Manan Tose Naina chapter 7 page 16 note 17pg - Page 3

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I really love this different genre...continue soon and pm me if possible
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Okie I just read the parts and they are soo good like so soo good. Already fall in love with your ff .
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AMAZING PART PLZ UPDATE SOON 😊
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Chapter 3

Nandini left . Both turn nd saw manik was standing there nd tears were trolling from his eyes , cabir was he'll angry to know truth of baby . He ignored nd went to mukti room the trio senses in cabir behavior navya came as cabir told her they today he will intro navya to everyone

Navya hold cabir hand nd rubbing his back he look up nd saw navya nd cried out nd hug her . Now all were tensed Abhi enter nd said that he saw nandini bhabhi caring baby in her tummy nd father is manik all were shocked as they don't know about baby but manik nd nandini divorcethey know the reason that manik cheat her . Mukti ask navya who is she . She reply very softly that she is cabir gf all were happy one side nd sad other side navya ask about nandini nd she was shocked that nandini was her boss nd manik was ex husband . She was fuming in angry. But she was quiet .

Cabir : ( holding manik collar ) saale tune yr nahi bate ya ki who pregnant hai ha . Kyu tumhe or gf chaiye this to sleep with her

Manik : cabirrr ( looking down )

Cabir: kya ha Sach bola toh bra laga ha
Tujse isaan Chiii isaan keh ne layak ha who pregnanttho tumhe pata that fir bhi tujhe koi fark nahi paid na tu esa toh nahi tha

Manik : Cabir I know mujhe bhulse hoi hai me nandini see payar ( slap )

Navya was who slap him : don't ese payar nahi kehte Mr manik malhotra bad aya . Tumhe ache toh middle class man hotel hai atleast apni biwi maa bane wall hotI hai sath rehte hai . Par tum Chiii tumhe path hai Nandini ma'am new kit na Saha hai . Par humane use kami nahi mahsus honi Di . Jab on hai ghare par rest karna chaiye voh kaam pe ati hai because koi esa na so che ke ghare be this apnea ex ke bache ko apnea baap ke paise se pal rahi hai . Tum khabi bhi unke same mate Ana kehte hai ki 7 mahine me baap ke chehra maa dekhti hai toh baby baap pe jata hai . Plz us par hasan karna . Sry guyzs mline aye this par ese loser ki shakl dekhLi . You know what the manik malhotra young business tycoon nd lead singer of fab5 is a real loser . You listen nthing just a loser.

Navya left nd cabir was standing closed his eyes agreeing navya " guyzs navya sahi bol ke gaya hai , nd jle name karan pe bulaya hai baby ka name vahi rake gi or me so che raja tha ki uski godbhari bhi kar let hai kyu guyzs

Mukti ; yes cabir mom dekh ke khush hogi nd papa bhi khush or godbhari to mom hi karngi

Aliya : I guess anty ko inform kardena chaiye nd preparation me or dhurv kar lenge okkk chalo guyzs baht kaam hai . Cabir go back to navya or kale nandini ko bhi pick karna hai so go now cheer her nd invite her also.

All proceeds with there work nd here nandini was thing about today how she meets her past person nd happy about Abhi nd mukti having baby together but she is alone forever . She chukked her thought nd talking with tummy nd be happy she though that tomorrow she have to go tomorrow to malhotra mansion nd have to applied leave for tomorrow she talk with her senior they happy give her holiday because she never took leave .

Next day

She walk up nd do prayer to aiyapp nd go for walk it's her morning routine but today someone was flow her nd it was manik he was seeing her nd nandini can feel him nd see know that manik flow her but she ignore him . Someone can how love blind to man who cheat her but know she was truly in love with him . She came had proper breakfast to some office pending work nd then she sleep nd manik was watching from another apartment floor which can saw whole apartmentof her . Manik has purchase that apartment

Nandini wake up in evening she got call from cabir that he nd his girlfriend is coming to take her nd not get ready as he is bringing gift for her with pleading she agree nd waiting for them , after 10 min they entering her apartment . She got shocked to see navya . Cabir intro her shy nandini smile nd they got in navya give her saree .

Navya ; nandini ma'am your father is also coming as there business partners nd his daughter had godbhari to give his blessing to his grand baby

Nandini shocked ; what you mean by godbhari

Navya ; yours

Nandini fumble : but why

Navya ; for your baby future . Baby want blessing for there elder nd grand partner nd it's ritual right . Plz for god sake don't say no plz

Nandini agree nd get ready . She wore red saree with gold accoerious nd looking hot with her tummy also if manik will see her like this he goes to his knees

They reached malhotra mansion nandini was remember her memorywhich she spend her with family motherly nd fatherly brotherly loved they pampered her . All were flashing on her mind . She see neyonika nd raj was standing nd waiting for her to come . She goes nd smile on them

Nandini : namaste anty ape kese ho

Neyo thought phela meri family puri thI nandini hug me nd wish me nd know all change because of manik . She is wishing like stranger

Neyo : call me mom

Nandini : no anty I'd better , namaste uncle how r u . ( to raj )

RAJ : beta plz call us mom dad I am dieing to her from you

Nandini : no uncle time change nd all change for me I am not same .

Neyo nd raj welcome her when she saw her father she give warm huge nd cry nd complain like child not to came nd meet her . Both Neyo nd raj miss this innocent nd there daughter in law . But all ladies were talking about nandini abused her Mr murthy was angry but nandini held his hand sign him no to argue so function was started nandini give baby name aranv abhimunyu malhotra with lots of love nd blessing all congrats them nd start godbhari from Neyo place coconut rice seed nd paan nd give her necklace which she denied to take it she ask for blessing of her child only no gift . RAJ give blessing . Nd them Mr murthy . Abhi mukti holding aranv give blessing nd then dhulya give them blessing , cavya give them blessing . Manik was admiring her love nd there baby . Some anty pushed him to give his blessING from both mother nd father behalf navya was going to stop but cabir hold her hand nd stop her . Nandini turn her face nd keep her hand on stomach to not letting his blessing to her baby . But manik came in front of her knee down nd face her tummy remove her hand . Nandini looked at him . She was shocked to see manik is crying . She feel soft as manik kiss her tummy

Manik crying : be happy in your life , never cheat anyone , be proud of your mama , never be a loser like your father how lost most persons thing in his life your mama , I love you as I love your mama more than the world I fall deeply in love with your mama . Never leave your love in your life

By listing this words nandini nd all there frndzs nd family crying . Nandini take excused nd lived from there . She was wiping her tear when cabir came

Cabir : you loved him right you never moved on right then why are you being so mean to your baby ha . He need father love also . You know make love you

Nandini angry with stressed nd loud ; nd I hate myself to love him madly you get that nd this baby never want his father . Because baby is protect with her mama nd nanu . Baby don't want any one . Nd one thing I never moved nd because I was died that day only I feel disgused with my self . Because person marry me for his bat nd used me nd pretending to be gud nd honest husband . He was not he alway go for late night conference nd tour for 2 or 3 out I know he was cheating from starting . I feel shame of my self ( nandini tummy was paining very badly her eyes were flowing nd when she was falling manik was holding her . He had listing there conversation nd was crying seeing the harter from her she was holding so match )

Manik was petting his cheeks nd cabir was dumbflow listing this her confessions . He was crying all came all were listen there conversation all were crying . Manik puck her on his arm nd went to his bedroom nd place her nd call doctor . Doctor came nd checked her told them about her complication nd don't give her stress.

Murthy abused manik for his daughter condition : mujhe apnea ek desicion par lifetime regret karna . Yaha malhotra ke vaha mene apni masum so bet ki shading ese ghare me kari .

Malhotra were feeling guilty . As they know there mistake . Doctor said to leave her alone nd take rest she need rest nd she had given injection . Murthy ask to take her . But doctor sad no she can nd raj request to stay here tonight. Murthy agree nd all leave room only manik was there he can nd seat on floor holding her hand nd cry bitterly for his mistake . He cry longer nd drift in sleep . In mid night nandini wake up nd see that Ithe was manik room nd having there pic in room nd one big poster of her . She was laughing one . She had tear in her eyes she look otherside of bed which she sleep alone when manik was not there . There make out session laughing giggles nd admiring him hiding . She was crying nd the laughing of other girls heard . She stop nd wiped of her tears nd loudly call his dad all get her in room manik was also wake up nandini jerk his hand move from bed navya help her nd move out of his room he also follow nandini said " dad I thing I should leave know as tomorrow I have to go office lots of work is pending nd it's late to stay at other home it's not good manner dad ( taunt to manik ) " Neyo try to convince her but she show her hand to stop they leave nd went to nandini apartment . They reached nandini apartment Mr murthy give her medicine nd nandini drift to sleep

So guyzs this was it I hope you all will kike it nd do comment nd like also


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Posted: 10 years ago
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Awesome update...manik deservd slap...cabir n navya was right...lovd it...continue soon
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Nice update both r in so much pain but time k sath San heal ho jayega pls update the next chapter soon
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Heyy read all part in 1 go...Awsome...Concept...Intresting...i hope Nandini Manik ko jaldi maff kat de...Or dono khudh rahen...Awsome...Mindblowing...Superb...
Cont Soon
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emotional update...
feeling bad for nandu...
hope all the issues gets sorted out soon...
continue soon...keep up the good work...
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Nice update it was emotional
Continue sooonn
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All chapters read today. .it's a very emotional😭😭 and heartfelt s🥺 story. I became very emotional😭😭 to reading this. This is the power of your writing. 👏 a very interesting story line. Totally different concept. All the scenes are very beautiful. Nandni has difficulty in pregnancy. .it's sad. But manik was cheater😕. Don't give him forgiveness especially. ..he needs to go long way😡. Please do continues. ..😛👏 Thanks for sharing this amazing story. ⭐️

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