Manan ff CRAZY LITTLE THING CALLED LOVE part 9 pg 14 28/5 - Page 7

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Posted: 9 years ago
#61
Wow..

actually amazing chapter.

full of manan .

wah...
Manik is so naughty.
flirty flirty hi krta h..

poor nandu..

both have some feelings for each other.


vaise morning scene was damm funny..


talk was awesome. ..



or or or...

Their little moment was so beautiful. .

pr adhura mat chodna yr.

vaise inkaa reaction kyaa hoga.
khud ye realize krke..

would love to read.



Thanks for pm.

Will wait for next update eagerly.



Stay blessed
Keep smiling. .
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Posted: 9 years ago
#62
awsmmm
amazinggg
superbbb
fab update
loved it very much
full of manan
waiting for nxt update
cont soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
#63
Hwwe
Cliffhanger 😕😕😕
But i love manan scenes
Nandu is great 😆😆😆
All thanks to our flirty manik malhotra 👏👏
Thanks for update
Waiting for next update eagerly 👏
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Posted: 9 years ago
#64
I read your story n i liked it very much.
Waiting for your next update.



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Posted: 9 years ago
#65
Hi guys sorry for late update but what to do i am wally stuck in my college stuff so sorry one more thing I am not getting back proper response so if u tell I will finish this soon 😭
PART 8
Manik and nandini were lost in different world where they can't see anyone expect each other their they can't identity what is wrong or right the moment seems so perfect in each others arms. manik came on her top nandini was lost in his capatative eyes which were making drown her. manik slowly put a peak in her fore head by feeling his touch she closes her eyes this feeling which she was feeling was beyond explanation. He slowly move down and sees her eyes closed he smiles by seeing his effect on her he kisses her both eyes she shivers a little and again close her eyes her breath goes uneven. He looks her chubby cheeks he can't control more and bite both nandini let a moan to soothe it he gives long kiss there. his eyes falls on lips still her eyes closed he gives kiss near her lips. He was about to place his lips on hers nandini phone starts ring. it's the time when both trance broken. nandini opens eyes in a jerk push him and goes from there crying.

Manik gets startled by her sudden reaction. He was too numb to react he want to go her and take her in his arms and wanna say "I am sorry I will not hurt you again " he was hurt because of him she was hurt which pricked his heart he wanna go behind and stop her but damage was done and he can't do anything he leaves from there.

Nandini POV

I left from there crying I was continuously crying sitting under the shower this water was more increasing my pain I don't know why I am attracting towards him why whatever happened between us seems so perfect in each others arms. Why in zst 2 days he is affecting me why do I will forget myself around why I can't control myself why all this why are not leaving my head . But somewhere now I go and hug cry my heart out to let go all my pain which I kept inside me now it's paining too badly I wanna let it go i feel peace and solace in his arms . But why today somewhere he was hurt because of me while I pushed him I could see his pain .

I wanna screams his name and say "I am sorry I will not hurt you again " what is that feeling that I am developing towards him why today it seems to perfect so beautiful looks it was meant to be . I don't know for how long I was sitting under and thinking about HIM I wanna see him wanna hold now my heart is aching by imaging him hurt because of me . I don't know got into me I suddenly got up " I want to see him because I start to like him" after the realisation there was smile on my face "yes I like no no I start to fall for him" with that realisation I went out of bathroom I want to say him my feelings show him my pain he is perfect for everything he can repair me .

With that realisation feeling I came outside the room but he was not there is got disappointed by not seeing him there but today I was determined to let him know what value he has in my life .

I got changed when I was about to go outside the phone again start to ring without looking at caller ID I hurriedly picked up it but another side voice was enough to bring new back to reality from my dream land. Destiny has played cruel card in me to destroy my happiness I was cursing myself how can I let fall for someone else I even don't have any right with much difficulty i spoke "hii dhruv " my voice stuck in my throat I was too numb to react "what hi huh why are you not picking up phone dammit u don't know how much I was worried for u even didn't think of calling me once are you fine?"he shouted at me but there was concerned in his voice I gulp down the saliva in guilt my voice was not allow to cone "hey nandini are you there?" Again comes the Dhruv voice and again the hit reality in me "haa... haan dhruv. .. I am here .. it's. .zst I. ..had too ...many work so can't reply to you " I was trying to speak in casual tone but stammering badly tears start to make there in my eyes the fear of guilt was hurting me badly . "Hey nandini are fine naa you shout little worried today " his voice softened and I could still sense his concerned and worried tone.

"Umm Yaa I am fine woh zst little cold ok I have too make work i will call you later" I can't talk with him more the guilt inside me eating alive "Acchaa listen listen " I was going to cut the call when he said that "hmm haa" he replied.

"I LOVE YOU " after saying this he cuts the call the world beneath me sweep I was feeling weak in my knees I collapsed in floor I cried loudly my heart was screaming a thousand sorry "how could you nandini you have cheated your husband may be there are some problems between you to that doesn't mean you let yourself to fall for some one else you have no right dhruv loves you so much and your zst playing with his feelings you have to go away from manik " he inner sense was making me more guilty i wipes my tears "yes I am married I can't fall for anyone else I have to go away from manik today only I will leave" by saying this i immediately starts to pack her bag.


I was packing my clothes when there was knock on the door instead open the door there the maid was standing some backs in her hands . I gives her a confused look in return she zst smiles she comes inside and place the bags on table "nandini Ji this are some clothes dadi has sent to you and she is calling you now " she says with a smile "but y this clothes" I was still confused "it's zst that dadi gives token of love to everyone "by saying this she leaves from there as soon she leaves one more hit in my mind "oh freak how can I leave dadi I came to nurse her dueyes to my personal problem I can't ignore my patient they are my top priority " "but I should stay away from manik " I was still in my thought when that maid called me again. I went downstairs to dadi room there she was sitting with a newspaper in her bed I knock the door to grab her attention she puts aside her newspaper and gives a smile to me "come nandini beta" I goes there and she takes me in motherly hug it felt so nice after breaking the hug she gesture me to sit. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .


Manik POV

I was driving my car in full speed I was getting tension and frustration with a jerk I stop the car . I punched the staring wheel. I ruffle my hair in frustration. I came outside the car it was a isolated place away from city I was only thinking about her . She was not leaving my mind one second also not from today but from the 1st day when I saw there will be contacted smile on her face but I can sense some pain in her eyes and it pain me too. When I saw her yesterday in my house is was beyond happy I zst wanna pull her in bone crushing hug and never able leave her to eternity whole night I couldn't sleep by thinkingabout last night encounter morning I couldn't stop myself and I went to see her when she opens the door i couldn't take our my eyes from her she was looking breath taking in those messey hair and clothes without any make up her natural beauty.

When I found her checking me out my heart start to do salsa when she realised she turned red I so wanna eat her but control myself. The hug indeed needed to know whether she was comfortable with me or not but after that whatever happened looks like magical I was closed to many but today it's different it was perfect I can't explain in words. I am pulling towards her a magnetic pull is pushing me towards her . I know I crossed my limit but it didn't seem wrong why I am always thinking about her am I start to fall for her "yes I start to like her I start to fall for her" a smile crept on my lips . I quickly got in my car is wanna say her what she means to me before its too late. I wanna reach as fast as possible. A never ending smile was in my lips.


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Dhruv goes inside the cafe he gulps the saliva in nervousness. he look here and there but sees none he was about go when someone from behind hugs him "DHRUV " the person says with excitement he turn around "I miss you dhruv I love you " the person kiss his cheeks.

"ALIYA "

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NANDINI POV


I was giving medication to dadi and she was making faces like child I wanna laugh at her antics she looks so cute but I have to be a little strict because it was beneficial for her health.

After lots of argument and tantrums she finally accepts her defeat and have medicine by making bad face with her I forget moring incident . I was happy with her.

Now it was time to her lunch and I have to supervised her lunch according to diet chart so I was going to kitchen by giving her some advice.

I was walking in the corridor to reach the hallway when someone forcely pulled me inside the room is was so much afraid that I closed my eyes in fear I was about shout but that person put hands in my mouth.



Phew complete I hope it's long enough I know it's short so how do u all liked this and again I am saying If you guys don't like this ff I will wrap it soon this post is have written twice because previous onemail got delete so don't do kanjusi in comment plz



Edited by sarutask - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Ok guys sorry for late reply but plz at least give your views Yaar how did you all like it with some much of difficulty i have written it is took time from my assignment to write this but no one is caring if u all didn't like theno say I will finishq it soon but all are quiet now this silent is killing we take so much effort to write but but none cares at least say something whether it's bad only but can't you guys open up now this is last time I am saying or requesting so give ur positive or negative views . All the things are accepted
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Posted: 9 years ago
#67
nice update

loved it

update it regular

cont soon

THNX for pm
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Posted: 9 years ago
#68
Wow..update aa gyi.but seriously manik can't control around nandini.ohh full on romance chal raha h..that's amazing...But nandu ko realize jo ho gya.so she started liking him...Or jab bolne ja rahi thi..tab dhruv .seriously. I love u bhi bol diyaa.ab nandu dur rahegi...N manik alspo likes her.oh god .both have something something. .But ye alya ne dhruv ko I love u bolaa..that's something twist kya..ye nandu k muh pr haath kisne rakhaa..hmm interesting to knoww.Thanks for this update. .Will wait for next. .Thanks for pm.



N extremely sorry yar.. time nhi mil paya .mene just abhi story pdi. or comment kraa.Soo don't feel bad.I really like ur story.


.Love Geet
Edited by gtilwani45 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#69
Superb update.
I hope Nandini will realise her love for Manik.


Waiting for you your next update.

Thank you very much for your PM.
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Posted: 9 years ago
#70
read all the chapters... lovely concept... poor manan... even feeling bad for druv...
update soon
tc byee

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