MANAN FF: IT'S NOT END,IT'S NEW START..... Chapter 4 pg 29 - Page 13

Originally posted by: Dashreya21

Wow very nice start 😊
so looking forward for the mistery of manbir and nandu's sudden message

Originally posted by: anjali_dimples

Nice storyline keep it up dear

Originally posted by: mananlover123

interesting

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Guys I Came Up With A Long Update

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Keep Showering Ur Love Nd Blessings On
Me...

So Here Is Next Part ...

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CHAPTER 2

SCENE 1

MUMBAI

SPACE ACADAMY

Dhruv Was The First To Arrive At The
College...

Lost In His Deep Thoughts... And His Old
Memories About Aliya...

(Aliya Forgives Dhruv. She Always Say
That She Doesn't Love Dhruv Anymore... But Nandu Nd Aliya In fact Every One
Knows That Aliya Still Love Dhruv Nd Vice Versa)

Made Him Walk All Lost In Corridor ...

Aliya Was Also Coming From Other Side
Busy In Talking To Harshad On Her Phone, In fact She Was Too Angry To Handle
Herself...

Both Busy In Themselves

And

And

Dashed Themselves...

Making Aliya Fall in Dhruv's Arms...

Their Eyes Meet...

Making Them Remembers The Golden Days Of
Their Love...

Soon Their Trances Broke...

"Are U Alright??" Dhruv Asked Aliya All
Wid Luv.

"I'm Alright" Replied Aliya.

"Got Nandu's Msg"

"Got Nandu's Msg"

Both Said Together

"She Wanna Meet Us..." Said Dhruv.

"Ya Let's Go" Told Aliya.

Both Moved Towards Music Room.

SCENE 2

RADIO-MIRCHI 93.5 FM STUDIO

OUTSIDE OF THE CABIN

Navya Calls Mukti

"Is Nanny Coming?" Navya Asked Her

"Yes" Mukti Answered Her, A Bit
Stressed...

For Nandu But

Seeing Abeer Sleeping Cutely, She Smiled
To Herself Contentedly...

"I Am Leaving For College Meet U At Clg"
Mukti Said

"Okkk, Meet U There, Bye" Navya Replied
In Her Tone...

SCENE 3

AT SPACE ACADAMY

Mukya Comes To Clg, Meeting Each
Other& Sharing Smile ..., They Move To Music Room

SCENE4

IN LONDON,

The Boy Who Was Sobbing Goes Washroom And
Wash His Face...

And Goes To Meet Doctor...

SCENE 5

IN MUMBAI

SPACE ACADAMY

Nandu Comes To College Hurriedly...

She Rushes Towards Music Room...

SCENE 6

LONDON

IN DR. CABIN

Boy Entered In Dr. Cabin.

Dr. Who Was Sitting Seemed To Be Worried.

Dr. Said To Boy "Now It Has Been Three
Months...But He Is Not Responding To Any of Our Treatment...

Boy Said "Dr. Plz Plz Don't Said Like
This... Dr. There Would Be Another Way-out?? Plz Dr..."

"(Breaking Down) I Cannot Tell My Friends
That..."

"Plz Understand Dr... Plz"

He Broked Down in Tears In Front Of The
Dr...

Dr Also Feels Helpless To See Him Like
This...

Dr. Came Near Him And Patted His Back
...

& Held Him Up Saying "I Know But I
Can't Help It... We Tried Almost All Treatments But He Is Not Responding, What
To Do Now? "

Boy Helplessly Sees Dr.

Boy Said "Plz Dr. Plz..."

Dr. Said "Kkk I Will Talk To My Seniors"

Dr. Leaves the Cabin ...

The Boy Started Sobbing Feeling
Shattered...

SCENE 7

MUMBAI

SPACE ACADAMY

Dhruv And Aliya Were Sitting On Chairs.

MUKYA Comes In.

All Four Looked At Each Other... And Then
They Hug Each Other...

Nandu Enters The Room, Seeing Their Hug,
The Hug Of Friendship Made Her Feel Happy...

After Seeing Nandu Everyone Moves Towards
Her & Questioning Her Whether She Is Fine Or Not?

Nandu Smiled Towards Their Concern...

She Feels Happy

Her Trance Broke By Navya's Question...

NAVYA: Nandu KyaHua? TuThikTohHai Na?

(Listening To Navya Question Everyone
Stare At Nandu)

NANDU: Mai ThikHoon Navya KuchNahiHuaHai...
Chill Guys...

ALIYA: Agar KuchHuaNahiToh Why U
SuddenlyMsged Us That Too This Time B'coz U Very Well Knows These Time Everyone
Busy In Works...

That's Why We Meet at Lunch Time Here

NANDU: I Know Aliya

NAVYA : Hey Matarani Is
LadkiKaKuchKaroAap ... Agar TuThikHaiToh Tune Aisa Msg Kyu Send KiyaTumheKyaPata
Hum Kitana Dar Gay The

NANDU: Navya... Navya... Chup ...

(Nandu Make Navya Silent Putting Navya's
Finger On Lips)

NANDU: Guys Do U Remember Something ...
Something... Something Special????????

(Nandu Looks At Everyone With Hopes But
To Her Bad luck ...)

DHRUV: No! I Don't!

NANDU: Really No??????????

Aliya, Navya, Mukti (Together): No Baba
We Don't Remember...

NANDU: Ohhh Aiyappa!!!!!!!!! What Can I
Do With These Guys?

MUKTI: Nandu Say Na ... What Special?

(Nandu Take A Deep Breathe)

NANDU: Guys Tmrw Is Manik's
B'day!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

(Very Enthusiastically, Smilingly Said
Nandu)

(In Music Room forA Moment Spread Silence

Silence Is Broke By Dhruv ...)

DHRUV: Ohh Shit!!!!! How Could I Forget????

ALIYA, NAVYA, AND MUKTI (Together): We
Agree WidU.. How Could We Forget????

MUKTI: But Guys... (She Paused For Moment)
What About Manik And Cabir?

NANDU (Sadly) : Ya Guys I Know U All R
Missing Him What If They R Not With Us, But We Can Celebrate It For Manik For
Cabir ,We Have Their Loving Memories, Let's Cherish Them...

I Know Guys U All R Missing Him But When
They Came To Know About It How Will They Feel???

(Nandu Looked At Everyone, She Got Yes
From Navya through Her Eyes)

DHRUV: Ha Guys I Think We Should
Celebrate It...

ALIYA, MUKTI: We R Also In...

(Nandu Becomes Happy)

Nandu: Kkk Guys Then Meet Tomorrow At
11:00 Am Here In Music Room...

We Will Celebrate It Here... In This Room
We Have So Many Memories Of Manik &Cabir...

(She Gets Tears in Her Eyes But For Fab3
She Have To Be Strong So She Wiped It Immediately)

Everyone Gets Emotional...

Fab3 Think About Manik Nd Cabir, The Time
Which They Spend Together, Their Fights, Their Masti, And Their Group Hugs...

Navya Think About Cabir The Way He Always
Stood By Her Side, His Masti, And His Care Towards Baby...

Nandu Think About Manik Their Fights,
Their Love, Their Kiss, Their Last Encounter...

Cabir...

She Smiled Thinking About Cabir... How He
Always Help Her Nd Manik...

Soon Everyone Came Near Nandu Nd Hugged
Her...

Hugging Nandu, All Of Them Had Tears In
Their Eyes...

(Bg Music

Yaaro
dosti badi hi hasin hai... )

Nandu to Her Self ..."I Love You
Manik...Hamesha"

SCENE 8

LONDON

HOSPITAL

The Boy Is Roaming In Front Of ICU
Room...

Not Understanding What To Do??

Looking Through The Glass Of ICU Door, He
Feel So Helpless

He Could See His Friend Striving Hard To
Live...

The Machinery Around Him Showing All That
He Is Alive... The Oxygen Mask Supporting His Life...

Tears Rolled Down From The Eyes Of The
Boy As Questions Passed His Mind... Seeing His Friend...

SO WHICH QUESTIONS PASSED HIS MIND?

WANNA KNOW THEN STAY TUNNED

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I Know Guys It's A Long One...

I Hope U All Like It... Finger Crossed...

Tell Me Ur Views...

KEEP SMILING ND SHINING...

LOADS OF LOVE,

SAMRUDDHI

Waiting ...i guess its manik in icu

Nice update

Hmmm...confusion hai re..
I liked fab3 nandu navya bound..
missing Arymaan hehe..
continue soon
Thanks for pm
Love Kavya

Nicely written.. Looking forward to next part. Hopefully Cabir and Manik are fine.
Aww.. I love Nandu..

wow actually emotional update...

kiddo...its awesome ...
still maintained the suspense of who is lying in the hospital bed...manik or cabir ????
i am so curious to know...

u penned beautifully...loved nandini ,navya and fab3 scenes...
continue soon
take care
thanks a lot for the pm
stay blessed