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Posted: 9 years ago
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PART 6

Dhruv was sitting sadly in his room he was checking phone continuously in hope that at least once nandini calls him to say that she reached safely. He stands up and pace here and there he is getting reckless with every passing second . He dials her number and again cut it after attempting good 5 to 7 times of dialing and cutting her call. He gets angry on himself for doing such childish act "what is problem in calling her she will not eat u up she is your wife at least you should know whether she reached safely or not " his heart was provoking him to call her.
"No don't call her she will get more angry on you by saying your showing your husband right " suddenly the brain attacks him with virus to hang his heart system.
In between the fight of heart and brain he gets irritated "Shut up u both i will call her my first priority is her safety whatever she thinks let her think I don't care" finally heart wins and heart gives the thumps down .

As soon as he takes his phone to call her his phone start to ring he became happy "finally she called " he mumbles himself and without looking the caller ID he picks up the call " Hello nandini where are you y didn't you call before I was getting tension " he was blabbering his own without giving the caller to speak .

"Dhruv" this one voice was enough for him to stop he felt the earth has been slipped from his feet . His world seems darker to him . He was getting electric volts in his brain. After 3 months he has been listening to this voice he was numb to react for this situation. He goes back to his past where his life takes 360 degree turn .

...

Nandini was standing outside of the big mansion with her luggage. She was mesmerised by the beauty of the house. It's not artificial beautiful but the nature also had been equally contributed to add the beauty of the house which look different from others. Watchman opens the gate for her as he had been already informed of her arrival. Nandini passes a smile to him which he replies with faint smile .

Watchman takes her luggage from her hands and ask her to follow him. Nandini also follow him she looks around more to the lawn which had different types of tress has been planted the bushes around with red and white flowers . More than electronic lights the way to home was decorated by natural light. Nandini always wanted to live in such environment where she can get close to nature every times. She walks slowly by the drinking the nature beauty. The walk from the gate to house was little far but liked the everything about that place it's so mesmerising so soothing so calm away from every pollutants.

She reach in front of door where Watchman was waiting for her he rings the bell . The door opens by a maid of the house who looks at the age of 50 she smiles looking at nandini " are you miss nandini murthy ?" She asks nandini with a kindly affection. Nandini nods in yes and smiles back at her.
Watchman handover the luggage to her and leaves from there. Maid takes the luggage from him and direct the room to nandini and asked her to follow her.

"Can I meet to Mrs malhotra " Nandini ask while entering in the house.
"You can meet tomorrow because she is resting now " Maid replies her with sincerity.
"OK then I want to meet his grandson who had appointed me to nurse her" Nandini shows her interest in meeting him.
"Ummm Baba is not yet home he went for some work i don't know when he will return back because there is no proper timing for him to return due to his hectic schedule " Maid replies her.
"It's OK whenever he will come i will meet him" Nandini says and stars to carry her luggage.
"No mam leave it i will carry " Maid takes bag from her hands.
"Areey it's OK I can carry myself you don't have to bother " she again takes bag from her.
"Leave mam I can take come in will show you room " she again catches bag.
"No problem I can carry" nandini tries to convince her.
While fighting for the bag somebody from the kitchen calls the maid "Mam zst wait 5 min I will come and show you the room" she says hesitantly.

"No problem you go i can manage myself tell me where is the room" Nandini says to her.

"Are you sure mam" Maid ask nervously.
"Hmmm I am sure " Nandini replies with smile .
"Upstairs 1st left room is yours and second is Baba " Maid replies and hurriedly goes from there.

Nandini smiles at her and goes upstairs but she gets confused which is 1st room or 2nd left both looks same . " 1st is which both looks 1st from both side"

After lot of difficulty she goes inside of room . She looks the room which is so big a king sized bed the interiors are so classy the lavish sofa and tables different types of cups and medals. She goes inside bathroom her mouth open by looking at it. Everything is so perfect.

She becames really happy by getting such a beautiful room. She unpacked her bag and goes to bathroom to take shower.
After a good hour of bathing she comes out of the bathroom with bathrobes. She goes to balcony and looks outside there is a beautiful pond where the moon light shows its beauty. She was getting more and more excited about the place.

After sometime spending the time with nature she comes inside the room she looks at the time it's already "11:30"
"Uff it's so late now I must sleep from tomorrow there is too many work"

Without changing she lies down in bed she was really tired so the slumber of sleep covers her quickly.

Outside the malhotra mansion the manik car horns by listening that the watchman immediately opens the gate and salutes him.

He was so tired by all the chaos from all the day he zst want to fall in bed . The same maid opens the door for him . She ask him about the dinner in which he replies he had already taken it. She was about tell about the nandini arrival but he was gone from there .

Manik opens his room door without opening the lights goes towards bathroom after getting fresh he comes out from bathroom only in his tracks no vest. He immediately falls in the bed .

Nandini was feeling something heavy in her waist whenever she tries to remove it the grip became more tied in it . So after sometimes she stops the struggling she thinks it's her dream. After some time near her lips she feels someone hot breath. She feels something fishy she slowly opens her eyes which are already hard to open but as soon as her eyes opens its comes out from the sockets the things which never thought in the wildest dream she was sleeping next to a stranger.

"Ahhh " she wakes up the person next to her with a jerk.

"What the" manik wakes up with a shock and pinched himself whether he is dreaming or not but it was real there in his room in his bed a stranger girl is shouting.

"Who are you " manik asked with shocked.
"Chor chor chor chor " Nandini again shouts with her loudest voice.
Manik immediately closes her mouth with his hands because she was making too noise and top of that his grandmother is not well if she sees the stranger girl in his room she will pakka gets a heart attack he don't want to to create any mess.
"Shhh don't shout and who the hell are you saying chor I think your chor " manik was covering her mouth with his hands there is no light in the room.

Nandini gets scared and bite his hands "ahhh "manik quickly takes out his hand nandini immediately stands and runs from there to open the door. "Now you're dead Miss chorni " he runs behind her .

He is faster than her he quickly catches her waist and covers
Her mouth . Nandini tries to free from his grip while struggling with him mistakenly his hands opens the knot of the bath rob but both didn't realise. Both are fighting with each other in that fighting both end up falling in bed whereas manik on the top of her and nandini beneath her while both accidentally hands on the light of room.

Both gets shocked by looking at each other manik removes his hands from her mouth "you" both says in unison.

"What are you doing here?"again in unison.

"1st get up from me" Nandini literally shouts at him . Manik also realised there position so immediately gets up.

When they gets up he gets another shocked his eyes comes out from his sockets nandini looks at him confusingly and looks at her she also gets shocked and turns around due to the open of the knot of the bathrobes she was almost half naked in front of him.

She immediately ties her robe properly "what are you doing? "He ask her while she was tieing her robe.

As soon as she tied robe and turns around "Same question goes for you" she says with an attitude.

Manik couldn't believe that someone in his house was asking him what he was doing in his house "1st I asked so answer "he says with irritated tone .

"Why can't you answer 1st " she was back to her fight mode.
"Don't show smartness ok" he point the finger towards her .
"Don't you know I miss born smart " she says like a proud grin.
"This is my house now u tell what are you doing here " he replies her.

"What this is your house "she asked with shock
"Yup" he simply replies her
"That means your Mrs malhotra grandson " instead of answering she was asking questions
"Yes now stop asking questions and answers mine" he was irritated by her question.
"I am here to nurse her" now this time to get him shock but he calms him down .
"What are you doing in my room" again another question for her.

"I was confused by two rooms so I mistakenly enter here " she says innocently.
"OK now you can sleep here I will go to your room " he says and starts to take his things.

Nandini was shamelessly looking at his masculine physics it will be lie that she hadn't been attracted to him since 1st meeting she has seen many handsome boys in her lifetime but he was a Greek God for whom any girl can go gaga over her .

"Liked what you looked " he says without looking at her
"What " she comes out from her trance.
"You are checking me out its not anything wrong u know me so handsome no girl can control herself " he says with smirk.

"In your dreams " she makes annoyed face.

"OK then good night don't dream about me "he winks her and goes from there. She looks at him shocked expression "jerk" she also goes to sleep

OK guys sorry for late update next update will be decided by your response whether to post it or not give you views


Edited by sarutask - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#52
Amazinggg update
Thnx for pm ne
Lovd it...dhruv ko kiska ph aayea hoga...
Update doon
Edited by dhillon90 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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niceee amazing. . interesting. .. loved it... likeee it... awesome. ... Thanks for this update. . thanks for pm. Waiting for next update eagerly impatiently. .. update soon , Love Geet
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Thanks for the pm. It's was fantastic n funny. I loved it.
This time don't be late come back soon.

God bless you.
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Posted: 9 years ago
#55
chor n chorni wow

hilarious

finally they both introduced rest manik s granny will do

druv got call from whom?


nice update


waiting for next part

take care

pls update soon

bye

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Posted: 9 years ago
#56
wow!!

Nice story...

nice concept


And intrstng story line...
😊


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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hehehe
Awesome story
Its too cute
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I loved it
Waiting for next update eagerly 👏
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Posted: 9 years ago
#58
PART 7
MANNAN

MORNING SUN RAYS WERE DISTURBING THE SLEEP OF A BEAUTIFUL GIRL WHO IS NOT LOOKING LESS THEN SLEEPING BEAUTY THERE WAS A CUTE SMILE ON HER FACE NOT THAT SHE SHOWS TO WORLD A FAKE SMILE BUT THERE WAS SATISFACTION IN HER SMILE THERE WERE NO FROWN NO WORRIES BUT ZST A CUTE AND CHUBBY SMILE WHICH WAS MAKING HER MORE BEAUTIFUL THAN A ANGLE WHOMEVER SEES HER NOW WILL FORGET TO BREATH AND FALLS IN LOVE WITH HER INNOCENCE.

SHE WAS SLEEPING PEACEFULLY AFTER SO MANY MONTHS BUT HER BEAUTY SLEEP WILL BE RUINED BY THE RINGING OF BELL FIRST SHE IGNORES IT AND SLEEPS AGAIN BUT THE BELL WAS CONTINUOUSLY RINGING SHE FEELS IRRITATED WAKE UP AND RUBS HER EYES . SHE MAKES A VERY BAD FACE UNWILLING SHE GOT UP FROM BED AND OPENS THE DOOR.

SHE OPENS THE DOOR WITH A JERK IN VERY IRRITATED MOOD BUT THE FRONT SIGHT MAKES HER TO GASP HER BREATH. THERE STANDS THE MANIK MALHOTRA WITH SLEEPY EYES MESSEY HAIR ONLY IN HIS TRACKS WITHOUT ANY VEST . SHE LOOKS AT HIM FROM BOTTOM TO TOP THE PERFECT MASCULINE BODY WHICH NOW HE IS SHOWING MAKES HIM EVEN MORE HOT . THE HORMONE ARE CREATING HAVOC INSIDE HER . SHE JUST WANNA TOUCH THOSE SEXY ABS WHICH WAS MAKING HER CRAZY THE MASCULINE SAINT OF HIM WAS CREATING A SPELL BOUNDED HER. SHE WAS LOOKING AT HIM SHAMELESSLY WITHOUT GIVING ANY DAMN TO THE ENVIRONMENT.

"HOT" SHE BLUTERED OUT ABSENT MINDLY WHICH WAS AUDILE TO HIM TO THE RESPONSE HE JUST SMIRK. HER TRANCE WAS BROKEN BY HIS VOICE "I KNOW " NANDINI COMES LA LA LAND AND REMEMBERS WHAT JUST SHE HAD DONE SHE FEELS VERY EMBARRASSING SHE JUST STAY LIKE A STATUE THERE. AFTER SOMETIME ALSO NOT GETTING ANY RESPONSE MANIK SAYS IN FLIRTY TONE " NOW STOP CHECKING ME OUT I KNOW I AM SO HOT" BY WHICH NANDINI LOOKS AT HIM AND MAKES A VERY BAD FACE.

"WHAT ARE DOING IN MY ROOM SO EARLY IN MORNING " SHE TRIES TO DIVERT THE TOPIC BY WHICH SHE WAS GETTING EMBARRASSMENT. ALL THE WAY MANIK WAS LOOKING AT HER EXPRESSION WHICH WERE SO CUTE TO HIM THOSE BIG DOE EYES CHUBBY CHEEKS HER POUTY LIPS WHICH WAS MAKING HIM OUT OF CONTROL HE JUST WANNA EAT HER ALIVE HER EVERYTHING WAS MAKING A CUTE IMPRESSION IN HIS HEART BUT HOW CAN HE SIMPLY LET HER GO EASILY " CORRECTION MISS MURTHY THIS IS NOT YOUR ROOM IT'S MINE HAVE YOU FORGET LAST NIGHT I HAVE GAVE IT TO YOU AFTER THAT INCIDENTTT "


HE PUT MORE PRESSURE IN THE WORD INCIDENT JUST TO TEASE HER AS SOON AS HE SAYS THAT NANDINI REMEMBER EVERYTHING ABOUT LAST NIGHT BY WHICH HER CHEEKS GET REDDISH BUT MANIK COULDN'T IDENTITY WHETHER SHE IS BLUSHING OR GETTING ANGRY BUT HE LOVES HER THOSE REDDISH CHEEKS IF HE HAD RIGHTS THAN HE WILL AND BITE THEM IMMEDIATELY. BUT HE CONTROL HIMSELF.

NANDINI AGAIN LOOKED DOWN TO AVOID EYE CONTACT OR RATHER THAN HIS GAZE WHICH WAS GIVING HER THE MOST TUFF TIME. " SO DO YOU MEAN THAT I SHOULD LEAVE THIS ROOM " SHE ASKS HIM WITHOUT LOOKING AT HIM SHE DON'T HAVE THE COURAGE TO LOOK AT HIM.

"WHEN I SAID THAT IF YOU WANNA STAY THAN YOU CAN LIVE WHOLE LIFE IN THIS ROOM I DON'T MIND TO SHARE ROOM WITH YOU WHAT SAY " HE WAS BACK IN FLIRTY MOOD BY LISTENING TO THIS NANDINI IMMEDIATELY LOOKS AT HIM WITH HER BIG EYES WHERE THERE WAS FULL OF QUESTIONS MANIK JUST WANNA DROWNED IN THOSE EYES . " WHAT " NANDINI ASKED CONFUSINGLY.

"HAVE NOT YOU HEARD" INSTEAD OF ANSWERING HE ASKS HER ANOTHER QUESTION TO WHICH NANDINI GIVES HIM A ANGRY GLARE. "THEN WHY DO YOU CAME SO EARLY MORNING " SHE DIVERT THE TOPIC JUST TO EXCUSED HERSELF FROM HIS TEASING BUT DEEP DOWN SHE WAS FEELING GOOD BY HIS TEACHING SHE ITSELF DON'T KNOW THE REASON IF ANY PERSON WAS THERE THEN DHER WOULD RIP OF HIS HEAD BUT WITH HIM SHE JUST FORGET HERSELF.

"I ALREADY TOLD THIS IS MY ROOM SO I HAVE CAME TO FRESHEN UP BECAUSE ALL MY CLOTHES ARE HERE AND ABOUT EARLY IN MORNING I AM GETTING LATE FOR MY WORK SO NOW YOU GOT YOUR ALL ANSWERS THEN WILL YOU PLEASE LEAVE MY WAY OR DO YOU WANNA CONTINUE FIGHT IN DOOR ITSELF IF YOU WANNA THEN NO PROBLEM I CAN DO IT FOR LIFE TIME " MANIK SAYS WITH A BIG SMILE IN HIS FACE BY LISTENING LIFE TIME NANDINI EYES WIDE OPEN WITH A OPEN MOUTH .

"DO YOU MEAN I AM FIGHTING WITH YOU " NANDINI WAS BACK TO HER TIGRESS MOOD "OK MERI MAA YOUR NOT FIGHTING BUT I AM FIGHTING WITH YOU NOW COULD YOU PLEASE LEAVE THE WAY " MANIK WAS REALLY GETTING LATE FOR WORK SO HE ACCEPTS HIS DEFEATS AND MOVES HER ASIDE GO INSIDE THE ROOM TAKES OUT HIS CLOTHES "BTW YOUR LOOKING HOT IN THOSE BATHROBES BUT BECAREFUL AND TIED IT PROPERLY " BEFORE GOING INSIDE HE SAYS AND WINKS AT HER QUICKLY GOES INSIDE.

NANDINI DON'T UNDERSTAND WHY HE SAID TO TIED IT PROPERLY SHE GOES IN FRONT OF MIRROR AND LOOKS HER EYES WIDE IN SHOCK HER BATHROBES HAS BEEN LOOSED WHICH WAS CLEARLY SHOWING THE VIEW OF WHOLE SHOULDER AND MID THIGH SHE QUICKLY CHANGE HER IN VEST AND PANTS.

SHE WAS WAITING FOR MANIK TO COME OUT FROM THE BATHROOM SO THAT SHE CAN FRESHEN UP AND START HER WORK BUT AVOIDING HIM SHE WAS WALKING HERE SEND THERE WHEN HE COMES OUT ONLY IN TOWELS THE WATER DROPLETS IN HIS BODY THE WET HAIR AGAIN NANDINI WAS SHAMELESSLY CHECKING HIM OUT . SHE MENTALLY SLAPS HER TO BEHAVE LIKE SUCH DESPO " URGHH NANDINI WHAT IS HAPPENING TO YOU WHY ARE YOU BEHAVING LIKE THIS IS NOT RIGHT YOUR MARRIED HOW CAN YOU CHECK HIM OUT ITS WRONG " HER BRAIN SENDS THE VIRUS " BUT YOU MUST ADMIT HE IS HOT " HER HEART WAS PROVOKING HER "SO WHAT HE IS HOT BUT YOUR MARRIED YOU MUST BEHAVE" AGAIN THE BRAIN WITH VIRUS ATTACK "YOU ARE MARRIED MEANS YOU CAN'T DENY THAT HE IS THE MOST HOT GUY YOU HAVE EVER SEEN AND YOU START TO LIKE HIM ALSO " HEART AGAIN PROVING HER.

"NO ITS WRONG " BRAIN SAYS
"NO ITS NOT " HEART SAYS
"WRONG" BRAIN SAYS
"NO " HEART SAYS

BOTH HEART AND BRAIN ARE FIGHTING WITH EACH OTHER NANDINI GETS TOO MUCH IRRITATED "SHUT UP YOU BOTH" SHE SHOUTS IN HIGH PITCH SOUND.

"HEY WHAT HAPPENED WHY ARE YOU SHOUTING " MANIK SHRUGS HER AFTER LISTENING HER SHOUTING. NANDINI COMES OUT OF HIS TRANCE "NO NOTHING " SHE REPLIES HESITANTLY. "THEN WHY ARE YOU SHOUTING LIKE THAT ARE YOU OKAY " HE TOUCHES HER FOREHEAD WHETHER SHE WAS OK OR NOT .

"YAA I AM FINE I NEED TO FRESHEN UP I AM ALSO GETTING LATE YOU CHANGE " NANDINI TRIES TO RUN FROM THERE .
"HEY WAIT " MANIK STOP HER BY CATCHING HER VEST WHICH BY MISTAKE TORN BY WHICH NANDINI EYES GOES GET WIDER IN HORROR. MANIK IMMEDIATELY LEAVE HER AND TURNS BACK" I AM SORRY SORRY I DIDN'T DO IT PURPOSELY IT'S WAS JUST AN ACCIDENT " MANIK APOLOGIES TO HER.

NANDINI IMMEDIATELY TAKES THE TOWEL AND WRAP HER SHE WAS STILL IN SHOCKED STATE BUT MANAGE HERSELF TO COOL DOWN "IT'S OK I KNOW IT WAS NOT YOUR FAULT " SHE FORGIVE HIM.

MANIK TURNS TOWARDS HER "REALLY? " HE ASKED WITH CURIOUSLY TO WHICH NANDINI JUST SMILE AT THIS CHILD LIKE MAN AND NODS HER HEAD . MANIK TAKES A SIGH OF RELIEF AND BECAMES TOO HAPPY IN THAT EXCITEMENT HE HUGS HER TIGHTLY AND NANDINI GETS AGAIN SHOCK BUT SOMEWHERE NANDINI FOUND SOLANCE AND PEACE IN HIS ARMS SHE ALSO RESPONSE WITH EQUAL FEVOUR. AS SOON NANDINI HUGS HIM BACK HE FELT TOO HAPPY . THIER PROXIMITY WAS CREATING HAVOC INSIDE BOTH OF THEM THEY WERE FEELING EACH OTHER TOUCH .

MANIK SLOWLY BROKE THE HUG AND LOOKS AT HER WITH SO MUCH PASSION IN HIS EYES NANDINI ALSO LOOKS AT HIM . THEY WERE STILL IN EACH OTHER ARMS FEELING THEIR HOT BREATH IN EACH OTHER LIPS . WITHOUT BREAKING THE EYE CONTACT MANIK SLOWLY CARRIES HER IN HIS ARMS NANDINI WAS JUST LOOKING AT HIM .

HE PLACES HER IN THE BED AND COMES IN TOP OF HER HE WAS JUST LOOKING AT HER HE KISS HER HEAD BY THE TOUCH NANDINI CLOSES HER EYES SHE WAS ENJOYING HIS TOUCH HE COMES DOWN AND KISSES HER EYES AND HER NOSE. HE GOES NEAR HER CHEEKS AND FIRST BITE THEM NANDINI HISS IN PAIN AND TO SOOTHE IT HE KISSES IT . HE LOOKS AT HER LIPS HE JUST WANNA KISS THEM TO TILL THE LAST BLOOD ALSO FINISHED FROM IT . NANDINI WAS STILL CLOSING HER EYES . HE COMES NEAR HER LIPS HIS LIPS WAS ALMOST TOUCH TO HER.


STOP STOP NOW FOR NOW JUST THIS MUCH WHOLE MANNAN SCENES ONLY O MY GOOD I WROTE THE MANNAN SCENES WITHOUT ANY OTHER AND WHAT WILL HAPPEN NEXT THEY WERE SO CLOSE TO EACH OTHER MY HEART BEAT WAS INCREASING TO KNOW WHAT WILL BE BOTH REACTIONS AFTER THEIR PROXIMITY I CAN'T WAIT BUTTERFLIES ARE RUNNING IN MY TUMMY SO HOW DO YOU ALL FEEL ABOUT THEIR WHOLE PART . NEXT PART WILL DEPEND ON YOURS LAMBAA COMMENTS THEN ONLY I WILL LET YOU ALL KNOW WHAT WILL HAPPEN NEXT SO STAY TUNED

Edited by sarutask - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Amazinggg update
Aaww manan
Lovd it
Thnx for pm me
Continue soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
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nice story...
read all tthe chapters in a go...
pls continue...
pm me from next..

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