, Manik was running behind Soha convincing her for sleeping in Nandini's room, and that is when Radha came towards Soha and showed some medicine bottle and asked "Whats all this Soha?" She came forward and took the bottle from her hand and moved forward, when Radha held her hand and said " Answer me Soha" Manik wondered why his mom was shouting at her for some medicine. Soha remained silent, when Manik came forward and asked "Ma, whats your problem with Soha having any medicine" Radha cut him by saying "do you know what medicine it was" Manik nodded his head to No, when Soha came forward and said "Its to prevent me from getting pregnant" Manik's heart break into pieces, and Radha continued " What have you planned in your mind, you'll not leave my son to lead a happy life,and also you will not let him live happily, we were waiting for a grandchild and you will not even do that, you are a curse in my manik's life you'll never let him live happily" Saying this radha went downstairs,and Manik went inside his room immediately, followed by Soha, she was like as if nothing has happened, she came to bed and curled her hand around his neck, and said "Hey hero, where have you been lost" He immediately took off her hands and moved to the other side, she came closer to him and asked "What Manik, everyday, you use to come behind me, but today, i came near you, but you didn't want me to" He cut her off saying "How dare you Soha, before taking such decision, you should have informed me" "Whats there to ask you Manik, its all about me, i have to decide to have baby or not" " So, you are saying, i have nothing to decide with it" Manik roared, and Soha replied " I don't like this pregnancy, delivery and all Manik, it will spoil my physic" and next moment Manik slapped her.

He came forward and said "Its all my mistake, when you said, you are not interested in marriage, though you want to be with me, i accepted, so you thought, i'll accept whatever you say and decide, you know how far i have been waiting for us to have a baby, but, stupid me, i didn't realize that you are taking these pills to avoid getting baby, Every woman wants to marry and then to have child, but you discards both, am so disgusted with you, i don't want to see your face,saying this he went outside and went towards balcony to have a smoke, but then he decided something and went out in his car.

Small cracks are the reason for a bigger break-up, and a man like Manik can go crazy for small things, like wise can go mad for what look like a simple thing, This is what happening between Soha and Manik. Sorry for less manan time, this is much needed part, so sorry if i have bored u. Time for ur likes and comments

Edited by uma88 - 10 years ago

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Nandini_goyal

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Posted: 10 years ago

#239

Originally posted by: uma88
don't hate my manik. Yes he is jerk. But give little more time to know the real him.

Lets put it this way... I hate him for now... 😛

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Nandini_goyal

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Posted: 10 years ago

#240

I hate Manik even more now... I understand that Soha did wring by not informing him about the pills but like really... he doesn't want to see her because she doesn't want to marry and have kids?

Ideally thy should have discussed about it and come to a decision mutually... Here all the Malhotra's and Soha disgust me and Nandini is a fool.

But as you have said, in the beginning we will feel this way and later we might like them. I am waiting for that moment, something very drastic maybe.. I am actually quite curious about how you have planned to take the story forward. :)

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