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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: vaishnavigarla

Sorry being late
nice updates
so niyonika is the villain and
she is trying to harm nandu
manbir and nandus bond is very cute
manik distracted nandu easily for injection
the way cabir teased nandu for injection is very funny
waiting to know how manik will deal with niyo
thanks for pm
cont soon

Thank you😛
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Posted: 10 years ago
Thank you SooO much Guys for ur lovely comments and likes ...and sorry for being late ...so without any delay here is ur update ...Hope you guys ENJOY😛
Part-14 (B)

Nandani is getting discharged both left from there and directly comes to the airport and join fab4 over there...for going back to Mumbai ...after few hours everyone reached Mumbai ...

IN AIRPORT

Manik was picking nandani in his arms ...and nandani said

Nandani : Manik I want to go washroom

Manik lovingly said : okay my princess ...I will take you over there

Nandani : Manik we are not in our home ...we Are in airport ...how can you ...I mean

Manik : Shona u are weak and I Don't Want u To stress ur body ...

Nandani : but manik ...how can I?

Manik : okay ...okay ...I understand ...main tumhe washroom ke bahar uttar dunga ...aur rest aliya and mukti will handle

Nandani : But manik am absolutely fine...I can walk

Manik : I knew u are ...but please listen to me ...main nahi chahta tum dobara faint ho ...u knew tumhe pain main dekhkar naaa...meri jaan nikal jaati ha...please shona

Nandani kissed his heart and lovingly said

Nandani : am sorry ...I promise I will listen to u

Manik smiles looking at her cute face and kissed her cheeks and said

Manik : Thank you

Nandan confusingly said:Thanks for what?

Manik : for listening me

She placed both hands around his neck and lovingly said

Nandani : ohh like that ...but I always listen to u ...Don't u think

She winked at him and manik kissed her forehead and dropped her outside the washroom and said

Manik : hmmm...now u go I will wait over here ...

She nodded aliya and mukti take her inside the washroom by giving her support .. ...cabir came towards manik and placed his hand on his shoulder...manik looked at him

Cabir : Manik kya karna ha?

Manik : Cabir ...mera ek kaam karna ...tum nandani ko ghar le jana ...

Cabir : par Manik nandani mere saath kaise matlab ...tum jaante ho naa ...

Manik : haa main jaanta hu ...par tum fikar mat karo ...main usse keh dunga main ek meeting ...main jaa raha hu ...

Cabir : par

Manik :Cabir please

Cabir : okay

Manik smiled and saw nandani and muklya came towards them ...nandani said

Nandani : Manik chale

Manik : voh shona ...tumhe cabir ke saath jaana hoga

Nandani : par kyu?

Manik : voh actually ...aman ka call aya tha ...voh ek important meeting ha ...toh issiliye

Nandani looked at manik and think

Nandani pov :

I knew manik u are hiding something ...par voh kya ha ...yeh tum mujhe kyo nahi bata rahe ho ...I hope sab thik ho

Nandani : okay

He picked nandani in his arms and carefully made her sit in the car and kissed her forehead

Manik : Please take care of yourself ...I'll be back soon

Nandani kissed his cheeks

Nandani : I will ...par tum bhi apna khyal rakhna ...

Manik : bye

Nandani : bye

He closed the door and said

Manik : Cabir please iska dhyan rakhna ...

Cabir placed his hand on his shoulder and gives a assuring smile and said

Cabir : don't worry ...I will take care of her ...

Manik : main chalta hu

Cabir : thik ha

Both were left from there ...cabir dropped nandani in MANAN LAND and manik came to MALHOTRA MENSION

MALHOTRA MENSION

Manik came inside the house and saw nyonika sitting in the sofa...Nyonika saw manik...she get up from her seat...and shocked

Nyonika shockingly said : Manik

Manik smirks looking at her condition and said

Manik:kya hua nyonika ? Tum mujhe yaha dekhkar khush nahi hui

Nyonika : Manik what are doing here?

Manik :Well mujhe toh yaha aana hi tha ...ek min.

He gives some papers to her ...

Nyonika:yeh kya ha

Manik : Nyonika mujhe laga tha ki tum itni toh educated ho ki yeh pad sako ki isme kya ha

Nyonika angrily said : What the

Manik : chilao mat kahi esa na ho baad main pachtana pade

Nyonika : kya matlab

Manik : vo toh tumhe inhe padkar hi pata chal jayega

She reads them and shocked

Nyonika :...main ...b..a..n..k...cru..pt...how's this possible

Manik : kya hua nyonika

She looked at manik angrily...and grabbed his colar

Nyonika : Tumne kiya ha naa ...yeh sab tumne kiya ha ...main jaanti hu ...kyu kiya bolo

Manik fred himself from her grip and sat on the Sofa...

Manik angrily said : Nyonika...Nyonika...Nyonika ...tumhe kya laga tha main tumhe ese hi chod dunga ...tumne meri nandani ko maarne ki koshish ki ...aur main chup chap betha rahunga ...haaa...soch bhi kaisa liya tumne ...tum mujhse meri zindagi chinana chati thi ...aur dekho maine tumse tumhari zindagi chin li ...maine tumhari zindagi tumhare paise chin liye...aaj tumhara paas kuch bhi nahi ha ...u r finished ...Nyonika ...u r finished

Nyonika cryingly said : manik tum mere saath esa nahi kar sakte ...main tumhari maa hu ...main kaha jaungi

Manik sarcastically said : Maa ...haa...Maa shabd tumhare muh se acha nahi lagta ...maa shabd ka matlab bhi jaanti ho tum ...tum toh maa kehlane ke bhi layak nahi ho

Nyonika : Manik main jaanti hu ...maine bahot galatiya ki ha ...par please mujhe maaf kar do ...yeh toh socho main kaha jaungi

Manik : haaan ...main ese kaise kar sakta hu ...akhir kaar tumne mujhe janam diya ha ...main tumhe rehne ki jagah toh de hi sakta hu

Nyonika smiled by seeing her plan is working ...

Manik : ruko ...haa ...aap ander aa sakte ha

Nyonika looked towards the door and that makes her shocked from the core

Nyonika : Police

Inspector came towards her and said

Inspector:Mrs. Nyonika malhotra ...aapko Nandani Manik Malhotra ke attempt to murder ke case main giraftar kiya jaata ha

Nyonika was so shocked to react ...she looked at manik who was smirking

Nyonika : Manik tum esa nahi kar sakte

Manik : Main esa kar chuka hu ...toh acha hoga ki tum apni aankhe kholo ...

Nyonika :Manik please ...please esa mat karo ...jo tum kahoge main vahi karungi ...please

Manik:Inspector aap please do min. Ke liye bahar wait kijiye

Inspector went outside and manik looked towards nyonika ...

Manik : haa toh kya keh rahi thi tum kuch bhi kar sakti ho ...

Nyonika:haa

Manik : okay sign them

He gave her some papers

Nyonika : yeh

Manik : iske mutabik aaj ke baad tumhara malhotra's ke saath koi rishta nahi ha ...aaj ke baad yaha tak ki tumhare naam main bhi malhotra nahi judega...now choice is urs

Nyonika signed them ...and was about to go ...inspector came and said

Inspector:kaha jaa rahi ha aap

Nyonika : ab main jaa sakti hu ...manik apni complaint vapas le raha ha

Manik : Really nyonika ...mujhe toh pata hi nahi tha ...

Nyonika looked at him in disbelief

Nyonika : Manik

Manik : aap inhe le jaa sakte hai

Inspector were taking nyonika with them and she said

Nyonika : Manik ...Manik ...tum ...esa ...nahi ...kar ...sakte ...main ...tumhe chodungi ...nahi ...manikkk

They takes nyonika with them ...manik also left from there...and come to the beach ...sat over there...after sometime cabir too came over there

Cabir : Manik

Manik : Cabir tu

Cabir : haa main ab yeh mat puchna mujhe kaise pata ki tu yaha ha

Manik smiled: Nahi puchunga ...kyunki main janta hu ki tu mujhe acche se jaanta ha

Cabir : haa janta hu ...issiliye puch raha hu ...tu thik ha naa ...voh nyonika

Manik : Cabir nyonika ke saath jo maine kiya ...voh mujhe bahot pehle kar dena chahiye tha

Cabir : Manik relax ...acha yeh bata nandani se baat hui ...voh kaafi pareshan thi

Manik : Nandani oh shit! Maine usse call hi nahi kiya ...

Manik quickly goes towards his car ...and quickly get his phone and saw 20 missed calls from nandani and 10 from home ...

Manik : God itni saari missed calls ...I hope sab thik ho ...

He immediately call Nandani but no one picked it ...then he calls on landline ...

Manik : hello

Servant:hello sir

Manik : Rony nandani mam kaha ha ...voh apna phone bhi nahi utha rahi ha

Rony : sir vo Nandani mam...

Manik was so shocked ...he dropped his phone and said : Na..n..d..ani





Edited by diyaNarwal - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
woowww..that was really interesting😊😉
but what happened to nandini?,,,i hope she is fine.
update soon dear😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
nice one diya
thanks for pm
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Posted: 10 years ago
Hope Nandu is fine.
Awesome update.
So happy Nyonika gone from their lives.
😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
Amazing update
Nyonika ko uske karmo ka fal mil gea...manik wahhh nandini ke sher kitna acha kaam kiya tumne...manik shock q ho gea kya huya nandu ko...lovd it...continue soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
Seriously maza aa gya ... Acha hua nyonika ke sath ... Ab Nandini ko kya hua ...
Shock de diya yr
Do update soon
Waiting eagerly
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Posted: 10 years ago
Hey diyu
Update was shocking one
Finally nyonika ka band bajwadiya
Ab kya kiye nandu k saath
Plss na zyaada pain nahi chahiye Manan k life mein
Continue soon
Take care stay blessed
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Posted: 10 years ago

Part - 14 (C)

Manik was so shocked ...he just only able to said

Manik : Na..n..da..ni

Cabir rushes towards manik ...

Cabir : Manik
But he didn't react a bit

Cabir : Manik kya hua ?
But he just stood over there like statue...cabir patted his shoulder to make him out of his trance

Cabir : Manik kya hua ha? Baat kya ha ?

Manik : Cabir ...vo ...voh ...

Cabir : voh kya Manik

Manik : Na..nd..an..ni ...mujhe uske paas jana hoga ...mujhe jaana hoga uske paas

He rushed towards the car and started it ...and left from there ...cabir try to stop him ...

Cabir : God pata nahi kya hua ha ...I hope sab thik ho ...mujhe jaa kar dekhna hoga ...

Cabir too started the car and left for Manan land ...



MANAN LAND

Manik reached there with in no time ...and run towards there room ...doctor came out from there

Manik : doc...how's she ?...voh ...voh ...Thik ha naa

Doc.-Manik jyada stress lene ki vajhse vo faint ho gayi thi ...abhi toh maine situation ko control kar liya ...par aage bhi ese hi faint hui ...toh am sorry hum bhi kuch nahi kar payenge ...voh bahot weak ha ...aur maybe kafi der se kuch khaya nahi ha ...toh jaise hi unhe hosh aaye pehle kuch khila dena

Manik nodded his head as yes ...silent tears were flowing from his eyes...doc. saw them and said

Doc. :Manik voh abhi thik ha...par tumhe uska khayal rakhna hoga ...uske liye thoda saa bhi stress jaan leva ha ...yeh tum bhi jaante ho ...toh ho sakke toh usse iss stress se dur rakho...varna hum shayad agli baar usse bacha naa paye

Manik was listening all this ...but doc... Each and Every word breaks his heart in pieces ...how can he be live without her ...she is the only reason of his existence ...agar aaj usse kuch ho jata toh ...these thoughts makes him more more weak ...he is not able to control his tears ...doc...left from there ...manik came inside and saw her lying in the bed...he came towards her ...hold her hand ...tears were not stopping from his eyes for a second ...

Manik : am...so..rr..y...shona ...sab...sab ...m..e..ri ...galati ...ha...mujhe ...mujhe ...tumhe ...akele ...chodke...ja..na...hi...nahi ...cha..hiye...tha...am ...sorry ...shona ...please ...please ...maaf ...kardo...maaf kar do...pl..ea..se...shona...dekho...main...aa...
gaya...main ...jaanta... ...hun...tum...bahot...gussa ...ho...toh please
Mujh par...chilao...I...swear...main...ku...kuch
Nahi...bolunga...par...please...ek...baar...
...apni...Aakhe...kholo...please ...shona...wake ...up...

Manik was just looking at her ...after sometime she gain conscious...manik wipes his tears and
Smiled ...hugged her tightly ...she knew how much he needs it...so she forgot the pain ...she too give in and hugged him back

Nandani : Ma..n..ik...

Manik :how are feeling now ?

Nandani : better

Manik : yaah I can see that ...ek word toh thang se bola nahi jaa raha ha ...

Nandani : Manik ...am fine...

Manik : hmmm

He is about to go ...nandani holds his hand and said

Nandani : How are you?

Manik looked at her...and said

Manik : Main...main...toh...bilkul thik hu ...mujhe kya hoga

Nandani : yaah ...I can see ...ur eyes tells everything...manik ...why are u ...taking ...so much stress ...am fine

Manik hugged her tightly and cried

Manik : Please...sh..ona...mujhe...mujhe...
chodkar ...kabhi...kabhi...mat...jana...I...I...
...will...die...shona ...I will die

Nandani : shhh...manik ...main kahi nahi
Jaa...rahi...please relax...

He hugged her ...after sometime he remember she didn't had anything ...so he broke the hug and
Get up ...nandani was about to say but he put the finger on her lips

Manik : shhh...u ...r weak...so please ...rest ...karo ...main tumhare liye...kuch...khane...ko
Lata...hu...

She nodded his head and smiled ...manik left from there ...after sometime brings some healthy food for her ...as she doesn't like that food so she made faces ...manik saw them

Manik : Don't make these kinds of face ...bcz this time I wouldn't listen to u ...u will have to had this food

Nandani : but manik I don't like it

Manik : but these are healthy shona

Nandani : no I wouldn't eat this food

Manik : Please shona for me

Nandani : That's cheating ...u always do that

Manik : bcz I don't have any option other than this

Nandani : Monster

Manik : I knew ...chalo ab muh kholo

He feed her food ...and she makes different kinds of faces ...These scenes were watching by one pair of eyes and that's cabir...nandani saw cabir and call him

Nandani : Cabir

Cabir : haaa...behna...
He came towards them ...and manik was continued his work to feeding her

Cabir : vaise behna ek baat toh bata ...tune khana kyu nahi khaya?

Now manik was also looking at her ...he was angry with her ...for not having food ...nandani looked at him understands

Nandani mumbled:Mar gayi nandu...yeh bhai bhi naa kya zaroorat thi ...yeh puchne ki ...jaga diya naa ...monster ko ...ab kya karu

Cabir : Nandani main tujhe baat kar raha hu ...kaha khoi hui ha ...aur khana kyo nahi khaya

Manik : bolo kyo nahi khaya ...I told you naa ...to have food ...then why didn't you had

She lowered his head bcz she knows she was at fault
Manik : bolo

Nandani : bcz u were not here to feed me

Manbir unison said: what?

She looked both of them and said

Nandani : ab main kya karu ...tumne meri aadat bigad di ...ab mujhe tumhare haatoh se khane ki aadat ho gayi toh main kya karu ...

Cabir : oh god nandu u Scriously still a baby

Nandani : I knew but am only manik's baby kyu?

She looked at him lovingly and kissed her forehead and said

Manik : yes u r only my baby

Nandani : I love manik

Manik : I love you too MANIK KI JAAN


So how's it
I guess itna long bahot Ha
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And about next
I'll try to update soon
Till then
Keep loving
Keep smiling
And Keep shining
For Ur loved ones
Love
Diya😛
Edited by diyaNarwal - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Diyu baby
Ye heart attack Dene ka shauk kav se chad gaye... Hmmm
Pata hai kitna dar gaye teh...
Update was sad one
Mat rulaao na hame aur Manan KO bhi
Varna next time se drips KO pm kar ke bej dijiye agar faint huye toh drips chadaakar ghoomenge taaki agli next time aisa na ho
Continue soon
Take care stay blessed

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