Manan Tose Naina chapter 7 page 16 note 17pg - Page 2

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Posted: 10 years ago
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u should continu dr... ur story soundz intrstng... lv to read more... do continu... gud lck...
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Nyc start...but emotional update...bht bad feel ho rha hai nandini ko dekh kar...lovd it...continue soon
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Chapter 2
Nandini wake up with headche due to last night crying, she take a bath nd preparedcoffee held it nd got ready for office today she has taken half leave after lunch break in afternoon she had appointment with doctor for regular check up . Doctor always call her in beginning of months nd ending of months to check baby . To she can see baby . She reached office email her senior for leave nd went through the files . She correctnd call employee to give there task , she was very strict but kind to everyone her teammate respect her some are liking her . She know that , she is pregnant yet beautiful nd very caring friend nd boss all office give smile nd help in holding her laptop , files , heavy thinks which is not peak by her in time of pregnancy sometimes she need to walk by support all help her . Her teammate navy's navel is very attachedwith her . She is cabin dhawan gf it's screen no one no it .

It was lunch break . She took his bag nd leave for hospital ,30 min later she reached to hospital she was waiting for her turn to come nd next side one person was shocked to see her it was manik

Manik pov
I was camin after taking medicine for chemisty shop ( mukti was pregnant nd today was her delivery. I was caming nd show a lady siting in white nd peach frock nd her tummy was out . I think she was pregnant . Her hair was open . But why she attracting me show much . I have to go know when I was going opposite I heard " nandini murthy now it's your turn " I immediately turn nd saw her she was having difficulty to stand her one her stand was falling on face dam I can't she her face . I want to help her . She having my baby in her womb I want to hold her in every step but guilt nd my mistake my cheat was holding me . Nurse help her in stand . She stand nd put her hair stand on ears I saw her face It was glowing must be pregnancy effect . She was looking cute in dress looking golly mollu with my baby in her tummy I kept admiring her but she was gone in cabin . Read Dr name miss swati palwal . Ohhh she is same mukti doctor . My heart was asking nd like bagging to see my own blood our first child . I give medicineto ward boy nd ask him to deliverto room no 203 patient nd give some money she left . I ask nurse who was sitting out side of cabin .

Manik : hy can I meet doctor after this patient

Nurse: sry sir with out appointment you can't

Manik : no actually I want to ask my sister have been operated by her so some questions for food nd medicine i lie to her

Nurse : okkk you can

After 30 min the door open I turn my face that she can't recognised.me after 5 min nurse said to go in . I wish doctor nd asked about nandini but she said she cant give any info about patient . I bagged her nd told her she is my wife for my mistake she left me with child . I love her ( I said my feeling to her yes I do ) she seen convinced . She saw me his 2 month to 7 month pregnancy report nd I was shocked to see complication in her pregnancy she can die giving my baby birth . Tear fall on my cheek doctor console nd said there is lot of improvement in baby . Baby is turning day by day which is good for her . I was satisfied I ask her about video of my baby . She smile take her laptop nd turn to me give me earsplug nd I plugged it I saw baby video our baby video my baby video I listen heartsbeats awww so chotu say nd little one but cute I was so excited nd thanks doctor . After coming out of cabin reality stuck tears again made there way she love me nd hate her self . She love her baby but hate herself . She will never forgive me to cheat her badly how could I . How could . But my hearts was convicting me to atleast try to win her . My mind also supports him I have to found her in Delhi how can I will get her nandinike aiyapp plz help me plz

Nandini was coming out with report's medicines nd having trouble in opening door of exits then two hands came one open gate nd second help her to walk . She didn't see them nd smile crept looking to them I became brighter nd thanks them they also smile it was cabin dhawan nd abhimunyu malhotra

Nandini : how are u both nd how came here everything all right

Abhi : fine bhabhi

Nandini : Abhi just nandini

Abhi : but you always be my

Nandini polity : no I am just nandini okkk

Cabir: cool yr nd how is our camp hmmm mamu see nahi mile ha bent towards tummy

Nandini ; baby is fine . Why you are here any think serious

Cabir : yup Abhi baap bane gaya

Nandini : what

Abhi agree nodded ; yup baby boy aje subah hi hui

Nandini extent voh Congo nd how mukti she alright

Abhi ; yup she is happy also Baku sab bhi hai dhurv aliya nd bhai ( seeing towards her but she ignore )

Cabir serious : how your life nandini . Nd how this ( pointing towards tummy )

Nandini : gud nd my baby is also gud as mumma

Cabir : are you marry someone

Nandini ; no I am divorcey you to know that

Cabir ; so it's manik child

Nandini : no its my child

Cabir ; manik know that ? Nandini nodded you moved on doubtful

Nandini ; yes I moved on nd I am happy with my life nd my baby too very confidently

Abhi ; come let's see mukti will happy to see you ( nd manik too )

Nandini: no Abhi I have to go office I only get 4 hour leave so . Nd give all my love nd blessing to baby

Abhi ; as per our family ritual the father bhabhi or sister give name to baby so you are my sister plz give his name nd blessing

Nandini : aranv abhimunyu malhotra nd give blessing

Abhi ; you have to came in function plz as my sister plz I will text you my address plz don'tsay no for aranv sakes plz give your number nd I will send driver to pick u up
Cabir : if you move own say yes ( rightchords )

Nandini :okk nd give are number nd bid with both of them
All seen was sawn by manik

Cabir : nandini tumhe aje bhi juth bona nahi at a you never moved on nd our nd manik child is proof nd I will tie both of you once again

Abhi side hug ; I will help in that . Chale ab nahi to mukti devi ma ban jaye gi

Okk guyzs that's it hope you all will enjoy nd go comments nd like it


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Posted: 10 years ago
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Wowww...manik ko sab pta chl gea about nandini's complication...finally manik ne realise kiya...cabir n abhi cupid wowww...lovd it...continue soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Wow very nice update waiting for the next chapter pls update soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Nice story :) i loved the part nd adored the most were u mentioned manik was admiring her golu molu face with her tummy awww how cute must she b looking ..I imagined ...anyways chucking all this I wanna know wht did manik do that she felt Cheated can jst hope for it to not b tht big mistake though .😔..after all we want them to b together ...there r many questions nd ans r ur updates soo update quick ...can't wait for tht nxt 1 were nandini will attend the function with her cute sa tummy ..I wanna see her attire even ...waiting ...keep writing
Lots of love❤️
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Obviously liking it.
I'm now first time reading it.



Awesome





Fab





Mind blowing



Outstanding
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Posted: 10 years ago
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nice story
do continue and pm me
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Posted: 10 years ago
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awesome update...
loved manik's concern for nandu...
hope his mistakes are rented and forgiven by nandu...
can't wait to see the naming ceremony...
continue soon...keep up the good work...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Finally Manik realized his love for nandu
I think the next updates would be interesting..

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